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Posted: 11 years ago

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It was commendable😳...cant describe it in words i loved it to d core👏..thnks for such a beautiful update dear😊

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shahbhavini

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Posted: 11 years ago

#262

Guess what !!!! I am all blushing... I am in the office and read last part again😳... Can't write more...but this is the best ROMANTIC and PASSIONATE sr I have ever read... I can't say in the word... You have started with amazing... Jodha is staring at the moon...vow so i felt cool breeze and sleeping and looking at the stars and moon... I have goosebumps... and first romantic and sensual..moment of her life... I imagine jodha without chuni😲 😆 when she walked away from him... then my heart cried with entire conversation... Jalal's pain you have really nailed it down... and Jodha's response ne us pe char chand laga diya... I had happy tears... really touching... I loved the part Rain... Rain and Passion always walks together... and the way Jodha welcome first rain of the season... I smell the smell of the first rain... amazing writing... then romantic couple walked towards their mission of Salim... I loved that dialougue... Jalal se jyada smart koi ho hi nahi sakta... Usne me Jo ko apni bato me fasa diya... awww U R master in writing... I bow down to your writing... Pehle rain than Romance in tub...☺️ mene office me yeh kyu pada😆 yaar isko tune itna sensual passionate and romantic bana diya hai... I have no words for it... I will write more and more for this update... Yaar I am in different world... Kya update hai... Begum E Romance... love u sweetu🤗