OS noW FF : CONTINUING PRECAP ****Updated****ch 15 PAGE 42 - Page 5

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Posted: 11 years ago
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waiting- continue soon- 😊
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Posted: 11 years ago
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awesome updatescont soon and dont frgt to pm me
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Posted: 11 years ago
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Superb..awesome...👏...plz next part aaj hi update kar do na...😆
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Posted: 11 years ago
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Superb story... hope they show something similar to this...
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Posted: 11 years ago
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Originally posted by: Leki

Superb story... hope they show something similar to this...


i wrote it in this hope only :)
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Posted: 11 years ago
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Originally posted by: priyanka220


i wrote it in this hope only :)

U may be lucky to see it onscreen😃
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Posted: 11 years ago
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OK ! really m writing it I expected tht it would end with one chapter but here m writing the fifth chapter...So here it goes

At the Kabra

Jodha Soul : Us din jab ap hamare kaksh mai aye the to lazmi tha ki hume darr jana chahiye tha kyunki piichli baar jab ap aisi halat mai aye the to apke bartav ne hame jeeven se ghrina krne ko majboor kar diya tha par is bar na jane vo kya tha kaise hamara bartav apki or badal rha tha na jane kyu hum apki or kheeche ja rhe the..us waqt hum un ehsaso ko samajh hi nhi paa rhe the bas dil ke age jaise adhin ho kr kam kr rhe the

Jalal Soul : Ha jodha waqt apni disha badal rha hum samaj hi nhi paa rhe the ki vo kya ehsas hai jo hume tumhari or kheech rhe the

In Harem

In Harem every begum was happy for Ruqaiya miscarriage . Seeing diS hurts Jalal even more .

In Jodha Room

Jalal realizes he has come drink and should leave he gets up to leave and falls he hurts himself through glass kept a side

Jodha : Shehnshah sambhaliye khud ko (she sees the wound and immediately rushes to Jalal) Ap thik to h (she seemed hurt and very worried) hey kanha! Isme se to khun nikal rha h . Moti! Moti jaldi ao ye shehnshah ko...

Jalal: Rehne di jiye Jodha begum iski avaishakta nhi h

Jodha : kaise nhi h ? ap chup rhie ...(she realizes he is shehnshah) humara matab apko marham ki zarurat hai

Moti comes

Moti : Kya hua Jodha ? ap thik to h ? kai shehnshah (she stops realizing what she is saying) hamara matlab Kya hua Jodha ?

Jodha : Shehnshah ko chot lagi h jaldi ja kar haldi ka lep laiye or marham ka saman bhi...Jao jldi ...

Moti goes . Jodha is blowing the air meanwhile on the wound and Jalal smirks . Moti comes..

Jodha : Lao ye hume do hum karlenge or tum jao or shehnshah ke liye haldi vala dudh le ao..

Moti : ji

Moti leaves

Jalal: Jodha begum ap bekar hi chinta kr rhi h hum thik h

Jodha : (does not listen just applies haldi blowing wind) Dard ho rha h ?

Jalal : (with ego) nhi hume dard nhi hote

Jodha : (within murmurs) vo dikh hi rha h

Jalal : Kuch kaha apne ?

Jodha : (shifting her eyes) nhi ! vo moti dudh le ayi . Lijiye dudh pee li jiye or so jaiye

moti takes her bistar n goes. She intentionally takes all bistars to get Jodha Jalal close.

Jalal : haan hum chalte h (is about to get up)

Jodha: (stoping Jalal) apko talwar bazi ke alava koi baat samajh nhi ati ??

Jalal : kya kaha apne ?

Jodha : (realizing her fault )nhi ap yehi so jaiye nhi to ap fir khud ko chot pohoch aa lenge ...

Jalal :(smirks) apko koi takleef ni h ?

Jodha : nhi hum neeche so jayenge

Jalal was about to react when Jodha finds there are no extra bistars .

Jalal : hum thik hai ab hum chalte h

Jodha in haste and to stop him

Jodha : Koi bat nhi hum bhi upar bistar par hi so jayenge...

Jalal : (smirks ) and lies down

Jodha pulls curtain between the bed and puts cushions between them

Jalal : (smiles seeing her innocence) Ap janti h Ruqaiya begum ne

Jodha : (stopping him in mid sentence) Shehnshah bas ab bhul jaiye ye sab ap aram kijiye hum is Vishay mai bad mai bat kijiye

Jalal sleeps . Seeing Jalal sleeping like a child she soften for him

ISHQ HAI VO EHSAS (PLAYING IN BG)

Precap: Akdha breakfast in bed...

Did you like it ??

Should I continue??

Do comment ...

pacca if next i will do it will be a longer one

Edited by priyanka220 - 11 years ago
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Posted: 11 years ago
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i made some changes in update rite now u can check them again😳
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Posted: 11 years ago
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Originally posted by: ..Tahniat..

nice update... loved it yaar

i made some changes in update rite now u can check them again😳
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Posted: 11 years ago
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Originally posted by: priyanka220

i made some changes in update rite now u can check them again😳

okay dear

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