SEVEN Shots~Laal Ishq~*HOLI SPCL* ESP UPDATE*SR* ON PAGE 38(COMPLETED) - Page 13

Sorry pallu... will unres soon...!!

Love you sherni 🤗

I like your writing, but can I also critique you a little bit...? Sorry, felt like you have copied a bit from another show. Plz don't mistake me.

The First part of the 4th chapter, where Jalal teases Jodha that "bahu th kuch hogaya, aagay bud chukay hein" etc...was really shown in BALH. Many fans wanted this chapter scene wanted it in our JA show also, but this was one of the most lovable, cute scene BALH , which is incidentally an Ekta's serial also.

Looking forward to your next chapter.

Viji

thanku so much for ur precious reviews...😳

will respond to each very soon...😉

but for now...😊

here is the next update...😛

due to more requests coming...i m going to convert it into a seven shot...😆

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plz forgive the writing mistakes...

(After taking a quick bath...Jodha dressed herself in a mustard yellow color rajputaani lehnga with a heavy transparent dupatta...she came out of the washroom drying her hairs...Moti helped her to get ready quickly and dried her hairs with the sandal wood smoke...and adorned her with her routine heavy jewelry...All the while Jodha was lost in her own dreamland...her mind and thoughts were still occupied with his puzzled talks...his question and most importantly by that kissing dream...she was yet surprised at herself that how could she ever imagine that...she went near the kanha temple and sat in front of it...picked up the sunflower garland and decorated the idol of her dear kanha with it...lit up the aarti and joined her hands and started singing..."HEY MANMOHAN...HEY MANMOHAN...HEY MANMOHAN..."...but as she closed her eyes while singing...suddenly Jalal's smiling face appeared in front of her eyes...she at once stopped and opened her eyes with a startle...it had never happened that while praying for kanha...she saw someone else face...she was confused...she again started singing shooing his thoughts away..."HEY MURLIDHAR...HEY DAAMODAR...KRISHAN MURAARI...HEY NATNAAGAR..."...and again while singing tried to close her eyes as it was her usual habit...but again the same picture...but this time with tears in his eyes staring at her...with an amazed smile...."KYA...KYA KAHA AAPNE...AAP...AAP HUMSE KYA??..."...his words echoed in her ears...don't know why but this time it didn't feel like her imagination to her...she felt that she has really lived that moment...her confusion had now turned into a restlessness...she again stopped abruptly and looked at kanha and asked with her questioning gaze..."YE SAB KYA HAI KANHA??...KAISE SANKET HAI YE...??...KYU HUM SWAYAM KO UNKE VICHARO SE PRITHAK NAHI KAR PAA RAHE...??...KYU HUME BAAR BAAR LAG RAHA HAI KE UNKE PRASHAN KA UTTAR GYAT HAI HUME...??...ESA KABHI NAHI HUA KE AAPKI AARADHANA KARTE SAMAY HUMARE MAN ME KISI AUR KA VICHAAR BHI AAYA HO...HUME SHAMA KAR DIJIYEGA KANHA...KINTU AAJ NA JAANE KYU KIS BHI CHEEZ ME MAN HI NAHI LAG RAHA HUAMARA... "...and a lone tear escaped her eyes...Moti put her hand on her shoulder...."KYA HUA JODHA??...RUK KYU GAYI...??...BHAJAN PURA KARO??..."...Jodha looked at Moti with a lost face and said in a low tone..."MOTI...KYA HUMARI EK VINTI SWIKAR KAR SAKTI HO...??...AAJ KANHA KA BHAJAN TUM PURA KAR DO..."...Moti understood her dilemma and blinked her eyes...accepting her request...and started singing the remaining part of the bhajan...meanwhile Jodha just joined her hands again and closed her eyes...."IS ULJHAN SE BAHAR NIKALO HUME KANHA...KOI TO RAAH DIKHAO...YE KAISA VICHITRA EHSAAS HAI...KYA HUME UNSE...??..."...Jodha was all lost asking him when suddenly she felt something in her hands...as the bhajan finished...she slowly opened her eyes...and drifted apart her palms to look at what it was...and she became astonished to see a sunflower in her hand...her eyes rapidly shifted towards kanha's mukut...where she had put that sunflower few moments ago...and for her surprise it was not there now...she looked at the flower in her palms again and smiled with tears brimming in her eyes...)

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(Jalal was talking about some political matter with his ministers while walking towards Diwan e khaas...dressed in Dark pink robe with Blue royal overcoat with a blue pearl crown adorning his head...looking the ultimate shenshah of Hindustan...walking confidently with his hands folded behind his back...he was very much engrossed in the discussion when suddenly his heart skipped a beat...and automatically his gaze shifted towards the Direction of his soul mate's hojra...where his eyes caught her...who had just come out from her room...dressed in a sophisticated and well groomed traditional outfit...just perfect to be called his elegant queen...but somewhere the confidence that she always used to had while walking was somewhat missing today...Jalal at once stopped talking and walking too...looked at her...and in no time his look turned into a stare...no matter what she wear...she always stole his heart away...the ministers too stopped and looked at jalal with an astonished look..."Kya hua shenshah??...aap ruk kyu gaye??...humara faisla theek hai na...ya aap isme kuch izafa chahte hai??..."...but he dint budge...Adhka khan noticed shenshah's attention being diverted by his khaas begum...he mumered in his ear..."huzur...shahabuddin sahib puch rahe hai kuch??..."...Jalal somehow managed to snap out from her spell...and said..."ji...humne sun liya hai...aap log chaliye...hum abhi aate hai...is baat ka faisla bhi Diwan e khaas me hi kar lege aaj..." ..."jaisi huzur ki marzi..."...and all of them left from there for DEK...while Jalal walked towards Jodha...all smiling...)

(On the other hand, Jodha was hell scared from inside...she was very much annoyed at Jalal...walking with her eyes lowered ...not concentrating on the way...lost in thoughts...Moti was walking behind her...Jalal came on the same way she was coming from...now both of them were walking towards each other...due to her eyes down casted...Jodha dint noticed that Jalal is approaching her and the distance b/w them is reducing by every passing moment...Moti tried to aware Jodha...but before she could utter something ...*BANG*...she collided with him and lost her balance...but was held by a strong muscular arm at the right moment...as it captured her delicate waist...ALAS!! His other hand couldn't grip her hand as it was busy handling his second love i.e. his shamshir...Jodha's pallu slip off her head due to her upper body tilting backwards and her hands automatically got shifted towards his chest... their eyes met with utmost intensity...and in no time they were lost in each other...)

KHWAAB HAI TU...NEEND HU MAI...

DONO MILE...RAAT BANE...

ROZ YEHI...MAANGU DUA...

TERI MERI...BAAT BANE...BAAT BANE...

(even the nature seemed to be clapping in appreciation for the majestic charm of this epic Royal Jodi...as the wind turned soothingly soft and audible...passing by their ears...informing them about their admiration)

MAI RANG SHARBATO KA...TU MEETHE GHAAT KA PAANI...-2

MUJHE KHUD ME GHOL DE TO...

MERE YAAR BAAT BAN JAANI...

MAI RANG SHARBATO KA...TU MEETHE GHAAT KA PAANI...

(Moti felt a bit awkward and faced away...smiled blushingly...while the couple's silence was broke by the emperor himself..."zara samhalakar begum saahiba...manzil ki chaah me itni mashroof mat ho jayiye ke raste ka gumaan hi na rahe..."...gave her a ravishing smile)

(Jalal's words brought Jodha back to her senses...she quickly balanced herself and stood straight...but jalal was still gripping her waist...she looked at him with a "leave me" look...Jalal slowly but unwillingly removed his hand and tilted his head a bit downward to look in her eyes..."kya baat hai..??...aaj humari khaas begum humse kuch khafa khafa si maloom ho rahi hai...kya nacheez se koi gustaakhi hui hai huzoor??..."...oh god...what has happened to him...if he will talk like this then I won't be able to control my feelings for sure...she thought to herself...she looked up with a small blush followed by a frown...."puch to ese rahe hai jaise aapko kuch gyaat hi nahi hai...esa sandesh kyu bheja ke humara aana anivarya hai...??")

Jalal: -(with sincerity) haan jodha begum...kyuki aapka aana sachmuch zaruri tha aaj...kuch khaas elaan karna tha Hume...to humne socha ke aapko sunker acha lagega... (Jodha looked at him with an unconvinced look...that made jalal's lips to turn into a wide curve...)...kyu aapko kya laga??... (She remained silent and moved her head sideways...Jalal smirked)...waise ek baat to manni padegi jodha begum ke aap hume bahut ache se samajhne lagi hai...magar aapki malumaat ke liye hum aapko bata de...ke hum aapko aapse kahi zyada behtar tarike se jante hai...(now he too bend his head a little sideways to match her eyes)...chaliye ab aur nahi satate hum aapko...asal wajah bata hi dete hai...hum jante the ke aap aana nahi chahegi...aur hum chahte the ke aap aaye...

Jodha: -(looked at him all furious) hume gyat hi tha...hum bhi aapke kutil dimag ko samajhne lage hai ab...jab pata tha to kyu kiya aapne esa...kyu hume pareshan kar rahe hai aap...?

Jalal: - (with a naughty tone) apni pareshaniyo ki wajah aap khud hi hai Jodha begum...agar aapne us waqt humare sawal ka jawab de diya hota to usme aapka hi fayda tha...magar nahi...to phir bhugatiye ab...aur jab tak hume humare sawal ka jawab nahi mil jata...tab tak aapko in mushkilo ka samna to karna hi padega...aap to janti hi hai ke hum bhi zid me aapse kam nahi hai...

Jodha: - theek hai...ye zid hai na aapki...hum bhi dekhte hai kya karege aap...hume aapki dhamkiyo ka koi bhay nahi hai...jab humne ek baar keh diya ke hume smaran nahi ke humne kya kaha tha to phir kyu piche pade hai humare aap...??

(Jalal moved more closely to her face and stopped at almost an inch distance...Jodha got little scared at once...he said in a husky voice...causing his warm breath to tickle her lips...."kyuki ye jhoot hai...aur bahut jald hum ye saabit kar dege..."...Jodha closed her eyes and gathered all her courage and said in a whispher...."ab aapko vilamb nahi ho raha Diwan e khaas ke liye...??"...Jalal smirked and stepped back...."kya kare jodha begum??...jab bhi aapse mukhatib hote hai waqt ka khayal hi nahi rehta hume...yaad dilane ke liye shukriya...chalte hai..."...and he turned around to go but stopped thinking something...he turned towards her at once...moved his hands around her shoulders...Jodha was shocked at his sudden move...it felt as if he was going to hug her..but he held the end of her dupatta lying on her back and put it over her head as it had slipped down...looked at her face with an admiring gaze and said in a loving tone..."jaldi aayiyega...kyuki hume apne hukm ki tauhin pasand nahi hai..."....and he smirked widely and left from their leaving Jodha totally dumbstruck...with a slight blush over her cheeks...she smiled thoughtfully...while Moti was still standing...facing away...covering her face with her hands...."agar tumhara ho gaya ho jodha to kya hum piche mud sakte hai..."...Jodha irritated..."yaha esa kuch nahi ho raha tha jiske liye tumhe mukh chipane ki aavshyakta ho Moti...ab chalo... "...and they both made their way towards DEK...)

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(As Jalal reached near the entrance of DEK...The guard proclaimed his arrival..."BA ADAB BA MULAYEZA HOSHIYAAR...NOOR E TAKHAT...SHENSHAH E HIND...BADSHAH JALALUDDIN MOHAMMAD...TASHRIF LAA RAHE HAI..."...an idea at once stroke Jalal's mind...he moved towards the guard and whispered something in his ear...The guard nodded his head..."Jo hukm shenshah..."...Jalal entered the court with the most eternal glow crept over his face...he was indeed looking very joyful and fresh...everyone got up in his honor and greeted him...entire court could sense the different spark in Jalal today...His walk as confidant as it has been always...his manly personality...any women would find herself lucky if this handsome emperor even look at her once with a smile...but who knew that this heartthrob was himself striving for the love of the queen of his heart...Jalal made his way towards the throne and took his seat in his usual royal posture...everyone too sat back on their respective seats...Now Jalal was waiting for Jodha's arrival... )

(On the other hand...Jodha slowly reached near DEK...her heart was racing like an engine...she prayed to kanha to give her strength to face everyone...as she reached near the entrance...Moti understood her dilemma and tried to comfort her..."Jodha...aap chinta mat kariye...hum ek kaam karte hai...shenshah to DEK me pahuch hi chuke hai...ab tak to sabha bhi prarambh ho gayi hogi...hum dono chupke se jaker parde ke piche baith jayege...kisi ka dhyaan bhi nahi jayega.."...but before Moti could complete her sentence...the guard near the entrance noticed Jodha and proclaimed her arrival..."BA ADAB BA MULAYEZA HOSHIYAR...JODHA BEGUM TASHRIF LAA RAHI HAI!!!!..."...Jodha was shocked beyond words...her eyes and mouth wide open...she hastily moved towards the guard and busted out on him like a firebrand...)

Jodha: -(gritting her teeth) ye kya kiya tumne??...kyu ki humare naam ki ghoshna tumne..??...humne kaha tumse ghoshna karne ko...??...phir kyu ki tumne ghoshna...bolo...??

Guard: -(extremely terrified by Jodha's fiery looks) gustakhi muaff ho begum sahiba...shenshah ka hukm tha...humne to sirf unke hukn ki taamil ki hai...

Jodha:-(looked at him helplessly) kya??...shenshah...?? Hey ambe maa...kal ko wo tumhe kuyen me kudne ko kahege to kya wahan bhi chalang laga doge tum??

Guard: - (with his eyes lowered) wo humare zillelaahi hai begum saahiba...unke hukm se badhker kuch nahi humare liye...

(Jodha turned towards Moti and looked at her with utmost fearful face..."Moti...ab kya kare hum??...ye shenshah bhi na...hume marker hi dum lege...ab to sabki nazren humare upper hi hogi??...hum nahi jayege ander...hum jaa rahe hai waapas..."...and she turned to go...but Moti held her hand...."Paagal mat baniye Jodha...ghoshna ho chuki hai...ab to chalna hi padega bhitar..."....suddenly an idea struck Jodha's mind...and she nodded in a yes to Moti and entered the DEK...)

(On the other hand...as the announcement for Jodha's arrival was made...a mischievous grin covered Jalal's face and his eyes rapidly shifted towards the entrance...he was dying to see her facial expressions...and finally she entered but Jalal's eyes couldn't have a sight of her beautiful face as it was covered with a long ghunghat...Jodha pulled her pallu a little more down covering her face with it completely...terribly nervous... ...that was the cutest and the most innocent move by her that Jalal had ever seen...suddenly he was feeling like laughing out loud...but as he was in the court...he had to maintain his dignity too...so he tried really hard to control his smile...but couldn't stop himself from chucking a bit...Jodha noticed it as her enraged eyes were continuously fixed over Jalal since the time she had entered...she fumed within and slowly made her way forward...entire court was gazing at her...her extra long veil was seemingly looking way too awkward...only the people who were present at the Holi event this morning...were able to guess the reason...as they were in the same condition as jalal...suppressing their laughter...while Jalal's eyes had got filled with tears by now due to the continuous attempts of controlling his laughter...As soon as...Jodha noticed entire court staring at her...after taking some little steps...she hastily moved behind the curtain taking extra long steps...and sat down quickly on her seat like a statue...now this was the limit...her gesture really cracked jalal out...and he unknowingly giggled out very loud...covering his mouth...but realizing that his giggle has caught the attention of his ministers...he quickly converted it into a loud cough...showing that something just stuck in his throat nothing else..."AHEM...AHEM...MUAFF KIJIYEGA..."...seeing Jalal...Hamida, Salima, Bakhshi, Mirza and maan also chuckled covering their mouths...Jodha was feeling like murdering Jalal at that moment...she never ever felt this much embarrassed in her entire life ...she had lowered her sight when she felt a hand on her shoulder...It was Salima..."AB KAISI HAI AAP JODHA BEGUM...??...AUR YE KYA ITNA LAMBA PARDA...?"...and she chuckled a bit...Jodha with a sad tone..."SALIMA BEGUM...KAM SE KAM AAP TO HUME MAT CHIDAIYE..."...made a puppy like face...)

(Adhka Khaan initiated the discussion..."HUZOOR KI IZZAZAT HO TO DEK KI KARYAWAAHI SHURU KI JAAYE SHENSHAH??"...Jalal...who was busy looking at Jodha...at once replied..."JI BESHAK ADHKA SAAHIB...MAGAR USSE PEHLE HUM KUCH ELAAN KARNA CHAHEGE..."...everyone became curious so as to what the shenshah wanted to announce...Jodha had no interest as she was struggling within herself ...Jalal continued)

Jalal:- (in a pleasant tone) JAISA KE AAP SABHI KO MALOOM HOGA KE AAJ AAPKE SHENSHAH YAANI KE HUMNE APNI ZINDAGI KA PEHLA HOLI KA JASHAN MANAYA AUR HUME YE KEHTE HUE BEHAD KHUSHI HO RAHI HAI...KE WAKAI RANGO KE IS TYOHAR NE HUME JO KHUSHI BAKHSI HAI...AAJ TAK ZINDAGI ME KABHI MEHSUS NAHI KI HUMNE...AAJ SACHMUCH HUMARI ZINDAGI KA EK BAHUT HI KHAAS DIN THA...HALAAKI YE TYOHAR HUMARE MAZHAB SE ITTEFAAK NAHI RAKHTA LEKIN PHIR BHI HUM KAHEGE...KE ISE APNE DOSTO...RISHTEDARO...AUR BEGUM KE SAATH (emphasizing...looking at Jodha)...MANAKER HUMARE DIL KO BEHAD SUKOON MILA...ISLIYE HUM AAJ IS TAKHAT SE YE ELAAN KARTE HAI...KE AGLE SAAL SE YE TYOHAR HAR SAAL ISI UMANG AUR JOSHOKHAROSH KE SAATH MEHEL AUR SALTANAT DONO ME MANAYA JAYEGA...AUR HOLI KE DIN SABHI HINDU MULAZIMO AUR BAANDHIYO KO KAAM SE CHUTTI BHI DI JAYEGI...AUR JO BHI MUSLIM YA MUGUL IS JASHAN ME SHAAMIL HONA CHAHE US PER BHI KOI PAABANDI NAHI LAGAYI JAYEGI...HUME SABKE JAZBAATO KI KADAR HAI...ISLIYE...JO BHI IS JASHAN KA HISSA NA BANNA CHAHE...UNHE BHI PURI AAZADI HOGI...HUME UMMID HAI KE IS FAISLE SE KISI KE JAZBAATO KO KOI THES NAHI PAHUCHI HOGI...HUKM KI TAAMIL HO...

(Entire court was very happy with shenshah's impartial announcement...apart from a few jealous faces as they knew the reason behind this announcement...Maham and Rukku fumed in anger and frowned at Jodha...a few maulvies too raised their brows on the shenshah due to the importance being given to this Hindu festival...but couldn't dare to raise any question against this as his announcement was really wise...he had not forced anyone to celebrate the festival and had taken care of everyone's emotions too... While most of the royal present their appreciated shenshah's decision and clapped in approval...Jodha was speechless at this announcement...of course she knew that he had taken this decision for her happiness as he was continuously looking at her with corner of his eyes while announcing...her happiness couldn't be expressed in words...she thought that he was just joking while talking about the announcement part...but no...he made her day so special today..with the morning event surprise first and now this...her eyes got filled with tears of joy...Jalal was getting so anxious to know about Jodha's reaction on this but her veil was preventing him to observe her expressions...he slowly signaled Salima to remove her dupatta a bit with eyes expression...Salima understood his indication immediately and pulled Jodha's pallu from behind thus causing her dupatta to come back on her forehead...only to find a teary eyed Jodha staring at Jalal...but as she noticed her face uncovered.. She quickly wiped her tears and glared at Salima with surprise)

HEY VIJI...

THANKU SO MUCH FOR COMMENTING...

AND YES CRITICS ARE ALWAYS WELCOME DEAR...😃

NOW COMING TO YOUR POINT...

FIRST OF ALL YAAR I NEVER WATCHED BALH APART FROM ONCE OR TWICE...SO I REALLY DUNNO WHICH SCENE U ARE TALKING ABOUT...

BUT YES THIS CONCEPT OF BHAANG AND AFTER THAT HERO TEASING HEROINE IS USED IN SO MANY MOVIES AND SHOWS...

SO YES I TOOK UP THE CONCEPT FROM THE SHOWS...LIKE DMG AND BEINTEHAAN...

BUT YET I HAVE TRIED TO PRESENT IT MY WAY...

BECAUSE AT THE END OF THE DAY ITS THE WAY OF PRESENTING THAT MAKES A DIFFERENCE...SO I HAVENT COPIED THE SCENES FULLY...

JUST USED CONCEPTS...AS U HAVE TO TAKE UP IDEAS FROM SOMEWHERE...

I LIKED IT SO THOUGHT OF IMAGINING IT ON AKDHA...

THANKS FOR UR PRECIOUS REVIEW...

STAY TUNED😃

thanx 4 D PM buddy