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Posted: 9 years ago
So scary to see jallal's possessiveness,pity jodha.Hope she comes out strong.Awaiting next update.
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Posted: 9 years ago
Awesome suspense... u know hw to keep d excitement of reader... please update soon d next part... and thanks fr d pm dear...
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Posted: 9 years ago
awesome update dear
finally engagement day come
I really like suraj
how comfortable he make jodha
love their dance
suraj admire rajni
he really help her when she needed most
suraj was really happy to see rajni when she is enjoying party
flashback back is little scary
jalal was so aggressive and possessive
poor jodha
I really feeling bad for her
I don't like jalal nature at all
how dominating
he really don't want to understand jodha
is he really love her
rajni so shock to see jalal in her engagement party
poor soul she is so scare
now I am really curious to now what jalal did
plz update fast next chapter
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Posted: 9 years ago
Awesome chapter dear
Love it
I really like dis suraj he is very kind
Hope jalal changed as a gud person now
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Posted: 9 years ago


as i said i will update today i update... but for my misfortune... i didnt get 30+ comment chalo koi nahi... dukhiyari hu...😆😆 but nirash nahi karungi...so today again a double update...


but it is the LAST double update from myside



Chapter 8

Jalal Pov:

Jalal came back to his hotel room after the engagement party which was cut short because Suraj finance left without informing anyone...he ordered whisky...he sat on the chair..and drank the whisky silently...he pulled out something from his pocket and held it in front of him..tears started to form in his eyes...he poured another drink...police inspector's words rang in his head "I'm sorry Mr. Muhammad but your wife is no more...here is her mangalsutre and the clothes she was wearing at the time of the accident" tears escaped from his eyes..."I am sorry Jodha..for all the pain I caused you..." he poured another drink and sat on the chair thinking...

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Flashback:

A week after their marriage...Jalal was getting ready..when Jodha brought him his coffee...she stands behind him watching him get ready...Jalal turns around and faces her...

Jalal (pulls her toward him and holds her by her waist and kisses her neck...) What happened? (while still kissing)

Jodha: Can you drop me to college on the way?

Jalal (stops kissing and looks at her): college?

Jodha: haan ek hafta hogaya hai main college nahi gayi...exams bhi aah rahe hai

Jalal (lets her go): Why do you need to go to college?

Jodha: What do you mean?

Jalal (holds her by the waist again): Jodha you don't need college...I make more than enough money...

Jodha: But Jalal I want to continue my studies...I want to get my degree...

Jalal: We will talk about this later...(Jodha walks out of the room and goes down..after a while he comes down..he sees Rohit talking to Jodha)

Rohit: Jodha here are your notes that you missed so far...are you coming today?

Jodha: woh main

Jalal: She is not going to college anymore? (comes and stands next to Jodha while Rohit looks shocked) She is married now and taking care of the house is her first priority..(he holds her tight by the waist)

Rohit (looks at Jodha): Jodha you are almost done...come on you can't leave Meera and me like this?

Jalal: Like I said Rohit...she will continue her studies later but not for now (looks at the clock) don't you have to go to college Rohit? (Rohit left giving Jalal an angry look..Jodha looks down controlling her tears)

Jodha: What will I do at home..with nothing to do?

Jalal: I don't know (hugs her) am sure you will find something...now I have to go..bye...see you when I get back...(Jodha shakes her head..he kisses her on her lips and leaves...Jodha throws the notes on the floor and runs upstairs to her bedroom with teary face...)

Jodha POV:

Jalal is maybe right...I don't need to go to college..I am going to be a housewife..he is rich and can support me well enough...he made the right decision..I would be so busy with college that I wouldn't have time to take care of the house...No I can't do that...he works day and night and he has been alone all his life..so maybe that's why he doesn't want me to go to college...his happiness is more important to me than mine...maybe I will ask him if I can work with him instead (sits on the bed excited) that way we can spend some time together and get to know each other better...yeah I will ask him as soon as he comes home...(Jodha smiled and hurriedly got the food ready and waited for Jalal to come...Jodha was in the living room waiting for him pretty excited to ask him if she can work..she stands up from the sofa as soon as she hears Jalal come)

Jodha: aap aagaye...mujhe aapse ek baat karni thi

Jalal (sits on the sofa and pulls her on his lap and nuzzles her neck): hmm bolo

Jodha: Kya main aapke saath kam kar sakti hoon? (Asked with a smile)

Jalal: why?

Jodha: because I might get bored at home and this way I won't be bored if I am working

Jalal: But I like seeing you home waiting for me..it makes it exciting for me to know that someone is home waiting (he kisses her neck)

Jodha: But Jalal I want to work..

Jalal (angry) Enough! (She gets scared) I told you Jodha the first day...I don't like repeating myself...(He holds her tight by the waist...it was giving her pain..she flinched...he pulls her closer to him and aggressively kisses her lips..she had tears in her eyes as Jalal holds her tighter and tighter..after a while) Jodha I don't want to talk about this ever again...You understand?

Jodha: yes (nervously)

Jalal: Good..now lets have dinner..I am very hungry (she slightly smiles and both have dinner...after dinner Jalal picks Jodha up and brings her upstairs to the room looking at her with love)

End Flashback!

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Suraj: Rajni...Rajni...open the door..what happened? (He kept on knocking on Jodha's door...as soon as he found out that Jodha is not in the function..he right away left and went after her...)

Jodha heard knocks on the door...she wanted to open the door but didn't know how to face him and what to tell him... "No I have to tell Suraj everything" after a while she got enough courage and opened the door..there she found Suraj sitting on the floor worried...as soon as he heard the door being opened he quickly got up and walked up to Jodha..

Suraj: Rajni why did you leave the engagement party??

Rajni: I have to tell you something..

Suraj (looks at her condition..he could tell that she has been crying): No Rajni...I think I know what happened

Rajni (looks at him shocked): You do??

Suraj: Yeah it is understandabel that you miss your family...(he holds her by the shoulder) Don't worry Rajni I am with you no matter what...

Rajni: no Suraj

Suraj: Sssh don't do that again Rajni..I was so scared...I have been looking for you everywhere thinking something might've happened to you...

Rajni ("How should I tell him the truth?") Suraj the thing is

Suraj: Listen let's go inside..you look tired..get some sleep...we can talk about this tomorrow...(He puts Jodha on the bed and tucks her in...Jodha felt exhausted..she closes her eyes...Suraj left as soon as Jodha went to sleep...)

Precap: Present: Suraj: Rajni when are you coming to work?

Rajni: Suraj I am not feeling well..I won't be able to come...

Suraj: what! (Jalal looks at Suraj talking on the phone)




Chapter 9

Flashback:

Jodha was home looking around to do something...as usual Jalal was busy with work...Jodha decided to Call Meera and see how she is...she missed her so much

Jodha: Hey Meera...what are you doing?

Meera: I am mad at you

Jodha: Why? What did I do?

Meera: Why did you decide not go to college?

Jodha: woh (thinks about Jalal's decision) I think its better...I just got married and I think it is better if I think about my home first

Meera (laughs): Relax Jodha...I was just pulling your leg...listen my class is canceled today so how about you and I hang out...I am dying to see you

Jodha: umm Meera...I don't know..Jalal is not home and...

Meera: Jodha come on please...you can call Jalal jiju and leave a message...give me his number and I will leave the message if you want

Jodha: No (thinks about it) ok I will call Jalal right now and leave a message...

Meera: ok..I will pick you up in half hour...be ready

Jodha: ok bye..(she hangs up the phone and calls Jalal's cell but it was switched off...she calls the receptionist and found out that he is in a meeting..she left a quick message and told her to tell Jalal ASAP...Jodha got ready..) Shyaam (she yells)

Shyaam: Yes Ma'am

Jodha: I am going out with my friend...if Jalal sir calls just tell him that I will be back in a little while..I have also left a message for him at his work

Shyaam: Alright Ma'am

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Jalal had come home after work early..hoping to surprise Jodha...he was very excited since he got a new contract today and wanted to share it with Jodha...he entered the house and called for Jodha...hearing no response...he looked around the house searching for her...he called for his servant Shyaam...

Shyaam: yes sir (Scared)

Jalal: Where is Jodha Ma'am?

Shyaam: Sir she left around 12 in the afternoon...Ma'am had left a message for you at work

Jalal: hmm ok...you can leave for the day (Jalal called his office and he fired his receptionist for not giving him the message)

Jalal went to his home office and tried to concentrate on his work...he looked at the clock it was 2...still Jodha wasn't home..he got more and more angry and worried...he threw the file on the floor along with everything that was on his desk...he went to the living room and sat there..waiting patiently..he looks at the clock once again and it was 4...then he heard Jodha coming in...he looked up and saw Jodha carrying lots of bags in her hand struggling to hold each bag as she walks...he silently observes her..she still didn't see Jalal in the living room...she drops the bags on the floor and sits on the floor taking a deep breath...she takes about 2 bags which seemed to be grocery bags and walked to the kitchen with them...Jalal got up and looked over the bags that were on the floor...they were shopping bags from the mall...he walked in the kitchen and saw Jodha humming to a tune placing the grocery in its proper places...

Jalal: Where were you? (Jodha dropped the vegetable that were in her hands and looked back...she saw Jalal standing by the kitchen entrance)

Jodha: Jalal Appne toh mujhe dara diya tha...

Jalal: Maine pucha tum kaha thi? (He walks toward Jodha)

Jodha (smiles): Didn't you get my message? I had gone and met with Meera...hum dono shopping karne gaye the

Jalal: kitne baje?

Jodha (looks at him): umm jab main gayi thi toh 12 baje the

Jalal: 12 baje...aur tum ghar aayi 4 baje...itni der tak kaha thi?

Jodha: I was bored at home..so I called Meera and she wanted to hang out since we haven't seen each other for a while...I tried to refuse her but she wouldn't take no for an answer..(she turned around and stared to put all the grocery back as she talked)..so we went shopping for a while and since I didn't had my lunch..we ate together and after a while Rohit (Jalal's hands turned into a fist) came there because he needed some things from Meera (she puts the grocery away and looks at Jalal) and so we spent the whole time talking and catching up..before coming home I remembered to do some grocery shopping as well..that is why I was late...(Jalal steps closer to Jodha and slaps her on the face...Jodha looks at him shocked..tears drop down from her face..he aggresively holds her hair and pulls her head up to face him)

Jalal: how dare you go anywhere without me?? (shouts at her...Jodha looks at him with fear) You are mine now...whatever you say or do has to go through me now...(holds her hair even tighter...Jodha moans in pain) aur aaj ke baad tum Meera aur Rohit ko kabhi bhi nahi milongi..SAMJI TUM!

He lets go of her hair..she falls back on the counter...crying...Jalal leaves the kitchen and goes upstairs..she jumps when she hears upstairs door slam shut...she sits on the floor and cries...Jalal's words were ringing in her head...she hugs her knees and cries..she thought that Jalal's possesiveness will change after marriage but it is becoming worse day by day...she missed her dad... "what did I do wrong babaji?...I only went to hang out with Meera" (crying..after a while she gets and goes to the bathroom...she looks at her face and it was red and kind of swollen from the slap...she silently cries while looking at her face...)

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Jodha knocks on Jalal's office door..she was scared of his anger...her hands were shaking as she knocked the door...when she didn't hear any response she knocks again...she was about to knock again when the door flung open...Jodha stepped back a little...

Jodha: woh woh (Unable to say what she wanted to because of his anger)

Jalal: woh woh woh kya? (Still angry)

Jodha (looks down): dinner ready hai

Jalal: hmm main 10 minute main aata hoon (Jodha starts to walk away...when Jalal pulls her back holding her wrist...she hits his chest...she closes her eyes and looks down...her heart starts beating fast scared that he might slap her again...) Don't take whatever I said to you earlier as a joke...(he holds her wrist even tighter...his voice sounded like a threat..she gets scared and nods her head...) or else I won't be responsible for my anger next time or for what I do...(he aggressively pulls her closer and pins her to the wall...he starts kissing her on her lips...tears slip down her face...he pulls her inside the study room...Jodha walks backwards scared...Jalal pulls her close and pushes her on the couch...he takes her pallu off...Jodha stops him before he goes any further)

Jodha: Ma Jalal dinner is getting cold...

Jalal: I don't care about the dinner...(he bends down and starts kissing her neck while his hands travels everywhere forcefully...Jodha couldn't handle his aggressiveness and she knew that she couldn't stop him...)

End Flashback!

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Jalal went to Suraj's office to discuss the designs that he and his team came up with...he was back to his usual stern self...

Suraj: Good morning Mr. Muhammad...Sorry about last night..my fiance wasn't feeling too well so she decided to leave

Jalal (ignores him): Shall we get down to business?

Suraj: Sure...I have to get the designed approved by my fiance...I am sure you will be able to meet her today when she comes in..

Jalal: hmm ok...(spreads the blueprints on the table) So this is what my design team came up with...as you can see that (he stopped when he heard Suraj phone ring)

Suraj: sorry about that...(he takes the phone in front of Jalal) Rajni...what happend? Are you coming in today? (Jalal tries to pay attention to the blue print) you are sick? Ok I will bring something for you on the way...take care and let me know if you need anything..bye (hangs up the phone)

Jalal: So (continues on) everything is accommodated and will be safe for all the employees...

Suraj: hmmm I like the work so far Mr. Muhammad...

Jalal: Alright...

Suraj: Well then let's go out for lunch my treat

Jalal: umm

Suraj: Don't say no..its the least I can do for you coming this far

Jalal: umm ok sure...

Precap: Present: Suraj: Mr. Muhammad I just have to drop this inside to Rajni...you could even meet her if you like...

Jalal: No I will wait in the car

Will Jalal see Jodha when Suraj goes to meet her?


Edited by Senapatichandri - 9 years ago
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Posted: 9 years ago
I just can't believe Jalal can be so cruel... 😲
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Posted: 9 years ago
amazing
Jalal didn't understood her love
he literally caged her
finally she left him..
leaving a devastated soul
what will happen when he finds out Jo is rajni
update asap dr
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Posted: 9 years ago
Thanks for the double chapters- very, very interesting. I like the pace of the story- unfolding naturally and keeping up with our eagerness to know what happened to bring about the current predicament .
I won't hold Jalal entirely responsible for all that has taken place- if anything , Jodha's father is the culprit here. He messed with their lives by forcing Jodha to leave Jalal despite her extreme reluctance in wanting to do so.

Impatiently waiting for them to confront each other. And please don't worry about the number of likes and comments for each update. Please know there are readers who really appreciate your writings and look forward eagerly to the next update.👏
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Posted: 9 years ago
Wow nice chapter di.jl was too rude.now he s missing her.poor jodha suffering.update soon.thanx fr pm
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Posted: 9 years ago
double dhamaka diya di apne

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