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Posted: 10 years ago

...Chapter - 6...

"how dare you haa??
Tumhari himmat
kese hui to enter in
the kitchen??" she stand to go
upstaires... But he
again held her hand...
"I'm not over yet..." he yelled...
"Please...pleas...jalal leave me jal raha hai... You can scold... Scold me after... After my medications... Please" she sobbed while trying to jerk his hand away...
"nope... 1st hear me i don't have my time to waste on you" he said adamantly...
Her hands become reddened due to burning she was crying, sobbing and pleading him to leave her... He kept his finger on her lips, now also not leaving her hand... "shh... Chup ekdum chup" he shouted... By seeing his anger grewing she anyhow controlled her wails and cries and looked at him helplessly... Her hand was burning but what can she do... Anyways he will not leave her so she pressed her lips together to control any kind of voice that was threatening her senses to come out and shout as loud as possible... But she kept mum, tears were flowing like a waterfall from her dew drops...
"ok now time of rules and regulations..." he said in a husky voice, she looked at him with a confused face...
"you want to live here right..." he said while standing... Grabbing the opportunity she tried to run but again the devil entered in front of her, blocking her way... "bola tha naa... I'm not over yet..." he fumed in anger... She got scared from his darker eyes and again her hand in his grip... She moaned in pain...
"jalal please finish as soon as possible" she said in a haste because the burning is becoming unbearable now ...
"Ok so lets start" he bit his lower lip to supress the forming smile... He was purposely making it longer, so that she will feel the same pain that his little sister had felt when she was alive... That he himself had felt that day seeing his own little princess laid lifelessly infront of him wrapped in that white shroud...
Only he knows how he had survived... If Misha and Atul would not have been there he would have die then and there...
He had lost two most precious years of his life just because of HER... He was just forced into this hell called MARRIAGE... tears escaped his eyes...

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Edited by Monucute - 10 years ago
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Posted: 10 years ago
Sorry guys for late update...
I'm not feeling well today so please bear this chapter...

Love
Neetu / Monu
Edited by Monucute - 10 years ago
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Posted: 10 years ago
Oh...dis is da reson oh... :( ...feling sad for jala...bt isme jo ki kya galti... :( ...plzzz revel it sooon...chptr is tooo shrt plzzz mak dem litl long...nyc update :)...wating for next...thnk u
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Posted: 10 years ago

Originally posted by: Monucute

Sorry guys for late update...
I'm not feeling well today so please bear this chapter...

Love
Neetu / Monu

chptr is nyc...u plzz tkcr
Edited by Bittu94rawat - 10 years ago
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Posted: 10 years ago
nice update.
oh thats the reason he is doing this bt how is jo's responsible for his sis death.reveal it soon...
nd update it soon..
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Posted: 10 years ago
surely there's a big misunderstanding!!
solve it soon!
and continue soon!
wait! I'm sending pms!
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Posted: 10 years ago
Oo reason is out finally but hw is it related to jodha...
take care dear...
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Posted: 10 years ago
nic chappi
i think jalal has some mu..
plz update a long chapii
& take care dr
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Posted: 10 years ago

Originally posted by: Monucute

will reveal it soon...

finally u revealed it... partly
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Posted: 10 years ago
Jalal's sister died😕 thats y he wants to punish Jo how was she related??? reveal soon,,
Wating for the next monu,, 😊 take care dear😳

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