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hey guys i have a FF on sum other Forums so i thought it would be kool to have one here

~*My FanFic Rules*~

-I only Cont on your requests.

-I Cont after getting 5 or more comments for every Part.

-I wont write more then two parts everyday. I will only make one Cont but at times will make exceptions.

-If you want me to cont I will but plzz dont PM me asking to cont cause it happened in my last FF and it got annoying.

-If you have any ideas plzz tell me,Ill be happy to add em.

~*Thanx*~

❤️Index❤️

Im very sorry guys!! I made an error!! I skipped Part 7!! Im very sorry.

Part 1-Page 1

Part 2-Page 2

Part 3-Page 3

Part 4-Page 4

Part 5-Page 6

Part 6-Page 7

Part 8-Page 9

Part 9-Page 10

Part 10-Page 11

Part 11-Page 13

Part 12-Page 16

Part 13-Page 19

Part 14-Page 22

Part 15-Page 24

Part 16-Page 28

Part 17-Page 30

Part 18-Page 32

Part 19-Page 34

Part 20-Page 35

Part 21-Page 37

Part 22-Page 40

Part 23-Page 41

Part 24-Page 42

Part 25-Page 44

Part 26-Page 47

Part 27-Page 49

Part 28-Page 51

Part 29-Page 54

Part 30-Page 57

Part 31-Page 59

Part 32-Page 62

Part 33-Page 65

Part 34-Page 68

Part 35-Page 70

Part 36-Page 72

Part 37-Page 75

Part 38-Page 77

Part 39-Page 79

Part 40-Page 82

Part 41-Page 85

Part 42-Page 88

Part 43-Page 91

Part 44-Page 94

Part 45-Page 95

Part 46-Page 99

Part 47-Page 101

Part 48-Page 104

Part 49-Page 107

Part 50-Page 109

Part 51-Page 110

Part 52-Page 111

Part 53-Page 113

Part 54-Page 114

Part 55-Page 115

Part 56-Page 116

Part 1- Starts off with Dev asking Kaajjal if she remembers the drivers face. Kaajjal is panicking and nods her head. Dev keeps on asking who is it and Kaajjal says VE-E-ER SIR aur AM-I-I-SHA BHABHI. Dev is shocked out of his wits and is unable to believe it but he thinks back to everything the police says. He remembers the police saying Silver Lancer(VEERS CAR) and a man and women.Veer and Amisa run inside the room to stop Kaajjal but its too late. As Kaajjal sees Veer and Amisha she faints. Hottie yells out Kaajjal and Dev looks more worried and scared. He goes to Veer, gets him by the collar and says IF ANYTHING HAPPENES TO KAAJJAL, I WONT SPARE YOU!! Veer and Amisha are obviously shocked and they know theyve been squealed on. Kaajjals dad yells for the doctor and the doctor runs in. He checks her pulse and all that and says she has fainted from shock. The doctor says dont wry shell get up in a lil while. Dev waits anxiously for the doctor to leave so he can beat up Veer. As the doctor leaves Dev says Do you know what you two have done? You have taken the lives of innocent lives!! and Kaajjal almost lost her life!! Veer and Amisha deny it and say We didnt do anything!! What are you talking about?? Dev yells SHUT UP!! DONT LIE!! Bua stops Dev and says Dev Bhetta, dont make a riot here, were in a hospital and god knows what theyll ask you. Settle this at home. Amisha says good idea, Dev, Veer lets go home and talk there, I feel suffocated here. Veer gets Dev by his hand and says Cmon but Dev says you two go, Ill come when Kaajjal regains conscious. Amisha shocked and Says why do you care so much bout this Low Class gurl!?!? Dev yells BAAS!!! Dont you dare talk that way about Kaajjal!! Amisha yells back Why? why cant I?? Before she came all you did was respect me and treat me like I was ur own Sister!! and now!! WHAT THE HELL IS THIS!! Veer supports Amisha and says what does she mean to you? After two years you actually care bout some gurl again. Dev looks down and Kaajjal regains conscious and says Bua whats going on? Dev looks back at Kaajjal and says Are you ok? Kaajjal nods her head and sees Amisha and Veer and is petrified. She says HOTTIE WHAT ARE THEY DOING HERE?? GET OUT!! GET OUT!!! Hottie tries to control Kaajjal but Kaajjal is petrified and starts crying. Dev runs to Kaajjal and tries calming her down but shes still petrified. Dev puts his hand on Kaajjals head and lets her rest her head on his chest. Shes still crying and Dev says Kaajjal relax, dont wry as long as Im here nothing can happen to you.*CLOSE UPS ON EVERYONES FACE*

what do you guys think??

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Posted: 18 years ago
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wow...it's amazing...continue soon jaan.... 😳
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Posted: 18 years ago
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Originally posted by: FrEnDs8

wow...it's amazing...continue soon jaan.... 😳

awww thanx hun but i kinda have a rule...i only cont when i have like 5 comments so you gonna have to wait

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Posted: 18 years ago
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great story 😛
continue soon 😳
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Posted: 18 years ago
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oh my god ... i dont belive this .... i cant wait till i watch it ... 😊
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Posted: 18 years ago
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hiiiiii

oh my gosh......its totally awsome 😊

you really should continue soon.....can't wait to read more 😉

please.... 😳 please continue soon

bye!!!
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Posted: 18 years ago
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ok for u guys ill cont but after my chores are done 😉
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-Kaajjals head is resting on Devs Chest and Dev tells her nothing will happen to her as long as hes with her.
-Dev Veer and Amisha leave Kaajjals room and Dev is drving home. He keeps on thinking of Kaajjal and says Why was I so scared seeing Kaajjal in that Condition?, why was I ready to give my life to her?, why am I pining to go back to Kaajjal?
-Dev,Amisha and Veer arrive home and they all argue.
-Mom and Aunt come down hearing the arguement and ask what going on but Amisha says nothing,everythings fine.
-Dev tells aunt and mom everything and there shocked like hell itself.
-aunt and mom tell everyone to sleep and theyll settle everything tomorrow.
-Dev goes to a temple nearby and thanks god for saving Kaajjal.
-As he leaves he sees a couple in love holding hands. He pictures that couple as him and Kaajjal.
-Its morning and Kaajjal wakes up seeing Get well balloons and flowers all around her room. Theres a big bouquet of flowers(bout 200 roses in em) and Dev walks out from behind them. Hes wearing a red T-shirt and blue jeans lookin and sexy and hott!! 😳
-He wishes her Good Morning and she says it back and asks where Hottie,Bua,and Papa are. He says they looked tired so he sent them home and theyll come back soon.
-Kaajjals says o ok, how are you? He says Im very cause I got permission to have you discharged. Kaajjals also very happy.
-Dev gives her a bag and theres a blue and red shalwar kamiz in it. He says I brought specially for you and I want you to wear it today. Kaajjal is happy and says ok.
-As Kaajjal tries getting out of bed the police comes and starts asking her questions bout the accident but she keeps quiet. and is scared.
-Dev sees the fear in her eyes and asks to talk to her alone. The police says ok and leaves the 2 alone.
-Dev tells Kaajjal not to be afraid, and to speak the truth. He puts his hand on Kaajjals and says Dont worry Im here for you. Kaajjal seems calm ok, call him in.
-The police comes in and Kaajjal tells him everything. The police asks where he can find Amisha and Veer. Dev says hell take him to the place.
-Dev tells Kaajjal to get ready since they are leaving. Kaajjal gets up with the bag in her hand. She walks out looking beautiful but without any makeup but she still looked pretty with her hair down and that smile on her face.
-Dev smiles and says ready to go? Kaajjal nods her head and they both leave. As Kaajjals walking she feels weak and isnt able to walk properly.
-Dev puts his hands on Kaajjals shoulders and says Dont wry Im here. They walk outside of the hospital with his hand on her shoulders.
-Its really windy outside and Kaajjal feels really cold. Dev takes off his jacket and puts it around her. The police comes to them and says were going to follow you, drive us to Amisha and Veer and Dev agrees.
-He opens the door of the car for Kaajjal and helps her in. He says is it ok if we stop by my house for a sec? Kaajjal says yea, its fine.
-Dev and the cops arrive at the house and Veer and Amisha are sitting in the living room and are scared to see the cops. The cops say You two are under arrest. *close ups on there faces* Dev looks like he dosent care
-Dev looks around but Kaajjal is no where to be seen. He sees her trying to get out of the car but she walks the other way instead of inside the house
-Dev is confused and asks her where shes going. She cries and says I can't bare to see all this!! I wanna get outta here!! Before Dev can say aything Kaajjal sees Veer and Amisha coming out cuffed giving Kaajjal a mean look.
-Kaajjal cries more and Dev takes her into his arms.
Edited by THiNKiN OF YOU - 18 years ago
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Posted: 18 years ago
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wow....that is really very good....please cont....soon...it was amazing....i wish this really happens....lol.... 👏
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Posted: 18 years ago
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Originally posted by: mysterygurl1427

wow....that is really very good....please cont....soon...it was amazing....i wish this really happens....lol.... 👏

😳 thanx so much hun!! i wish itd happen too

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