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Okay guys here goes my story…..

Kripa is a young n innocent gal who lives in a girl's hostel in Mumbai with her best fren misthi. Misthi is totally different than kripa…da only thing common between them is their trust in their friendship…..misthi is da darling daughter of the rich business woman Dami Bose but due to business matters she is always out of town so misthy stays in a hostel rather than in her home. Today her one and only dashing handsome brother is coming back 2 mumbai after 5 yrs…. Frm New york and she is damn excited about it……..prithvi has heard a lot about kripa frm misthy but has never met her and same with kripa……

Misthii: kripa kyaa yar tub hi.. jaldi kar na.. hum flight ke liye der ho jayeegee…. Aagar bhai humse pehele poochgaya toh… sara maja kirkira ho jayega yar

kripa(frm da bathroom): aareheoo baba aaraheehoon. Tumhara bhai hi toh aaraha hai kaun sa rajkumar aarakha hai…..

misthi:aye... mere bhai k bare mai kuch mat bol huh…..!!!!

k:aacha baba aacha… ur bro is da best…. Aaba kush???????? Aaba chale warna tumhara rajkumar bro rasta bhatak jayega.....

both of them laugh n goes to da airport…..

now we see a dashing gud lookin guy..... prithvi……

m: bhai….. it's soo gud 2 see u back…..

p: yes my cutie sis… I am sooo glad 2 b back

just then he notices a beautiful gal in a white churidar with lots of bangles in her hand………

prithvi is just taken aback 4 a moment but soons comes 2 reality n says kripa sharma right?????????

Kripa(shocked): tume mujhe kaise pehechana….

P: aarey baba tumhare bare main misthy itna batachuki hai ki… tumhara pura chera main imagine kasrsakta hoon….par meri imagination itni khoobsurat hogi yehhh maine socha nai tha

K(who is all blushing): gives a shy smile 2 prithvi……

In da car:

P: waise hum ghar hi jaarahe hai naa????

M: nai bhai who pehele…. Kripa ko hostel drop karna hai…….

P: aarey yeh kyaa baat hue…. Kripa hummare sath nai rahegie kyaa????

M: wohi toh bhai mai toh ish ladki ko samjha samjha k thak chuki hoon. Magar yeh stupid manthi hi nahi……

P: aarey kripa…… I thought u n misthi were best frens but…. I was so wrong…. Agar ttum dono best frens hote toh…tum hammare sath reheti….right misthi??

m: exactly bhai....

K: but prithvi….

P:but….lekin…..magar….. par…. Main kuch nahi sununga… tum humhare sath aaogi n that's it

Kripa who has no other options finally agrees

Bose mansion:

All of them preparing 4 da grand party 2 nite……

Kripa n misthy r damn busy in their preparartion…. Misthy is talking about some arrangements in her cell while kripa is standing in a high stool tryin 2 fix da balloons…..

Prithvi who just can't take his eyes off kripa is lost in his own thoughts……

Now soon kripa looses her balance on the stool n b4 she could realize that she has hurt herself…. She finds herself in prithvi's arms….. who is looks totally lost in kripa's eyes……. . kripa is really really embarrassed……

K: tks prithvi

P: anytime

Misthi: yeh kyaa ho raha hai? Did I miss something?

P: no sister…… tum sirf party pe concentrate karoo kuyn ki aaj ki party bahot especial hai…..(lookin at kripa)….

M: ohhh ofcourse afatre all yeh party mere bhai k liye hai …..

P: nahi…. Aaja koi khas insaan aanewala hai party….

M: kaun bhai….?

P: mera khas dost….. my best fren

M: wow bhai…. Dikhta kasisa hai who.. tall dark hamsome??/???

P: haan hansome toh hai…. Infact bahot hi gud lookin hai…. Newyork ki sari ladkiya uspe paagal thi lekin who…. Kisi aur ke liye pagal tha….ek ladki jo usse……

M: ohh common bhai…..maine aaise aache accho ko pagla kiya hai…. N u know that

P: ha ha janta hoon tum kaisi ho… aaur ish bar toh kripa bhi toh hai na tumhare sath..

M: ohh plzzzzzzz bhai…. Kripa ko toh dur hi rakhho en sab se… who aaise ladki nahi hai bhai….

P: don tell me itni khoobsoorat ladki aur tumhara koi bf nahi???

Prrithvi who's deeply lookin into kripa's eye tells that…. Tumse toh kissiko bhi peheli nazar mai pyaar ho jaye…

Kripa is slightly taken aback by prithvi words…. She sees flashbacks of a guy who was hugging her… n she has a sad expression on her face….

M: ohhh bhai plzzzz meri fren ko satana band karo….. aaba chalo kripa bahot tarari karni hai…..

Party night:

Everyone is enjoyin the party…

Background song is dil mera frm da movie kyaa kool hai hum ?(hehehe typical ekta style)

Then we see a dashing guy coming out of a red car….

We see his whole body but not the face…. He is wearing black jacket n black pants

Finally the guy comes 2 da party hall…. Everybody looks at him… prithvi has a big smile in his face… finally we get 2 see the guy.. and he is none other than angad khanna……………

Okay guys this is 4 2day…… I will continue very soon….

Love u all

Take care

Have fun guyz

Awesome....i like ur story....plz continue...

~sweta~

this is exciting, totally disheveled from from Ekta's story.

it was a merriment to read, do write up the next part soon, i'm waiting.

Mindblowing job Eshika

lots of love

Adios

Soni

please please write more i cant wait

Part 2

Prithvi: hey hie angad… wat's up with u… thanks so much 4 coming man…

A: aarey yehh kyaa baat hue… mere dost ki party aur main naa aau…. Yesa kabhi huwa hai kyaaa????

Misthi: hey bhai…. Toh yehh hao aapka esp dost huh??????? Mujhe introduce nahi karaoge…..

P: ohhh ya ya tumhe kasie bhool sakta ho… angad this is my sweet little sis misthy….. misthi Bose… and misthy this is Angad

M: hey… wait a minute…. If I am not mistaken r u da rock star anagd … the greatest angad khanna?????? Oh gosh!!!…. I don believe my luck… tum wohi ho na jisne aapna music profession chod kar business join kiya tha?????

A: yus u r rite….. mai wohi angad kahnna hoon…

P: haan bhai!!!!yeh wohi hai jiske gana chodne ke wajese kaeee ladkiyo ka dil tuta hai….

Angad who is slightly taken a back tell 2 himself: haan maine bahot ka dil toda hai… usi ki sajha bugat raha hoon…

M: angad tumne kuch kaha kyaaa?

A: nahi toh

M: par mujhe kuch kehena hai…..

A: kyaa?????

M: let's go and DANCE!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

Angad was about 2 say no but misthi just pulls him away….

Now kripa just enters da party who is wearing a beautiful red gown with all her hair curled….

As kripa enters da party hall…. Angad feels something…. He feels some 1 's presence … angad 2 himself: yehh kaisa ehsaas hai….. kaisi kashish hai……aaj kyon lagraha hai ki tum yahi ho….. yahi kahi ho… kyoun tumhe mehsoos kar raha hoon mai aaj…. Aaisa lagta hai ki tum mere aass pass hi kahi ho…. ..

On the other side….Prithvi is all smiling n lookin at kripa frm a distance…..

P: (to himself) – yeh mujhe kyaa ho raha hai….. jab bhi kripa mere samne aati hai…. Najane kaha kho jata hoon……

Misthy: toh finally madam aagayeee….. pata hai kitni der se mai tumhari intezaar karrahi hoon stupid…. Aab jaldi chalo… mujhe tumhe kisi se milwana na hai….

She takes kripa 2 da place where angad was sitting alone drikin a glass of wine and lost in thought…. He was facing the other side… misthi n kripa could only see his back…..

As misthi n kripa comes closer n closer… angad strongly feels someone's presence… as misthi was about to touch him n call his name the light goes off…………

It's all dark……

Misthy: ohh god yehh light ko kyaaa huwa…. Just a sec I'll be back…..

Now angad n kripa r sitting next to each other but cannot see each others face properly….

Kripa: oh no!!!!!yehhh andhera kaise ho gaya…..????

Angad: yeh toh sirf kuch pal ka andhera hai….. insaan ki zindagi main aagar andhera cha jaye toh roshni badi muskil se milti hai…..

Then angad turns on his lighter……only 2 see kripa standing in front of her…..

Both of them r shocked 2 see each other……

Finally da light is there…..

Both angad n kripa r continuously lookin at each other…. Both has tears in their eyes….. angad has da tears of happiness n relief whereas kripa has tears of pain n hatred ….

Okay bye 4 now guys…

I'll continue later..

take care

have fun

there r no words to praise ur story

👏

plz cont fast

lots of love

esha