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Posted: 11 years ago

#91

Originally posted by: Meenakshi731
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#92

Update doh neetu di! I want dark life with bri8 ppl's update 2 as I have xms i wanna read early! Pls!

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#93

Originally posted by: Monucute
updating dear...

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#94

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Update doh neetu di! I want dark life with bri8 ppl's update 2 as I have xms i wanna read early! Pls!

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#95

Originally posted by: 12345niyati
Interesting story
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#96

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#97

...Chapter - 2...

But he was damn
angry and doesn't
know what is he
doing and how his actions affecting
his new bride...
So he dragged both
of them towards
upstairs...
Jodha was trying very hard to get out of his grip... But the groom was not in a mood to show even a bit mercy on his bride...
Finally this dragging session came to an halt both stopped infront of a room which is latched... Jalal looked at jodha with an evil smile... Jodha gulped in horror... She bit her lower lip in fear of what coming next...
He kicked the door and it flew open... Jodha gripped her long beautiful lehnga tightly and shut her eyes...
Sensing no movements from other side jodha slowly opened her eyes only to find jalal with the same evil smile leaning on the door...
He straightened himself and chuckled a bit "afraid of me darling?? Suits you!!"
jodha peeped inside the room... Nothing is visible... Just darkness... The darkness which is ready to engulf me in it... She thought... She gulped again...
Jalal again grabbed her hand and pushed her inside with a great force... She fall down near something hard due to which her forehead got hurt and sensed something liquid which she perfectly guessed as blood... A shadow approached her, it sat beside her... She knew who it was so she got shrinked a little bit... Suddenly a bright light pierced her eyes she kept her hand on her eyes as her dew drops are not able to absorb them...
Jalal took her hand that was till now rested on her eyes... And twisted it on her back, the light was gone now again the darkness prevails...
"ahh...jalal" she cried...
"darling its your new room..."
jodha looked at her husband in shock... He switched on his mobile to take a look on the face of his prisoner and laugh out loud on her condition...and left the place without looking back...

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