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Posted: 10 years ago

Originally posted by: Monucute

what will i do..?? 😆


u r the writer yrr 😆
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Posted: 10 years ago

Originally posted by: ...Shefa...


u r the writer yrr 😆

but it will take time... Vese how r u?
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Posted: 10 years ago

Originally posted by: Monucute

but it will take time... Vese how r u?


fine...thoda headache hain...I know it will take time phir bhi jaldi krna 😆
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Posted: 10 years ago

Originally posted by: ...Shefa...


fine...thoda headache hain...I know it will take time phir bhi jaldi krna 😆

naughty girl😆
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Posted: 10 years ago


...Chapter - 8...

Both looked at
each other in awe
and burst into fit
of laughter...

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She gave the money to the taxi driver and came out...
"arey i'll give it jo..."
"nope... I'd already paid it so nxt time... Arth" she chirped to her new friend...
Artharav smiled at her and came out... She frowned...
"What??"
"don't you want to go home..." she asked in confusion... He smiled and replied
"Miss Singh my house is there..." he pointed toward the 3rd street ...
"Oh! So we are neighbours too"
Now it was his turn to frown...
"are buddhu... There" she said pointing towards the corner house...
"huh!...so at jalal's house tum rent par rehti ho..." she nervously nodded... She had to lie... Because of his condition...but suddenly something hit her mind
"umm... Do you know him??" she questioned him...
"haa... We are friends... But dur ke..!!"he instantly replied...
"huh?? Dur ke matlab??" she asked confusingly...
"arre... Jese dur ke relatives hote hai naa vese..." he said "but..."before jodha can complete he understood her confusion and said "sirf hi bye waale..."
and with a little chit-chat ... Both headed towards their respective places...

Finally she is smiling that too genuinely for the first time in this week after her marriage... All thanks to her new found friend... He had helped her in her shopping and also made her familiar with the unfamiliar city...
She was walking in a daze ... When suddenly she bumped into someone... And looked up only to find devil standing infront of her... All colour of her face drained out... Few moments ago smiling face turned into fearful...
He smirked seeing the fear on her face...She was carrying a hue of bags which contain necessities and due to fear her grip on bags loosens and they fell down... He can easily make out from the scattered things that what she had bought... He started to ascend towards her... As usual jodha descends back, they were in the street, but it was empty as it is very late now... She descends back till her back hit the car which was parked there... in no time she is caged between his arms...
They were inches apart... Jalal started to reduce the gap between them... Jodha closed her eyes and started to breath heavily feeling his hot breathing tickling her senses...

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Edited by Monucute - 10 years ago
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Posted: 10 years ago
Jallad is gonna feel jealous! Jallad jallad!! Dekhte hain kya krte ho!! Omg! In street! .smirk.
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Posted: 10 years ago
nice update!
want to know what jalal does next!
continue soon!
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Posted: 10 years ago
Nice update neetu..
She found a new friend...to lead life in such situations a friend is required to whom she can share with.. But poor Jo she can't even do that.

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Posted: 10 years ago
monu check ur scraps!
I'm sorry aj net bohat disturbed hai so I'm not able to send pms!
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Posted: 10 years ago
Nice update monu
what will jalal do know
hope ur not planning to hook jo with artharav
hehehe
update soon

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