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Great job! I look forward to the fanfic just as much as i do the show. You really should consider being a writer

Originally posted by: Guju Girl

Great job! I look forward to the fanfic just as much as i do the show. You really should consider being a writer

thanx for your sweet comments hun!! i luv reading em!! i would be a writer but my number one dream is to be a doctor!!

ill cont as soon as i get a couple more comments😉

Originally posted by: salu_92

Good work
Carry on soon

thanx hun!! i see ur a newbie...WELCOME TO THE FORUM!!

does anyone have any suggestions to put in the next few parts??

I think you should write parts where dev would get jealous seeing Kaajjal and Dhruv together.that would be exciting!!

well great job,keep going!!

~*Part 10*~
-Dhruv and Kaajjal start flirting and Dev says its time to go, shall we go now? Kaajjal says o ok lets go. Dhruv opens the door for Kaajjal and Kaajjal says aww thank you. Dev dosent like that and rushes to the car.Kaajjal is sitting in the back and Dhruv looks at her through the mirror. They reach the office and Kaajjal says bie to both of em. Dhruv says bye and kisses her hand. Dev dosent like that and looks away. As Kaajjal is walking to her cabin her dupatta flies off and falls on Dhruvs face. She runs to get it and as she takes it off they look at each other. Dev says *AHEM* and they both come into there senses.
-Kaajjal says bye and walks away. Dev looks frustrated and says come on lets go. Dhruv and Dev are walking to Devs cabin and Dhruv stops as he sees Kaajjal talking to Jenny in her cabin laughing. She sees Dhruv and waves at him, Dhruv waves back at her and was going to walk inside but Dev stops him.
-Dev and Dhruv are in the cabin and Dhruv is thinking bout Kaajjal and Dev is doing his work.Kaajjal walks in and says Dev sir, theres an emergency at home and I have to get there.Can I please go? Ill be back soon. Before Dev can say anything Dhruv syas Yes,of course just come back soon. Kaajjal says ok and walks away. Dev gives him a confused look like this>>😕 and says what was that?? Your not interested in her are you?
-Dhruv says I dont know,I just cant stop thinking bout her. Dev is shocked and says uh...Ill be right back. Dev is in the washroom washing his face saying So what if Dhruv is interested in Kaajjal? I should be happy for him. hes found the gurl hes always wanted.While Dhruv is waiting for Dev he calls sumone and sends a bouquet of white roses for Kaajjal and a card saying Seeing you, felt like seeing a star in front of my eyes.-Your secret admirer.
-Kaajjal walks inside of her room and sees the roses and reads the card. Shes shocked and says who can this be? She puts the card away and gets water for the roses. As Dev is walking to his cabin he sees the roses and walks inside her cabin. He sees the card next to the roses and reads it. Hes shocked and Kaajjal enters the cabin with a jug of water. She says Dev sir Aap? Yaaha? Dev says O I was just checking to se if you were back. As Kaajjal is putting water in the vase. Dev asks who sent these? Kaajjal says Dev sir, who would I know? Its from a secret admirer. Dev says O,well carry on with your work and storms out of the room.
-Dev tells Dhruv and Dhruv acts like he knows nothing. He says What? Who could it be? Dev says I dont know, but for sum reason I dont like it at all!! Dhruv worries and says Dev is so upset, I cant tell him. What should I do?

SORRY FOR THE SHORT UPDATE, EARLIER I WAS DOING THE UPDATE AND MY COMP FROZE AND ERASED THE WHOLE THING 😭 SO I COULDNT REMEMBER ANYTHING

Its really good.
Plz continue.
Option: Try to make kajjal get married to dev soon... 😆

Originally posted by: maryam4f

Its really good.
Plz continue.
Option: Try to make kajjal get married to dev soon... 😆

dont wry hun, i got it all in my head😉

hey great job 👏 it was really nice seeing DEV jeleous.

Originally posted by: aspatel2

hey great job 👏 it was really nice seeing DEV jeleous.

hain na?? i can even picture it😆