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Patjhar

@Patjhar

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Posted: 18 years ago

#61

Ahh...so now even you know the tricks of the trade...Keep them hanging in suspense... 😆 😆 😆

Just kidding, brahmi...superb update...haila, panna chachi walking into the bedroom...yeh kya ho kya rahaa hain...Sabko maloom nahin hain kya inki nayi nayi shaadi hui hain..romance nahin to aur kya karenge? 😆 there is something called knocking before you enter.... 😆

Superb song....brahmi...well scripted and bechaari Lajoo..... Phoolu baby don't make her so much pareshaan dearie... 😆 😆

Aur Adi ji ko ab kya kehna hain? 😕 I hope not anything serious....

but very well written brahmi...Keep it up....

Loved the DK part the best..... Very sweet and romantic..... 😳

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neelam

@neelamSDlover

Voyager

Posted: 18 years ago

#62

priya dearest sweetest..................after reading ur beautifully written FF's...................yaar i just got able to relax and b happy a bit n thought tht u have really kept our DK .......alive 👏

love u priya.............kitty 😊

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komal

@kiokyo

Dazzler

Posted: 18 years ago

#63

OH god the phoolwanti bit where she yells n no one can stop her asshe'll never change that was just hilarious!!!! 🤣 It really made me laugh!
I was shocked when panna chachi caught DK red handed! just imagining their faces ! how embarrassing! 😳
we didn't get to see karan in this masterpiece! can't wait to know what Adi wants!!
plzzzzzzzz continue sssoooooooooooonnnnnn!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

😉 koko 😉

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Kashish

@thesaint148

Rocker

+ 3

Posted: 18 years ago

#64

🤣 Phoolo in Gobar 🤣 i just loved the idea 🤣 i cant stop laughing. and poor lajo, kitni baat bath day phoolo ko, us ki tu aadat hai idhar udhar tang arranay ki aur apnay saath saath har cheez ko mess up kar dainay ki.

hehehhe, i just loved it Priya ... u made me laugh real hard here.

and hey, what in the world is Panna chachi doing in their bedroom. ... o Gawd ... knock knock, can i come in? was what i learned before entering someone's room, and that too recently married couples room. PC please aunty, learn that.
Priya you know i love the song abhi na jao chor kay ... i just love it. its indeed one of my alllll time fav and u have put it soo well in the whole scene 👏 Wonderful.

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gambi

@gambi

Rocker

Posted: 18 years ago

#65

😆 That was sooo funny! I loved the way you explained how Ammuuu started playing with gobar and how Sunderlaal was getting annoyed and Ammuu's disgusting cries were penetrating through his hand!!!!!!!!!!! 😆 I also loved those lovey dovey moments between DK. It was wonderful and tremendously enjoyable!!!! 👏

Zareen.

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Maham

@Desii.Babiie

Inactive

Posted: 18 years ago

#66

Di, yeh kya..aap ne to apne FF ko Kekta mayi ke serials waali ending de di..😆 😆😆..so much suspense!! 😆..hmm..im waiting eagerly to find out what's next....

I must say this was very very well done. 👏..outstanding job in desribing the scenes! 👏...Gosh, that much humor..??...i haven't laughed this much in weeks!! 😃...i almost fell off my chair n then mouth started hurting after laughing soo much 😆..i luv ur sense of humor hun!!...Phoolo crying out loud and the neighbours looking and wonder what in the world's going on!🤣...omg..i still can't stop laughing...And then Phoolo playing in gobar!🤣...that was plain hilarious! 😆 😆..Hats off to u for potraying it all so BEAUTIFULLY! 👏..u've really left me speechless to praise ur creativity! 😳

btw, the song u've used in there was sooo sweet!!...i really luved it! 😳..i've actually never heard it before..waise, which movie is it from..??..suited the scene PERFECTLY!! 👏..hun, u explained n described everything SOO well that i could picture the scenes in my mind..it's like i didn't read it, i watched the whole episode! 😳 😳...i totally forgot that all this is over...u and Kashish have really kept the whole romance and passion alive!..thnxx soo much for all this!!...i really appreciate all ur work!!....instead of writing further (cuz meri bolti band hone waali nahin hai😃), this jaadu ki chhappi for u! 😊🤗

keep it up!! 👍🏼

Aliza❤️

Edited by Aliza* - 18 years ago

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MonaS

@MasterKatara18

Dazzler

Posted: 18 years ago

#67

🤣Pholoo in Gobar?!!!! 🤣 Loved this idea...I still cant stop laughing!!! That was a great idea...she deserves to be in the gobar!!!🤣🤣
You have a great sense of humor Priya Darling!!!!

Priya Darling, that was an outstanding job!!!!! 👏 👏 👏 The song really suited the scene relly well!!!!! I was like watching the entire episode...which sooo much of laughter in it too...lol....
And finally u got Dev to cut his hair haa? Very good...We got the old DPS back...HAI!!!! 😳 Pls do continue soon!!! I cant wait to find out what Adi wants....U have kept me hanging here for that suspense...So do continue soon!!!! And this is for u 🤗

~Mona 😛

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hira

@hira_786

Dazzler

Posted: 18 years ago

#68

Wowww priya..another wonderful episodel i must say..u noe wen i read ur ff..i imagine everythin is happenin in real..so wher shud i start ma comments from..umm lets cc..first of all...dev n kaju on da bed shooo sweeet..omg panna chachi needs manners..kuch to sikhao yaar 😆 aise thori ghus jate hain..n da song dev n kaju sang was soooo lovelyyyy 😳 😳 😳 omg dev ne baal kata liye or shave bhi..hailaa!!!after all it was a party..how many gurls wer flirtin wid him 😉 😆 i realli loved da idea bout phool in gobar..wah an idea..i was crakin up for da whole tyme.. 🤣 thtz jus hillarious!!! 😆 aray yarr humein to ita suspense mein dal dia..ab adi kia bolne wala hai????ab phir se kuch gar bar nah kerde...i dun hav to wry..tumhare ff hai..m sure it will nah be nethin bad 😃 chalo lets c kia hota hai...untill den write da nex part cuz m eagerli waitin to read more 😃 😃 😃

Lotssa luv:hira 😉

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Payal

@-Payal-

Rocker

+ 2

Posted: 18 years ago

#69

Priya dear,

First of all, so sorry for getting around to this a bit late.

Thanks for the PM! 😊

I LOVE IT! Mostly, because in your story, love lives on and evil dies. I love how you twisted the reincarnation from DK to KA instead. Brilliant.

Loved the narration of the Mandir wala scene...and also the scene where DK renew their promises to one another for a new life together in the first part...it was beautiful to see DK communicate their love for one another like that...Dev ka maafi mangna, Kaju ka Dev ke pair choona...it was beautiful.

Love the understanding between NB and Veeru...I love these two...and of course, the new pillar of support for the bachchas - PC...

Seems KA are back in full form already as these little devils they've been reborn as...I pity their parents! Poor souls!

I'm loving the beautiful DK scenes...cute moments of DK as mia-biwi...things we never got to see...thank you for that.

I'm thinking Adi Dadu will ask DK to find him an achchi si biwi! 😆

You're doing a great job...wonderful narration...keep it up - I can't wait to read more!

Love,
~Payal

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Gagori Chatterjee

@jyoti06

Alumni

+ 8

Posted: 18 years ago

#70

😆 Pholwanti a.k.a Ameesha baby 😉 playing with the Gobar in the Tabela 🤪 ..Too good Priya 👏 And thanks a lot for this daily doze of laughter 😆 ..chalo now my tabela has turned ashudh because of this phoolwanti 😡 😆 😆 ..but anyways DK r enjoying in their Singh Manbsion tabela 😉 😛

Good that finally Adi has decided to go abroad 😉 😛 ..but whats this new mann ki baat 😕 ...Chalo I hope he has fallen in love with some bakri 😛 ..

Also loved the coochie-Cooing scenes between DK in the Bedroom 😳 😳

Outstanding and hilarious Narration Priya 👏

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