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Posted: 11 years ago
Superb amazing update
Plz plz continue soon
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Posted: 11 years ago
CHAPTER 2 COMMENT

Pallavi devi...aapke charan kaha hai... Hum aapko shahtan pranam karte hai...

MIND BLOWING⭐️⭐️⭐️⭐️⭐️... ROCKING😃... HILLARIOUS😆... PRECIOUS😳...ROMANTIC😳

ISS OS KE LIYE MERE PAAS KO SABAD NAHI HAI... Me dil se keh rahi hu... yaar tune muje khush kar diya tere😊😛 update se... I remember I was not in good mood that entire week... After reading ur update me khush ho gayi...dilse👏👏👏👏

I wish Jalal sabko mile aur aese surprise bhi... vow... The way he planned everything is just amazing... Really touching... Moti and Jalal Rocks...not together...lol

What touching note... Jodha senti... and Jalal worried... poor innocent fellow... how cute Jalal is... Jodha gooring Jallu...lol...When Jalal wiped her tears it tickled me... " Apki Khwhish chupayegi aur hume pata nahi chalega" loved it...

Salima Moti... Hamida... Jalal... Mirza...Maan... Bakshi... Yaha to pura khandan jama hai... lol I love how u have covered all good people in this os... bas happiness ... Sacchi me holi ko tune rangin kar diya...

What divine moment... when he asked her to put color on her face...and she said so sweetly...nisandeh shenshah...aapke atirikt koi aur hume aajka pehla rang lagaye...ye hum chahege bhi nahi... awww

And when he put sindoor in her maang... My heart filled with love...her with tears... U know I really like U written in the first distance between them... They are not close to each other yet...OMG SURPRISE... SUKU darling entry... Jalal the way he talk to her I loved it... kitna pyara romance chal raha tha... aur bich me sali shiba tapak padi... khich ke le gayi jo ko...

MIRZA... YE TUNE KYA KIYA RE... KUCH TO SUN LETA MAAN KI BAAT KO... CHALO HUME TO MAJA AAYA... YAAR u the best writer... tere dialogue the best... Nachiz tarif karne se dar rahi hai... Gustakhi maaf ho Malika E dialouge...

WAH WA...WAH WA......"FALAK KI PARI KO MUSKURATE HUE DEKH RAHE HAI BUS..." I LOVE THE PART WHEN JALAL RAN BEHIND HER ... SO CUTE...

OMG... BEST SCENE... Jodha hiding behind pillar... and The way he put color on her face... (master piece) I have read that para atleast 10 time... so romantic... He almost kissed her...ufff... What a sensual feeling... beautiful... beyond any word Yaar u have taken my heart...

Omg... Mirza's dialouge so sweet

Mirza: - aap to buri tarah rang gayi hai bhabhi jaan...lagta hai kisi ne badi shiddat se rang lagaya hai aapko...

NOW FUN PART: JO GULPED BHANG...LOL

NAUTANK START... LOL...AMAZING... CHAPTER... CAN'T WAIT TO REVIEW ON NEXT MY MOST FAV CHAP... SUPERB... WONDERFUL... YAAR (SAMAJ LO)...

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PALLU AA GALE LAG JA... ME DRUNK...MUJE BHI YE UPDATE KA NASHA HO GAYA HAI..

YAAR ME KYA LIKHU SAMAJ ME NAHI AA RAHA... I LOVED EACH AND EVERY LINE...WORD OF THIS CHAPTER... CHAL PHIR BHI TRY KARTI HU... MUJE LAGTA HAI... ME TERA POORA CHAP COPY PASTE KARNE vali hu...

1. SWINGING JODHA...LOL... POOR MAAN... YAAR JALLU KO JACKPORT HI LAG GAYA...LOL

2. HALF OPEN EYES... HMMM... AWW.. clueless Jallu... he has no idea what is going to happen to him I have started to laugh already... "kya hummm"...koi moka nahi chorte...lol bhitar chale... I was like nautanki to abhi suru bhi nahi hui...

3. HOLI HAI.. PALLU I CAN'T WRITE I AM JUST LAUGHING.. AND COPYING EVERYTHING...I AM TELLING U UR STORY... I loved it when she called him... Jallad kahin ke... Lol...khadoos shenshah...lol... aur wo bhi sabke samne... I can't believe this u were able to write all this... I have no words...

4. I loved it to core... how she tell Hamida... Apne humara sath diya... awww.. so touching... then Salima... I love how she kiss her... I was rolfing... Tuje pata nahi I laughed so much... aur mene jitni baar padha I have laughed...

5. Do begum baat kar rahi to Shenshah ko beech me nahi bolna chahiye... yaar hillarious... poor jallu...

6. Maansingh turn: Kisi ne kuch kaha... Boxer Jodha is present... lol... teddy bear...lol

7. Mirza gaya kaam se... Jalal gooring at him...

8. Shenshaahhh...lol...singing...Jalal was scared... he fix his cloth...lol ..."AAP SAMAJHTE KYA HAI APNE AAPKO HAAN??...BADE AAYE...HINDUSTAN KE SHENSHAH...MANA KE DIKHNE ME THIK THAK LAGTE HAI AAP...MAGAR ISKA MATLAB YE THODI HAI KE APNI SUNDARTA PE GHAMAND KARNE LAGE AAP..."... omg pallu tune ye kya kar diya...my mind blank out... superb..."GHUR KYA RAHE HAI...HAAN??...GHURNA HUME BHI AATA HAI...HUM AAPSE NAHI DARTE...SAMJHE AAP...AGAR AAP SHENSHAH JALALUDDIN MOHAMMAD HAI TO HUMARA NAAME BHI JODHA BAAI HAI" JODHA NE SACH ME JALAL KI CLASS LE LI... HILLARIOUS... JASHAN KHATAM...LOL

9. Jodha punched jallu... omg... Jalal is running her to catch ... hillarious... I wish serial me aesa ho... poor Jallu had to control his emotion...She pulled him in the waterKINTU PARISTHITIYA*conditions* IS TARAH BADAL JAYEGI HUMNE KABHI SOCHA BHI NAHI THA...HUM AAP PER BHAROSA KARTE HAI AB SHENSHAH...HUME VISHWAAS HAI KE CHAHE JO HO JAAYE...KINTU JAB TAK AAP HUMARE SAATH HAI...HUME KUCH NAHI HO SAKTA...AAP BAHUT ACHE HAI SHENSHAH...AAP BAHUT ACHE HAI..." Her first confession...amazing pallu...sorry I can't find any more words...

10. YOU ARE JUST IMPOSSIBLE...I NEVER FELT THIS HELPLESS IN FRONT OF ANYONE...BUT YOU ALWAYS GET SUCESSFUL IN MAKING ME RUN AFTER YOU...OK MY BAAGHIN...I WILL TAKE YOU TO YOUR ROOM...YOU STUBBORN BABY..."...Poor Jalal carry her from pond to her room... lol... Even UR baapu sa wont be able to lift U now...lol...

11. Ang se Ang Lagana... Poor Jallu... Hillarious..."kya kya karna pad raha hai ya khuda??")

12. Nautanki... hum doob jayenge... Lol...

13. Jodha: - (in a scolding voice)...haan...pata hai hume ke aap kya kehlvana chahte hai humse...yehi na ke hum aapse prem karte hai...to karte hai na prem...usme kaun si badi baat hai... finally she confess it... omg... U Rock Pallu...

14. Pallavi ... After her confession ... I could feel Jalal's happiness... I was dancing inside... I wanted to scream... beautifully written... marvelous... JACKPOT...

AMAZING... MASTER PIECE... LOVE U JAAN... THANK U SO MUCH FOR WRITING THIS AND U HAVE MAKE ME SO HAPPY

Edited by shahbhavini - 11 years ago
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Posted: 11 years ago

Originally posted by: baubles

Awww...such a lovely, sweet chapter that was! Jo was tooo cute...sounding indignant..bechari!😆

Jalal doesn't wanna let go of a chance to tease her or laugh...lol.😆😆
Loved it so far..❤️❤️
Updtae next chapter soon!! 😳

hey somu dear...😳
thanku so much...😃
dun worry this story me no pain...no sadness...😆
only fun and happiness😃
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Posted: 11 years ago

Originally posted by: rishbala3018

Lovely update, but i thot i'll get Jo's confssion in this one but u delayed it, i dont wanna wait update next part soon please!!

yaar jab maine 5 shots ke baare me socha tha to normal confession tha..
but jab aur extend karne ki request aayi...
to now i have planned for a grand confession...
thanku so much for appriciation😃
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Posted: 11 years ago

Originally posted by: meghajj

Mindblowing

Jo is indeed felt so embarrassed...even I felt killing ja 😉
But loved it ❤️❤️
Update soon😳

hey thanku megha...
haan use jaan se marne ke liye to jo ka ek kiss hi kaafi hai...
heehe...will try to update soon😃
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Posted: 11 years ago

Originally posted by: surbhimathur

Hahaha it was indeed awesome! You write superr man! :D
Akdha moments on the way then jodha getting embarassed loll it was really funny..thecway she hastily took steps n sat XD
Then the decision by jalal :')
Waiting for the next one..update soon!

thanku deepika...
glad u liked it...
b/w i too read ur writing...
u r too fab yaar...
will comment on your OS soon😃
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Posted: 11 years ago

Originally posted by: ashpat

oh it was a funny and gr8 chapter. I loved jalal teasing jodha and others trying to supress their laughter and jodha being embarrassed. Jalal made a very fair decision on holi. awesome chpater. plzzz update soon and update ur other stoires too.thx for pm.

hey ayesha...
thanku yaar...
i hope i m not disappointing u...
glad u liked it😃
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Posted: 11 years ago

Originally posted by: sw123

wow awesome 👏

update soon

thanku sweety😃
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Posted: 11 years ago

Originally posted by: Nany

hey pallavi...my darling...
u r so talented writter...
i read all five parts twice ...
its so amazing...
superb...
really loved it...
thanks for the pm n bye...third tym pure parta firse read karne jaa rahi hu

OMG NANY...😲
what a plesant surprise...😃
my purani pakki reviewer is back...
missed ur reviews yaar...😭
hows you??...long time huh...😃
glad glad that u liked it...⭐️
thanku so much...🤗
ab kahin mat jaana😳

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