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Phoolwanti 😆 .... Adi 🤢 bye bye and apni mann ki baat apne saat abroad le jaana..I think I will not miss DK now 😳

BTW well written 😳 👏

Originally posted by: autumnleaf

Ahh...so now even you know the tricks of the trade...Keep them hanging in suspense... 😆 😆 😆

Just kidding, brahmi...superb update...haila, panna chachi walking into the bedroom...yeh kya ho kya rahaa hain...Sabko maloom nahin hain kya inki nayi nayi shaadi hui hain..romance nahin to aur kya karenge? 😆 there is something called knocking before you enter.... 😆

Superb song....brahmi...well scripted and bechaari Lajoo..... Phoolu baby don't make her so much pareshaan dearie... 😆 😆

Aur Adi ji ko ab kya kehna hain? 😕 I hope not anything serious....

but very well written brahmi...Keep it up....

Loved the DK part the best..... Very sweet and romantic..... 😳

👏

Autumn,

I surely will have to get inspired by the makers of the serial and those of other serials..who keep audience hanging around in suspense, hai ke nahi? So I too have got affected by them.😆

Panna Chachi didn't think of all that...because of the past incidents and lack of romantic scenes between DK...Panna Chachi didn't expect them to be romancing in bed room. So she also forgot about knocking..😆

Lajo ke paas aakhir kaun hai? Ameesha hi hai na? Tho sharaarat zaroor honge, right?😉😆

Thanks a lot for going through and all your compliments...abhi regarding Adi's suspense..just wait and watch.😛

Love,

Priya😳

Originally posted by: nasartaurus

priya dearest sweetest..................after reading ur beautifully written FF's...................yaar i just got able to relax and b happy a bit n thought tht u have really kept our DK .......alive 👏

love u priya.............kitty 😊

Hey Kitty,

I am happy that you have relaxed after reading it and surely DK will continue to live through my FF. So continue to see them here.

Love,

Priya😛

Originally posted by: ploye

OH god the phoolwanti bit where she yells n no one can stop her asshe'll never change that was just hilarious!!!! 🤣 It really made me laugh!
I was shocked when panna chachi caught DK red handed! just imagining their faces ! how embarrassing! 😳
we didn't get to see karan in this masterpiece! can't wait to know what Adi wants!!
plzzzzzzzz continue sssoooooooooooonnnnnn!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

😉 koko 😉

Koko dear😛

Abhi Ameesha baby ban jaaye tho zor se royenge hi..aur hallaa machaake sabke naak main dum karenge zaroor. 😆

Karan will soon return...right now he is busy sleeping in his cradle...sote kam hai...magar jab sote hai..tho shaanti se sote hai aur tab doosron ko bhi shaanti milta hai.😆 Regarding Adi....you will get to know about it soon.😳

Love,

Priya😛

Originally posted by: thesaint148

🤣 Phoolo in Gobar 🤣 i just loved the idea 🤣 i cant stop laughing. and poor lajo, kitni baat bath day phoolo ko, us ki tu aadat hai idhar udhar tang arranay ki aur apnay saath saath har cheez ko mess up kar dainay ki.

hehehhe, i just loved it Priya ... u made me laugh real hard here.

and hey, what in the world is Panna chachi doing in their bedroom. ... o Gawd ... knock knock, can i come in? was what i learned before entering someone's room, and that too recently married couples room. PC please aunty, learn that.
Priya you know i love the song abhi na jao chor kay ... i just love it. its indeed one of my alllll time fav and u have put it soo well in the whole scene 👏 Wonderful.

Kashish darling😛

Ameesha ki hamesha gandi baatein karne ki aadat hai...aur baby hoke..she cannot do ugly things...so atleast in her babylike way she will mess up things.😆

I am happy that it made you laugh...you really were depressed ever since the 6th Sept episode of Kaajjal. I hope it has relieved you now.😳

I too love the song 'Abhi na jaao chodkar' and I just imagined Apu singing it...it would be so great, na? This song specially keeping Apu in mind. So now you know na...what the scene would look like specially with him singing...it would be so romantic.😳

Love,

Priya😛

Originally posted by: gambi

😆 That was sooo funny! I loved the way you explained how Ammuuu started playing with gobar and how Sunderlaal was getting annoyed and Ammuu's disgusting cries were penetrating through his hand!!!!!!!!!!! 😆 I also loved those lovey dovey moments between DK. It was wonderful and tremendously enjoyable!!!! 👏

Zareen.

Zareen dear😛

I am happy that you loved all the scenes...waise dear, I am waiting for your next dream...so go and sleep fast.😛

Love,

Priya😳

Originally posted by: Aliza*

Di, yeh kya..aap ne to apne FF ko Kekta mayi ke serials waali ending de di..😆 😆😆..so much suspense!! 😆..hmm..im waiting eagerly to find out what's next....

I must say this was very very well done. 👏..outstanding job in desribing the scenes! 👏...Gosh, that much humor..??...i haven't laughed this much in weeks!! 😃...i almost fell off my chair n then mouth started hurting after laughing soo much 😆..i luv ur sense of humor hun!!...Phoolo crying out loud and the neighbours looking and wonder what in the world's going on!🤣...omg..i still can't stop laughing...And then Phoolo playing in gobar!🤣...that was plain hilarious! 😆 😆..Hats off to u for potraying it all so BEAUTIFULLY! 👏..u've really left me speechless to praise ur creativity! 😳

btw, the song u've used in there was sooo sweet!!...i really luved it! 😳..i've actually never heard it before..waise, which movie is it from..??..suited the scene PERFECTLY!! 👏..hun, u explained n described everything SOO well that i could picture the scenes in my mind..it's like i didn't read it, i watched the whole episode! 😳 😳...i totally forgot that all this is over...u and Kashish have really kept the whole romance and passion alive!..thnxx soo much for all this!!...i really appreciate all ur work!!....instead of writing further (cuz meri bolti band hone waali nahin hai😃), this jaadu ki chhappi for u! 😊🤗


keep it up!! 👍🏼



Aliza❤️

Aliza dear😆

Thank god our Kekta didn't see our messy Phoolo...otherwise..she would've kidnapped her away for her latest serial to mess it up, kyon hai ke nahi?😉

Hailaa now you are the third person to fall off chair...pehle it was Mala, then I think Autumn and now its you. Sabhi chair se gir rahe hai.😆

Abhi itne praise sunke tho mera chehra laal laal ho rahi hai..and now my head has touched ceiling.😳 Surely Kashish's FF's are the once that inspire everyone to feel the romance..and surely I will try to bring in more humour too and a little bit of romance.😉 Thanks for all the love you gave me and a little jaadu ki chappi for you too. 🤗

Love,

Priya😛

Originally posted by: mona18

🤣Pholoo in Gobar?!!!! 🤣 Loved this idea...I still cant stop laughing!!! That was a great idea...she deserves to be in the gobar!!!🤣🤣
You have a great sense of humor Priya Darling!!!!

Priya Darling, that was an outstanding job!!!!! 👏 👏 👏 The song really suited the scene relly well!!!!! I was like watching the entire episode...which sooo much of laughter in it too...lol....
And finally u got Dev to cut his hair haa? Very good...We got the old DPS back...HAI!!!! 😳 Pls do continue soon!!! I cant wait to find out what Adi wants....U have kept me hanging here for that suspense...So do continue soon!!!! And this is for u 🤗

~Mona 😛

Mona darling😉

Ameesha in any janam loves to mess up things and be it herself by being in gobar.😆

Yes our old DPS is back with a bang and I had that initial DPS in my mind...the one who presents the best RJ hunt trophy to Kaajjal...haiii...whenever I remember that look of it...it kills me. Isn't he smashing in that?😳

You will soon come to know what Adi wants and surely will return with my next part soon. Here is one for you too for being such a sweet darling.😳🤗

Love,

Priya😛

Originally posted by: hira_786

Wowww priya..another wonderful episodel i must say..u noe wen i read ur ff..i imagine everythin is happenin in real..so wher shud i start ma comments from..umm lets cc..first of all...dev n kaju on da bed shooo sweeet..omg panna chachi needs manners..kuch to sikhao yaar 😆 aise thori ghus jate hain..n da song dev n kaju sang was soooo lovelyyyy 😳 😳 😳 omg dev ne baal kata liye or shave bhi..hailaa!!!after all it was a party..how many gurls wer flirtin wid him 😉 😆 i realli loved da idea bout phool in gobar..wah an idea..i was crakin up for da whole tyme.. 🤣 thtz jus hillarious!!! 😆 aray yarr humein to ita suspense mein dal dia..ab adi kia bolne wala hai????ab phir se kuch gar bar nah kerde...i dun hav to wry..tumhare ff hai..m sure it will nah be nethin bad 😃 chalo lets c kia hota hai...untill den write da nex part cuz m eagerli waitin to read more 😃 😃 😃

Lotssa luv:hira 😉

Hira dear😛

I am happy that you enjoyed the whole episode. Koi girls Devu ke saath flirt nahi kar rahe the...kyonki jab Kaajjal honge..tho Dev kisi aur ladki ko dekh kaise sakte hai?😉 Adi's suspense will be over soon when I returns with the next episode. So just wait and watch.😛

Love,

Priya😳

hey priya,
the song " abhi na jaao..." is it a real song , if yes wat is the title of the song n wat movie is it from? I dunno this song , so I wanna listen to it!! thxxxx! 😉

😉 komal 😉