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Posted: 18 years ago
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Originally posted by: lil_desi_goddes

Awesome hunnii!!

please do continue!!

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thanx hun

ill cont as soon as i get 4 more comments

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Posted: 18 years ago
#52
hey you should be a writer!! 😛
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Posted: 18 years ago
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Originally posted by: a4j4ever

hey you should be a writer!! 😛

😳😳thanx hun!! thats really sweet of you!!

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Posted: 18 years ago
#54
Yeah you should be a writer. this is great
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Posted: 18 years ago
#55
this is great. its like i am reading the real update. pls cont... soon. pls its getting more intresting.
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Posted: 18 years ago
#56
thanx for your sweet comments

i have 4 i juss need 1 more 😉
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Posted: 18 years ago
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~*Part 8*~
-Kaajjal looks at Dev and Dev looks away. He looks at his watch and say its getting late I should leave now, Kaajjal stops him and says atleast eat first, and don't say next time cause you always say that. Dev looks at his watch and says ok, since it is your birthday, Im gonna have to listen to your every command. Kaajjal smiles and says cmon lets go.
-Kaajjal,Dev,Bua,Papa,and Hottie are all at the dinner table enjoying the food. Dev praises the food and Bua tells him that Kaajjal made it. Dev looks surprised and Kaajjal looks down. Dev says really Kaajjal? Kaajjal nods her head and Dev says wow, you never told me you can cook. What else are you hiding from me? Kaajjal looks surprised and says nothing sir, nothing at all.
-Dev looks at his watch and says ok its really getting late so Ill take your leave now. Kaajjal looks sad but dosent show it. As Dev heads for the door he sees shorty coming in with a bouquet of flowers for Kaajjal. Kaajjal and Hottie run to shorty and the three of em hug. Dev forgets about leaving and greets shorty.
-Hottie,Shorty and Kaajjal start talking and as soon as Dev is about to leave but Shorty stops him and says Dev,talk with us. Dev tries to make up an excuse but he can see the twinkle in Kaajjals eyes asking him to stay. So he says ok but not for long.
-Hottie and Shorty don't know what to talk about till Hottie says lets play Truth,Dare or Stare. Dev looks scared cause hes with a bunch of gurls. Dev tries to leave but Hottie stops him and says oh no, were not letting you leave so soon. Dev looks help less but stays anyways.
-Sjorty comes with a basket full of chits and each of them says Truth Dare or Stare. Hotty chooses first and gets truth.Kaajjal asks her if she can find a prince charming for Kaajjal, how would he be. Hottie looks at Dev and says hell be well dressed,tall,handsome,fair,sweet,loving, just like Dev. Dev looks up surprised and Kaajjal blushes. Then Shorty picks a chit and it says dare. Kaajjal and Hottie have nothing so they tell Dev to choose sumthing for her. Dev says uh...umm...well...I dare you to tell us your deepest darkest secret. Kaajjal and Hotties eye widen and says OMG HOW COME WE DIDNT THINK OF THAT?!?!?! Kaajjal and Dev high five and Dev looks like it was his first time giving sumone a high five.*GUYS I CANT THINK OF ANY DEEPEST DARKEST SECRET BUT MINES SO JUSS THINK OF SUMTHING*
-Kaajjal picks a chit and it says stare. Hottie automatically says I DARE YOU TO LOOK AT DEV FOR A MINUTE!! EYE TO EYE!! Dev and Kaajjal are shocked and says Kyaa yaar Hottie? Shorty says o w/e lets just get it over with. Kaajjal looks at Dev and Hottie says Dev,its eye to eye, you have to look into her eyes too. Dev feels afraid but agrees. For a romantic full minute, Dev and Kaajjal look into each others eyes. Both of their eyes were twinkling and you can see each others reflection in em😆. Hottie says ok the minute is over!! but Dev and Kaajjal are lost into looking into each others eyes.
-Hottie smiles and starts clapping to grab their attention but it dosent work. So she sprinkles water in both of their faces. Hottie says maybe you guys don't know this, but its been 2 minutes since you two have been looking into each others eyes!! Kaajjal and Dev look embarressed and Shorty changes the subject. Dev picks a chit and it says Truth.Hottie asks him what he likes best bout Kaajjal.Dev blushes and says EVERYTHING,I LIKE EVERYTHING BOUT KAAJJAL. Kaajjal blushes and says Dev Sir-Dev cuts her off and says Ek minute Kaajjal im not finished.
-Dev says Kaajjal your the first gurl that has ever really been there for me. Your the first gurl that Ive met who stands up for her rights and always sticks to em. Ive never met anyone like you and I know I will never meet anyone as special as you in my life. You have a very special place in my heart, and i hope I hold as much importance to you as you hold for me.
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Posted: 18 years ago
#58
Great job!!! It gets better and better all the time.
Question: Are we going 2 c a jealous Dev in ur fanfic like we will in the show?
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Posted: 18 years ago
#59

Originally posted by: Guju Girl

Great job!!! It gets better and better all the time.
Question: Are we going 2 c a jealous Dev in ur fanfic like we will in the show?

thanx for your sweet comment

and to answer your question,YES there ll be a scene where Dev will get jealous

ill make a scene probably next week

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Posted: 18 years ago
#60
hunnii..

amazing.. sorry for not being the first one to read ur new part... but i read
it.. and it was gr8!!

please do continue!!

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