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#761

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Posted: 10 years ago

#764

Originally posted by: paridhiloveu
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Neetu

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Posted: 10 years ago

#765

...Chapter - 13...

He again
watched the room
in a hope to find
her... But again
faced failure...
He switched his mobile on to have a clear look of the room... He stepped inside and knocked the door of washroom "jo are you there??" he questioned... But the reply never came... He frustratingly run his fingers in hairs... "what the... Where are you jo?" he became highly worried as firstly she is broken both mentally and physically... And secondly she is not familiar with the new city... He rushed downstairs and searched the whole house... He even searched in the colony but no trace of her... He came and slumped on the couch reminscing yesterday...

Yesterday after their encounter... He came to his room... Suddenly his mobile buzzed making him aware of an call... An unknown number flashed on the screen, he frowned and pick the call up... "hello jalal how are you beta??" came a low feeble shaky voice... "da...dadi aap?" he fumbled... "haa mai... How is jodha? Khush toh hai naa vo?" dadi questioned impatiently... "hmm" this was the only syllable left his mouth, he doesn't know what else to say... Suddenly dadi became emotional "Jalal my jodha had suffered so much since childhood... She had never felt warmth and love of parents because they died in a car accident leaving the little princess when she is of hardly 1 month... She never recieved love from her brother who held her responsible for their parent's death... My jodha had a hard time while tackling the society's typical mindset and tantrums..." jalal too had tears in his eyes... "then we are on the same boat..." he wishpered... he too never felt warmth and love of his parents... The difference is just that her parents were dead whereas his' is alive...

Franatic ringing of door bell broke his thoughts...

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Edited by Monucute - 10 years ago

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Deeksha Rao

@paridhiloveu

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Posted: 10 years ago

#766

today I feeling to bore and sleepy

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Deeksha Rao

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Posted: 10 years ago

#767

Awesome chapter now I think jalal will not behave bad with Jodha

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Impairlove

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Posted: 10 years ago

#768

Wow nice update got to know about jodhas past
And even a a tid bit of jalal as he said then both r on the same boat
Wow loved ur update
Update a little big next time