~Revenge~ Updated Chapter-14 on Page 140 THREAD CLOSED

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Posted: 10 years ago
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Credit: AkanshaJA


Hello everyone...
Starting another story...this one will be a dark story...
Ok i'll give updates almost daily or sometime with a gap of one day but they are going to short...
This story is specially dedicated to...
1. Choco lava aka ...rio...
2. Deep aka deepa_chauhan
3. Avi didu aka avika444

Its continuation will totally based on readers' response...
As i m giving daily updates... So its not possible for me to pm everyday... If anyone is interested in sending pm on my behalf then it will be a great help...
Ok enough of my bak-bak...so here it goes... Enjoy reading 😊...


...Prologue...

The car reached at its destination... And stopped infront of the main gate... The newly wedded bride stepped out from it...
"you wait here, main car park kar ke aata hu..."
she nodded her head... And started to look at the bunglow where she is going to start a new life...
"umm... Jodha come" the groom signalled his bride to come with him...
She very hesitantly held his hand which he had put forward for her... They entered inside and he latched the door... Jodha who was busy in admiring the interior of the house looked at her husband...
He looked up... And his eyes started to becoming darker and darker as the outside night... seems like the nature has guessed his mood... Jodha become horrified to see him like this... She started to descend backwards whereas he starts to ascend towards her with a devilish smile...
As soon as her back hit the wall... She got caged btw him and wall... He tightly held her face and placed his lips on her very roughly... Tears fell on his face from her eyes... She tried hard to push him but the man seems hungrier from ages... Finally he tasted blood in his mouth and smirked against her lips...
He jerked her away and stared at her in rage and fury...
"Jalal..." she sobbed like a kid infront of him with blood dripping from corner of her swollen lips...

So here ends the prologue...
How is it? Should i continue?
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Posted: 10 years ago
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congrats for the new story dr..awesome prologue..continue soon..
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Posted: 10 years ago
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Congrats Neetu 🥳for new story
prologue is interesting , little bit scary too 😆
wow daily updates 🤗
Continue soon and as usual pm me. 😳
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Posted: 10 years ago
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Then this is my surprise! Woho! Congo! I loved the story! Bt i love u more! Luv u luv u luv u!! Muwah! *jumping*
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Posted: 10 years ago
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Congrats on new story...
Awesome prologe...
waiting for the update...
Edited by 1357raksha - 10 years ago
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Congrats for new story dear😊
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Congrats & continue ur horror story
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wow dear very nice story loved it please update soon.
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Posted: 10 years ago
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Cont soon
But the last of prolouge
I just kinda got hurt seeing jalal hurting our jo
And congo shongo for new story
Edited by ShivaniLuvJA - 10 years ago

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