Akdha SS: HARJAAYI Updated EPILOGUE!!!!

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Posted: 9 years ago
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GUYS...on behalf of my best friend i am now starting a new ss on our beloved Jalal-Jodha...😊

The concept is entirely her... but i contributed her in writing...talking about my friend, she is a big fan of Akdha...but enable of having a computer she cant update any story she thought... so i am doing my duty as a best friend😉..on her insistance i am updateing her story with mine and her writing.. in place of my own FF update... hope you all forgive me for this...( actually i cant deny her)...i will post her story...TWICE A WEEK...(ab khush ho jaao Bhaktjano) 😆😆


About the concept... i only can say you will see Pain Anger Sacrifice and all above...LOVE which is the base of the story..and yoou will find a new Jalal in this SS.I myself love the concept...i dont know how to write it down with full of ewmotion... hope you all will like our try


hope you all love this story as well as our effort...😊😊

(talking about my other stories i will update the other stories with this story parellaly.)😊









INDEX



Part 2 & 3 : https://www.indiaforums.com/forum/post/136943836


PART 4:https://www.indiaforums.com/forum/jodha-akbar/4708619/akdha-ss-harjaayi-updated-epilogue?pn=8


PART 5& 6:https://www.indiaforums.com/forum/jodha-akbar/4708619/akdha-ss-harjaayi-updated-epilogue?pn=11


Part 7: https://www.indiaforums.com/forum/post/137098102


Part 8&9: https://www.indiaforums.com/forum/post/137121632


Part 10 & 11: https://www.indiaforums.com/forum/post/137169562


Part 12: https://www.indiaforums.com/forum/post/137215694


Part 13: https://www.indiaforums.com/forum/post/137277830


Part 14, 15 & 16: https://www.indiaforums.com/forum/post/137323935


PART 17: https://www.indiaforums.com/forum/post/137435923


PART 18: https://www.indiaforums.com/forum/post/137482881


PART 19: https://www.indiaforums.com/forum/jodha-akbar/4708619/akdha-ss-harjaayi-updated-epilogue


PART 20: https://www.indiaforums.com/forum/post/137605177


PART 21: https://www.indiaforums.com/forum/jodha-akbar/4708619/akdha-ss-harjaayi-updated-epilogue


PART 22:https://www.indiaforums.com/forum/post/137727641


PART 23: https://www.indiaforums.com/forum/post/137768760


PART 24: https://www.indiaforums.com/forum/post/137867180


EPILOGUE: https://www.indiaforums.com/forum/post/138185698



Prologue:


HER BAD DREAM


She turned in her sleep anxiously, completely drenched in her own sweat... "No please..I will not do this again please" She started screaming in her sleep and suddenly woke up. She sat on her bed in the dark room. She hugged her knees knowing she had that same nightmare again that she has been having for the past four years. She turned on her side table lamp and slowly got out of the bed. She made her way downstairs to the kitchen to grab a glass of water completely ignoring the fact that he clothes were wet with her sweat. She was used to it by now..her life was nothing but a complete nightmare.

She stood by the kitchen counter tears streaming down her cheeks. She changed her astitva because of one person..her life turned upside down..Everyday she lived in fear because of him...She didn't know how long she had before her lie and her nightmare catches up to her...there has been always a fear that one day she will back to the same place again...the thought of him makes her whole body quiver with fear and cold...she looked out the window at the stars searching for something that she herself didn't know of..maybe hope...

She puts the glass down in the sink and starts heading back to her bedroom again after making sure that all windows and every door was sealed shut. She takes her sleeping pills again in an attempt to finally sleep in peace even if it is for couple of hours until her nightmares come again.



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Posted: 9 years ago
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DOUBLE DHAMAKA IN THE FIRST POST 😆😃



Chapter 1


A NEW SHE

She woke up in the morning and made her way to the shower...she stood under the shower remembering her past...she could still feel his touces on her body...she stays under the shower silently crying...after a while she comes out of the shower to get ready...

Shimla was where she resided for the past four years...she loved everything about Shimla the climate, people, food, things to see everything..at first this was her refuge than it became her home her everything especially the people. She comes out of the house and was instantly greeted by her wonderful neighbor..the neighbor was an old lady who she just adored...she quickly said hi to her neighbor and started walking to her work...

Her work wasn't that far away from where she lived..she walked into the company and was instantly told to meet her boss in his cabin...She worked in a clothing company that mostly deals with export and imports of products...she went to his cabin and knocked on the door before entering...Intilialy she worked as a Secretary under his boss Suraj Chopra but being impressed by her capabilities she now became a manager at his company. He was a nice person always there to help her anytime when needed...she knew if it wasn't for him than she wouldn't be standing here in front of him or be independent..she had immense respect for him...

Suraj: Come in

"May I come in Sir"

Suraj looked up: Rajni yeah please come in

Rajni: Sir you messaged me to come in

Suraj: Yeah I wanted to ask you about what happened with our delivery?

Rajni: Sir I had called the people and they said that they will deliver the merchandise by tonight

Suraj: Alright

Rajni: Anything else sir

Suraj: Yeah I wanted to know what was your answer to my question that I had asked you earlier (looks at Rajni)

Rajni: umm I have to go I have a lot of work to do

Suraj: Rajni ever since you have joined this company I have noticed that there is something that constantly bothers you...what is it?

Rajni: When I am ready I will tell you...May I go now?

Suraj sighed: yeah you may go (Rajni turns up to leave but Suraj stops her half way) Rajni I will be waiting when you are ready to tell me what is bothering you (she smiles at him before leaving to his cabin)

She went to her cabin and closes her eyes in pain...

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Flashback:

History:

She was born as Jodha Sharma, innocent and full of life. While growing up the only thing that was closest to her was her father. Her mother died while giving birth to her. Her father was the only family she had and loved. Rajiv Sharma was more than a father to her but also her mother, sister, cousins and most of all a great friend. Rajiv had a very successful company..he was liked by everyone. Always there to help anyone in need...He always followed his principals and his beliefs in every situations.

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(Four years ago)

Rajiv: Jodha utho beta you are getting late for college

Jodha: Papa please let me sleep for some more

Rajiv: I would beta but you are going to miss your classes if you don't get up soon..Get up in five minutes

Jodha: Please papa

Rajiv: Now get ready and meet downstairs for breakfast

Jodha: Alright papa

Rajiv mumbled to himself: 18 saal ki hogayi ho aur abhi tak bacchi ki tara behave karti hai

Jodha got up from bed and came down for her breakfast...the servants already had placed all the food on the table...

Jodha: Good morning papa..

Rajiv: hmm finally you came...

Jodha quickly ate her breakfast and headed out for her college.. "alright papa I am going now"

Rajiv: When are you coming home?

Jodha: I will be little late I am going to hang out with my friends after college as usual

Rajiv: Alright tell the driver to pick you up

Jodha: Alright papa..love you

Rajiv: Love you too beta

End Flashback!

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Rajniii Rajniii...open your eyes...Jodha suddenly opened her eyes to see Suraj standing next to her

Rajni: ohh am sorry I must've dossed off

Suraj: Rajni why don't you go home and take rest...

Rajni: No Suraj I am fine...the delivery should be coming any minute

Suraj: Are you sure?

Rajni: Yeah I am sure

Suraj: Tell me if you need anything..you can always go home early if you don't feel good later

Rajni smiled at Suraj: Thank you Suraj I know

Suraj: Rajni you know I care about you

Rajni felt uncomfortable: Yeah I know..thank you

Suraj: No need to say thank you but simply the answer to my question

Rajni: woh actually

Suraj: Rajni you can give me the answer whenever you are ready...I am not pushing you..I will be waiting

Rajni: I know

Recap: Flashback! + Suraj and Rajni (Jodha)


Edited by Senapatichandri - 9 years ago
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Posted: 9 years ago
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The plot is really very intriguing and mysterious... 😊
What is with Jodha's past that made her change her whole identity???
Curious to know...
Please update soon...
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Posted: 9 years ago
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sorry guys in middle of u r reading i have to done some changes on her instrucytion...

Rajiv is jodha's father

Rajni is jodha's new name
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Posted: 9 years ago
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Nice concept dear
I know jalal is one who turned her life ups and down.
Heyyy plzzz write FB with present story
Because I don't want only long FB
Plzzz update fast dear
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Posted: 9 years ago
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Quite interesting yr
Will love to read more plz update soon
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Posted: 9 years ago
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awesome start dear
very interesting concept
jodha is in so much pain
poor girl can't able to sleep also
she change her whole identity because of her past life
surya seems like nice guy and I think he like her also
flashback is emotional
she missing her dad
waiting eagerly for jalal entry
and revelation of her past and her misery
thanks for pm
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Posted: 9 years ago
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Originally posted by: swriter

Nice concept dear
I know jalal is one who turned her life ups and down.
Heyyy plzzz write FB with present story
Because I don't want only long FB
Plzzz update fast dear




yar tu har nbar flashback kam hi kyu mangti hai??? but is story me flasback long hona compalsory hai... i cant chage it yaar...cz zyadaar ghatna flashmback me hai... or soch buddhu JAlal bhi to flashback me hi ayega
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Posted: 9 years ago
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Nice ss di.continue soon & thanx fr pm
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Posted: 9 years ago
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wonderful yar..
she changed her self
waiting for next part
please accept my buddy request
n pm me...

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