Is it Hate OR Love Chater 28 Page 137 updated on March 15th Thread 2 - Page 105

Originally posted by: pranavvikas

What an update dear loved it to the core
Really fabulous work

Originally posted by: ms.dhingra

di di di...u r truly amazing writer😃...love u so much for writing ds amazing chapter...

Swati Sorry Yaar for late response...I am so happy u love this chapter😃 so sweet

omg i cant tell u dt how much i luvd ds chapter, sachiii...u r d only writer who can emote thr expression vry well...whenever i read ur update i fell in love with u more than before...

Yaar tu muje rulane wali hai kya... Pata nahi kabhi kabhi jyada senti ho jata hai... iss baar bhi kuch yahi panga tha...😃

hyeee jalal's crying scene nd dt lake scene is beautifully written..while reading thr condition i ws like ds 😭. 😭. 😭. 😭...u alwaya make me cry.

Poor Jallu baby cried...Mene Jallu ko achi tarah rulaya😆... me tuje har bar rulati hu😆

after dt thr convo nd his confession of AHANKAAR...aahhh only nd only u can thr feelings like ds.

Aww U r So sweet My Jaan... Only me😆 AHNKAR AND ME😆😆

nd when he said i want to spend one night with u...i ws like awww how swt bt sdnly when he said i will nt touch u, again i ws like 😭...

Tu kyu ro rahi hai... teri ummido pe pani fir gaya🤣

nd DEK scene ws beyond any word...whr he humilated her he must be apolizised thr only nd he did it😃...

Yap U right... DWK scene indeed was needed... He insulted her their the most... So he needed to apologies in front of people their... 😃

his guilt, his confession, his love is so pure like jodha bt only his anger create problem bt its ok we shld accept our partner with his/her strength nd weekness.

Sachi me U R right... Soulmet ka matlab thodi na hai ki... other feeling chali jayegi... Jodha dhire dhire usko gussa control karna sikha legi😳

nd m really sry for late cmnt...actually m trying to read it frm y'dy bt whenever i sat thr ws one prsn for creating disturbence😆 infact i wrote cmnt 2-3 times bt bcz of arrival of guests again nd again i had to minimise page immediately so couldn't post

Aww... I know sweety ... U love my story... Kabhi tu busy hot to ek line me...di I am busy but chapter I loved it... or say... Me jute marne bad me aaungi...😃 Don't worry... U know I love U Sweetu..😃

Originally posted by: lovergirlalina

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unres 😛😃

Subhan Allah 😃😊 bahut khoob 👏... speechless , speechless n speechless.. 😳😳

ALINA MY LOVE U KNOW THAT I ALAWYS READ YOUR COMMENT FEW TIMES... U read every single line of my chapter ...and your comment on every emotion... u are amazing... love u so much... Tu inte dil se comment likhti hai... and always make me feel proud of my self... Thank u so much... vese dosti me thank u shank u hota nahi... par chal mene socha ek baar bol hi deti hu..

what a Ravishing update.. ⭐️ aww di u made me dumbstruck.. 😳😳 it was soo beautiful... 👏👏👏 loved it.. ❤️❤️ how did u write dis jaan & d song was one ov my old fav song 🥳 ... old is GOLD 😃😉... totally loved it.. 🤗 🤗

YAAR ME NA OLD SONG KI BADI FAN HU... AESA NAHI MUJE NAYE SONG PASAND NAHI... PAR PURANE SONG KI BAAT HI KUCH AUR HAI...I JUST LOVE THEM 🤗 I AM SO SURPRISE AND HAPPY THAT U ALSO LIKE OLD SONG... 😃

coming to d update evil facez ruqMa though I hate dem 2 d core m pissed with dis 2 cheap ladies..😡😡 but here I liked it how ruq was throwing her stuffs 😛 n whn MA came & hit by d vase made me 🤣 .. it was too funny.. 😆😆 MA is bhadkaing ruq against jo.. but whateva dey planned dey'l neva succeed in der plans😡.. juz make der EXIT asap...😳 so dat our Akdha vl live happily n peacefully.. 😊 bt I knw it takes tym 4 der exit..😛😛

YAAR ME JALD HI KUCH KARTI HU IN DONO KE LIYE

I loved d scene whr jalal is getting ready foh d day n how he remembers jo's words n how he orderd dasi 2 take d food back.. jalal'z inner talk was sooo touchinggg 😳😭 & d lines U've written below was too good.. 👍🏼 👍🏼 👍🏼 AWW JALAL HAR BAR KYU GALTI KARTA HAI RE KALIYA😃

I loved it whr reva came n inform jo abt karvachauth ritual as how he has announce d decision ov celebrating KC 😃😊.. hearing dis jo gawt numbed n surprised as he neva involved in & d way she smiled n said " U hv begin your journey to win my heart" n she felt d happiness.. wow 👏👏👏A

AWWW... SO SWEET

Loved reva-jodha'z talk'z n while reading dis I cried whn Reva askd jo : "Tumhe unhe maaf kar dena chahiye... unhe apni galti ka ehsaas ho chukka hai..." 😳😊

POOR JO actually I will say jis pe bitati hai use hi pata chalta hai

Jodha with depressing face: "Nahi Reva, Hum unko maaf nahi kar sakte... Jab vo krodhit hote hai to sab bhool jate hai... Aur is baar to hume pata bhi nahi hamari galti kya hai... bina galti ke hume saja dene pe utar aye... Humare pran unme baste hai... hum unse beintahaa prem karte hai... par unhone mere swabhiman ko thes pohchai hai... Aur ye hum hargish bardast nahi kar sakte... bhare darbar me iss tarah apman kiya... Finally her tears started flooding out ... with sob she added... hum apne dil se itne majboor kyu hai...unke samne aate hi hum sab bhool jate hai... Shayad hum unko apne swabhiman se bhi jyada prem karte hai..."

But after listening to her reva was helpless 😳 n she too cried with her n d way dey hugged her 2 console her & she left 😳.. jo was in her room & singing with painful heart 🥺

dil ke aramaan aansuon men bah gaye

ham vafaa kar ke bhi tanaha rah gaye

dil ke aramaan aansuon men bah gaye

dis song is 1 ov my fvr8 . so as she was singing n jalal was listening 2 her n he knew he hurt her 2 d xtreme dat evry single word was made him realize his mistake. And whn she sang

shaayad un ka aakhiri ho yeh sitam

dis line made me cry a bit more 😭 n he broke down n ask Almighty Allah 2 give her strength, Bless her n give her Happiness..😊 loved d way he prayed foh her.. 👏 how she cried out loud as her pains & wounds were out unknowingly. 😒 😒 In ja's room how he felt upset , sad n depressed he remembers everything how he treated her last few days n how he insulted her his condition was making him vulnerable. He recalls evrythng how she fast her without food n water n how she made her cooked foh 100 pplz.. n how he ruthless 2wrds her,🤢🤢 recalling all dis he felt shiver in his body n he lost his strength n broke down with loudest cry...😭😭😭 it was damn heart wrenching scene..😭😭😭 di.. how did u write dis so perfectly.. ⭐️ d way U & namy depict d feelings n emotions was commendable. 👏 Take a bow & dis scene gives me immense pain.. 😭😭😭

Awww sweety Love U... Yaar Muje sachi kahu laga ki mene kuch jyada senti likh diya hai... Jab sabki comment padhi to me khush ho gayi... love u Jaan...U R comment gives me strength to writer more love u so much muah muaaah...😊

I liked KC scene whr jo went ja'z room bt he was nt der n in disappointment she felt she'l nt b able 2 meet him.. she tries 2 ensure 1 more tym but fails n she went bk her room 😳😳. loved d way she dressed 😎 n standing in d d balcony waiting foh jalal n moon to come.😛 But moon comes b4 jalal.

I really felt so bad in that scene...poor jo uska first kc and uska hubby nahi...upar se itne pange... poor jo kafi upset thi😃

On d othr hand jalal was blaming n cursing himself foh what he had done n nyt came n he decided to go bk 2 palace.. I loved d way he moved her room instead ov his as she was standing infront ov his painting n strtd talking 2 his painting with folded hands saying her dialogue "hame maaf kar dijye aapke hote hue hum aapki tasvir ko dekh ke hamara vrat todenge...hum nahi chahte aapke haath se hamara vrat toote... hame phirse us pal ki yaad maar dalegi, jab aapne bhari shabha me hamare mooh tak mithai la ke Rukaiya begum ko vo mithai khilai thi...aur Rukaiya begum ki joothi mithai hume khilai thi... us baat ko hum kitna bhi chaye bhool nahi sakte" .. Aaawwhhh what she said it was correct bt it was soo sad n heartwarming.. 😭😭😳 uske kamre me jaane ki uski aadat ban chuki hai... aur Jallu ko pata to chale.. use pata chala usne jo ki kya halat ki hai...

Loved d way jo is looking through a sieve to moon and move back to see his painting but instead she saw him completely broken with tears n Her hand stuck their... Jalal walked closer to see her through sieve... d way dey r gazing @ each othr without any blink. As he feels so hungry n how he control his balance seeing his condition how she yells n ran 2wrds him n d way she caresses him .. loved whole KC scene & der dialogues.. ⭐️ u've written soo brilliantlyyy... juz wow 👏

sacchi me i love to read your comment again and again... thank u sweety

Loved how jalal arranged food outsite as she loves nature n dey were enjoying der dinner n when jalal takes sweet 2 feed jo she recalls DWK moment but her heart won and she ignored that incident...👍🏼 and ate the half piece of the sweet...and Jalal ate the rest haayyee jhoota khaye toh pyaar badhta jo k humko ab next chapter mein milenga 😉😉... They both finished their romantic dinner with gazing each other.. hayyee soo cuutee.. & he realizes she was wearing her wedding outfit d way she was gazing @ her made me blush n I want another SR as she was wearing her wedding dress.. but when she entered in DWK her dress has changed,.. I dnt knw anything I want hottest SR as I asked U earlier 😃😛 .. En m despo waiting foh it.. 😉😃👏

omg hottest SR... ab phir se... me ab kya likhu... lol

I loved d section where jo asked him Shenshah, "aapne kyu vrat rakha"... Jalal move his face and looked at her... with little smile... and said Jab aap "khichdi kha sakti hai to hum khu nahi aap hume vachan dijye aap phirse vrat nahi karenge... Hum aapko pure din bhukhe khuch khaye aur piye bina nahi dekh sakte... sacchi bataiye ga ... aapko bahot taklif pahochi hai na... Jalal smirk at her... Nahi Jodha begum... Aap ke chehre ki ye mushkan vapas lane ke liye ham ek roza (upvas) to kaya puri zindgi roza rakh sakte hai... Hearing this Jodha gets very emotional & how she slide her hand encircling his body and hugs him tight with tears, n how he ask permission to sleep on her lap. Loved d way she was gazing him while massaging his head n hw she abt 2 kiss him. ☺️ hayye sooo lovellyyy...

JANU I LOVE ROMANCE... LOVE THIS PART...

Loved how he askd 4 fohgvness with his folded hands n req her 2 come in DWK once n how he askd her 2 sleep with her nyt n when she askd d reason he sang "TUMHI HO" my fvr8 latest song 🤗 .. it was sooo sweet... 😃👏

AWWW YAAR ME KABSE BLUSH KAR RAHI HU... ITNA BLUSH ME TO MERI BHI SR HO JAYE...LOL😆

Loved DWK section too whr jodha comes n RuqMA soul faces were burning 😆😆whn dey saw jo in..😛 d way jalal askd forgiveness infront ov everyone with his folded hands n his dialogues evrythng. 👏👏👏Wow totally loved it.. ⭐️it was juz mind blowing..👏 wow juz wow his journey strtd 2wds Akbar.. ⭐️ Di U n Namy r d queen in portaying d emotions 👏.. hats off... 👍🏼 👍🏼 Take a bow it was soo beautiful & touching 😭 😭 d way u've written dis MASTERPIECE.. 👏 totally loved it... 😃👍🏼 BRILLIANT CHAPTER 🤗 🤗 🤗

AWWW SO SWEET MY LOVE ... YAAR YOU HAVE MADE ME SPEECHLESS... U READ AND UNDERSTAND EVERY EMOTION I WANT MY READER TO UNDERSTAND... JUST BLESSED THAT YOU READ MY STORY... LOVE U SO MUCH... I LOVE BRILLIANT CHAPTER

Haaye 😎 so finally what I want is coming in nxt chap. 🥳 dii plzz update soon.. 😳😳😃

UPDATE 😲 ABHI TAK SURU BHI NAHI KIYA😃

YAAR TU AESE HI COMMENT LIKHTI RAHE AUR ME AESE HI UPDATE DETI RAHU...😃 🤗🤗🤗🤗

Originally posted by: PrincessNancy

di I knw I hv to comment on this chap.. will do tmrw.. hv read it 3 tyms.. its beyond excellent..

love u di..! srry for delaying my comment..

Originally posted by: shahbhavini

VERY NICE DO UPDATE SOON. IT TAKES A LOT OF COURAGE TO ACCEPT YOU FAULT IN FRONT OF EVERYBODY SPECIALLY IF YOU ARE SHENEHSA-E HIND VERY GOOD UPDATE KEEP IT UP AND PM ME NEXT TIME YOU UPDATE👏

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THIS UPDATE IS DELICATED TO UPDATE GANG... I AM SPEECHLESS... FRIENDS ... CHAPTER 27 WAS ON PAGE 88 AND I AM POSTING CHAPTER ON PAGE 137... I HAVE RECEIVED SO MANY UPDATE REQUEST... I AM SO TOUCHED ...FEEL LIKE CRYING... THANK U FOR UR LOVE FOR ME AND MY STORY... I AM SO SCARED TO PUT NAMES... I DON'T WANT TO FORGET ANYONE...LOVE U ALL... U HAVE NO IDEA... EVERY UPDATE REQUEST BROUGHT SMILE ON MY FACE...LOVE U ALL... YE CHAPTER THODA JYADA SENTI HO GAYA HAI... JUTE YA KOLAPURI CHAAPAL KE LIYE READY HU...HOPE AAPKA PYAAR AESE HI MILTA RAHE😃

Recap: Jalal called one of the Hindu dasi and asked her about Kadva choth... She explained in detail...Karva Chauth is a one day festival when all devoted hindu wives carry out auspicious rituals for wellbeing of their husband. They fast whole day without taking any food or water in order to show their devotion toward their husband and to ensure the long life of their husband... They dress like a bride with fine jewelry and expensive cloths and break their fast after seeing moon and their husband's face. Last ritual is husband feed their wife... Jalal smiled...

Chapter 28

(I have added first time music mp3 ) Please stop it while reading Stop button is located where song is written in Red color ... I love old songs...lot of reader are not familiar with old songs... please let me know... if that link annoys ...in future I will not put mp3 songs...

Rukaiya in her room in dangerous anger ... She picks up stuff started to throws on floor... Her eyes had heated tears... In annoyance she said... phir se chad gaya jaadu us chudail ka...

Maham enter in Rukaiya's room while Rukaiya was throwing stuff... BOOM...BOOM... Glass flower vase on Maham's head... She screem in pain... ahhh... Kya kar rahi hai Rukaiya begum pagal ho gayi hai... (I am so happy mere dil ko kitne dino baad khushi mili)

Rukaiya saw blood on Maham's forehead and calm down with tears and sobs: ha hum pagal ho gaye hai... hum us chudail ko maar dalenge... usne hamare Jalal ko badal diya...

Maham with evil smirk: Kya kaha apne ... Us chudail ko mar dalenge... to der kis bat ki... moka milte hi hum use khatam kar denge...

Rukaiya with shock... Nahi nahi hum yeh nahi kar sakte... ha hum use nafrat karte hai par...hum itna bada gunah ...

Maham with witty evil gaze... Ha aap sach keh rahi hai... aap ye gunah kese kar sakti hai... Shayad aaki takdir me yahi rona likha hai... Muje aaj tak lagta tha aap apni takdir banana valo me se hai... par shayad me galat thi... Aap to Takdir ke naam se rone walo mese hai...

Rukaiya with angry tone; Khabar Maha Manga, AAp bhul rahi hai aap huamri mulazim hai aur aap begume khaas se baat kar rahi hai... Hume rone walo mese nahi hai... hum Rulane walo me se hai... She wiped her tears with malevolence tone...Hum apni takdir khud likenge...

Jalal is in room getting ready for the day... Dasi came and inform him that breakfast his ready and it is served on the table... Jalal looked at towards dining table and looked at the food... He was starving... he came near the food and but didn't ate anything and told dasi take this food back... and do not bring any food today unless request.

Jalal's inner talk...

he standing in front of mirror... getting ready...he talking to himself...When Jodha ate Khichdi everyday just because I was eating that... then I will keep fast too... I will not eat until she eats food... Again his mind filled with her thoughts... and his eyes filled with her grief... His heart was dying inside, he recall her eyes with full of sorrow but immense love for him... They both tried to act normal in last six days and but both of them knew it was not normal... they both were enjoying each other's nearness but there was a feeling of big stones on their heart... Jalal heart was filled with guilt... He knew he had hurt her to extreme and she was fulfilling her duty...he also knew she can't see sorrow in his eyes... he hides his own pain in front of her so she doesn't feel sad... They both are in immense pain and love for each other... Jalal tried comforting her with his jokes... they both were acting with each other to comfort each other... but their eyes talk without saying a words... Jalal was longing to see spark in her eyes ... her sorrowful eyes was killing him inside... It was impossible for him to hide his pain... He never felt this much vulnerable and helpless... His eyes filled with tears... and said to himself ... Hame aaj apne app se grinha ho rahi hai... ham aake kabil nahi ... Kaash hum aapki aakho me vohi chamak vaapas la sake... he wiped his tears and fake smiled at himself in the mirror... His inner voice came out with enormous grief...

AAJ KAL...

aansuo ke aane ki aahat nahi hoti, dil ke tutne ki awaz nahi hoti;

JI RAHE HAI HAR PAL MAR MAR KE

hota agar khuda ko dard ka ehsaas, to use dard dene ki aadat nahi hoti

Reva excitedly ran in Jodha's room... where Jodha has just finished Krishna's pooja... seeing her so happy and cheerful, she asked her with smile...Kya hua Moti... tum itni khush kyu ho... Reva with joyful expressive voice... Jodha tum yakin nahi karogi... iss mehel me Jo pehle kabhi nahi hua wo aaj hua hai... Jodha with curiosity, aesa kya ho gaya... Reva: Savitri mausi aur ganga jiji aaj Rukaiya begum ke paas karva chauth ke liye chutti mangne gayi thi... Har saal ki tarah iss bar bhi... Rukaiya begum ne sab hindu dasi par chillai aur manjoori nahi di... Par us vakat vo Shenshah ke kamre me thi... To Shehshah ne sabko bahar rukne ko kaha... aur thodi der baad bahar aake unhone ghosna ki, Jo Karva chauth manana chahta hai unki chutti manjoor ... AAj pehli baar Shenshah ne harem ke liye koi nirnay liya hai... Ganga Jiji ka yeh pehla karva chauth hai... vo to kushi ke mare ro rahi thi... Sab aashcharya chakit ho gaye the... Rukaiya begum ki sakal dekhne layak thi... unke chehre se hi malum pad raha tha vo shenshah se kafi naaraz aur gussa lag rahi thi... Jodha was amazed to hear this... She was surprise with this change in Jalal... He never got involve in Harem and it's problem and today against Rukaiya begum's wish he allowed Hindu dasi to celebrate Karva Chauth... It was shock for Jodha too...A big pleasant smile came on her face... She said to herself...U have begin your journey to win my heart and her eyes had cheerful in happiness in it...

Reva: Jodha, aaj tumhara bhi pehla Karva chauth hai na...

Jodha with monotonous expression: Ha humne bhi vrat rakha hai... par humne jiske liye vrat rakha hai unko hum nahi batana chate... Vese bhi humare na batane se unko koi fark nahi padne vala... Kash unhe pata hota ...hindu stri ke liye yeh vrat kitna mahhatav purn hota hai... Me jab choti thi tab se masa ko ye vrat karte hue dekha tha... mene mere pehle karva chauth ki kitne sare ummide aur sapne sanjoge the... kher par yahi hamara bhagya hai...

Reva: Jodha tu bura mat manana par hum ek baat puchte hai... Kya Tum ab tak shenshah se naraz ho...

Jodha with dull and sad expression: Reva sach kahu to pata nahi... Unki ankho me jab mere liye prem aur pastava dekhti hu to sari kadvahat door ho jati hai... Aur hame ye bhi pata hai unka dil sirf hamare liye dhadkta hai... vo hame apni zindgi se bhi jyada prem karte hai... par hamara dil iss baar buri tarah toot chukka hai... pata nahi hum kabhi unko maaf kar payenge ya nahi... Unke samip hame santi milta hai aur sath hi hum bechen bhi ho jate hai... Humara prem hame vivash kar deta hai... Humara dil unki udas aankhe nahi dekh sakta aur hamara dimang ne unhe maaf karne ki ijaajat nahi deta... Reva hum apne hi ehsaas me uljeh huve hai... Par hamne hamara kartavay nibhaya hai... ab vo bilkul thik ho gaye hai... ab hum unke se door hi rahenge...

Reva: Tumhe unhe maaf kar dena chahiye... unhe apni galti ka ehsaas ho chukka hai...

Jodha with depressing face: Nahi Reva, Hum unko maaf nahi kar sakte... Jab vo krodhit hote hai to sab bhool jate hai... Aur is baar to hume pata bhi nahi hamari galti kya hai... bina galti ke hume saja dene pe utar aye... Humare pran unme baste hai... hum unse beintahaa prem karte hai... par unhone mere swabhiman ko thes pohchai hai... Aur ye hum hargish bardast nahi kar sakte... bhare darbar me iss tarah apman kiya... Finally her tears started flooding out ... with sob she added... hum apne dil se itne majboor kyu hai...unke samne aate hi hum sab bhool jate hai... Shayad hum unko apne swabhiman se bhi jyada prem karte hai...

Reva also felt weak seeing her pain and love for him... Her eyes also filled with tears and said... She hugged her and said... Jodha ... tumhare prem ko samjana hamare bas ki baat nahi... she said to herself... hey bhole nath meri Jodha ko santi de de...

Jodha is in her room alone... standing by zarokha... wind is blowing her hair slowly with her tears... and painful heart started to sing a song...hmhhhnmmm

Jalal is going for exercise as per his routing...passing through Jodha's room and saw her standing by zarokha...he stop there for a second...and again started to walk...and heard her Melodious voice with extreme pain she started song...

(Please read these lyrics it shows Jodha's state of mind... Best sad song...)

dil ke aramaan aansuon men bah gaye

ham vafaa kar ke bhi tanaha rah gaye

dil ke aramaan aansuon men bah gaye

His heart unexpectedly skipped a beat... His entire body filled with shiver... He knew she has not forgiven him but he had not seen her inner chaos yet... every word of her song pouring slowly acid in his heart...Her peaceful melodious voice was giving immense ache today...

zindagi ek pyaas ban kar rah gai

pyaar ke kisse adhoore rah gaye

ham vafaa kar ke bhi tanaha rah gaye

dil ke aramaan aansuon men bah gaye

His eyes started sparkle with her tears... every word was giving him feeling of choking... His tears and voice stuck inside his throat...

shaayad un ka aakhiri ho yeh sitam

har sitam, yeh soch kar ham seh gaye

ham vafaa kar ke bhi tanaha rah gaye

dil ke aramaan aansuon men bah gaye

As soon as he heard... Aakhri ho yeh sitam... His entire figure got numbed... It was unbearable for him to hear more...but he couldn't move a step further, he felt some unseen power had tied his body...

khud ko bhi hamane mita daala magar

faasle jo daramiyaan the rah gaye

ham vafaa kar ke bhi tanaha rah gaye

dil ke aramaan aansuon men bah gaye

Jalal finally lost all of his energy... he knuckled his knees down and sat there on the floor... looking at the sky with tears in his eyes... Her unrevealed pain he felted in her every words... He lifted his eyes and hands up towards sky for prayer and said... Ya khuda...use shukun baksh...us par rehem kar... us ke sare dard muje de de...mere gunaho ki saja use mat de...

sobbing huhmm hmm hmm ...she cried out loud ... after many days discussion with Reva open Jodha's wounds again...

Slowly he gathered himself back and walk back to his room...

He was badly wounded inside and was feeling very depressed, so he decided to go by the lake to get some inner peace... Her sorrow completely shattered him in pieces...He was extremely sad ...sitting alone by the lake and throwing stones in the lake...On top of it, he was fasting and He had never fast in his life before... habit of eating every two hours was making him hungrier... His determination was strong but he realizes how difficult is to fast... He recall the incident when Jodha fast for 3 days without any water and food just because she wanted to punish god by punishing herself... her divine innocent face came in front his eyes... on the third day of her fast, he made her cooked for hundred people...recalling this incident he evoked his own monstrous act came in front of his eyes when he tried to force on her to lust her beauty...thinking of his horrible and cruel act send shiver in his entire body... He was moved on long back but today his entire hideous evil act coming in front his eyes... How wickedly he married her forcefully... How he had insulted her many time in front of people to hide his own emotions and feeling for her... Finally his own words echoed loudly with pounding on his heart crashing through his ears... Who**re. this word completely suffocate him him... in remorse and shame his body was trembling with sweat...His throat choked with his guilt and moan...He screamed out so loud entire lake tremble with his roaring resonance with his scream...He ran and ran until he was out of breath... finally when his all energy vanished, he broken down with loud cry... His eyes finally brought tears ... Entire jungle was crying to see his vulnerable condition...Jalal's heart and mind both were captive by her pain... he was feeling weaker and weaker emotionally and physically due to stress and starve...

As per her routine Jodha went to Jalal's room... but he was not their... Dasi inform her that Shenshah has left message for you Jodha Begum, that he is going out for some political work... he won't be back till night... Jodha with disappointment... Aaj kya Karva Chauth ke din me unse ek bhi baar nahi mil nahi paungi... with sad expression she went back to her room... She is in the same helpless condition like Jalal...

Jodha finally ensure one more time if he is come back... she wanted to see him before final ritual of her KC... Disappointed heart she went back to her room... She got dressed like a newlywed dulhan with sola sringar... She remembers her day of marriage... She had no interest in getting dressed for her own marriage and today again she was feeling same ... Her expert hair designer and dresser... Reva... Dress her up... With all sringar, red Ghagra choli... and finally she looked herself in the mirror and filled her maang with sindoor ...unwanted tears rolled out again from her delicate face... even in dull and gloomy face...she looked better than any poet's dream and imagination... She had fake smile on her face ... Jodha is standing in balcony waiting for moon to come and unknowingly Jalal to come... Finally moon came before Jalal comes...

Entire day Jalal was cursing himself for what he had done... His empty stomach and heart were filled with hatred and guilty for himself...hours passed in his guiltiness... He just wanted to see her sparkle innocent mischievous two eyes... He wished many time to god to give her peace and happiness... Day passed, it was almost night time... and finally he decided to go back to palace...

Hungry and depressed Jalal is back in the palace... Robotically his walking towards her room instead of his... Jodha is standing near his painting and looking at him and looked back at moon...she folded her hand pray for Jalal for his long life and said loudly hame maaf kar dijye aapke hote hue hum aapki tasvir ko dekh ke hamara vrat todenge...hum nahi chahte aapke haath se hamara vrat toote... hame phirse us pal ki yaad maar dalegi, jab aapne bhari shabha me hamare mooh tak mithai la ke Rukaiya begum ko vo mithai khilai thi...aur Rukaiya begum ki joothi mithai hume khilai thi... us baat ko hum kitna bhi chaye bhool nahi sakte... Jalal is standing by the door hearing her conversation...gave him shiver in entire body... his weak body tremble in pain...finally Jodha is looking through a sieve to moon and move back to see Jalal's painting but instead she saw him completely broken with tears... Her hand stuck their... Jalal walked closer to see her to see her through sieve... They both saw each other without a blink... Jodha's sad and dull face filled with Glow... Jalal is still in the shock ... he is stuck their looking at her... Entire day depression and empty stomach... and Jodha's declaration brought enormous stress on his brain...

His vision got fuzzy... everything was moving around him... He tried balancing himself... to control his balance he move towards sofa and sat on it... he barely made it their and knock out for few seconds ... Seeing this Jodha yell ...Jalal... she ran to him... Jalal opened his eyes and said I am fine...I am just felt little dizzy... Jodha saw in his sorrowful eyes... and knew how his entire day... Jodha got up swiftly to get glass of water and tried to feed him... he stopped her hand forcefully... Seeing his condition and eyes expression... She asked him with tears... Kya aapne bhi vrat kiya hai... Jalal was surprised because no one knew that he is fasting...He didn't reply to... She asked him firmly... Hume bataiye kya apne vrat rakha hai... Jalal again didn't answer...Now Jodha didn't need an answer... she knew he is fasting... seeing his condition she forgot her sorrow...and With anger she yelled at him... kyu rakha vrat aapne... Kisne bola tha... aap har do ghante me aapko chote bacho ki tarah bhukh lagti hai... aur poora din kuch nahi khaya... She asked him again with anger... kya aapne pani bhi nahi piya...He is just looking at her fiercely and caring face... He didn't respond again... which annoyed her more... now she almost yelling at him... ab chup mat rahiye... bataiye hame... kya aapne pani bhi nahi piya...

Seeing her sparking eyes... he smirk a little...and looked at her with little fear in his eyes... and said: Kyu Jodha begum, vrat rakhna aapki jagir hai... hum kyu nahi rakh sakte... Aur apne kyu vrat rakha... Jab aap hamari lambi umar ke liye vrat rakh sakti hai to hum kyu nahi... Hum bhi aapki salamti ke liye vrat rakha hai... Aur haa ... Hum aapke bina jina nahi chahte... Yadi apki prathna se humari zindgi appse lambi hui to?... Hum ek pal bhi aapke bagar jina nahi...

the way Jalal said all this innocently, Jodha's anger and pain convert in to laugh... suddenly her tears turn into giggle... aap bhi Shenshah... sachi me ... Chaliye ab vrat kholne ka samay ho gaya hai... Her face and her eye suddenly started to shine and glow... that brought smile on Jalal's face... finally this sad pair got up to finish final ritual of Karva Chauth... Jodha gave her hand to Jalal to support him...

Jodha with amusing smile took Aarti plate and sieve... Inside she was shaken with his divine care for her...Her heart was smiling out loud with giggle ... it was beating so fast...as if tried to catchup her skipped beats... Her entire face suddenly filled with divine glow... Her mind and heart was thinking only one think... he fast for me...just a thought filled blush on her cheek... Her eyes had only love for him... feeling of treachery was completely gone...She tried to hide her emotions... but her peaceful eyes was telling entire story of her inside feeling to Jalal without Jodha's permission... They both lost in each other's eyes...walk out together in balcony... It was pleasant breezy beautiful night... entire day Jalal spend by the lake but he didn't felt this peace of nature...but suddenly his entire body shiver in this peaceful wind... he felt cheerful inside...suddenly his died heart started to breathe again...Just a little smile on her face gave him immense harmony...

They both looked at the moon which was playing hide and seek with clouds... Jodha took sieve and looked at moon with content feeling... her heart was saying thank u to god for sending him here... she again prayed for his well and long life...She moved sieve and looked at Jalal through sieve... both eyes were sparkling like star with eternal love for each other... After many days they both were feeling complete again together... After sieve ritual... she did arti and bend down to touch his feet ...Jalal put his hand on her head also bend a little hold her from her shoulders... they both are looking at each other without a blink... Jalal forward his hand with glass of water ... and with content feeling she break her fast with water... Then she forward her hand and he drank water... Jalal grab her hand finish entire glass of water...seeing that Jodha giggled a little... and asked him... so kesa laga upvas karna... Jalal with impatient... pehle hum kuch khana chahenge varna hum abhi gir padenge... Jodha giggle with seeing him so much hungry... Reva arranged dinner for the couple... Jalal ordered to have dinner outside... he knew Jodha loves nature... In few minute later their dim candle light dinner was ready and served in balcony... Open sky with dark night...with peek a boo moon...giggling cloud... glorious moon light... and cool wintery wind with complete silence was making their dinner dreamy... After all emotional shocks... Jalal just realize that Jodha was wearing her wedding outfit... her glowing face...doe like innocent sparkling eyes... was shining in dim candle.. Her rosy cheeks were blooming in moon light... She looked like eternal beauty... both of them were gazing at each other... finally Jalal picked up a sweet from the plate and forward his hand to feed her... She recall DWK incident... but her heart won and ignored that incident... and ate the half piece of the sweet...and Jalal ate the rest... They both finished their romantic dinner with gazing each other... Throughout dinner there was not a single word communication... There was no need for it...

Kaun Kehta Hai Khamoshiya Kamosh Hoti Hai,

Khamoshiyon Ko Khamoshi Se Suno...

Kabhi-Kabhi Khamoshiyaan Wo Keh Deti Hai,

Jinki Aapko Lafzo Mein Talash Hoti Hai...

After dinner Jalal grab Jodha's hand and pull her towards swing... Entire swing was filled with Ratrani plant... wind was spreading beautiful aroma of the plant... they both sat next to each other on the swing...

A minute later Jalal glide his left hand on back of the swing support and wrap around his hand on her shoulder... few seconds a later Jodha put her head resting on his chest... they both were watching moon's hide and seek game... Jodha broke their silence... Shenshah, aapne kyu vrat rakha... Jalal move his face and looked at her... with little smile... and said Jab aap khichdi kha sakti hai to hum khu nahi... Jodha with little annoyance; aap hume vachan dijye aap phirse vrat nahi karenge... Hum aapko pure din bhukhe khuch khaye aur piye bina nahi dekh sakte... sacchi bataiye ga ... aapko bahot taklif pahochi hai na... Jalal smirk at her... Nahi Jodha begum... Aap ke chehre ki ye mushkan vapas lane ke liye ham ek roza (upvas) to kaya puri zindgi roza rakh sakte hai... Hearing this Jodha gets very emotional and slide her hand encircling his body and hugs him tight with tears... and said... Jalal aap aese kyu hai... aap hume itna dard dete hai...khoon ke aasso se rulate hai... aur baad me usse dugna prem karte hai... Humne aapse pehle bhi kaha tha... hume aapke gusse se dar lagta hai... Kahi aapka gussa hume apse door na kar de... Jalal moved his entire body towards her and embrace her in his powerful grip and said with guilty voice... hume maaf kar dijye... Hum aapke bina ek pal bhi Ji nahi sakte... Hum aapse vada karte hai, hum apne gusse ko kabu me karne ki poori kosish karenge... He breaks their peaceful hug... and said Jodha begum hum bahot thak gaye hai... thodi der aapke daaman me sar rakh ke sona chahte hai... Aapke daman me jo sukun milta hai wo duniya ke kisi kone nahi... Hum sari zindgi bas yuhi aapke pehlu me gujarna chahte hai...

Jodha with smiled gave him permission to sleep on her lap... She is caressing and massaging his hair... He closes his eyes and enjoying her touch with romantic smirk on his face... He knew she is gazing him without a blink... and she is about to kiss him but he knew that she will not... Jalal with smirk... Jodha begum kya soch rahi hai... Aapko hume pyaar karne ke liye ijaajaz ki jarurat nahi hai... Jodha pulled herself back with shock how he reads her mind and thoughts... indeed she was unknowingly above to kiss him... She said with little annoyed tone... Pata hena aapko... apko hamare karib aane ke liye humara dil jitna hai... Jalal with smirk... Jodha... Hume aaka saath aur ye mushkurahat chahiye... vohi kafi hai zindgi jine ke liye... Aur aap hamare jism ko najdik aane pe ikhtihar rakh sakti hai... par hamari rooh to kab se ek ho chuki hai... Jodha smirk with his witty answer... Jalal with close eyes... ab aap mukurana baad me pehle hamare sar me malish kijye... Jodha with annoyance... Apke paas kitni aankhe hai...band aankho se aap ko kese pata chal jata hai hum kya karte hai.. Jalal again smirk and said...hume aapki zehen me kya chal raha hai use dekhne ke liye aakho ki koi jarurat nahi hai... aapki rooh chupke se hume sab bata deti hai... Jodha blushed and said... aapse bato me hum nahi jit sakte...and started to massage his head...

Jodha with serious tone; Shenshah, hum aapse ek sawal puchna chahte hai... Jalal swiftly open his eyes to see in her expression... got little scared he abrubltly got up from her lap...and looked in her eyes for a few seconds... said... Jodha begum hum aapse darkhvast karte hai ki ye sawal humse na puche... Hum aapse juth bol sakte nahi... aur sach sunke aapke dil ko thes pauchegi...Hum aapki aankho me narazgi phir se dekh nahi payenge...

Jodha with heartrending tone: Shenshah, hum iss prashna ka uttar jane bina aapne dil ko mana nahi sakte...Aur humara ye pura adhikar banta hai janne ka... hamre konse apradh ki itnki adhiktam saja mili hai...

Jalal cupped her face and said... Jodha begum, hum uska jawab ek his sabt me dena chahte hai... AHANKAAR... his eyes filled with shame and guilt...he looked down with and folds his hand again...

Jodha was shocked to hear this ... but his remorse and guilt was so much ...luckily this didn't impacted Jodha to extreme

Jodha with sad expression: She hold his both folded hand, hum appko aese nahi dekh sakte... Shyad humare hi prem me hi koi kami reh gayi hai... jo aap ko laga hum aapko nicha dikhane ke liye ... She stopped... her throat again filled with pain...

Finally she said Shenshah, hum aapse aur ek anumati chahte hai...

He looked up but couldn't understand her eyes expression: He asked ha kahiye Jodha begum...

Jodha with edgy tone: Kanah ki krupa se aapka swasthya ab puri se tarah se thik ho chukka hai... ab aapko hamari sahaytaki koi avshyakta nahi hai... Jalal looked at her with deep sorrowful expression... his heart broke with her request...Jodha continue to shock him once again... Aur ek anurodh hai... ke Hume Ab se DWK me aana nahi chahte...

Jalal with guilt... I have no right to say yes or no to anything... as a husband ... as a lover ... I am completely failed... but I am requesting you if you can come just for tomorrow to DWK... I will be very much grateful to you... and he added with tears in his eyes... Can I sleep with you tonight in your room... Jalal's guilt and remorse was melting her heart... she also wished he stays with him tonight... she slowly wiped his tears and asked him with mischievous smirk... Aapko hamare paas... kyu ... and gazed at him adoringly...Jalal with smile sach me aap janana chahti hai to suniye...

Tum Hi Ho (Ashiqui 2)

Hum tere bin ab reh nahi sakte

Tere bina kya wajood mera

Tujhse juda gar ho jaayenge

Toh khud se hi ho jaayenge judaa

Kyunki tum hi ho, Ab tum hi ho

Zindagi ab tum hi ho, Chain bhi, mera dard bhi

Meri aashiqui ab tum hi ho

After this romantic confession... he said... Jodha begum, hum aapse vada karte hai...hum doori banaye rakhege... par aapke karib hone ka ehsaas hame jinda rakhega... Jodha was so touced by his words... she was blushing inside...and little outside...She said Shenshah, Kafi rat ho chuki hai... Chale sone...

Jalal was feeling much relived after confessing to her for his cruel behavior and his ego... Finally after long emotional day they both of them sleep peacefully entire night...

Next day In Diwane Khaas

Enitre court was filled with many officer and administrator and royal nav ratna's , priest, maulvis, Begume Khaas Rukaiya... Vajire Aliya Maham Manga, Subedar Shrifuddin, Adham Khan, Mariam Makani... Hamind Banoo...

Announcement made for Jalal ... His eyes stuck at next to his seat to see Malika E hindustan... which was empty... His face filled with sorrow... he sat on the throne... He sat their...but his mind blanked out... He was completely lost in her thought, why she didn't came even after my request ...that thought made him restless... and then he heard an announcement for arrival of Malika e Hindustan... to hear this he lost his patience in excitement and happiness... he got up from throne and walked toward her... Seeing that act entire court was surprise... He looked so desperate for her arrival... Jodha was also stunned with his behavior... Rukaiya and Maham both were fuming inside... first they thought after this horrible insult from Jalal ...Jodha will never come back to DWK and second Jalal gave them tremor the way he greeted her... Jalal realize seeing everyone's shocked expression what he had done in his excitement... but still with his proud and smile on his face, He hold her hand and walked with her and they both sat next to each other on throne.

Jalal with commanding tone announce...What I am going to do today... this palace has never seen in his history... In front of entire court... I am going apologies for my grave mistake I have made... All of you probably remember few days ago Malika E hidustan Begum Jodha took decision on her first case from her heart, against Mughal laws... Her decision was very wise with her long vision for the family... She make all understand rules are made for our convinces and we should mold it and bend it as per requirement ... she also gave example... it is not fair to cut a hand of a five year old child... In hunger if he still bread...to cut his hand will be cruel punishment... Her sentence extremely hurt my ego... my proud of being great emperor...her sentence pound on my heart... I felt insulted... I felt she tried to prove me wrong... I felt she is stepping on my toe... I was very upset at her... I have insulted her in front of court...but this is my first step towards humanity... I am asking for forgiveness for the my impervious mistake in front of the entire court... He looked at her with folded hand...She was shocked with admission of his mistake and asking for apology in front of entire court... Her eyes filled with tears... She hold his hand and with her eyes accept his apology with her heart...

Jalal cleared his throat and continue his speech... Jodha begum's purity... her truth...her sanity ...always showed me mirror... and break me apart with my own principals... because of her today I can see... How cruel I was... How irrational my decision were... How unfair act of racism towards my riyaya... She made me realize that I am father of every single person in the saltant... I need to see every person as my child... I need to see them neutrally like a father does for his every child... I realized, how I depend on others and they rule on my mind...

Well there is a tell that Behind every successful man, there is a strong, wise and hardworking woman... and which is very very true... Jodha is behind my first step towards success...What I am going to announce will became a history for tomorrow... It will be written in golden writing... With loud and confidence voice he continued: Hum yeh ellan karte hai... Hindu aur Mughals sab ek saman hai... AAj se Hindu aur Mushlim (Mughal) ke liye kayde ek saman honge...Harek Hindu ko pura haak hai ki vo kisi bhi Jagah ja sake... Aaj se sare bagiche aur madrasa (school) me Hindu bina kisi bandish ke ja sakte hai... AAj aur abhi se ye kayada sab par lagu hota hai... and with louder commending voice he further added: Aur iss hukum ki abhi is vakt se tamil ho... HIS LOUD VOICE ECHO BACK IN THE PALACE...HUKUM KI TAMIL HO... TAMIL HO...TAMIL HO. COMPLETE SILENCE ...

PRECAP: DWK DRAMA... ADHAM'S CONSPIRANCY... Jodha doesn't understand to how to say that she has forgive him... SR ke bhi chances hai... all depends on my mood😆

Rima dear... Hope I have not disappoint U... Thank u for your request for KARVA CHAUTH TRACK...in my FF.. LOVE U🤗

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Originally posted by: msbhattacharya

Originally posted by: JalalLovesJodha

amazing update. love it. continue soon

Originally posted by: Gayuraj

superb update
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