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deejagi

@deejagi

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Posted: 11 years ago

#341

Hi Pallavi,

I have read all the 9 parts at a stretch. Lovely narration and great plot. Please continue. Anxiously waiting for the next part.

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@parish99

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Posted: 11 years ago

#342

awesome update dr
eagerly waiting for next part
please do continue soon
& thanks for the pm

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...janu...

@...janu...

Explorer

Posted: 11 years ago

#343

wow outstanding thanx 4 the pm

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Pallavvi

@Pallavvi

Voyager

+ 4

Posted: 11 years ago

#344

Originally posted by: PrincessNancy

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Yipppee First to comment! Yes yes yes Yippeee...Such an honour to get the chance of being the first reviewer...Yay !😳

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Wowww⭐️ Pallaviii...Take Boww!!!!!!!!!! 🤗 Take a bow NOW Pallu my jaan...!! You have officially NAILED IT !!!⭐️⭐️⭐️ I just cant understand how can someone be so so so so talented and brialliantly amazing!🤗 Yaarr !!! I am still so much engrossed into the chapter..that I am SPEECHLESS!!!!! Pallavvi my SHerni..my jaan...How should I express how touched and happy I am..with this Masterstroke!⭐️ I am lost ...I am lost in this wonderful SS..😳😳 You are our DIALOUGUES QUEEN..Plus an Amazing storyline Writer!🤗😳 Everytime I think the chapter cant get better, you come up with superb chapters which blow me away !😳 ❤️ 😳

The chapter started with amazing convo..❤️ Just loved How jalal expressed all his feelings what he had for his Kamini ammi..but how poorly she had backstabbed him😡😭 .. Loved how he raised his hand to slap he but controlled❤️..(meri taraf se thappad laga hi de😆) Yay..Kamini Anga is in jail..Yay 🥳All those dialogues were super duper froper awsm❤️.⭐️👏👏 The best bit..Buss..Buss kariye..uska nam mat lena..uff...wonderful !!.❤️.WOw..He loves Jodha!!❤️ Hayye..Loved the amazing affectionate part of Hameeda and Jalal !!!!!! Superbbb!! ❤️You nailed the chap my love ❤️! 🤗 You did this with ultimate mastery !❤️⭐️❤️ Finally, Hakims n all came to know that its some shadyantra of a Vishkanya! Superbbb!! I am just so much in love with this SS...Cant get enough !😛😛 Love the chapter.❤️..Love the story❤️...Love you my love ❤️😳❤️!!! Please take a bow..You simply RULE !!⭐️⭐️ Do continue soon and I totally understand how much efforts and pain it takes to write masterpieces like this!!! ❤️And that is why, you deserve each and every bit of appreciation my Love !! 🤗❤️

thanku soo much nannu...😃

as i said earlier also that i get short of words after reading ur review...😳😳

but really yaar...u wont believe but when i write the chapter and update the post...😛

the first thing that come in my mind...😊😉

oh god...nancy ka comment kab dekhugi...😲

love u nannu...and itna uper mat chada yaar...😉😆

u guys are far better than me...m just trying to learn from u guys a bit...😃😉

love ya lots...😳😳

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Pallavvi

@Pallavvi

Voyager

+ 4

Posted: 11 years ago

#345

Originally posted by: shreya931
a fantastic chapter..👏update soon..😉waiting for next😊

thanku soo much shreya...

will try to update tomorrow😃

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Pallavvi

@Pallavvi

Voyager

+ 4

Posted: 11 years ago

#346

Originally posted by: AkDha_Fanatic
Awesome ... Brillaint ... update honey
Couldn't bear shattered JALAL ... My heart went out to him to the core ... you've written amazingly ... wish our CVs had this much of potential
Keep it up dear👏

thanku dear...😃

and dun worry..jalal wont be shattered anymore...as he promised her mother...😳

it was just the weakness for the moment...😳

get ready to witness..a completly furious jalal...😃😉

ben ki shamat aane wali hai...😆