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Posted: 18 years ago
#41

Originally posted by: THiNKiN OF YOU

hehe yea hun i agree with you but i love romance!! so in my FF dev is a toal different guy

well...not totally different


Yup thats ok we all love it & LOVE ROMANCE TOO..
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Posted: 18 years ago
#42
Very nice and sweet. 😛 continue plz..
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Posted: 18 years ago
#43
i have to say...this is my first FF thats kinda a hit! 😳
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Posted: 18 years ago
#44
just fantastic, great job 👏 . pls cont...
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Posted: 18 years ago
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Originally posted by: aspatel2

just fantastic, great job 👏 . pls cont...

thanx hun😳

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Posted: 18 years ago
#46
Yeah you did an excellent job. Continue Soon
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Posted: 18 years ago
#47
wow great ff
make some romantic scene between kajal and dev 😉

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Posted: 18 years ago
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ill cont as soon as I finish my chores and hw 😉

PLZZ DONT USE MY FIRST TWO SIGGIES😳

Edited by THiNKiN OF YOU - 18 years ago
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Posted: 18 years ago
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~*Part 6*~
-Kaajjal is in Dev's arms and evryones claaping.Kaajjal looks up at Dev with tears of joy in her eyes and Dev wipes em off. Hottie takes the microphone and says tonight is a very special night, so all you love birds please come on the dance floor and dance with da ones you love.
-Kaajjal and Dev go on the dance floor and start dancing to Pehli Pehli Baar hai from the movie Kyaa yehi Pyaar hein. Kaajjal rests her head on Devs chest and they dance the night away.
-Kaajjal looks up at Dev again and he puts his hands on her cheeks and kisses her forehead.Kaajjal hugs him and she says I LOVE YOU DEV SIR.
-Dev wakes up and guess what...it was all a dream. Dev hasnt admitted his love for Kaajjal.*BUT KAAJJAL DID WIN HER CASE*.Dev goes to his couch and starts to drink. He thinks bout the time he threw a wine bottle at her. He closes his eyes and pushes the wine away.
-Dev is restless and Aunt comes in. She says Dev, Whats wrong? Why arent you sleeping? Dev says Panna Chachi I can't stop thinking bout Kaajjal. Aunt looks happy and says maybe its l- Dev cuts her off when she was bout to say love. He says no Panna chachi,I can't forget Devika so easily. Not only Was she my love she still IS this very day.
-Panna Chachi says I know its hard to forget sumone you LOVED and love but Dev how long are you going to torture yourself because of that girl?Im not saying saying love Kaajjal,Im saying give her a chance atleast. I know shell keep you really happy. Dev says Ill think about it but sumthing else is also haunting me. Aunt says what? Dev tells her about Kaajjals birthday and he wants to go wish her. Panna says ok go, but come home soon. Dev says ok but before leaving he says but what am I going to give her?
-Aunt goes to her cabinet and takes out a diamond set. She says I knew this was gonna happen one day so I kept this. Give this to her, shell love it. Dev hugs Aunt and leaves for Kaajjals house.
Dev arrives at Kaajjals house and asks Bua where Kaajjal is. She tells him shes in her room. Dev goes in her room and sees her praying to Gannu Bhaiya and thanking him for winning the case. Dev stands next to Kaajjal and thanx him too. Kaajjal is surprised to see him and says Dev sir aap? Dev says Happy Birthday and gifts her the necklace. Kaajjal smiles and says what was the need for this? He says there was no need, its her birthday and she deserves sumthing special. Kaajjal blushes and thanks him.
-Bua interrupts them and says sorry to interrupt but its time to cut the cake.Dev and Kaajjal both leave the room and head for the lving room. Kaajjal says wow chocolate cake!! My favorite!*HAHA SORRY GUYS BUT THATS MY FAVORITE SO DECIDED TO ADD THAT* Dev is happy to see the smile on Kaajjals face as shes cutting the cake. She feeds everyone and Devs dream sequence is coming true, she feeds him too. Kaajjal blushes and the time goes still.
-Bua Papa and Hottie are cleaning up the preperations and Dev helps them out. Hottie cracks a joke and everyone starts laughing EVEN DEV and Dev notices that Kaajjal is no where to be found. He looks around for her and sees her looking at the stars outside. He says Kaajjal, what are you doing here? Kaajjal says nothing, I was just looking at the stars. Dev looks at em with her. They both spot a shooting and Kaajjal says look look a shooting star!! Lets make a wish!!
-Dev and Kaajjal both close their eyes and wish for sumthing. Kaajjal wishes for Devs happiness and Dev wishes for Kaajjals happiness. They both end up saying,let them always be happy.
-Kaajjal looks up at the sky and says it sure is beautiful and Dev looks at Kaajjal and says yes,it is.

PLZZ DONT USE MY FIRST 3 SIGGIES😳

Edited by THiNKiN OF YOU - 18 years ago
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Posted: 18 years ago
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Awesome hunnii!!

please do continue!!

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