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alinakhan

@RupRavfever

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Posted: 11 years ago

#1031

di update it naw plzzz

i can't waitt foh longgg 😳

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alinakhan

@RupRavfever

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Posted: 11 years ago

#1032

diii new thread link plzzz 😉😛

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alinakhan

@RupRavfever

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Posted: 11 years ago

#1033

di where r u 😳

missing u 😭

aap WA per b ni dikhrey ho ajkal

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alinakhan

@RupRavfever

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Posted: 11 years ago

#1034

update dedo wrrrnaaa 😆😳

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aasiya49

@aasiya49

Explorer

Posted: 11 years ago

#1035

Bhavu di chalo update plzz 🤗

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Pallavvi

@Pallavvi

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+ 4

Posted: 11 years ago

#1036

OH MY GOD...OH MY GOD...😲😲😲

I dun have enough words to describe what a masterstroke this update was...👏⭐️

bhavu..nannu...tum dono bahut galat kar rahi ho...😡

mere ander ke devdaas ko mat jagao...😉

vrna rula rula ke mar dalugi tum logo ko...😆

oh god...shuru se shuru karti hu...ruko words dhund lu🤔 pehle...ahem ahem...😆

i will highlight all the parts i loved...though then i have to copy paste whole update lekin phir try marti hu...😆😛

1) Jalal's inner talk...

he standing in front of mirror... getting ready...he talking to himself...When Jodha ate Khichdi everyday just because I was eating that... then I will keep fast too... I will not eat until she eats food... Again his mind filled with her thoughts... and his eyes filled with her grief... His heart was dying inside, he recall her eyes with full of sorrow but immense love for him... They both tried to act normal in last six days and but both of them knew it was not normal... they both were enjoying each other's nearness but there was a feeling of big stones on their heart... Jalal heart was filled with guilt... He knew he had hurt her to extreme and she was fulfilling her duty...he also knew she can't see sorrow in his eyes... he hides his own pain in front of her so she doesn't feel sad... They both are in immense pain and love for each other... Jalal tried comforting her with his jokes... they both were acting with each other to comfort each other... but their eyes talk without saying a words... Jalal was longing to see spark in her eyes ... her sorrowful eyes was killing him inside... It was impossible for him to hide his pain...

then the shayri...oh go...so perfect...👏⭐️👏

AAJ KAL...

aansuo ke aane ki aahat nahi hoti, dil ke tutne ki awaz nahi hoti;

JI RAHE HAI HAR PAL MAR MAR KE

hota agar khuda ko dard ka ehsaas, to use dard dene ki aadat nahi hoti

2) dil ke aramaan aansuon men bah gaye

ham vafaa kar ke bhi tanaha rah gaye

dil ke aramaan aansuon men bah gaye

His heart unexpectedly skipped a beat... His entire body filled with shiver... He knew she has not forgiven him but he had not seen her inner chaos yet... every word of her song pouring slowly acid in his heart...Her peaceful melodious voice was giving immense ache today...

zindagi ek pyaas ban kar rah gai

pyaar ke kisse adhoore rah gaye

ham vafaa kar ke bhi tanaha rah gaye

dil ke aramaan aansuon men bah gaye

His eyes started sparkle with her tears... every word was giving him feeling of choking... His tears and voice stuck inside his throat...

shaayad un ka aakhiri ho yeh sitam

har sitam, yeh soch kar ham seh gaye

ham vafaa kar ke bhi tanaha rah gaye

dil ke aramaan aansuon men bah gaye

As soon as he heard... Aakhri ho yeh sitam... His entire figure got numbed... It was unbearable for him to hear more...but he couldn't move a step further, he felt some unseen power had tied his body...

khud ko bhi hamane mita daala magar

faasle jo daramiyaan the rah gaye

ham vafaa kar ke bhi tanaha rah gaye

dil ke aramaan aansuon men bah gaye

Jalal finally lost all of his energy... he knuckled his knees down and sat there on the floor... looking at the sky with tears in his eyes... Her unrevealed pain he felted in her every words... He lifted his eyes and hands up towards sky for prayer and said... Ya khuda...use shukun baksh...us par rehem kar... us ke sare dard muje de de...mere gunaho ki saja use mat de...

sobbing huhmm hmm hmm ...she cried out loud ... after many days discussion with Reva open Jodha's wounds again...

the line u underlined...my heart crashed into small pieces like jalal...😭😭so perfect words to describe her state of mind ...bravo yaar...👏⭐️

3) thoug i really loved the whole above part...but higlighting this dialogue as it really stole my heart...

Seeing her sparking eyes... he smirk a little...and looked at her with little fear in his eyes... and said: Kyu Jodha begum, vrat rakhna aapki jagir hai... hum kyu nahi rakh sakte... Aur apne kyu vrat rakha... Jab aap hamari lambi umar ke liye vrat rakh sakti hai to hum kyu nahi... Hum bhi aapki salamti ke liye vrat rakha hai... Aur haa ... Hum aapke bina jina nahi chahte... Yadi apki prathna se humari zindgi appse lambi hui to?... Hum ek pal bhi aapke bagar jina nahi...

hey bhavu...i just realized that i m copy pasting whole update here...heehhe...sorry...😆😆

so in one word ...Speachless...you made me with ur talent...⭐️

how do u think so perfect scenes with so perfect dialogues and emotions...👏⭐️👍🏼

arhh...i m jealous...😵hehe...joking yaar...😆

mai bhi terai fan hu...but no 1 nahi keh sakti😒 kyuki u have a huge fan following...😆😉

but i really love u so much yaar...u are a superb writer...with amazing story telling skills...👏⭐️👏

i m proud of u my jaan...love u so much for this masterpiece story...👏⭐️

the depth of emotions and feelings...😳

the characterization...the little things...like jalal's anger...jodha's silent eyes...

with their love story full of ups and downs yet at the end of the day...they are each others possession...i love each and everything about this story...👏⭐️🤗

my most most most fav story...that will always remain in my heart untill i m alive...😃😳

update soon 😆

Edited by Pallavvi - 11 years ago

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shahbhavini

@shahbhavini

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+ 5

Posted: 11 years ago

#1037

Check out Thread 3 here..

~ SS ~Is it Hate OR Love ~ Thread 3

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shahbhavini

@shahbhavini

Rocker

+ 5

Posted: 11 years ago

#1038

ALINA, NANU, RIMA, AASHI, SWATI, TANI, SAMY, MANISHA, RAMYA, DEEPIKA, ALKA, Aap sab Muje rula rahe ho... happy tears... HAPPY HOLI... TUM LOGO NE MERE DIL KO RANGIN KAR DIYA LOVE U SO MUCH 🤗

Edited by shahbhavini - 11 years ago

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Tahniat Ahmad

@Sexylicious.

Inactive

+ 4

Posted: 11 years ago

#1039

Originally posted by: shahbhavini
ALINA, NANU, RIMA, AASHI, SWATI, TANI, SAMY, MANISHA, RAMYA, DEEPIKA, ALKA, Aap sab Muje rula rahe ho... happy tears... HAPPY HOLI... TUM LOGO NE MERE DIL KO RANGIN KAR DIYA LOVE U SO MUCH 🤗

aaiye gale lag jaiye 🤗