OS noW FF : CONTINUING PRECAP ****Updated****ch 15 PAGE 42

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umm ok i write often but m makin a OS post for this forum first tym
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<font face="Times New Roman, Times, serif" size="5" color="#660099">Index </font>:
<font face="Verdana, Arial, Helvetica, sans-serif" size="4" color="#0000ff">CH 1 : PAGE 1</font>
<font face="Verdana, Arial, Helvetica, sans-serif" size="4" color="#0000ff">CH 2 : PAGE 2</font>
<font face="Verdana, Arial, Helvetica, sans-serif" size="4" color="#0000ff">CH 3 : PAGE 4</font>
<font face="Verdana, Arial, Helvetica, sans-serif" size="4" color="#0000ff">precap for Ch 4 on page 5 ...</font>
<font face="Verdana, Arial, Helvetica, sans-serif" size="4" color="#0000ff">CH 4 : PAGE 6</font>
<font color="#0000ff" face="Verdana, Arial, Helvetica, sans-serif" size="4">CH 5 : PAGE 9</font>
<font color="#0000ff" face="Verdana, Arial, Helvetica, sans-serif" size="4">CH 6 : PAGE 13</font>
<font color="#0000ff" face="Verdana, Arial, Helvetica, sans-serif" size="4">CH 7 : PAGE 16</font>
<font color="#0000ff" face="Verdana, Arial, Helvetica, sans-serif" size="4">CH 8 : PAGE 19</font>
<font color="#0000ff" face="Verdana, Arial, Helvetica, sans-serif" size="4">CH 9 :PAGE 23</font>
<font color="#0000ff" face="Verdana, Arial, Helvetica, sans-serif" size="4">CH 10 : PAGE 26</font>
<font color="#0000ff" face="Verdana, Arial, Helvetica, sans-serif" size="4">CH 11:PAGE 28</font>
<font color="#0000ff" face="Verdana, Arial, Helvetica, sans-serif" size="4">CH 12 : PAGE 31</font>
<font color="#0000ff" face="Verdana, Arial, Helvetica, sans-serif" size="4">CH 13 : PAGE 34</font>
<font color="#0000ff" face="Verdana, Arial, Helvetica, sans-serif" size="4">CH 14 : PAGE 36</font>
<font color="#0000ff" face="Verdana, Arial, Helvetica, sans-serif" size="4">NOTE : PAGE 39</font>
<font color="#0000ff" face="Verdana, Arial, Helvetica, sans-serif" size="4">CH 15 : PAGE 42</font>

<font face="Comic Sans MS, Times, serif" size="4" color="#666666">The jashn ends,everyone leaves jodha's bhaisa's stay for a night on Jalal's insistance.everyone goes to their own rooms . Jalal instead of going to ruqaiya is a sort of dragged to Jodha's room . Jodha in her room is happy n saying</font><font face="Comic Sans MS, Times, serif" size="4" color="#fff"> to Moti</font>
<font size="4" face="Comic Sans MS, Times, serif" color="#ff0000">Jodha : hum aj bohot khush h moti mughal sultanate ko varis milne vala h or baki sab bhi bohot khush h</font>
<font size="4" face="Comic Sans MS, Times, serif" color="#ff0000">Moti : Haan shenshah bhi kitne khush the na</font>
<font size="4" face="Comic Sans MS, Times, serif" color="#ff0000">Jodha : ( 😳blushes) haan moti sach kahu to shehenshah ka ye roop dekh kr hum bohot khush hai jis tarah vo rahim ke sath nache aisa laga mano unka kehna ki unke pas dil nahi h bilkul jhuth hai kyunki dil na hota to voh us din us bache ke maa bapu ko deewane khas mai maaf na krte or rahim unke sath bhi shehnshah ka rishta is baat ka praman h</font>

<font size="4" face="Comic Sans MS, Times, serif" color="#999999">Moti is happy seeing jodha lost in thoughts of shehenshah</font>
<font size="4" face="Comic Sans MS, Times, serif" color="#999999">rite then a bandhi comes and informs of shehnshah arrival</font>

<font face="Comic Sans MS, Times, serif" size="4" color="#ff0000">Shehnshah : Takliya...</font>
<font face="Comic Sans MS, Times, serif" size="4" color="#ff0000">everyone leaves</font>
<font face="Comic Sans MS, Times, serif" size="4" color="#ff0000">Jalal does salam action to Jodha</font>
<font face="Comic Sans MS, Times, serif" size="4" color="#ff0000">Jodha : Shenshah ap yaha is waqt ? apko to ruqaiya begum ke.</font>
<font face="Comic Sans MS, Times, serif" size="4" color="#ff0000">Jalal : ( stops her in mid sentence) vo hume apse kuch guftgu krni thi
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<font face="Comic Sans MS, Times, serif" size="4" color="#ff0000">Jodha :kahiye</font>
<font face="Comic Sans MS, Times, serif" size="4" color="#ff0000">Jalal : Shukriya JOdha Begum</font>
<font face="Comic Sans MS, Times, serif" size="4" color="#ff0000">Jodha : Shukriya vo kis liye? humne to aisa kuch ni kiya</font>
<font face="Comic Sans MS, Times, serif" size="4" color="#ff0000">Jalal : Vo isliye ki har bar ki tarah apne is bar hamari bat ki tohin na karte hue hamare kehne par ruqaiya begum ko apne diye hue tohfe se kesar milakar dudh diya..</font>
<font face="Comic Sans MS, Times, serif" size="4" color="#ff0000">Jodha : Hume jo sahi laga humne vo hi kia isme shukriya ki koi avayshakta ni h</font>
<font face="Comic Sans MS, Times, serif" size="4" color="#ff0000">Jalal : (smiles😃)</font>
<font face="Comic Sans MS, Times, serif" size="4" color="#ff0000">Jodha : Vaise shukriya to hume bhi apse kehna h</font>
<font face="Comic Sans MS, Times, serif" size="4" color="#ff0000">Jalal : Vo kis liye ?</font>
<font face="Comic Sans MS, Times, serif" size="4" color="#ff0000">Jodha : Vo isliye ki apne sabke samne humare tohfe ki taarif ki or hamara or uska saman kia iske liye shukriya..</font>
<font face="Comic Sans MS, Times, serif" size="4" color="#ff0000">Jalal: Kyunki apka tohfa , apki bhawnaye samaan ke kabil thi .Apki to har cheez hi kaabile tarif hai fir chahe vo apki khubsurati ho ya apki shamsheer par pakad ...</font>
<font face="Comic Sans MS, Times, serif" size="4" color="#999999">Akdha eyelock (ishq hai vo ehsas soft version in bg )</font>

<font face="Comic Sans MS, Times, serif" size="4" color="#999999">in Ruqaiya's room</font>

<font face="Comic Sans MS, Times, serif" size="4" color="#ff0000">Ruqaiya : Hoshiyar, Na jane shehnshah kaha reh gaye?</font>
<font face="Comic Sans MS, Times, serif" size="4" color="#ff0000">Hoshiyar: Malika ap chinta mat kariye vo kisi kam me honge ap araam kriye</font>
<font face="Comic Sans MS, Times, serif" size="4" color="#ff0000">Ruqaiya : ( feeling a bit uneasy ) Hoshiyar hume na jane kyu pet me dard ho rha h or kuch thik ni lag rha .</font>
<font face="Comic Sans MS, Times, serif" size="4" color="#ff0000">Hoshiyar : malika ap thak gyi h ...aram ki jiye hum chalte h</font>
<font face="Comic Sans MS, Times, serif" size="4" color="#ccc">Ruqaiya lies down ...</font>

<font face="Comic Sans MS, Times, serif" size="4" color="#333333">should i continue ??</font>
<font face="Comic Sans MS, Times, serif" size="4" color="#333333">plzz do comment ...</font>
<font face="Comic Sans MS, Times, serif" size="4" color="#333333">n m ready for chappals...</font>


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Posted: 11 years ago
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Nice...next part please...👍🏼
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Do continue 😳

OS will be added in the index.

Priya
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Its Just Amazing yaar!! 👏 👏 ⭐️ I really loved your 1st part alot.❤️
The Akdha scene was so Wonderfully written! 😃 I really loved it.❤️ 😳
Pls Continue soon.😊
And Pls PM me if possible. 😊 😳 😳
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Jalal and Jodha lost in each other eyes . Suddenly Jodha realizes the situation and shifts her eyes in other direction even Jalal shifts his eyes and then smirks ...

Jalal : To btaiye Jodha begum kaisa laga apko mughal sultanaite ka shandaar jashn ?

Jodha : Vo hume (she is interrupted by a loud shout in the name of Jalal)

Jalal : ye to Ruqaiya Begum ki awaaz hai

Jalal and Jodha both shocked look at each other and then rush towards Ruqaiya's room.

Jodha reaches the room and sees Ruqaiya's hand filled with blood and blood all over the bed and she realizes the situation (tears fill her eyes) she immediately ruShes to Ruqaiya Jalal reaches there after.

Jalal : (confused and scared) Ruqaiya ye tumhe (rushes towards Ruqaiya)

Jodha stops Jalal . Jalal looks at her confused

Jodha : Shehenshah ap bahar rukiye kuch der hum yaha h...

Jalal : Jodha ye ap kya keh rahi h yaha ruqaiya ki ye halat h or ap hume bahar jane ko keh rhi h ..nhi hum ruqaiya ko aisi haalat mai chod kar ni jayenge .

Jodha : Vishwas rkhiye shehnshah hum h yha...

Jalal leaves half heartedly seeing Jodha helping Ruqaiya .

Jodha : Shant ho jaiye Ruqaiya begum...sab thik ho jayega...

Ruqaiya : (angrily shouting) kya shant ho jayie kya ap dekh nhi sakti ...kya ap jante nhi h hum apna bacha mughal sultanate ka vaaris kho chuke h

Doctor comes

Ruqaiya changes her clothes everything is cleaned

Doctor checks Ruqaiya

Doctor : hume shama kardi jiye par mughal sultanate ka vaaris is duniya mai ane se pehle hi rukhsat ho gya.

Ruqaiya : nhiii and starts wailing

Hoshiyar and Ruqaiya phuphi console her

Jodha in tears goes outside . Jalal waiting ferociously sees Jodha and rushes to her.

Jalal : Jodha ...Jodha Begum btaiye Ruqaiya thik to hai or hamara bacha vo mehfooz to h na kuch hua to ni na unhe

Jodha scared and lost is crying only .

Jalal (shouts) :Jodha begum hum apse kuch puch rahe h (he shakes her)

Jodha : Shehnshah vo !!

Jalal : Vo kya Jodha ?kai ruqaiya ko kuch ...hume btao Jodha (in scary voice)

Jodha : Ruqaiya begum bilkul thik h par

Jalal : (a bit relaxed still in a scary voice) par ? par kya ek minute hamara bacha vo to thik hai na ?

Jodha : vo mughal sultanate ka chirag apka bacha ni rha ...and she breaks down

Jalal shocked !!!!!!!

Did you like it ??

Should I continue??

Do comment ...

N m ready for all chappals and jutas

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Its very nice...
Do continue..
Update next part soon.
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thnqq guys fr a wonderful response next update on page 4 😉😆
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Originally posted by: priyanka220

thnqq guys fr a wonderful response next update on page 4 😉😆


lol itna wait
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ise page 4 pe pahuncha deti hoon 😆
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Originally posted by: chinuchinu

ise page 4 pe pahuncha deti hoon 😆


hehe yeah u have to wait one page away 😉

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