SS: ~Ehsaas~updatd chptr 14 on page 81

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Posted: 11 years ago
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⭐️hello friends...😊
here is an OS that keep on roaming around in my mind since this benazir track has started so i thought of sharing it with u...
do tell me...hows it and should i continue it or not...??.
IMAGE CREDIT: Jodha Akbar Creation Gallery😳

***********Prologue*************

***********SS: ~EHSAAS~************


"Koi halat se koi takdir se khafa hota hai..."
"lekha mukaddar ka kisko pata hota hai..."
"jazbaat utar aate hai kalam ki syahi bankar.."
"kismat ke panno per haal zindagi ka bayan hota hai... "

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"Ehassas hai teri chahat ka..."
"mere sukun e dil ki rahat ka..."
"mehsus karu ya thukra du ese..."
"apna lu ya saza du ese... "
"tu hi bata kaisi ye tishnagi kaise ye jazbaat hai "
"bas fitoor hai mere zehen ka ya kuch unkahe EHSAAS hai"

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(It was morning time...and jodha got up early that day...she was really depressed and hurt by jalal's behavior...don't know why but somewhere she had started believing that jalal has started understanding her...trusting her...he poses a heart that has lost somewhere...but jalal proved her all wrong by his behavior in Ramtanu's concert and meena bazaar...she was way too hurt and burning in anger that she couldn't be able to sleep the whole night...she got off her bed and freshen up to be ready for the day...she dressed up in a white anarkali with chudidar and white turbon for her morning sword practice...as it was her daily routine...she went to the practice area...and started practicing different sword fighting skills...but this was way too different that she used to do everyday...she was so aggressive in her moves...holding the sword more tightly than ever in her hand...her eyes were red...burning like fire...she couldn't take it anymore...how could jalal insult her in front of that bandhi...how could he let her sit on her place...she held the sword so tightly that her hand started bleeding because of the grip...but still she was not aware of it as her mind was full of thoughts and questions...moti who was standing at some distance..had never seen her in so much rage...she noticed her hand bleeding and rushed to stop her...she tried to stop her but jodha was not in a mood to listen to her ...she continued her aggressive moves...moti tried to get hold on her hand but she turned with a jerk and was about to aimher sword at moti's neck...when moti's loud scream and shocked expressions drew her out of her emotional trauma...)

Moti:- jodha...(In a loud voice...jodha's sword stopped at her neck and she drew her sword back...her body was almost shaking in rage...breathing really hard...she faced away in frustration... )

Jodha:- tum kyu aayi ho yaha moti...tumhe pata hai na ke hume apne abhyaas me kisi bhi tarah ki rukavat pasand nahi...jaao tum yaha se...

Moti:- nisandeh hume pata hai jodha...kintu aaj jo tum kar rahi ho wo abhyaas nahi kuch aur hi hai...kya ho gaya hai tumhe jodha...kitni badal gayi ho tum...aaj tak tumhe ese kabhi nahi dekha humne...aur tum janna chahti ho na ke hum yaha kyu aaye...tumhare hath se rakat beh raha hai jodha...

(she took her hand in hers and washed it out with water...then tied a piece of cloth on it...jodha jerked of her hand...)

Jodha:- choro moti...jab dekho humare piche piche lagi rehti ho...hum koi chote bachhe nahi hai...hum khud apna khayaal rakh sakte hai...ab jao yaha se...hume abhyaas karne do...

Moti:- lekin jodha tumhara haath...

Jodha:-(almost screams) humne kaha na jao yaha se...

Moti:- ye tum thik nahi kar rahi ho jodha...tum swayam ko waisa hi dikha rahi ho jaisa shenshah tumhe dekhna chahte hai...samajhdar ko ishara kafi hota hai jodha...aage tumhari icha...

(moti left with a sad face...and jodha continued her sword practice but her mind was still surrounded by moti's word...what did she mean by that...and finally after thinking again and again she found the purpose of moti behind saying this...and a wide smirk ran on her lips...)

Precap:- jodha v/s Benazir...sword fighting😉

Index:-

chapter 1:- page 4

chapter 2:- page 10

chapter 3:- page 13

chapter 4:- page 21

chapter 5:- page 24

chapter 6:- page 31

chapter 7:- page 36

Chapter 8:- page 46

Chapter 9:- page 51

Chapter 10:- page 60

Chapter 11:- page 67

Chapter 12:- page 76

Chapter 13:- page 78

Chapter 14:- page 81

PS:- I am feeling extremely happy that Ehsaas has won the Best OS Award😃...thanku so much to every single reader of this SS.😳...I am completely overwhelmed by this response.😭😃...I really appriciate the commendable work that the JA team has done for us for these beautiful siggies..👏⭐️👏..so adding it here on the first page...Yippee😃⭐️

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Posted: 11 years ago
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oh yes soon...this looks so interesting.
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Posted: 11 years ago
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👏pls continue...its lovely
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Posted: 11 years ago
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Neki aur puchh puchh..😉..surely..would really love to read...this is fantastic story👏👏👏 & u should countinue this...so pljj continue
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i wish this happens in the serial.
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Awesome OS plz plz plz plz plz continue soon
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Posted: 11 years ago
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ofcource dear...its nice start.

loved it nd i wanna see jodha in dt attire again in shw too.
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Posted: 11 years ago
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cont soon
wanna see what jodha gonna do now
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Posted: 11 years ago
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Glad to see another FF of yours Pallavi!! 🤗
That was a great start..do continue!!😃
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Posted: 11 years ago
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amazing nd please do continue

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