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CHAPTER 6.1



(It was late night Jalal, Abdul & Adhka Sahaab were waking toward the place where in childhood Jalal would practice sword fight. Jalal was restless, worried, angry, happy basically he was emotionally confused at all levels.He saw Jodha all alone sitting there & again is stuck by her beauty, they all stop there Jalal is contently staring at her. Few minutes letter Suryabhan comes there. He is drunk In the palace Bhabhima, Sujamal and Jai Bhaisa realise Suryabhan is not in his room or the palace.He tries to hurt Jodha by holding her tightly she says leave me Raja Suryabhan. She pushes him away. He holds her how dear you push me you are mine He slap her hard on both her cheeks.Jalal is standing there watching all this he starts going there Adhka stops him saying you just commerner you can't do anything. Suryabhan pulls her hair from behind she shouts in pain some one save me from this beast. Jalal pushes Adhka Sahaab out and goes there. Jalal come inbeween them and say prince disrespecting woman is not commentable. Suryabhan does not care he push her and goes fall in Jalal arms her cheeks are bearing Suryabhan finger imprints her eyes are full of tears seeing his Jodha like this got his blood boiling if he was in disguise he would have beheaded him right now. Jodha got up from his arms & he put her behind him . Suryabhan says) how dear you come in between us) Jalal calmly says) Prince you can not manhandle our princess in our vesinity (Suryabhan not caring like before he pulls her to him forcefully she kicked him hard in his stomach, he fell down on his face,Jalal with pride thought my tigeress is back love you my tigeress) by that time Jodha see Sujamal, Kanika & Chote Senapati had arrived they saw the sence. Kanika went straight and slapped Suryabhan & hugging Jodha says) you scoundrel how dear you touch her.(Looked at Jodha how badly she was treated took her hand in hers & took the payal and put in the thal. Her brothers took handle of Suryabhan. Sujamal came to her hugging her asks) Jodha dear I am sorry, are you fine (Jalal how could he even ask if she was fine could he not see what that creature did to her.Jodha hugging him back says) Daatabhia I just want be alone here please(Kanika looked at her in actions asked who was the unknown man.Jodha with a slight smiling says) you should thank him for saving me from Suryabhan (Jalal doesn't say anything he think with a slights smile is my duty and pleasure to protect you from all harm in life my love.Jodha looks at her Sujamal, Kanika & Chote Senapati) don't tell anyone specially Leela she will worry & Jia he care a lot after all we three childhood best friends, please. (Jodha walks away from there The two men are trying to take Suryabhan from there.All a sudden Sujamal screams JODHA . Jalal panics & see behind. He see her trying to commit sucide. He runs to save her. He holds her & brings her out of the river. Jalal says) Rajkumari artmuhitiya karna ghor aapradh hai [Rajkumari commiting sucide is a hinderous crime](Jodha says)Humari mitiui ke baat hume dandt kon de ga[Who will punish me after my death] (Jalal asks) aap ko artmuhitiya kyou karne hai [Why do you want to commit sucide (Jodha says) Hum Suryabhan se ghrina kar hai aur hume usea vivahaa karne ke liye vivash kiya ja raha hai parintu hum phele hi kis aur is jur chuke hai aur hum unse bhute payal bhi karte hai aur unse se hi vivaha kar [I hate Suryabhan I am being forced to marry him but I am alrady commited to someone else and I love him alot and will only marry him](Jalal asks) woh yahin kyoun nahi hai voh aapse mohhabat nahi karte hai [Why isn't he here doesn't he love you](Jodha says)voh vivash kar de gayi yahain nahi aane ke liye usse bhithu Varkti se voh pure Bharat par raj karna chahata hai voh aapne aap ko Shahansha -e-Hindustan bulate hai. [He is forced not to come here by that man who wants rule the the whole Indai & calls himself Shahansha-e-Hindutan] (Adhka Sahaab & Abdul were standing & listening. They know Jalal had given this right to her only. Sujamal says) Chota Senapati take him home I will stay here with Jodha for a while."(Kanika, Chota Senapati & Suryabhan proceeds to the palace. Jalal was holding Jodha she was contuniously crying Jalal could not see her like this. Jodha says) Aap bhute aache hai aapne humari jeevan phir se bachaiya [You are very nice you saved my life again](Jalal thinks I didn't save you my love I saved my self from dying you are my life my destiny. Jalal says) Rajkumari yehi meri simadaari hai [Princess this is responsibility](Jodha asks) aapne kya kha, simadaari' aap Mughal hai kya? [What did you say 'simadaari' are you maghal?] (Jalal with a small smile says) aap jaanti hai hum Shahansha ke aaziz hai You know I am close to the king](Jodha not looking at him but intently look at the burning dhiya) aap gupchar hai kya? [Are you a spy](Jalal says) na [No](Jodha with angry says) aapne Shahansha khediyega hum Rajput kisse nahi bheiyabhet nahi hote hai [Tell your King we Rajput are not scared of him](Jalal knew there no body near to hear him says) MERI RAJPUT SHERANI [MY RAJPUT SHERANI] (Jodha confused says) Aap ne kuch kaha, aapka haath jaal geyiya hai. Did you say some thing you hand have been burned](She bend down picked some wet sand and put it on it. A little wind blow dhiya was going to go of immediately Jodha left his hand and covered the dhiya Jalal also bent down & helped he is looking at her intently without a blink.They stood & he held her hand and put it on his chest & was holding it there and there by forcing her see him.(Jodha asks)aap ka kar rahe hai [What are you doing](Jalal asks) aap apne shahzade ko kasie pehechane giye How will you regornize your Prince](Jalal left her hand. Jodha asks) kya aap Abdul hai, shahzade ne aap ko bhejha hai une se khahena unki Jodha yahain akali ho gya hai hum aaj bhi unki pratiksha kar rehi hai, hum uhne se bhute prem karte hai hum kaval unke hai voh sab bhul gya hai aapni miterta aapne prem aapni vivaaha apne vachaano ko apni Jodha ko. [Are you Abdul has the prince send you tell him his Jodha is still waiting for him I love him alot I am only his, he has forgotten every thing our findship our love our marriage his promise & his Jodha](Jalal could not respond to it. She realised Jalal had left hand she started moving her had hand away. She felt some kind of wound that made her remember.

Flashback starts

(When Jalal was in refuge in AMER )

(Bariam Khan had told her Jalal already is married and he the future king he will have a lot of wavies. She boldly said king can have many queens but he can only love one women and she will rightfully be his wife in all senses for life there is a lot of difference in responsibility & love. Khan baba was impressed by that he could sense insecurity in her when he told this but the boldness response superised him. He hug her.In the evening when she was with Jalal in their secret hide out .Jodha asks) Jalal aap humse prem karte hai.[Jalal do you love me] (Jalal shocked says) Jodha hum aap se behintihaa Mohabbat karte hai [Jodha i love you alot](Jodha says) aap ke pehel se hi ek petani hai [You already have a one wife](Jalal realised she was insecure of her right over him & says) Jodha humari chahe kitani bhi begume na ho phir bhi hum srif aapse mohabbat karega,aap hum pe sabse zaada haq hi rehiga [Jodha how many ever Queens i have I only love you & you will have have the most right on me] (Jalal give her khanger and tells her ingrave her name name on his chest. She is scared. He held her hand and made her do it. Jodha saw blood oozing out of it and left the khanjar. Jodha says crying) rakth [BLOOD](Jalal hugged her says) hum aap se srif aapse Mohabbat karte hai aap humari mohabbat hai humari Jodha , koun bhi hume aapse chin nahi salta hai. [I love only you you are my love Jodha no one can snach me from you(Few days later he left from AMER for war Jodha did his tilka and gave him a new sword & khanjar.)

Flashback ends

(Jodha takes one of his arms and see the wound which gave himself years back)

Flashback Starts

(Jalal was in AMER for refuge )

(It was night time they both had fight. For days Jodha did not come for for practice.Then when she came she did practice & was leaving Jalal held her arm and pulled her towards himself & hug her.Jalal asks) aap humse baat nahi kar raheo.aap humse gussa hoo. [You are not talking to me you are angry with me (Jodha turns back starts to leave. Jalal cuts his wrist again and Jodha see him & tries to stop him.Jalal adds) aaj yehi jo zakham hai ya hume zendigi bhar anjoor banke choobhiga ki hum aapne mohabbat nahi nebha paaiye ya yehi hum Mohabbat ka sabbout hai aur hum iss aapne seene se nahi hate zindagi bhar aab aap par aap hum pe aur humare mohabbat samajh paaiye aur yakin kar paayi hai. [Today this wound will pain me life long as i couldn't do justice to my love or it will always be on hand and me of my love for you now it you decision if you trust me & my love] (She hugs him & says) aap ne aap ko asie chote kyun phoche hum aapke gaav nahi dekh sakte hai [Why did you hurt yourself like this I can't see your wounds] (He hugs her back)

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(Jodha hugs him tightly says)"Jalal aapne aapna vachaan nebha hum aapse bhute prem karte humri vishvaashta hum Suryabhan se vivaha karna hum nahi karna chahate hai. [Jalal you kept your promise I love you alot I am forced to marry Suryabhan I dont't want to marry him](Jalal hugs back tightly) Jodha hum sab jaanti hai hum aayiga hai [Jodha i know everything I am here now] (Jodha with tears in her eyes says) aapne aapna vaachan nebhaya aur aap loot aaye aapni Jodha ki paas [You kept your promise & came back] (Jalal looked at her wipping her cheeks says) Jodha rona band kijiye hum aapki aakhon mein aasu nahi dekh sakte hai aap humari zendigi hai [Jodha stop crying I can't see tears in your eyes you are my life] (Jodha hidding herself in his arms says) aap yahan se chalein ja ye aap ke prano par kathnaiya mein aa ja aage hum aapse bhute prem karte hai hum aap par koi khatra aate hua nahi dekh sakte hai [Go from here your life can be in danger I love you alot i can't see you in danger (Jalal says) hum aapko liye bina Agra nai jaiyehe (keep his hand on her lips) saalon se hume aapko dekhne ke liye, baat karne liye galay lagane, mohabbat jaatani ke liye hum humari Jodha ki liye tarap raha hai... aap aapne Jalal ke liye nahi tarap rahi Jodha [I wouldn't leave for Agra without you for years i have been wating to see you talk to you hug you love you...You were not waiting for me (Jodha did not say anything he knew the answer without her saying it . They it lost in each other Jalal adds) aapko daarne ki sarut nahi hum aapke paas, hum Suryabhan aapke phir khabhi kareeb nahi aane dega [You don't need be scaread i will not him ever come near you (Jodha says) hmmm, aapne apna gaavo dhek nahi hone jade aapne vaachan diya tha aap humse itna prem karte hai, aap hume kabhi bhule hi nahi (she hits him on his chest )aap jaante hai aapke Mughal Shahansha humse se prem karne ke aapradh mein aapka sheesh kaat dege (tighten her grip on him.Jalal loved every thing about her be it her anger, concern, love and care) aapne humme humre pran leine diye se kyun roka hum aapke bin nahi jeevit reh sakte aur voh Mughal Shahansha ke pass rhiday hi nahi hai voh prem kya samjhage [You didn't let your wounds heal as you promised, you love me so much, you never forgot me. you know your Mughal King will hang you to deth for falling in lve with me. why did you you stop me from taking my life i cant't live without you & that Mughal Shahansha doesn't have heart he wll not undestand love](Jalal with anger says) hum bhi aapke bigare zinda nahi reh sakte aap bhul rehe bachpan aapko khoone ke daar se hi humne aapse nikkha kar liya tha."[I also can't live without you you're forrgetting du to fear of loosing you in childhood I had married you]

Flashback

He wandered into the palace being a kid no one stopped him he out one of the princess getting married. He was insecure and jealous. When she came to meet him. Jalal asks) "itna vakth kyou laga aap,(before she could answer) aap hum par yakin karti hai, humse mohabbat karti hai. [what took you so long do you trust me do you love me] (Jodha answers) haa [Yes] (Jalal asks) aap humse nikkha karyigi [Will you marry me] (Jodha superised asks) kya khehae aap, vivahaa ka arth jaante hai [What are you saying you know what marriage means](Jalal answers) haa, hum jaante hai aur hum aapse behintihaa mohabbat karte hai, aur hum aapse har reeto aur riwaazo ki saath karege dono Hindu aur mughal ke hizzab se. [Yes I know i love you alot we will get married both with Hindu & Mughal Ritulas & Traditions]

(Then they both got married about which only Bariam Khan and Abdul were with both Hindu pandit and muslim Quazi.)

Flashback Ends

(Jalal says) Jodha hum aapse behintihaa mohabbat hai, hum aapse nikkha kareagi voh bhi sabse saamne (force her look him in his eyes) humare baat suniye, aap Mughal Shahansha ka naam jaanti hai [Jodha I love you alot listen to me I will marry you in front of everyone, do you know Mughal King's full name(Jodha with hatred says) Shahansha-e-Hindustan Badshaha Jalal-udin-Mohammad (Jalal asks) aap humara pura naam jaanti hai? [Do you know my full name

Flashback start

(Jalal says) Khan Baba hum unhe baat deti hum koun ki aage chalegi aagar unhe humare pass aana ho unhe khain jaane ki jasrot hai aur voh humare biwi hai unse nikkha kiya hai humne unka haq [Khan baba i will tell her who i am it is her right](Bariam Khan says) hum yakin kijiye hum unse khood bataiy gye aap maha anga ko yahin sambhaiye aap jaante hai voh Hindus se kitani nafrat karti hai [Trust me I will my self tell her you take care of Maha Anga you know how much she hates Hindus (Jalal says) hmmm, unhone ne kuch kiya [Did she do something] (Bariam Khan says) aabhi tak toh nahi, [Not till now(Next morning after sword practice Jalal tell he come soon he forgot so get something. Bariam Khan comes there) Shahazadi aap jaanti hai ki shahzade ka pura naam kya hai [Princess do you know who is Prince](Jodha says) Rajkumar...arthat Shahazade Jalal. [Prince means prince Jalal](Bariam Khan says) nahi unka naam hai valhiaad Shahazade Jalal No his name is Crowned Prince Jalal](Jodha knew Shahazade ment prince in urdu confused asks) valhiaad, arthar. [COLORS=BLUE][Valihaad means][/COLORS](Bariam Khan answers) valhiaad ka matlab hone wale Badshaha [COLOUR=BLUE][Vilhaad mean fruture Badshasha][/COLOR](Jodha asks) Badshaha matlab [Badshasha means] (Bariam Khan says) Badshaha matlab raja [Badshasha means King](Jodha says) hume kshama kijiye hume Urdu samjh nahi aati, toh aap yehi khahe reha hai (with pride) voh kaval rajkumar hi nahi magar voh yuvraj hai arthat hone wale raja hai, paritu aap yehi hume kyou bata rahe hum is koi farik nahi hum bhute prem karte hai. Forgive me I don't understand Urdu so you are saying he not only a prince but a crowned prince that means fruture king but why are you telling me all this I don't care I love him alot](Bariam Khan smiles & says) kyou ki aab aap srif ek shahazadi nahi aap unki begum hai aur yehi aapka haq." [COLOUR=BLUE]Because now you are not only a princess but a his queen & it is your right[/COLOR]


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(Jodha with pride says)" Valihaad Shahazade Jalal Crowned Prince Jalal(Jalal realised she did not know anything & says)Nahi hum vohi Shahansha - E- Hindustan Badshaha Jalal - udin - Mohammad hai jinse aap nafrat karti hai magar hum aapse behintihaa mohabbat karte the kar de hai aur karte reheage, haa hum pass bhute begumate jinki har khaawaish puri karna humri simadaari magar hum mohabbat srif aapse karte hai magar hum yehi nahi jaante the ki aap humse intani nafrat karti hai. No i am that shahansha-E-Hindustan Jalal-U-Din Mohammad who you hate but I loved you alot & will always love you. yes I have a lot of Queens & full filling their wishes is my responsibility but I love only you & I didn't know you hate me me so much](He was happy on mention about other queens she tighten her grip on him and was confused she didn't stop him saying anything. Jodha was confused he is Shahansha but how can I hate him because for life I have loved him I am only his.

NEXT : PROMO

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awesome update
finally both come face to face and jodha knows the real identity of his husband
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its cute finally they met continue soon dear waiting eagerily.
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PREVIOUS : CHAPTER 6.1

PROMO[/B


Jodha :" aapki phele patni Ruqaiya ka kya."(what about you first wife Ruqaiya)
Jalal : "voh srif humari peheli begum aur bachpan ki sabse aachi dost dost hai aap humari mohabbat humri zendigi hai humari jeene ki vijhya hai , humare pass ek aur begum hai Salima Sultan aur bhi aurte hai jo humari begumate hai magar aap ek hum par hokumat karne ki qabiliate rakhti hai."(she is only my first queen and childhood best friend that all you are my love, my life, my destiny, I have another queen Salima Sultan and many other woman are my queens but you my love are the only one who has the cability to rule me my love my Jodha)

CHAPTER WILL BE POSTED ON SUNDAY

[B]NEXT: CHAPTER 6.2




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