NOVEL~*Hiding behind a Stranger*~THREAD 47-CHAPTER 52, TSR for 53 UPD - Page 119

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Posted: 7 years ago

Originally posted by: Testmytest

Ok Author Sahiba, I have somehow composed myself to write this:

What a contrast between C44 and C52!!! Where they were then and where they have ended up now (sad face)

We have three villians: Khalil, Mahendar and FS.

Khalil has been put in the prison cell, no discussion of him here! Good for us!

Mahendar kept in the palace for the next two weeks, until the duel. So, the only villain not in the cell is FS and he is taking full advantage of this freedom. Does he really hate the Hindus that much?? He is making every effort to taunt the Shezaade so he punishes them to the fullest. I have lot of unpleasant words for FS (wicked, despicable, evil, hideous) but will let go here.

Shezaade: I have lost all respect. He is the prince, future king, not a common man. He should know how to keep his emotions in check, should control his rage, desires, temper...Just because FS taunts him does not mean he has to act on it. Doesn't he have the decency to investigate the issue before becoming a rageaholic. He knows FS is not one to be trusted as he witnessed it the day before in the court. He befriended Khalil even after he was told not to, so why is the Shezaade listening to FS atrocious accusations against AMK and Heera. What he has done to AMK is unacceptable and inhumane

He probably would not have done what he did with AMK in the prison cell had he not visited Heera. It was Heera's very presence, innocence, honesty, her pleads made him return her prized possession the lens!

I had to stop reading 3 times, when the Shezade starts whipping AMK because I was visualizing Heera witnessing this brutal/barbaric act, she would have fainted watching her love being beaten like an animal. AMK keeps thinking about Heera, at least she is not seeing this heinous crime, but she found out later. Cannot express in words how she must have felt when she heard of this brutal act inflicted on her husband. Being the healer herself, she would have felt helpless, powerless, weak...

AMK has always said he is only human, which clearly is visible in this chapter.

That is why I said in one of the previous threads - AMK, Heera, his men, her people should go far away from the capital, away from the Shezaade!

He is jealous of AMK and Heera! He does not like the fact that AMK has another person in his life more valuable than the Prince! Why cannot he understand AMK has a personal life besides work!

In the end Love will prevail! Harry Potter and Lord Voldemort come to my mind. Harry had what Voldemort didn't have Love of his parents, love of his mother especially!

Let's keep our fingers crossed, very slowly they will come out of this difficult situation.

I have said this before, will say it again and again, Lashy you are an amazing writer! Every word, every phrase you write is a masterpiece! They are so powerful, I was in tears that whole day! The reason we feel for AMK/Heera is this: unlike other novels I have read here in the IF, you have put a face to the names of the leads. Whenever I read the chapters, their face is depicted in front of me. The picture is so alive, we have become the part of their lives!

Thank you for keeping all of us entertained. This is absolutely a Romantic/Political thriller masterpiece!


Wonderful review, Rekha di! 👏
It expressing your feelings .😭
So true Khan sahib always remind Heera that he is human...not unlike other who think themselves like God. 😔
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Posted: 7 years ago
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Posted: 7 years ago

Originally posted by: lghosh

I work at nights to protect your light,

I work in the days to make your life bright!

I work in searing heat to keep you from the cold.

I lay my life for you daring the brave and bold!

So you could live in peace and be safe and sound,

But today, all I have are the innumerable wound!

Inflicted by you, my Brother-once, you were so caring,

Bereft of love now my heart, body, and soul lie all baring!

The honest truth that bleeds from my wounds tell a tale,

It is your loss and henceforth you'll alone face the strong gale!

You will remember many-a-times when I laid my life for You,

Huzoor, this Phoenix will rise and soar for loved ones all anew!


Lana kya likha hai tumne yaar. Bahut khoob!

The mughal prince has no idea what he has lost: a rare and irreplaceable gem!
Edited by Testmytest - 7 years ago
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Posted: 7 years ago

That night...

That night, the corridors of the Imperial fort so deathly and haunted,

were beset all over again, by silent echoes of horror that shook the most undaunted.

The laments of a lover at the callous lashings bleeding dry her beloved.

The woes of a woman mourning the plight of her man who lay fatally wounded.

The cries of a companion unable to care for her partner castoff and isolated.

The sorrow of a soulmate grieving HIS precious life sinking and devastated.

So spine-chilling those silent echoes sounded,

that it's said, for many moons its sordid effects lasted.

So heart-tugging were the several prayers that'd gone wasted,

that it's believed, that night, even the Goddess above was awoken and stirred.

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Lashy these last phrases/lines you wrote at the end of C52, I think lot of us have somehow not paid attention to the words. Lot of us were thinking what will be Heera's reaction once she finds out what happened to her husband. According to the above lines, she already knows 😭😭

The words definitely didn't register in my mind after reading the distressing/painful part of the chapter

AMK is physically injured, Heera is emotionally and psychologically injured 😭

Edited by Testmytest - 7 years ago
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Posted: 7 years ago
Hello everyone. Thank you for warmest welcome🤗. My Name is Tanya and am from India. So, you were not wrong lashy di😉. I don't know how to reply individually the way you do.
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Posted: 7 years ago

Originally posted by: binduprasad41


Good morning Sachu Patti and all my lovely baisas! 😳
Happy Monday! 🤗

Good evening Lana di, Vathsy di, Rekha di and Aparna di 🤗 🤗 🤗 🤗

Okay! 👍🏼 👏

Good morning Periamma, Bindu, Tanya and all my Baisas! 😃

Good evening Lana, Rekha, Appus and Pallu! 😃
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Posted: 7 years ago
What an apt find for that situation, Chellam! 👏 AMK is matchless..⭐️ and Lana, superb lines...👏
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Posted: 7 years ago

Originally posted by: Testmytest

That night...

That night, the corridors of the Imperial fort so deathly and haunted,

were beset all over again, by silent echoes of horror that shook the most undaunted.

The laments of a lover at the callous lashings bleeding dry her beloved.

The woes of a woman mourning the plight of her man who lay fatally wounded.

The cries of a companion unable to care for her partner castoff and isolated.

The sorrow of a soulmate grieving HIS precious life sinking and devastated.

So spine-chilling those silent echoes sounded,

that it's said, for many moons its sordid effects lasted.

So heart-tugging were the several prayers that'd gone wasted,

that it's believed, that night, even the Goddess above was awoken and stirred.

*****************************************

Lashy these last phrases/lines you wrote at the end of C52, I think lot of us have somehow not paid attention to the words. Lot of us were thinking what will be Heera's reaction once she finds out what happened to her husband. According to the above lines, she already knows 😭😭

The words definitely didn't register in my mind after reading the distressing/painful part of the chapter

AMK is physically injured, Heera is emotionally and psychologically injured 😭

Exactly Rekha, I'm also in the same boat..😭 😭 Now only it hit me...😭 😭
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Posted: 7 years ago
GOOD MORNING AUNTY AND ALL BAISAS


BINDUP 👏 NICE MESSAGE


REKHA SUPERB REVIEW 👏


THE EDIT N THE POEM 👏 ❤️


YAAY INDIA WON ⭐️ SHIKHAR DHAWAN IS IN EXCELLENT FORM THESE DAYS


INTERESTING DISCUSSIONS ABOUT MUGHAL EMPERORS. AND TRUE THAT THEY AND OTHER ISLAMIC RULERS/ PLUNDERERS BROUGHT INTO INDIA THE BARBARIC CULTURE OF KILLING LOVED ONES FOR POWER AND PLUNDERING. WHICH IS WHY WE SAY AKBAR THE GREAT - HE ENVISIONED AN AMAZING INDIA.


LETS ALL HAVE A WONDERFUL MONDAY ⭐️
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Posted: 7 years ago
Read the 51 chapter. So, now Akbar has two weeks and then duel with khalil and mahendra. Though Akbar is strongest of all👏 and he will be safe after the duel but what i fear the most is the bruises and injuries he will have in the end and what will be the decision of Shehzaade in end for our khan sahib. Now the only hope is Tejraj and Akbar's loyal men. Khalil and mahendra are tackled now what about Farook???😡 So, the punishment for writing letters to take revenge for her sister and for burning those letters before they reach their destination is death, what about all the crimes khalil has been doing????😭 Punishment for a person for being loyal to him ten years is death, what khalil and his own like who have used all the cuning ways just to have power???😡 Di its a request i don't know anyone has made or not, from the starting hbs has been a roller coaster ride, where we have been crying but i would love if after soving everything you will write a few light hearted and happy-happy chapters😆

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