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part 17

HUM-BAIRAM KHAN...AAISA KYA HUA HAI KI USSE HUMSE MILNE YAHAN AANA PADA...HAMARE AGRA TAK POHCHNE KA INTEZAAR NAHI KAR SAKA BAIRAM KHAN...

RB-KYA HUA HUMAYUN,YEH BAIRAM KHAN KAUN HAI...AUR TUM ITNE CHAUNK KYUN GAYE HO...SAB THEEK TOH HAI NA..

HUM-WOH TOH USSE MILNE KE BAAD HI PATA CHALEGA BHARMAL...SIPAHI SE KEH KAR USSE ANDAR AANE KI AGYA DILVADO...HUM ABHI USSE MILNA CAHTE HAI...

RB-BAIRAM KHAN KO HAMARE SAMAKSH PESH KIYA JAYE...

BK came and saluted everyone present there...

HUM-BAIRAM KHAN TUM YAHAN...SAB KHARIYAT TOH HAI NA...

BK-NAHI MAHARAJ SAB KHARIYAT NAHI HAI...

HUM-HUMEIN PURI BAAT BATAO...

BK-AAPSE MILNE SE PEHLE HUM ADHAM KHAN SE AGYA LENE GAYE THEE,AUR HUMNE VAHAN BAZ BAHADUR KO DEKHA SHEHENSHAH...

HUM-KYA!!!!!!!!!!!BAZ BAHADUR...HAMARE SABSE WAFADAR AUDHEDARON MAIN SE EK HAIN WOH...KYA TUMHE YAKEEN HAI KI TUMNE UNHE HI DEKHA THA...

BK-JI SHEHENSHAH...HUM TOH KHUD CHAUNK GAYE THEE...HUMNE SOCHA KI SHAYAD WOH ADHAM KHAN SE APKE BHEJNE PAR MILNE AAYE HAIN,ISLIYE HUM CHUPKE SE VAHIN RUK GAYE...MAGAR JAB HUMNE UNKI BAATEIN SUNI TOH HUM HAIRAT MAIN REH GAYE SHEHENSHAH...

JALAL-KYA BAATEIN HUI ADHAM KHAN AUR BAZ BAHADUR MAIN...HUMEIN SAB KUCH ACCHE SE BATAEYE...

BK-SHEHZADE...BAZ BAHADUR ADHAM KHAN KE SAATH MIL KAR SHEHENSHAH KE KATL KI SAAZISH ACH RAHE HAIN...

JALAL-YEH KYA BAKWAS KAR RAHE HO TUM(shouting)...TUMHE ANDAZA BHI HAI KE TUM KYA KEH RAHE HO...

BK-AAPKA WAFADAR MULAZIM HOON SHEHENSHAH...APSE GADAARI KE BARE MAIN SOCH BHI NAHI SAKTA...HUM SACH KEH RAHE HAIN...HUMNE KHUD APNE KAANON SE BAZ BAHADUR KO ADHAM KHAN SE KEHTE SUNA HAI KI WOH AGRA KA TAKHT HATIYANA CAHTE HAIN...AUR ISLIYE WOH ADHAM KHAN KI MADAD MANGNE AAYE THE...AUR YEHI NAHI...UNKE SAATH SHER SHAH SURI BHI MILA HUA HAI...

HB-YA ALLAH...SHER SHAH BHAISAHAB...HAMARE CHACHERE BHAI...YEH KAISA MAZAK KAR RAHA HAI ALLAH HAMARE SAATH...

HUM-HUMEIN TOH AB TAK YAKEEN NAHI HOTA HAI TUMHARI BAATON KA BAIRAM KHAN...MAGAR HUM TUMHARI BAATON KO NAZAR ANDAAZ BHI NAHI KAR SAKTE...ADHAM KHAN PAR JASOOSI KARNE KE LIYE HUMNE KI TUMHE MALWA BHEJA THA...TUMNE AAJ TAK KABHI HUMSE GADDARI NAHI KI...MAGAR YEH BAAT HAMARA DILL MANNE KO TAYAAR NAHI HAI...YEH KAISE HO SAKTA HAI...

RB-EK PAL KE LIYE MANN LO KI YEH AADMI GALAT BOL RAHA HAI HUMAYUN...ISSE GALATFEHMI HUI HAI...PARANTU AGAR 1% BHI ISKI BAAT MAIN SACCHAI HUI TOH...AUR TUM KHUD YEH BOL RAHE HO KI YEH TUMHARA WAFADAR HAI...AUR RISHTE MAIN GADDARI KARNA KA SABSE BADA KISSA TOH TUM HAMARE YAHAN DEKH HI CHUKE HO...JAB HAMARE BHAI AUR BHAIBHISA NE HAMRI HI RAJKUMARI KO HUMSE DUR KAR DIYA...KYA KHOON KE RISHTE SE BADA KOI RISHTA HOTA HAI HUMAYUN...NAHI...JAB HAMARA APNA BHAI HAMARE SAATH ITNI GHINONI HARKAR KAR SAKTA HAI TOH JO YEH AADMI KEH RAHA HAI WOH SACH KYUN NAHI HO SAKTA...

after a lot of thinking humayun realised that there can be some truth in this if bairam khan has come all the way from malwa to inform him of this deception...

HUM-HUM TUM PAR BHAROSA KARTE HAIN BAIRAM KHAN...MAGAR HUM KHUD ISS KI ASLIYAT TAK POHCHNA CAHTE HAIN...HUM KISSI BHI BEGUNAH KO SAZA NAHI DENA CAHTE...BEHARAL TUM YAHAN AAYE HO TOH HAMARI BETI KE NIKAAH MAIN SHAMIL ZAROOR HO...

BK-AAPKA BAHUT BAHUT SHUKRIYA SHEHENSHAH,APNE ISS NACHEEZ KO ITNI IZZAT BAKSHI MAGAR HUMEIN JALDI VAPAS MALWA JANA HOGA...HUM ADHAM KHAN KO KEH KAR AAYE HAIN KI HUM APNE BHAI SE AUR USKE PARIVAAR SE MILNE JA RAHE HAIN...KYUNKI UNKI TABIYAT NASAAZ HAI...AUR VAISE BHI HAMARI BEGUM AUR HAMRI BETI HAMARA INTEZAAR KAR RAHE HONGE...

HUM-KYA!!!TUMHARI BETI...TUMNE HUMEIN BATAYA NAHI BAIRAM KHAN...MUBARAK HO...KAB HUI TUMHARI BETI...AREY WAAH WAALID BANNE KA SUKH ALAG HI HOTA HAI...MAGAR SHAADI KI ITNE SAAL BAAD...KHAIR TUMHE AUR TUMHARI BEGUM KO MUBARAK HO...

BK-AREY NAHI SHEHENSHAH...HUMEIN BETI KA SUKH TOH BAHUT PEHLE HI NASEEB HO CHUKA THA...16 SAAL PEHLE...

HUM-TUMHARI BETI 16 SAAL KI HO CHUKI HAI..AUR TUM HUMEIN AB BATA RAHE HO...KYUN BAIRAM KHAN?

BK-JI WOH DARASAL HUMEIN JAMAIMA KAHIN SE MILI THI...WOH HAMARI APNI AULAD NAHI HAI...

hearing this both bharmal and mainavati become alert...bharmal gets hyper and catches hold of bairam khans hands.

RB-KAHAN MILI TUMHE TUMHARI BETI...JALDI BATAO...

BK gets a little tensed...why was the king of amer all of a sudden so interested in jamaima...bairam khan was not having a good feeling about this...he dint want to lie but he chose to...


BK-MAHARAJ ,JAMAIMA HAMARI BEGUM KI MARHUM BHAIJAAN KI AULAD HAI..HUMNE USSE GOD LIYA HAI...

both bharmal and mainavati get disheartened...their heart knew they would find jodha one day but every obstacle only dented their morale...

HUM-AB TUM JA SAKTE HO BAIRAM KHAN...HUMEIN AGAH KAR KE TUMNE APNA FARZ NIBHAYA HAI..BAKI KA HUM SAMBHAL LENGE...KHUDA HAFIZ...

bairam khan left and humayun turned to bharmal...

HUM-HUM JANTE HAIN KI TUMHE JODHA KO DHUNDNE KI KITNE UTSUKTA HAI BHARMAL..MAGAR SABAR SE KAAMLO...JAHAN ITNA INTEZAAR KIYA HAI THODA AUR SAHI...HUMEIN JODHA ZAROOR MILEGI...

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in amer late evening...

it was the evening of the mehendi ceremony...bakshi and sujamal both had to be applied mehendi in their respective corners of the palace...sujamal had tried to sneak in to see bakshi but had been caught by mainavati...she caught his ears and dragged him to his spot in the palace where all the males were gathered...everyone laughed seeing sujamals's condition...

RB-SHARAM NAHI AATI TUMHE SUJAMAL...RAJVANSHI HO KAR TUM PAKDE KAISE GAYE...WOH BHI APNI MAASA KE HAATON...

HUM-AUR NAHI TOH KYA...SHEHENSHAH-E-HIND KA HONE WALA DAMAD APNI HONE WALI BEGUM TAK KO DEKH NAHI PAYA...YEH TOH SHARAM KI BAAT HAI SUJAMAL...

JALAL-AREY KYUN TANG KAR RAHE HAIN AAP SAB HAMARE HONE WAI JIJASA KO...AB HAR KOI HAMARI TARAH THODI HAI JO KAHIN PAR BHI GHUSS JAYE BINE DARE AUR BINE PAKDE JAYE...

SUJ-BAHUT BOL RAHE HO JALA TUM...JAB TUMHARA VIVAAH HOGA NA TAB HUM DEKHENGE KI TUM APNI DULHAN SE VIVAAH SE PEHLE MIL SAKTE HO YA NAHI...

JALAL-AREY HUM TOH APNI BEGUM KO APNE GHODE PAR BAITHA KAR BHAGA LE JAYENGE...KISSE KE BHI PAKAD MAIN NAHI AAYENHE HUM DONO...

SUJ-TAB KI TAB DEKHI JAYEGI JALAL,AAJ TOH HAMARI MEHENDI HAI..AUR ISS AVSAR PAR JIJA APNE SAALE SAHEB KO THODI MEHENDI LAGA HI SAKTA HAI KYUN...

JALAL-NAHI...NAHI JIJASA HUME YEH LAGANE KI KOSHISH BHI MAT KARNA...

SUJ-AREY KOSHISH TOH KYA HUM TOH APKO MEHENDI KE RANG MAIN RANG KAR HI RAHEINGE...

sujamal ran after jalal with the mehendi bowl in his hand..mainavati saw this and shouted...

MAINA-SUJAMAL YEH SHAGUN KI MEHENDI HAI..GIRNI MAHI CAHIYE..ABSHAGUN HOTA HAI BETA...RUK JAO...

SUJ-AREY KUCH NAHI HOGA MAASA...ISS JALAL KO TOH AAJ HUM MEHENDI LAGA KAR HI RAHENGE...

sujamal did not see the stone right in front of him and was about to to trip and fall,when jalal caught him and the mehendi bowl...

JALAL-AAP THEEK TOH HAIN NA JEEJASA...

SUJ-HAAN HUM BILKUL THEEK HAIN...

JALAL-DEKHA AAP HUMEIN MEHENDI NAHI LAGA PAYE...

SUJ-DHYAAN SE DEKHO JALAL...HUMNE NA SAHI ,MEHENDI NE KHUD TUMHE RANG DIYA HAI...

and surely right in the middle of jalal's palms there was a big blob of mehendi that had fallen from the bowl into his palms...

SUJ-AB TAYAAR HO JAO JALAL,AGLI BAARI VIVAAH KI TUMHARI HAI...

same time in malwa...

Jamaima was busy troubling salima and asking her to let her go and roam around with her friends...

SB-NAHI ,JAB TAK TUMHARE ABBAJAAN NAHI AA JATE,HUM TUMHE AKELE JAANE KI IZZZAT NAHI DENGE...

JAMAIMA-MAGAR AMMIJAAN HUM AKELE KAHAN HAIN,HAMARI SAARI SAHELIYAAN BHI TOH HAMARE SAATH HAIN...

SB-HUMSE BEHES MAT KARO JAMAIMA...HUMNE MANA KAR DIYA SO MANA KAR DIYA...AB YEH SAB CHODO AUR YEH MEHENDI KA BARTAN VAHAN BAWARCHIKHANE MAIN RAKH DO...

jamaima gets the bowl and moves to the kitchen...

JAMIMA-JAB DHEKHO SAB HUM PAR DHOS JAMATE HAIN...YA ALLAH KASH HUM SHEHZADI HOTE...TAB HUM SAB PAR DHOS JAMATE...

she was mumbling to herself when she tripped and the mehendi in the bowl got plastered in her hands...

JAMAIMA-DEKHO AMMIJAAN YEH KYA HO GAYA..HAMRE HAATON MAIN MEHENDI LAG GAYI...AGAR AAPNE HUMEIN APNI SAHELIYON KE SAATH JANE DIYA HOTA TOH AAJ AAISA NAHI HOTA...DEKHA NA BARBAD HO GAYE HAMARE HAATH...(crying she goes to her room)

SB(to herself)-NAHI MERI BACCHI,YEH TOH KHUDA KA SANKET HAI...AB TERE HAATH PELE HONA KA WAQT AA GAYA HAI...
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