Is it Hate OR Love Chater 28 Page 137 updated on March 15th Thread 2 - Page 106

Originally posted by: Pallavvi

OH MY GOD...OH MY GOD...😲😲😲

I dun have enough words to describe what a masterstroke this update was...👏⭐️

Dialogue Queen Aese bolegi to me kya hoga re
😲 love U jaan... Yaar pata nahi par muje meri ye update kuch pasand nahi aai ... shayad kuch jyada hi senti thi... Jalal ka gunah itna bada nahi tha par... kuch jyada hi ho gaya...

bhavu..nannu...tum dono bahut galat kar rahi ho...😡

mere ander ke devdaas ko mat jagao...😉

vrna rula rula ke mar dalugi tum logo ko...😆

yaar tu to dil chir ke rulati hai... me usi ka badla le rahi hu😆

oh god...shuru se shuru karti hu...ruko words dhund lu🤔 pehle...ahem ahem...😆

i will highlight all the parts i loved...though then i have to copy paste whole update lekin phir try marti hu...😆😛

awww... love U jaan.. I am glad U like entire chapter...

1) Jalal's inner talk...

he standing in front of mirror... getting ready...he talking to himself...When Jodha ate Khichdi everyday just because I was eating that... then I will keep fast too... I will not eat until she eats food... Again his mind filled with her thoughts... and his eyes filled with her grief... His heart was dying inside, he recall her eyes with full of sorrow but immense love for him... They both tried to act normal in last six days and but both of them knew it was not normal... they both were enjoying each other's nearness but there was a feeling of big stones on their heart... Jalal heart was filled with guilt... He knew he had hurt her to extreme and she was fulfilling her duty...he also knew she can't see sorrow in his eyes... he hides his own pain in front of her so she doesn't feel sad... They both are in immense pain and love for each other... Jalal tried comforting her with his jokes... they both were acting with each other to comfort each other... but their eyes talk without saying a words... Jalal was longing to see spark in her eyes ... her sorrowful eyes was killing him inside... It was impossible for him to hide his pain...

then the shayri...oh go...so perfect...👏⭐️👏

Thanks😳

AAJ KAL...

aansuo ke aane ki aahat nahi hoti, dil ke tutne ki awaz nahi hoti;

JI RAHE HAI HAR PAL MAR MAR KE

hota agar khuda ko dard ka ehsaas, to use dard dene ki aadat nahi hoti

2) dil ke aramaan aansuon men bah gaye

ham vafaa kar ke bhi tanaha rah gaye

dil ke aramaan aansuon men bah gaye

I love this song and it's wording a lot pallu

His heart unexpectedly skipped a beat... His entire body filled with shiver... He knew she has not forgiven him but he had not seen her inner chaos yet... every word of her song pouring slowly acid in his heart...Her peaceful melodious voice was giving immense ache today...

zindagi ek pyaas ban kar rah gai

pyaar ke kisse adhoore rah gaye

ham vafaa kar ke bhi tanaha rah gaye

dil ke aramaan aansuon men bah gaye

His eyes started sparkle with her tears... every word was giving him feeling of choking... His tears and voice stuck inside his throat...

shaayad un ka aakhiri ho yeh sitam

har sitam, yeh soch kar ham seh gaye

ham vafaa kar ke bhi tanaha rah gaye

dil ke aramaan aansuon men bah gaye

As soon as he heard... Aakhri ho yeh sitam... His entire figure got numbed... It was unbearable for him to hear more...but he couldn't move a step further, he felt some unseen power had tied his body...

khud ko bhi hamane mita daala magar

faasle jo daramiyaan the rah gaye

ham vafaa kar ke bhi tanaha rah gaye

dil ke aramaan aansuon men bah gaye

Jalal finally lost all of his energy... he knuckled his knees down and sat there on the floor... looking at the sky with tears in his eyes... Her unrevealed pain he felted in her every words... He lifted his eyes and hands up towards sky for prayer and said... Ya khuda...use shukun baksh...us par rehem kar... us ke sare dard muje de de...mere gunaho ki saja use mat de...

sobbing huhmm hmm hmm ...she cried out loud ... after many days discussion with Reva open Jodha's wounds again...

the line u underlined...my heart crashed into small pieces like jalal...😭😭so perfect words to describe her state of mind ...bravo yaar...👏⭐️

3) thoug i really loved the whole above part...but higlighting this dialogue as it really stole my heart...

Seeing her sparking eyes... he smirk a little...and looked at her with little fear in his eyes... and said: Kyu Jodha begum, vrat rakhna aapki jagir hai... hum kyu nahi rakh sakte... Aur apne kyu vrat rakha... Jab aap hamari lambi umar ke liye vrat rakh sakti hai to hum kyu nahi... Hum bhi aapki salamti ke liye vrat rakha hai... Aur haa ... Hum aapke bina jina nahi chahte... Yadi apki prathna se humari zindgi appse lambi hui to?... Hum ek pal bhi aapke bagar jina nahi...

hey bhavu...i just realized that i m copy pasting whole update here...heehhe...sorry...😆😆

LOL... HAHA... ACHA HAS HAS KE HAVA ME UDA RAHI HAI😆

so in one word ...Speachless...you made me with ur talent...⭐️

how do u think so perfect scenes with so perfect dialogues and emotions...👏⭐️👍🏼

YAAR TU KUCH BHI KAR PAR MERE DIALOUGES KI TARIF NA KAR... ME SHARMA JATI HU😳 TU DIALOGUE KI AMITABH BHACHAN HAI😃

arhh...i m jealous...😵hehe...joking yaar...😆

YAAR KOI NAHI MILA PURE DIN... TO MERI TANG KHICH RAHI HAI😆... JEALOUS TO ME HU... YAAR TERE HOLI AUR SR WALE CHATPER NE MUJE COMPLEX DE DIYA HAI... AB LIKNE BHI DAR LAGTA HAI... SACHHI I DON'T THINK I AM THAT GOOD... TU 100 TIME BETTER LIKHATI HAI... AND U WRITE VARIETY OF THINGS... SO MANY OS... SS.. FF... YAAR I CAN'T STAND NEAR BY... U HAVE NATURAL TALENT AND I HAVE TO CREATE... THINK AND THINK... IT TAKE ME DOUBLE THE TIME U WRITE ONE CHAPTER...

mai bhi terai fan hu...but no 1 nahi keh sakti😒 kyuki u have a huge fan following...😆😉

NAHI YAAR YE TO SABKA PYAAR HAI... PAR ME TO TERI # 1 FAN HU

but i really love u so much yaar...u are a superb writer...with amazing story telling skills...👏⭐️👏

i m proud of u my jaan...love u so much for this masterpiece story...👏⭐️

AWWW... SO SWEET... I LOVE U JAAN... AND THANK U SO MUCH FOR LOVING MY STORY...

the depth of emotions and feelings...😳

the characterization...the little things...like jalal's anger...jodha's silent eyes...

with their love story full of ups and downs yet at the end of the day...they are each others possession...i love each and everything about this story...👏⭐️🤗

my most most most fav story...that will always remain in my heart untill i m alive...😃😳

YAAR ISSE BADA COMPLIMENT HO HI NAHI SAKTA... TU NE AAJ SACH ME RULA DIYA...😃

REMEMBER FEW DAYS AGO U SAID UR BRAIN FREEZE ... I AM GOING THROUGH SAME... I HAVE MANY THINGS GOING ON IN MY PERSONAL LIFE... THANK U FOR ENCOURAGEMENT AND WONDERFUL COMMENT... LOVE U... 😃😳😳

update soon 😆

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Originally posted by: ashpat

I always wait for reply to my comments. I enjoy reading it especially to c how happy u r. U shoudl be proud of this story. It has variety of emotions. One thing u said correctly: this story is not just about sexual attraction but divine love.

Plzzz update soon.

Happy holi!

Originally posted by: shahbhavini

HAPPY HOLI... AYESHA... U R SWEETEST... LOVE U SWEETHEART...😃

Originally posted by: Pallavvi

hey bhavu ki bachhi...😡

Abe Me bhavu ki bachhi kese ho sakati hu😲 me hi bhavu hu😆

mar khayegi mujhse kya...😡

u can't stand near by...dugi ek abhi...😡😆

Par me tere saath ke khadi reh sakti hu internet pe... ME USA me Aur Tu INDIA am ... hum sath sath kese ho sakta hai😆

may be i m good at dialogues...

May be😲😡

but when it comes to express the depth and essece of emotions...

no one can match your skills in that field..

hello... Sachhi bata without Dialogue commend how can I go in deep... Yaar I know emotion scene me jyada senti ho jati hu.. Thank U yaar... Muje meri tarif acchi lagti hai😆

Par U KNOW THAT U R A WHOLE PACKAGE DEAL...

UR dialogues... grammer... vocab... emotion😭... and romance😳 tu sab me mahir hai...

bhavu...yaar...i have felt bad...low...like crying while reading many stories...

but the physically recognisable pain that your words made me feel was just so different...

the scene you wrote where...Jalal forwaded the sweet towards jo and in the nick of time he feed it to ruks...then asked her to feed jo...

and then the line...that he was slicing her heart into small pieces...

i cant tell u what sharp pain i felt in my chest while reading that...

that was surprising for me even...
awww... yaar ye scene to mere dil ke karib hai... i felt same pain while writing too... when I was writing, I put myself in place of jo😆 Koi koi baar mere me pallu ki atma aake dialouge likhva deti hai🤣

that was the amout of attachment that i have to your akdha...

that was the amout of attachment that i have with this story...

that was the impact of your writing...

i bet you must have wrote that scene in a very emotional state... me senti while writing

thats why it hit my heart directly...

bhavu u r one of the best ever expressive writers i have ever come across...
Awww... yaar .. thank u tu tere compliment... sidhe dil ko chu te hai... Seriously I was feeling very down... But I am feeling much better now...

you are truely gifted...😳

Gift...kaha hai...kya hai... mere liye hai😆😳

never underestimate ur talent...because u r a real gem yaar...👏

Real Gem vali gift hai... mera address dedu tuje jaldi bhijva... Real Gem...aane vala hai😆🤣

i swear i can't give that depth to emotions that u write so beautifully...

kyaaa😡 U R UNDERESTIMATING YOUR SELF... YAAR depth of the scene... when Jo misunderstood him and Jalal came to her... vo pura chapter... her dialogues... Jalal hurt himself... and her reaction... yaar teri zatak li he... yaar tere emotion is intense... tune muje khoon ke aaso rulaya tha... every scene you write it is full of emotions and depth ... .

if i m amit ji of dialogues...then u r SRK of emotions...😎

SRK😎🤣

and about brain freeze...i can understand yaar...😭

take ur time...i felt really vulnerable that time...hope u recover soon...😭

AWW Thank U love .. for this support and encouragement😃

lekin phir bhi...😈

update😡😡

UPDATE PLZ😆

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