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bokul

@bokul

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Posted: 11 years ago

#331

pallavvi

u r churning out the best updates one after the other

wish the cvs had taken even some thing from your stories

i dont have words to describe the update i am awed

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udaymanyata07

@udaymanyata07

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Posted: 11 years ago

#332

thanks..loved it...great job...can't wait to see Benazir, maham and reshams punishment

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Nancy

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Posted: 11 years ago

#333

⭐️M⭐️A⭐️S⭐️T⭐️E⭐️R⭐️ ⭐️P⭐️I⭐️E⭐️C⭐️E⭐️

😎Pallu Jaan..You Rock 😎

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Deepika

@dkorumilli

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Posted: 11 years ago

#334

awesome chapter👏 Can't wait for next part.Please update soon 😉

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sarthshru

@sarthshru

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Posted: 11 years ago

#335

loed the update dear...

want this to happen in the shw !!!

hpe her truth shines n benazir gets punished 1!

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mandy001

@mandy001

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Posted: 11 years ago

#336

ayee hyee...maham ki band baj gyi.

bt bt bt😭. 😭. 😭. 😭.my poor jalal he z vry heartbroken...loved d new bond of mother nd son.

awesome update...plz save our jodha..

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mandy001

@mandy001

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Posted: 11 years ago

#337

ayee hyee...maham ki band baj gyi.

bt bt bt😭. 😭. 😭. 😭.my poor jalal he z vry heartbroken...loved d new bond of mother nd son.

awesome update...plz save our jodha..

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ash

@ashpat

Dazzler

+ 2

Posted: 11 years ago

#338

thank u sooo much for giving this fabulous and amazing chapter with jalal confronting MA. I am just surprised that why did not MA mention anything about that she wanted adham to be king? does ur MA just hated jodha and to implicate her, MA had killed unborn child. just curious.

I am sooo happy that JAlal realized his love and was EVN MORE HAPPY bec MA was mad that bec of her indirectly, Jalal realized his love.

thx for pm. plzzz update soon.

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shahbhavini

@shahbhavini

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Posted: 11 years ago

#339

Originally posted by: shahbhavini

🥳Res... me party karke vapas aati hu ...Maham...pardafarsh🥳🥳🥳🥳🥳🥳🥳🥳🥳🥳🥳🥳🥳🥳🥳🥳🥳🥳🥳🥳🥳🥳🥳🥳🥳🥳🥳🥳🥳🥳🥳🥳🥳🥳🥳🥳🥳🥳🥳🥳🥳🥳🥳🥳🥳🥳🥳🥳🥳🥳🥳🥳🥳🥳🥳🥳🥳🥳🥳🥳🥳🥳🥳🥳🥳🥳🥳🥳🥳🥳🥳🥳🥳🥳🥳🥳🥳🥳🥳🥳🥳🥳🥳🥳🥳🥳🥳🥳🥳🥳🥳🥳🥳🥳🥳🥳🥳🥳🥳🥳🥳🥳🥳🥳🥳🥳🥳🥳🥳🥳🥳🥳🥳🥳🥳🥳🥳🥳🥳🥳🥳🥳🥳🥳🥳🥳🥳🥳🥳🥳🥳🥳🥳🥳🥳🥳🥳🥳🥳🥳🥳🥳🥳🥳🥳🥳🥳🥳🥳🥳🥳🥳🥳🥳🥳🥳🥳🥳🥳🥳🥳🥳🥳🥳🥳🥳🥳🥳🥳🥳🥳🥳🥳🥳🥳🥳🥳🥳🥳🥳🥳🥳🥳🥳🥳🥳🥳🥳🥳🥳🥳🥳🥳🥳🥳🥳🥳🥳🥳🥳🥳🥳🥳🥳🥳🥳🥳🥳🥳🥳🥳🥳🥳🥳🥳

MY SWEET PALLU...ME PARTY KUCH JAYADA TALLI HO GAYI!!!!

(MENE YE NANU KI COMMENT SE COPY KIYA HAI SHHH SECRET)

Masterstroke 👏⭐️👏 Masterpiece 👏⭐️👏 Mindblowing,👏⭐️👏 out of the world,👏⭐️👏 Brilliant 👏⭐️👏 Fantastic 👏⭐️👏 Awesome 👏⭐️👏 Superb 👏⭐️👏 Dil khush kar diya 👏⭐️👏 Lajawab 👏⭐️👏 SUper se uparr 👏⭐️👏 Atiuttam 👏⭐️👏 Mashallah 👏⭐️👏 Subhanallah 👏⭐️👏 Kya likha hai 👏⭐️👏 Wonderful 👏⭐️👏 Excellent x infinity 😳 👏⭐️👏

YAAR UR ARE JUST TOO GOOD!!!! YOU ARE ONE OF FINEST WRITER...SO SUPERB!!! MY FAVOURITE PART WAS ...JALAL TRICK MAHAM...STANDING OUTSIDE LISTENTING TO HIS CONVERSATION AND CAME INSIDE WITH CLAPPING ...OMG...

SERIOUSLY...ANY THING U WRITE IS WAY BEYOND WORDING...

FINALLLY I FEEL SO GOOD...MAHAM KO RANGE HATO MERE JALLU NE PAKDA... THAT IS BEST PART OF THIS CHAP...

Sorry yaar for late comment update!!!! lately I am so busy with year end and budget at work... working late hours... I am so back up in reading my favorite stories...love you for this update... 👏👏👏👏

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shahbhavini

@shahbhavini

Rocker

+ 5

Posted: 11 years ago

#340

Un Res...I will read it tomorrow... can't wait

OMG!!! ANOTHER VOW CHAPTER...

YOU ARE REALLY AMAZING PALLU...

I LOVE JALAL'S ANGER... I ALWAYS LIKE HIS ANGRY LOOK...I WAS PICTURING RAJAT...THROUGHT OUT ...WHEN HE WAS READY TO SLAP MAHAM...I FELT LIKE CLAPPING😆

HAMIDA AND JALAL BONDING...AMAZING...INDEED YOU ARE GENIUS WRITER...😃👏👏👏

BEST PART HE IS TELLING HAMIDA THAT HE LOVES JODHA...😃 SO SWEET😊

I WAS TOUCHED BY JALAL'S PAINFUL EMOTION WHEN HE SAID...WHY I HAVE TO PAY ALL THE TIME JUST BECAUSE I AM SHENSHAH...REALLY TOUCHED MY HEART👏👏👏

HE IS RUNNING TO SEE JODHA...RUNNING OVER THE GLASS...HE IS GONE CASE😆 KOI BACHAO JALAL KO😆 YE TO PURA PREM ME PAGAL😆

VISHKANYA...KYA TUNE DECIDE KIYA HAI...PEHLE RULAO BADME MARHAM LAGVO...PATTI KARO...PHIR SR😆 DIL KHUSH HO GAYA😊

Edited by shahbhavini - 11 years ago