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Posted: 11 years ago

OMG!!!!😲😳😳 PALLU sorry...itni late comment ke liye... yaar lately I was stuck up... I didn't wanted to give small little bit review for this best chapter... I read this already 4 time... Pallavi U R super duper amazing mindblowing writer... U R on my top 3 fav writer... As soon as I see pm from you I read Ur update... comment ke maamle me Tani😆 jesi ho gayi hu... Yaar itne superb update ke liye Vow Awesome itna kafi nahi hai... it's not fair...👏👏👏 ⭐️⭐️⭐️⭐️⭐️

Finally their eyes met...Vow what intensity of that moment... the U have described it too emotionally...You have completely satisfied my desire... I was waiting for this moment for so long...👏👏👏

Thank god Mirza and Hamida left this couple alone... uff I am gald...Mere dil me ladoo foot rahe hai... 😃😃😃kya hoga... dono besharma hoke nirofying eachother😆 so bichare Mirza and Hamida ko Jana pada... Lol I am so happy with Maham and Ruku fuming... and had to leave room ... I was dancing inside with happiness...

My poor baby Jallu gone through so much... I was praying inside I hope jodha forgive him... Thank god Jo saw his condition... Again U R queen in expressing and writing dialogues ...sidhe dil pe attack...amazing... You have penned perfectly his guilt... How caring thought... he didn't wanted to give her stress... he wanted to comfort her... amazing thought (When I wrote Jodha bani meera I missed that part..)Yaar me teri aese hi fan nahi hu... Teri update mere dil me ghanti bajati hai..lol Finally eye lock... Awww... My Jallu baby is feeling much better. I picture everything... ...I love this part ... "ab wohi khade rahege kya??...humare paas nahi aayege...?" tears flooded from his cheeks

Then hugging but not hugging part... Yaar ur imagination is too good... Aww... I was blushing while reading...

Yaar teri Jodha to kamal ki hai...sidhe hi puch dala... aap ro rahe hai... so cute I loved it... Jalal ko to bura hal kar diya... she keep on insisting ... Here U go...Jodha begum start taunting... Ofcourse uska hak banta hai... EK BEGUM KAM hoti to... Hii Jallu ne achha chance mara... sidha lips pe...lol and Hugged her tight... was indeed needed to comfort both them... THIS WAS INDEED DIVINE HUG... no passion but just love ... deep love... Amazing!👏👏👏

Edited by shahbhavini - 11 years ago
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Posted: 11 years ago
@ Pallavi,i am new for this forum.
So reading all the os/ff/ss slowly.

I read your first two parts and prologue.

First of all Congrates to be winner.

You had created some wow moments with your pen/writing.I am speechless with your both update.

Totally out of this world. Jalal's status of mind and Jodha's status of mind bothw written very beautifully with your kalam se.

I just loved the way Jodha was testing jalal.And that dialogues which jodha was saying to Benzir and jalala was furious after hearing that.

That each and every word of it cracked my heart.Jodha became Victim.But still strong girl.

I just loved second part.You just proved that Haarke jitnewale ko Baazigar kehete hai.She wanted to know what is running in Jalal's heart?and she got answer from furious Jalal.

Benzir and Jodha's sword fight was awsome and Jodha's attack discription was like watching a movie of two ladies fighting with sword.I just loved that she understand jalal's feeling by his expression and eyes.
And lastly sherni win.

Benzir is too sharp and shatir.Dust game was dirty only she could play it.

I was enjoying each and every action,reaction,anger,furiousness of jalal and Jodha.

Thank you for beautiful ss.

I must say you have very good command over English and shudh hindi


Kaafle milenge toh raste banenge
Do dil milenge toh ishq e noor bahega
Har najm kaisee banti hai tarannum?
Saaj milenge toh dhun banegi

Hope you like my review.
I will try to read next parts tomm.

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Posted: 11 years ago
update plzzz😭
update plz
update plz😡
update plz 🤣
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Posted: 11 years ago
till part 14
awesome...
poor Jodha...
she went through so much...
but everything is gonna be fine now...
cont soon dear...
pm me...
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Posted: 11 years ago
😭😭😭UPDATE!!!!!!! PLZ!!!!😭
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Posted: 11 years ago

Originally posted by: PrincessNancy

update plzzz😭

update plz
update plz😡
update plz 🤣

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Posted: 11 years ago
u r such a gifted writer dear
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Posted: 11 years ago
Hi Pallavi, Does this story end there? or is it going to continue?
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Posted: 11 years ago
Hey dear really a fantastic story . Loved the emotions of akdha so much and the last part was so nice . Please continue dear.
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Posted: 11 years ago
Pallu tu kab upate karegi... Jaldi update kar... phone se type kar... pencil se kar... pen se kar... computer se kar... destop se kar... tere dream se kar... jaha se jo bhi karna hai kar...par update kar

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