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Neetu

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Posted: 11 years ago

#41

Originally posted by: savindi.db
welcome darling..

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#42

Originally posted by: ZAIDImabaddat
thats gr8 m waitng for the chapter n pm me m sendng u a buddy request accpt it

pls read the note with prologue its a request dear...

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Krina

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Posted: 11 years ago

#43

Congrats on new story...

Awesome prologue...

update soon

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Neetu

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Posted: 11 years ago

#44

Originally posted by: sonali96

Wow...that's grt...plz pm me when u update

plz read the note with prologue...

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Neetu

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#45

Originally posted by: cuty1997

Congrats on new story...
<font color="#333333" face="Helvetica Neue, Helvetica, Arial, sans-serif">Awesome prologue... </font>
update soon

thanks krina didu...
Will update today only...

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Posted: 11 years ago

#46

Originally posted by: Monucute
hello shefa
f9 darling... N u?
Thanks dear...

I AM FINE DEAR
PLZ CONTINUE SOON😃

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Neetu

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Posted: 11 years ago

#47

Originally posted by: ...Shefa...

I AM FINE DEAR
PLZ CONTINUE SOON😃

will update today only pls read the note with prologue ... Its a request dear

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Neetu

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Posted: 11 years ago

#48

...Chapter - 1...

"Jalal..." she sobbed
like a kid infront of him with blood
dripping from corner
of her swollen lips...
Jalal wiped the blood from his lips and goes near his bride, sit on his toes to match her eye level...
"tch tch tch..." and put his hand forward to lift her face up... Jodha crawled backwards from this terrifying and hazardous monster now her husband... But jalal being jalal grabbed her face ruthlessly, dug his nails in her soft chubby cheeks... Jodha let out an audible cry...
"dard hua??" he asked with artificial concern...and there the barriers got broken... Tears are out again... She nodded in a yes... He smirked and pressed it more tighter this time...jodha winced in utter pain... She caught his hand and tried to free herself... She was trembling and shivering badly in fear... Pain was clearly visible in her eyes... But the demon infront of her didn't even buzzed a bit by this innocent soul's pain...
"lea... Leave...leave me...jalal" she tried to speak in his harsh clutches... "leave you... Darling how can I?? I think you are the one who had FORCEFULLY tied me with you... Don't you??" he asked with blood shot anger filled red eyes... With this his grip on her face become more tighter...
"aaahhh..." she hissed again... "jalal jus...just hear me... Hear me once...pls" she pleaded while sobbing... "shut up... Just shut up you ugly woman..." he roared
She looked at him with the amalgum of pain and hurt...
My own husband find me ugly... She thought with utter bitterness for herself... He clutched her hairs tightly ... She closed her eyes as tightly as a human can to absorb her tears and pain...
But he was damn angry and doesn't know what is he doing and how his actions affecting his new bride...
So he dragged both of them towards upstairs...

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Edited by Monucute - 11 years ago