OS noW FF : CONTINUING PRECAP ****Updated****ch 15 PAGE 42 - Page 9

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Posted: 11 years ago
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loved the update and thanks for the pm...
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CH 7

Jodha breaks the hug

Jodha : Shehnshah ! ye ap...ye ap kya kar rhe h ?

Jalal : vo hum ..hum chalte h (he goes smiling)

In Deewan e Khas

MA : Shehnshah ka iqbal buland ho!

Jalal : To badi ammi humne ap ko is sultanate ke varis ki janm se pehle maut ka karan pta karne ko kha tha

MA : Ji shehnshah ! or humne apna kaam bakhoobi kiya hai ...Apke hone vale bache ki hatya hui

(MAHAM ANGA BG PLAYING)

Jalal : Badi ammi ap janti bhi h ap kya keh rhi h hatya kiski itni jurrat ki usne hamare mughal sultanate ke vaaris ki hatya ka pryas kiya ? (he is now shouting angrily) hume uska naam btaiye bas...kon h vo jisne ye gunah kiya h ? hum uska sir abhi apni shamsheer se kalam krenge...

MA : JODHA BEGUM !

Jalal : Jodha Begum! Badi ammi ap ye kehna chahti h ki jodha Begum ne ye kia ?

(he said with fear on his face and a look which said he would collapse another minute)

Bhagwan Das and other brothers were equally shocked and distrusted Maham.

BHAGWAN DAS : Apko zarur koi galat fahmi hui h hamari Jodha kbhi itna ghinona kaam nhi kar skti ...

MA: Lekin unhone kiya h

BHAGWAN DAS : namumkin! Hume apni Jodha par purna vishwas hai vo aisa kabhi ni kr sakti ...kya saboot hai apke pas ?

MA : Saboot chahiye apko rukiye...

She claps her hand...Bandhi comes with a tray which has the same kesar that Jodha gifted Ruqaiya the one which Jalal had told Jodha to mix in milk for Ruqaiya.

Jalal : ye to vohi kesar hai na jo Begum Jodha ne ...

MA : Haan Jalal ye vohi kesar hai jo Jodha Begum ne apna pyar or ashirwad keh kar ane vale vaaris ko di thi...(She claps her hand again and chief doctor of sultanate comes) To btaiye hakim ji ja humne apko ye kesar diya or apko iski jaanch mai kya mila ?

Hakim: Shehnshah salamat rahe !! Ji shehnshah jab humne ruqaiya begum ke khun ki or humne paya ki kesar me dhature ka airkh milaya gya hai or is airkh se hi Ruqaiya Begum ki santan or mughal sultanate ke ane vale vaaris YANI Ruqaiya Begum ka hamal gira h

This all shakes Jalal from inside his trust on Jodha had shaken completely, he is completely shattered.Bhagwan Das and other brothers are shocked but still don't believe it .

Jalal is shocked completely the poem Jodha had written for ane vala vaaris starts echoing in his head ...

Jalal gets irritated with poem echoes and shouts bas bohot ho gya!

MA : (With a evil smile continues) or ap jante h Shehnshah ye airkh Amer mai milta h,Mughal sulatanite ki sarhad mai ye khi ni paya jata

That was enough for Jalal to take first Ruqaiya and now Jodha ...he was completely broken . BHAGWAN DAS and other brothers still don't believe it .

BHAGWAN DAS : Shehnshah !

Jalal leaves.Maham has an evil smile...

Jalal reaches Jodha's Room . Jodha is dressing up. Jalal throws a pot and breaks the mirror .Jodha is angered and scared.

Jodha : Shehnshah ye kya tarika h hume chot lag sakti thi.

Jalal : ye to hume apse puchna chahiye ye kya tarika h (Jalal hold Jodha hand tightly hurting her) Chot to hume lagi h shehzadi Jodha ...Kyu ?? Akhir kyu maar dia apne hamare bache ko ??(he keeps a sword on her neck )

Jodha : (angry and shocked )Ye ap kya keh rahe h Shehnshah hum... humne ...humne mara chi! ap aisa soch bhi kaise sakte h shehnshah ! hum hum apke bache ko kyu marenge.

Jalal : Haan Badi Ammi ne hume sab sach bta dia h or vo airkh bhi amer ka hi h or amer se to ap hi h na Jodha ? (disgusted and angry)

Jodha :Amer se hone ka kya ye matlab hai mana hum apke dharm kea lag h par ap aise hi hum par ilzaam nhi laga skte (jalal removes the sword and leaves her)...kya bta dia h apko hume kuch samajh ni aa raha saaf saaf btaiye (she is tensed and scared)

Jalal tells her all that happened in court

Jodha : he kanha! Itni badi sazish...itni giri hui harkatapne soch kaise liya shehnshah, humne aisa kuch krenge... hum kaise samjhaye apko

Jalal : Par sare saboot yehi kehte h Jodha Begum...(it was enough for Jalal to take he picked bottle of beer and drank it whole and then he broke down completely)(breaksdown) Pehle Ruqaiya jinhe hammare walihar sirf Mariam uz Zamani ke audhe ke liye chahiye tha (Jodha shocked) or ap jin par humne itna bharosa kia...or apne ?Bachpan se hum Khan Baba ke sath rhe Badi ammi ne hume dudh pilakar bada kiya humari khud ki ammi hone ke bavjood vo hamare sath nhi thi hamare walid hume bachpan mai hi chod kar chale gaye or jab rona chaha to "ap shehnshah h" keh kar hame rone ki bhi azadi na thi ...jis umra mai bache padhte likhte hai us umra mai humare hatho mai shamsheer thama di gyi behte hue khuno ko dekh kar humne man lia jaha logo ke dil hote h vaha hamare pas keval pathar hi h...ye hi mante hue hum bade hue ...jis umra mai bache guda gudi ki shadi ke khel khelte h usme hamara nikah kar dia gya ...Ruqaiya ko hum apni dost sab kuch mante the par unhe mohabbat thi to sirf audhe or taakat se...hamare khan baba jo hamare walid ke saman the khuda ne unhe bhi is duniya se rukhsati de di ...or ab ap?Ya khuda kyu hamesha hamare sath hi kyu ??Kyu ki apne Ruqaiya Begum ka hamal girane ki saazish ?

Jodha :(has tears in her eyes) sambhaliye shehenshah khud ko...(n she is about to make Jalal drink water when Jalal throws water and gets up

Precap : THE REAL STORY BEHIND MISCARRIAGE

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Edited by priyanka220 - 11 years ago
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Posted: 11 years ago
#83
Great update..
I know you updated just now but I'm going to be greedy and ask you to update soon..
Waiting eagerly..
Edited by IPKKND_Pyaar - 11 years ago
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Posted: 11 years ago
#84
Wow gr8 update
mahamanga plan to jodha out of place
jalal ko vishvas nahi ho raha hai ki ye jodha ne kiya hai our vo hurt hua hai
so sad fr jalal pahle ruquya then jodha
last part ws nice jb jalal apni jindagi ke bare mai jodha se shear karta hai
thanks fr pm n update soon
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Posted: 11 years ago
#85
next update on page 19
priyanka220 thumbnail
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Posted: 11 years ago
#86
GUYS SHOULD I STOP ?
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Posted: 11 years ago
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ohhh update soon plz i really like youe story
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Posted: 11 years ago
#88
this is fab update buddy 😃
thanks for the pm😳
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Posted: 11 years ago
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thanks..fabulous...amazing...no perfect words to describe your work...please update sooon

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Posted: 11 years ago
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Wow Really Awesome Updates dear!! 👏 👏 ⭐️

Part 6:- It was Just WOW!! 👏 ⭐️ I loved that part to the core.❤️
Their mind thoughts on their changing and developing New "Ehsaas" for each other was so Beautifully written with BG Musics added!! 😛 😳 😆 I could visualize the scenes so well like watching in front of My eyes!! 😉 😳 😃 You are really an Amazing writer yaar!!❤️ ❤️ 👏 👏 ⭐️
Loved their passionate eyelock too which got disturbed by Moti 😡 😆 And Jodha feeding Jalal scene was really cute as well. 😳 😆
And My most fav part-Akdha Hug 😃 WOW LOVE YOU FOR WRITING THAT PART SO WONDERFULLY❤️WISH YOU COULD BE THE WRITER OF OUR SHOW!!YOU ARE JUST AMAZING & MIND-BLOWING DUDE!! 👏 👏 ⭐️
I loved how Jalal hugged Jodha to make Ruqu jealous and then When Ruqu left,He was just enjoying the moment for sometime with Ishq hai ehsas in BG!! ☺️ 😳You just makes the scenes so much more realistic that It just felt like watching an episode while reading your update!! 😲 😳 😆 And That's what Make you an Amazing And Fabulous writer dear!! 👏 👏 ⭐️ Really love you for this SS.❤️Keep Writing more on Akdha Pls. 😊 😳 😳

Edited by janvie - 11 years ago

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