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Neetu

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+ 11

Posted: 10 years ago

#571

Originally posted by: avika444
Nice update monu
arth is such a sweet friend
omg they hugged each other and jalal saw then
ayyo what will happen now
update soon pls

thankew avi didu...
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Arifa Sultana Shefa.

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Posted: 10 years ago

#572

Originally posted by: Monucute
aww koi naa jaan...😊

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Neetu

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Posted: 10 years ago

#573

...Chapter - 10...

He
smiled and
wrapped his arms
around her...
Oblivious to a pair
of eyes...
The spectator to came in view coughed a little to gain the attention...
"ahem... Ahem" both became alert to their surroundings and parted... Looked at the spectator, it is a shadow, as the shadow came into light both looked at each other... Before anyone could utter something , the spectator jumped in between and told in a passive tone "its not a lovers point..."
he does not waited for some reply and stromed off... Arth ran behind him and caught his shoulder... "sorry kaka... She is just a friend" arth pacified to the middle aged watch-man... He smiled and shook his head... Walked off from there giving arth a look of "like. I. Don't. Know."... Arth returned to jodha and bid adieu to each other...
Jodha waited him to go then she picked her bags and headed towards back door... It was a narrow staircase... She anyhow reached to her room... And dumped all the bags on floor and switched on his phone torch... She had charged her mobile at cafe where they had chatted for 1 hour or probably more...
She started to arrange her thing in that room... Suddenly a knock at door... She opened it to find jalal standing there with a killer smirk... And the next moment she got pinned to wall... He softly pecked corner of her lips and started to kiss her... Bitted a bit roughly on her lip and blood came out... He parted
"you know, your blood tastes good..." She was breathless and looking at him horror filled eyes...
"tmrw my friends are coming... They want to meet you" he said in a husky voice... Chills ran down her spine... He smirked and left from there... She knows something bad gonna happen...

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Arifa Sultana Shefa.

@Magpie_

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Posted: 10 years ago

#574

I will kill jalal...such a horrible person

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Raksha Gupta

@1357raksha

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Posted: 10 years ago

#575

nw what is jalal upto..? nice update...

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Barnali

@Paradise_1

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Posted: 10 years ago

#576

oh God! Jalal is such a horrible man!
what he wants to do now with his friends??
continue soon!

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crystalwings

@crystalwings

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Posted: 10 years ago

#577

Thanks for updating, both a mellow Jo and barbaric Jalal need marriage counseling ...interesting twists in story line...hopefully Jo will come out stronger and tame the animal in Jalal