Untold Secrets!!! Uptd Chap 11 Pg 134 22nd Nov!!!

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harshal

@harshu27

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Posted: 9 years ago

#171

Originally posted by: Kavya_P

sorry for the late reply akka

thnx kavya...😃jo is safe...and jalal i have given a hint in dis chap abt him...😉jalal and veer has a connection and so ya he jo's lover...😛sure dear will update soon and all d doubts will b cleared after few chaps...😉

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diksha

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Posted: 9 years ago

#172

Originally posted by: harshu27

m sorry 😆 suspense ke liye i have to keep dis confusion hanging...😕😆

u know what, u give these updates after long times, and then I m not able to connect it properly..and then u keep blaming me for not understanding...😲...I think now I have to read from start to end.. may be then I ll understand...😉

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Avika444

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Posted: 9 years ago

#173

Originally posted by: harshu27

hmm joja's entry i think woh toh ho chuki hai...😉anywys thnx kaju and will update soon...😃

@ bold...matlab veer jalal hai ?? Haina ?? 😲

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diksha

@sweet_diksha

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Posted: 9 years ago

#174

Harshu, give index for chapters on first page...and now tell me first chappy is on which page😉...want to read it again...

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harshal

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Posted: 9 years ago

#175

Originally posted by: avika444

@ bold...matlab veer jalal hai ?? Haina ?? 😲

hey bhagu mene whatsapp pe reply de diya hai chk karle... i cant openly reveal anything here😕😆

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harshal

@harshu27

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Posted: 9 years ago

#176

Originally posted by: sweet_diksha
Harshu, give index for chapters on first page...and now tell me first chappy is on which page😉...want to read it again...

ya i frgt always abt d index will give 1st chap is on pg 11...😉

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harshal

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Posted: 9 years ago

#177

Originally posted by: sweet_diksha

u know what, u give these updates after long times, and then I m not able to connect it properly..and then u keep blaming me for not understanding...😲...I think now I have to read from start to end.. may be then I ll understand...😉

😆no dear m not blaming u i know if i would have been in ur place me too would have been confused and so but read chap 2 again u should get d hint atleast of jalal's identity...😉i can only say veer aur jalal me connection hai...😉

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Shraddha

@lashy

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Posted: 9 years ago

#178

No dear don't be upset that no one could get a clue... 😳

Remember this, all the characters are yours and their faces/names are already etched in your mind... For readers, even the names are new, faces tho door ki baar hai... Not yet formed in our minds...

Plus, we need to get used to backdrop, story, style of writing etc...

For example, first few chapters of HBAS, everyone assumed that the Shehzade was hero of my story though there were clues to show he wasn't ... but now they know the story and know what to expect...

From NJAPA days, I realised while writing ...that small clues (which are obvious to the author) are generally missed by readers... If you need to drop hints thode bade hints drop karne padenge 😳

I've sorta guessed now that Jalal/Veer is hiding from his brother and father with the Rajputs...

Amar is a friend?

And NOW I guessed the clue... Its the word ShehzAde... I thought it was an error at first, that you should've written Hukumsa or Kunwarsa...but now I know that's the clue you're referring to😉

Very interesting, Harshu 😛 keep it going!

Edited by lashy - 9 years ago

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harshal

@harshu27

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Posted: 9 years ago

#179

Originally posted by: lashy
No dear don't be upset that no one could get a clue... Remember this, all the characters are yours and their faces names are already etched in your mind... For readers, even the names are new, faces tho door ki baar hai... Not yet formed in our minds...
Plus, we need to get used to backdrop, story, style of writing etc...
For example, first few chapters of HBAS, everyone assumed that the ShehzAde was hero of my story though there were clues to show he wasn't ... but now they know the story and know what to expect...
From NJAPA days, I realised while writing ...that small clues (which are obvious to the author) are generally missed by readers... If you need to drop hints thode bade hints drop karne padenge 😳

I've sorta guessed now that Jalal/Veer is hiding from his brother and father with the Rajputs...

Amar is a friend?

And NOW I guessed the clue... Its the word ShehzAde... I thought it was an error at first, that you should've written Hukumsa or Kunwarsa...but now I know that's the clue you're referring to😉

Very interesting, Harshu 😛 keep it going!

Yeah i can understand but since m not to used writing ff or ss i dint know much abt readers mind coz os me toh its 1 short strt me milte hai aur end is happy ending but ff or ss me toh continue karna hai anywys i will learn soon all d minds of d readers soory if at all it offended u coz in dat xcitement i said dat none got d clue ya but have a point and i perrfrctly understand😉 dat all r confused but to build d suspense m not revealing it so soon😳n6wys thnx again😃 btw u guessed it rite abt d shehzaade...😉and amar is frnd of veer...😉

Edited by harshu27 - 9 years ago