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Posted: 20 years ago
that was just too good...continue soon!
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Posted: 20 years ago
dat waz awesum😃plz continue soon 😃
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Posted: 20 years ago
awesome as always! please cont soon!
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Posted: 20 years ago
hey plzzzzzzzzz continue i cant wait anymore
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Posted: 20 years ago

Part 21

Now angad is really excited 2 meet kripa n rushes outside towards his car……he is really happy at da same time sad too… he is driving really fast…. ..

A: main aaraha hoon kripa … I'm coming….

Krips's Room

Kripa is packing her bags….. when masi comes in….

M: kripa beta tum yeh kaha jane ki tayariya karrahi hoo…. Tumne toh kaha tha ki tum new york nahi aarahi.. toh phir yeh packing?????

K: masi maine faisala kiya hai… main hostel main rahoongi…. Aap logoki jane k baad main yaha aakeli nahi rehpaoongiii…… aagar main yaha aakele rahoongi toh aap ko hamseha meri fikar hogi… aaur main aap logoko aaur paresaan nahi karna chahhati….. main khud kuch banna chahti hoon…. Khud kuch karna chahati hoon….

M: main tumhare faisely ki kadar kati hoon beta …. Lekin yeh yaad rakhna ki yeh ghar ke darwaje hamesha tumhare liye khule rahenge….. yeh ghar tumhara hai aaur tum jab chaho yaha aa sakti ho…

Now all of them r going 2 airport…………

As kripa n family just leaves angad comes in….. . he sees the door locked….

A: aarey yeh lock kaisa?????? Kaha chale gaye sab log……?????

Then the watchman tells him that nobody is inside coz everyone just left 4 NY few minutes ago….

Angad is shocked 2 hear this…. He just don know how 2 react???? He is speechless… then he quickly rushes 2 wards airport…..

Airport

Masi n kartik r about 2 leave 4 their flight

Kartik: aacha kripa aapna khayal rakhna…. Aaur kabhi bhi kisi cheez ki zaroorat ho toh bina jhijhak hume phone karna.. okay…

K: jee bhaiya….

M: I will miss u beta….

Kripa ( cryin ): I will miss u too …. Then they huh… n masi n kartik leaves….

Now kripa is returning back…….. At da same time angad is entering…..

K( 2 herself) aaj se main ek nayee zindagi suru karrongi…. Aapne past ko bhulakar ek nayee manzil k tariff kadam badaungee… aaj se angad aaur uski yaadein mar chuke hai mere liye….

On the otherhand angad is searching 4 kripa madly….. he is running here n there……

A: kaha ho tum kripa …..????? mujhe tumse kisi bhi halat main milna hai……

Now they just cross each other… . both angad n kripa doesn't see each other!!!!!

Angad is cryin n finally breaks down n calls out her name … KRIPA!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

Kripa is about 2 step outside da airport when hears her name ….. she is about 2 turn back but stops…

K: kyun angad???? Kyun tum mere dilo dimag par ish tarah chayeho??? Jab bhi main tumhe bhoolane ki koshish karti hoon tum utna hi mera saya banke mere pas aateho…. Kyun har waqt mujhe tumhari aawaz sunayee deti hai….???? Main janti hoon ki tum yaha nahi ho.. par phir bhi yesa kyun lagta hai ki tum yehi ho… yehi kahi ho…..

Par nahi aab aaur nahi…. Main peeche mud kar nahi dekhungi….. then she wipes her tears n goes forward……..

Angad in da counter:

A: kyaaa Ny is flight take off ho gayee???

Lady: aarey who flight toh kab ki take off ho chuki hai…..

Angad again breaks down into tears …….( back ground Kyph song is going)

Kyaa khel kismet ne sang mere khela hai….

Ulfat ki raho pe yeh dil aakela hai

Tum se yeh keh bhi nap aye

Aaur ho gaye hum paraye……

A( cryin): mujhe maaf kardena kripa… maine aane main der kardi…. Tumse maafi tak magne ka mauka nahi mila….. maine tumhara bahot dil dukhaya hai….. aaur sayed mujhe issi ki saja milrahi hain….. kitna badnaseeb insaan hoon main jo maine aapne hi zindagi khud aapne aap barbaad kardi….. aaur usse sudharne ka mauka tak nahi mila…..

Okay that's it 4 2 day…

2 be continued….😃

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Posted: 20 years ago
awwww it was awesome eshika, continue soon.
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Posted: 20 years ago
Aww How Sad, But It Was GreAt!!!👏
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Posted: 20 years ago

Part 22

Angad's Room

Angad is packin his bags … all set 2 go 2 New York in search of Kripa…….. when naina comes in…

N: angad yeh sab kyaa hai….??? Kaha jane ki tayariya ho rahi hai…. Yaha tumahre concert ki tayariya chalrahi hai aaur tum ho ki aapne bags pack kar raheho?????

A: mom main aaj raat ki flight se NY jaa raha hoon

N( surprised): New York?????? Kahi tum????????

A: haan mom main kripa se milne jaaa raha hoon… mujhe usse kisi bhi halat main milna hai…… anyhow!!!!!!!!

N: par beta… tumhara concert!!!!!

A: nahi mom main kuch nahi janta……. Main kripa k paas jaa raha hoon n that's final

Angad reaches New York….( he gets masi's home address 4rm his naina..

Masi's home

Masi is stunned 2 see Angad standing in front of her….

M: tum ?????????? tum yaha kyaaaaa karaheho?????? Aab kyaaa leno aye ho yaha????

A: aaunty woh main ek bar kripa se……………..

M( angrily) : Bas angad Bas…. Bardasht ki bhi haad hoti hai……. Uski beejati karke bhi tume chain nahi mila jo tum yaha bhi aagaye?????? aakhir kyun angad??? Kyaa bigada hai uss beechari ne tumhara…. Aakhir galti kyaa thi uski…??? Yehi k woh tumse pyaar karti thi…….. ????

Chiiii mujhe toh sharam aarahi hai tumhare soch pe…… kyaaa kyaaa nahi kaha tumne ussko …..

A( with all those guilt n tears in his eyes): aaunty plzzzzz…… mujhe aapni galti ka ehsaas ho gaya hai…… aaur main kripa se sirf ek bar milke ussse mafi magna chahata hoon aaur kehena chahata hoon ki main usse kitna pyaar karta hoon….

M: pyaar????????? Huh!!!!!!!!!!! Aab tumhe ehassa ho raha hai kit um usse pyaar karte ho??????? uss din kaha tha tumhare pyaar jab tumne sab ke samne uski insult ki thi…..????

Tum kyaaa samajte ho…. jab jee chaha thukradiya aaur jab jee chaha aapnaliya??????

Tum kyaaa samjte ho ??? k tum sari ladkiyo ko aapne issaro pe nacha sakte ho……. no Mr. angad!!!! U r wrong…..!!!!! jo ladkiya tumhare aage peehe ghumti hai woh sare tumhare paiso k peeche hai…….. lekin kripa … kripa net oh tumhe sachha pyaar kiya tha…. Aapne dil aaur jaan se….. lekin tumhne……….. khair aab in sab bato ka koi matlab nahi…….tumhare liya behetar yehi hoga kit um ussse zindagi se dur chale jao….. just leave her alone Angad…. Just leave her alone!!!!!!!!!!!! Then masi shuts da door hard on angad's face….. leaving him all in tears…..he closes his eyes in pain…… n when he opens his eyes he comes back 2 reality………….

okay guyz this was all the flash backs... soo now the main story

starts.....

i'll continue 2 morrow...😃

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Posted: 20 years ago

thanks alot

that was very very good

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Posted: 20 years ago
wow abhi main story shuru honi hai, I can't wait. is ka matlab pehle main sirf trailers dekh rahi thi, ab poori film deekhoon gi. 😆😆😆

continue fast.

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