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Posted: 20 years ago

Part 18

Angad is really confused….. he is slightly taken back by manan words…… then he he just gives I don care n damn…. Watever!!! kind of look and just ignores it…..

Angad at the movie theatre :

Angad is watchin a movie with some stupid lookin gal….. but he is not enjoyin da movie at all……. He gets damn bored…… angad 2 himself:

Damit !!!! yeh kaha phas gaya….. 😕

Now 2 make the matter worst the gal starts 2 cry seeing that movie…. Now angad is really annoyed……

A: aaba tumhe kyaa huwa????? Rooo kun rahi hoo???? Gosh!! tum ladkiya bhi nah….!!!!! Yesi stupid movie dekh kar bhi koi rota hai??????😡

The gal even cries more......

Then suddenly angad says….

Kyaa yar Kripa….. yeh kyaaa bachpana hai…….aab bas bhi karo!!!!!!!!

Then the gal suddenly gets up and yells at him…..

Mera naam nikita hai!!!!!!!!!! KRIPA nahi!!!!!!!!!!!she then walks away 4rm there angrily....

Now angad realizes wat he just said………

He gets a flashback……

It was similar kind of situation…..angad and kripa r inside a movie theater… kripa is having popcorns…N cryin silently…..but angad realizes this…

A: wat da hell kripa!!!!! Tum rooo rahi ho…..

K( cryin): nahi main kaha roo rahi hoon…. Aasu khud ma khud aarahehai….. main kyaaa karoo????😆😆

Angad starts 2 laugh …. Tumhe aaise stupid scene dek kar rona aaraha hai….. .. mujhe toh hasi aarahi hai tumpe…… aise stupid scene par bhi koi rota hai kyaa?????? aur waise bhi movie jane ka idea tumhara hi tha…. Aaur aab khud hi roo rahi hoo….

K: toh main kyaa karooo???? Movie nahi dekhu kyaaa???

A: haan mat dekho…

K: kyaaa ????

A: tum movie mat dekho….infact tum mujhe dekho…. 😳coz main tumhare aakhon main aasu nahi dekh sakta……

Now their eyes meet….. angad comes close 2 her n is about 2 kiss her when kripa throws popcorns at him…..

A: kripa!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

Suddenly angad comes back 2 reality…. Finds himself alone in the movie theater….

Kripa's voice echoes all around… he hears kripa calling him angad…….

He sees kripa smiling .. laughing…. And throwing popcorns at him….. kripa's image says…

Kyaaa huwa angad…. Movie pasand nahi aaye?????

She laughs at him…..

Suddenly another image of kripa tell him….

Tumne mere saath aaise kuyn kiya angad…. ???? tum toh mere aakhon main aasu nahi dekh sakte the na????? lekin tumne toh mujhe zindagi bhar ke liye ruladiye……😭😭 then the image of kripa cires……

Now angad goes mad like anything!!!!!!!! He is all surrounded by kripa's images…. Some r laughing…. Some r cryin … n some r smiling….. he finally closes his eyes…. And also his ears by his hands n says……. BASSSSSSSSS!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! Chali jao yaha se… kyun aayee ho tum yaha……. Just get lost!!!!!!!!!! Main tumhe bhool na chahata hoon…… just go aways 4rm my life… juts gooooooo!!!!!!!!!!!!

Okay gyuz….

2 be continued..

hope u liked it

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Posted: 20 years ago
WOW!!! too good..u r an awsome writer..
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Posted: 20 years ago
Aww AnGaDz FaLLin In LOvE....ThaT Was AwSomE!!!!😉
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Posted: 20 years ago

WOW...diz waz really gud i cudnt stop readin em😆😳

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Posted: 20 years ago
awww that was awesome. my angad needs to learn that he only loves me.
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Posted: 20 years ago

THIS PART WAS JUST TOO GOOD YAAR PLS CONTINUE..........

<RITU>

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Posted: 20 years ago
tks tks tks.... guyz... i will contunie very soon...😃
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Posted: 20 years ago
next part is gona b updated within an hour.....
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Posted: 20 years ago

Part 19

Angad is just wondering… wat he just went through…… he is not interested in anything…….. he keeps thinking about kripa….. but at da same time he refuses 2 accept the fact that he is missing her…..

Kripa's home

Kripa is in her room when her masi comes in…..

M: kripa beta…. R u sure that tum humare saath new york nahi aaogie….. ???

K:haan masi .. mai new york nahi jaoongi….

M: par beta.. tum yaha ish seher main aakeli kasisi rahogeee? Kyaa tum aakeli rehpaoogie?

K: masi… main aakeli kaha hoon??? meri yaadein hai na mere sath... ish seher se meri bahot sari yaadein judi huwii hai… mera bachpan …. Meri mamma papa ki memories…… yeh sab issi seher se judi hai…..

Haan main janti hoon ki angad ki buri yaddein bhi hai.. par… sirf ishliye main un sab yado ko chod kar jao… yeh toh thik nahi hai na masi…..main angad ki vaje se aapni sari acchii memories ko chod na nahi chahati masi….

M: thik hai beta aagar issi main tumhari khusi hai toh… main sirf tumahri khusi chahati hoon….

Angad is boxing in his room….. he is angry as well as confused……. When manan comes in…..

M: kyaaa yar angad….???? Tu club pe kyun nahi aaya…. Hum sab tera wait kar rahehain teh yar???? Kaha teh tum???

A: manana plzz mujhe disturb mat kar…. Just Leave me alone…

M: aakhir baat kyaaa hai????? Wat's da problem…???

A: koi problem nahi hai….. mujhe aakela chod do plzzz

M: tu chahe kitna bhi chupale …. Main janta hoon ki tujhe kyaa problem hai….. jab se kripa………

Hearing kripa's name he even hits hard….. he is more angry now…

M: itna gussa… itni tadap….. tu chahe ish baat ko kitna bhi ignore karle…. I know that u r missing kripa….

Now angad gives a furious look 2 manana n says just go manan just leave me alone 4 god's sake…..

But manan does not listens 2 him n further says…

Dekh angad yesa mat kar…… yesa karke tu khud tadap raha hai.. aaur usse bhi tadparaha hai…… aapne dil baat sun angad…. Listen 2 ur heart….

Now angad yells at him…. JUST GO Manan!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

Now manan just leaves 4rm there thinking that he is just impossible….

After manan goes angad thinks…. Yeh kyaa ho raha hai mujhe??? Kyaaa main sach main usse miss kar raha hoon….kyaa jo manan bol raha tha woh sach tha??????? He is really confused about his feelings…….

As he is thinking all this………..naina comes in…

Naina is really angry at what angad did 2 kripa…. But 2 make him realize his mistake naina says…

N: angad beta kaise ho???? Pareshaan lagraheho???

A: kuch nahi mom…bas yesi hi

N: beta main tumse thanks kehena chahti thi

A: tks ???? kyun mom??

N: haaan… tumne thik kiya ussse kripa k saath…himmat toh dekho usski!!!!! tumse shadie ki sapne dekrahi thi….. how stupid!!!!!

Angad feels a bit guilty...

N: Chalo…. Thik hi huwa… woh ladki ko kuch toh aakal aayee…

Maine toh suna hai.. woh aab hamesha k liya yeh seher chod k jaa rahi hai….

A: angad is shocked as well as surpised hearing this…….

Kyaaa kripa jaa rahi hai..????? kaha???? Kab???? Kuyn???? He sounds really worried….

N: relax angad….. tum kuyn pareshaan ho rahe ho???? Woh jati hai toh jati do nah…… y da hell do u care?????

A: yus mom…

Then naina leaves….

Angad 2 himself….. y da hell do I care??????? Kripa k jane k naam sun kar mujhe yeh kyaa hogaya???? Najane mujhe daar sa kyun laraha hai.... usse khone ka daar!!!!!!!

He gets really mad….. kyaaaa horaha hai mere sath???????????

Okay 2 b continued……

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Posted: 20 years ago

Too good!👏

Plz continue...

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