Untold Secrets!!! Uptd Chap 11 Pg 134 22nd Nov!!!

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harshal

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Posted: 9 years ago

#161

Originally posted by: swetiii
amazing
but confusing 🤣
veer is Jo's lover??
😲
where is Jalal
update asap diii

i have already given a clue abt jalal in d chap itself...😉 anywys i think as d stry progresses u will know...😛i knw all mite b under confusion...😆will update soon...😛

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harshal

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Posted: 9 years ago

#162

Originally posted by: avika444
Ohkkk will u laugh at me if i say the chapter was confusing again 😕 😆
Anyways on serioys notes, the chapter was intresting harshu ,seriously . With the introduction of two new characters i think we r sliwly sterring into real story . Veer is pretty confident that he woukd win over mughals ,but amar singh is cautioning him ...hmm the sounds ...whose sounds r they ??? And from where they r coming ...?? Where is Jodha ?? Does veer lover her?? If yes what about jodha then . Omg looks like they r trapped by the mughal army ...hmmn whats next harshu
Continue soon dear
Thanks for pm

i knw m pretty much aware of all d readers going bonkers with d update...😆d sounds r part of a mystery wich will b unveiled soon...😛1st of all abt veer's identity dn i have given d clue in d chap itself...😉 if u have read it properly u should get d hint who is veer and whether jo too loves him or not😉 ya slowly heading towards d plot...😛jo is safe no worries...😉next ke liye wait and watch and sorry fr d confusion but i cant help it slowly everything will b cleared...😃and will update soon...😛😉

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harshal

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Posted: 9 years ago

#163

Originally posted by: chaudhary_kajal
It was mysterious. .
Waiting for joja's entry..
Continue soon
Thanku for pm

hmm joja's entry i think woh toh ho chuki hai...😉anywys thnx kaju and will update soon...😃

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harshal

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Posted: 9 years ago

#164

Originally posted by: 1357raksha
akka whatever i read was wonderful
but im totally confused... between d like of 2 update plz tell me if im thinking right 1st is about things related to jalal nd 2nd is related to jodha ...?
veer love jodha nd knw hw runaway to save his life nd left jodha but y is jodha with him...?
harshu akka both ur jodha jalal r missing yet...
im waiting for next part so akka update asap...
thanks for pm...

thnx dear...😃i knw i can understand all r confused...😆ya 1st chap is related to jalal but 2nd chap we have jo and abt jalal being der or not u should guess it😆 btw r u sure both r missing...😛ok jo mite b missing but jalal...?😛think again go thru d chap u will get d hint...😃will update soon dear...😃

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harshal

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Posted: 9 years ago

#165

Originally posted by: sweet_diksha
Harshu, good chappy...but frankly I m confused...and till the time I don't understand the plot, I m not able to write proper feedback..

thnx dikshu...i can understand all r confused...i have given d clues in d chap abt joja itself so der should b some kind of relief on d part of characters thou complete revelation will happen in another few chaps... but u will have to wait patiently...😆

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diksha

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Posted: 9 years ago

#166

Originally posted by: harshu27

thnx dikshu...i can understand all r confused...i have given d clues in d chap abt joja itself so der should b some kind of relief on d part of characters thou complete revelation will happen in another few chaps... but u will have to wait patiently...😆

😡hate u for that laugh..

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Shraddha

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Posted: 9 years ago

#167

So far known,

Nadir is the emperor's favourite!

Jalal has vanished... some believe he has been murdered by Nadir's camp, but we know he hasn't

Nazim, (the Amar in this chapter) Amar Singh & General Omar have marched into Rajputana... my question... have they marched into Surajgarh?

The emperor's army is in Surajgarh, we know... so where is Amar Singh/Omar's army going?

What is the connection between this Amar Singh/Raj Singh of Ratnagarh, and Jai Singh of Ajabgarh... and now Veer Singh? 🤔

So Jodha is missing too? At first, Amar didn't seem to know where she was.. and then, he says he slipped into the Mughal camp... then, Amar and Veer both seem to take a guess that she must be safe... where is she?😕

This Badri is an ominous messenger boy? If he's a messenger boy why is he mentioning about Jodha's safety?

Apart from all that questions we need to work around, the writing was superb... especially the part where the eerie sounds were heard... the lamenting that came from nowhere and disappeared into nowhere (gosh give me the spooks just writing about it) and then suddenly Badri springs up from nowhere.. (and Badri's description!!! wow) the tense atmosphere.. the buildup was excellent.. the sandstorm... the arrival of the army...

And the language too good dear..👏 Even better than the first one!!! Hats off to you!

Edited by lashy - 9 years ago

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harshal

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Posted: 9 years ago

#168

Originally posted by: misty22
Harshu diii... Yey u updated...
M soo happy...
D chappy ws mind blowing...
Sooo mysterious nd really commendable...
Amar singh nd veer singh really seem to be takin d story to its true way...
Woah is veer jo's lover... Nd does jo lv him??... Hp so not...
Soo my jalal has trapped em...
My wicked emperor... Veer is too overconfident bout winning d war...
Hp ja enters soon.. M too curious to know wat ll happen nxt... I mean a joja face off will be interesting to watch...
Awsmmm.. Chappy...
Thnku fr pm nd update asap... Plzzz.. Dnt keep me waitin... 👏

thnx ami...😛yeah amar singh i have given d intro and veer singh der is a hint abt his identity who could he b?😉 ya d stry will progress wid dese 2...😃ya he is jo's lover...and jo is d lead of d stry...so u can guess who is dis veer...😉hmmm joja's face off u will know it soon...😉thnx once again dear...😛and will update soon...😛

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harshal

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Posted: 9 years ago

#169

Originally posted by: lashy
So far known,
Nadir is the emperor's favourite!
Jalal has vanished... some believe he has been murdered by Nadir's camp, but we know he hasn't
Nazim, (the Amar in this chapter) Amar Singh & General Omar have marched into Rajputana... my question... have they marched into Surajgarh?
The emperor's army is in Surajgarh, we know... so where is Amar Singh/Omar's army going?
What is the connection between this Jai/Raj of Ratnagarh, and Jai Singh of Ajabgarh... and now Veer?
So Jodha is missing too? At first, Amar didn't seem to know where she was.. and then, he says he slipped into the Mughal camp... then, Amar and Veer both seem to take a guess that she must be safe... where is she?😕
This Badri is an ominous messenger boy? If he's a messenger boy why is he mentioning about Jodha's safety?
Apart from all that questions we need to work around, the writing was superb... especially the part where the eerie sounds were heard... the lamenting that came from nowhere and disappeared into nowhere (gosh give me the spooks just writing about it) and then suddenly Badri springs up from nowhere.. the tense atmosphere.. the buildup was excellent.. the language too good dear..👏 Even better than the first one!!!

thnx alot lashy sahiba m so obliged to get such a comment from writer e khaas...😳ok slowly let me clear d doubts...😛but let me tell u 1 thing m really upset as i have given a small hint in d chap and none could guess it😕i tght u and dikshu will manage to guess per nahiamar singh is with veer and abt abt gen omar dn abt him i will reveal soon may b in next update...😃raj singh is d prince of ratangarh and related to amar singh...😃wat is d relation i cant tell u know it will b mentioned in d update itself...😃and u really dint get who is veer?😕 i have given a small hint abt him in d chap itself...aiyyo none realised...ya jo is safe no worries with her...😉in fact dis messenger boy jo amar singh all r related i mean to say v well acquainted with each other and so he knows abt jo 😉how my updates will give u d answers sorry...😆i know all r going to hammer me with dis reply but wat to do suspense hai itne jaldi reveal kiya toh fir update me padte waqt maza nahi ayega na😕thnx once again it really boosts my moral after reading d comments like dis...😳

Edited by harshu27 - 9 years ago