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Soumya

@baubles

Dazzler

Posted: 11 years ago

#131

Awww...such a lovely, sweet chapter that was! Jo was tooo cute...sounding indignant..bechari!😆

Jalal doesn't wanna let go of a chance to tease her or laugh...lol.😆😆

Loved it so far..❤️❤️

Updtae next chapter soon!! 😳

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Preet

@rishbala3018

Sparkler

+ 3

Posted: 11 years ago

#132

Lovely update, but i thot i'll get Jo's confssion in this one but u delayed it, i dont wanna wait update next part soon please!!

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meghajj

@meghajj

Explorer

Posted: 11 years ago

#133

Mindblowing

Jo is indeed felt so embarrassed...even I felt killing ja 😉

But loved it ❤️❤️

Update soon😳

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surbhimathur

@surbhimathur

Rocker

+ 3

Posted: 11 years ago

#134

Hahaha it was indeed awesome! You write superr man! :D
Akdha moments on the way then jodha getting embarassed loll it was really funny..thecway she hastily took steps n sat XD
Then the decision by jalal :')
Waiting for the next one..update soon!

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swetha

@sw123

Navigator

Posted: 11 years ago

#135

wow awesome 👏

update soon

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ash

@ashpat

Dazzler

+ 2

Posted: 11 years ago

#136

oh it was a funny and gr8 chapter. I loved jalal teasing jodha and others trying to supress their laughter and jodha being embarrassed. Jalal made a very fair decision on holi. awesome chpater. plzzz update soon and update ur other stoires too.thx for pm.

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SAPNA

@Akhdhaa

Beginner

Posted: 11 years ago

#137

its just awesome update soon! 😎

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SAPNA

@Akhdhaa

Beginner

Posted: 11 years ago

#138

SUPERB DI👍🏼AMAZING POST !!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! CONTINUE SOOON...
WAITING FOR UPDATE!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

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Delphi

@Delphi-03

Explorer

Posted: 11 years ago

#139

Awww..!!Such a sweet chapter...!!! This Jodha is sooo CUTE!! And Jalal is sooo mischievous!! The perfect combination...
And thank god u made it 7 shots... The story is going really well...

Edited by akdha-fan - 11 years ago

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bhakti

@Nany

Rocker

+ 2

Posted: 11 years ago

#140

hey pallavi...my darling...
u r so talented writter...
i read all five parts twice ...
its so amazing...
superb...
really loved it...
thanks for the pm n bye...third tym pure parta firse read karne jaa rahi hu