OS noW FF : CONTINUING PRECAP ****Updated****ch 15 PAGE 42 - Page 7

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Posted: 11 years ago
#61
WOW yaar!!2 Updates in a day!! 😲 😲 Thankyou so much for it!!!!! 😃 😳 🤗
Awesome Updates!! 👏 👏 ⭐️ Loved them both alot.!!❤️
The soul talk scene was just Wonderful yaar!! 😳So Amazingly and Beautifully Written!! 😃 😳 It touched the core of My heart!!❤️ ❤️ 😳 Readed it innumerable times!!!!!!! 😉 😳 😆
And Jodha cares for Jalal and in betwn Their little nok-jhok like She said "Ab Chup Rahiye" to Jalal😛 and then realizing She said to the Shenshah!! 😆 And Then for stopping him saying "Aapko talwarbazi ke alawa kuch samajh nahi aata kya?!" to Jalal🤣That scene was so cute,adorable and funny at the same time!! 😳 😆 I just loved the way your write yaar!!❤️ 😃 😳 It's Truly Amazing and a Pure treat to read for all of us!! 😃 😳 🤗
And Moti took all the bistars away just to bring Akdha closer?! 😲 😲 😃 Just Love your Moti bai yaar!!❤️ 😳 😆
And The last scene of pillow and jalal smiling at her innocence is sho cute And Then Jalal sleeping and Jodha softening to see him sleeping like a baby!! 😃 Just WOW!!! Amazing yaar,The beauty of your words left me speechless!!!!!! 👏 👏 ⭐️
And Waiting for Akdha's Breakfast on the bed!!! 😉 😛 And What about that "HUG"?! 😕 😭
Pls Continue Soon!! 😊 😳 😳
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Posted: 11 years ago
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Page 12 is here!! 😉 😛 Now Pls Update soon with lots of Akdha moments!! 😉 😳 😆
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Posted: 11 years ago
#63
AUsome... Luvd it...

Its page 12 hey nw do update soon... will b waiting
Nd plz made it a bit longer with more akdha scene nd u forget d akdha hug in lst one...
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Posted: 11 years ago
#64
akdha sleeping together...there is some improvement...loved both of your updates...one jalal now knows rukaiyas truth and the other akdha are coming together YAY!!! cant wait for some more...update soon😃
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Posted: 11 years ago
#65
loved it. waiting for next one. PM me next time
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Posted: 11 years ago
#66
Hey nw toh its page13 ab toh next part update karooo na...
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Posted: 11 years ago
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OK I noe m late n m really sorry for it actually I went to college n bak bak to bak lectures...Thnxx a lot guys for such a beautiful response n here is the third Chapter..

Jodha gets up in the morning and finds Jalal sleeping she gets up and something stops her it was her dupatta . She thinks Jalal has held it...

Jodha: Shehnshah ap...humara dupatta...(she remembers last time rahim held it and she thought it was shehnsha)(in murmers)arre ha lekin ye to so rhe the

Jodha turns and finds her dupatta under Jalal hand...she tries to remove it very carefully in so that she doesn't wake up Jalal she was just removing it when Jalal becomes straight making Jodha fall on him ...Akdha eye lock (Ishq hai vo ehsas playing in BG) . Suddenly Moti enters the room Jodha takes her eyes off and gets up..

Moti ; (smiles) hum bad mai ate h ...

Jodha : then gets up and goes for a bath and does her puja

Jalal seeing Jodha praying and singing for her Kanha is mesmerized and joins her he copies her action of folding hands...Jalal folds hand and is all the time looking at Jodha...Jodha turns with Pooja plate in her hand

Jodha ; Shehnshah ap mandir mai ?

Jalal : (taking the arti in the same way Jodha taught him)Haan vo bas hum (tries to hide his emotions)

Just then Moti enters

Moti: Jodha ! Shehnshah ap vo hum shama chahte h hum bas nashta hum bistar par rakh dete h

Hum chalte hai

Moti leaves

Jalal : chaliye begum Jodha ap nashta kar lijiye ...Hum chalte h

Jodha : rukiye ap chahe to ap bhi humare sath mera matlab h ...nashta ...vo..

Jalal : (smirks) chaliye aj sath hi nashta krte h

Jalal tries to eat but because of injured hand couldn't . They both remembered the time when Jalal did a fake drama of getting hurt and Jodha had fed him with his own hand unwillingly.He is about to get up.When Jodha picks up food and starts feeding him...Jalal smiles seeing care and willingness in Jodha eyes which was not there last time she fed him. Even Jodha was not feeling uncomfortable or being forced this time.She was not doing it just as a responsiblity of her. This time she did it with willingness.

Jalal : (in his mind) pichli bar jab Jodha ne hume khilaya tha to vo humara swarth humare ghuman sidh ho rha tha to hum khush the par is bar ye kaisa ehsas h jo hum mehsoos kar rhe h na jane kya jadoo hai is Amer ki Shehzadi nhi (JA BG IN BACKGROUND)Mughal Sultanate ki Malika (a smile spread across his face )

Jodha : (in mind) na jane hum jinko kal tak krur samajhte the jinse hum nafrat krte the (JA BG IN BACKGROUND)aj unki itni parwah kyu ho rhi hame jinhe kal tak apne hatho se khilana hamare liye saza thi unhe aj hum khud kuch alag hi ehsas h ye ...humne kabhi pehle aisa mehsoos nhi kiye(Jodha blushes)

In Ruqaiya Room

Hoshiyar : Suna hai Mallika e Khas ki shehnshah kal ki raat Jodha Begum ke sath the.

Ruqaiya :(hiding her jealousy) haan haan jane do abhi vo unka naya khilona h jab jee bhar jayega to yahi ayenge...

Ruqaiya could not control herself and went to Jodha room. Jalal saw her coming and two teach her a lesson he hugged Jodha. Jodha was shocked and became a bit uncomfortable after all it was too soon for all this . Ruqaiya saw them and left in disgust .

Jalal was enjoying the moment . (Ishq hai vo ehsas playing in BG )

PRECAP : JALAL OPENS UP IN FRONT OF JODHA

Did you like it ??

Should I continue??

Do comment ...

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Posted: 11 years ago
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Thanx
Its niceee... Bt why there hug ws at lst... Again made anxious for next update...
Luvd jodha feeding jalal...

Update next part soon...

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Posted: 11 years ago
#69
loved it. Jalal hugging Jodha? hope the day soon arrives for us.

Thanks for PM
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Posted: 11 years ago
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liked your OS so far.. it's in fast forward mode... but enjoyed reading it so far 😊

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