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Posted: 9 years ago
#41

Originally posted by: NabMufc

awesome dear...👍🏼

thnxx..
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Posted: 9 years ago
#42

Originally posted by: asyaarshilover


Haha I m 100% sure it would be Metro's benches...😆

you are 100% wrong aroo..
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Posted: 9 years ago
#43

Originally posted by: skinnypal

Is the narrator the ring ? 😕

or the metro

or the metro gates

or something in roshni's hand!

you know i read the narrators part 3 times already! Now i will wait patiently :P I am no Sherlock Holmes!

3 times??😲 Wow means I have hidden it nicely😉
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Posted: 9 years ago
#44

Originally posted by: afghangirl

interesting promo with naughty Roshni,cute Sid, nice DD, rude Raj.

start soon please.

thank u so much..will give part 1 today!😊
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Posted: 9 years ago
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Originally posted by: aparnalokam

INTERESTING PROMO CONTINUE SOON

HAPPY FRIENDSHIP DAY BABY😳

thanks..Embarrassedhappy friendship day!!😉
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Posted: 9 years ago
#46

Originally posted by: zoopassion

I'm loving this season so much😳 B/w who is the narrator now??😲😕 Anyway, their changed behaviour is fun.. waiting for the next part😊

thank u for loving the season already😆 narrator u will know..will give part 1 today!
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Posted: 9 years ago
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PART 1


"Roshni come on..We'll miss the train." said Siddharth tugging at her hands running the flight of stairs.


"Siddharth we can catch the next one please?" she pouted totally exhausted from shopping the whole day.


He melted seeing her pout but they had to reach home early or else Sasumom would scold both!


"Siddharth??" she kicked her feet in the air laughing as well as embarrassed seeing him lift her in his arms.


"What?? I am picking up my girl-friend cum soon to be fiance!!" he said looking back at her. She smiled and he leaned to kiss her!


"Oh hello?? Police!" she said pointing to the guard almost as far as moon from the earth.


"Seriously Roshni?? He is like so faaarrr!" he pressed the far and she smacked him making him laugh.


"Siddharth! I am feeling different you know.." Roshni said feeling a strange giddiness in her body.


"Baby what , Wait even I feel something.." he said and they both passed out with Siddharth holding her face in his hands.


"I will never let you both be in peace , you get it? You will regret your past!" A voice laughs evily.


Swishing to their homes now and DD , Raj also lie on the ground clutching their heads to stop the throbbing in their heads.


AFTER A FEW HOURS


"Oh No..He is coming I need to hide." the voice pops up again...


"Siddharth! Can I kiss you?" she asked boldly advancing at him.


"Roshni shh..No!! Behave." Siddharth pushed her back , holding her by her waist.


"Dude..wohoo! These two?? My God!! Always ever-ready" I say seeing their shameless romance.


"Oh haha what am I saying??" I laughed , "But how have these two become opposites of what they were?"


"I mean Siddharth ,the romance king has become the speed-breaker and Roshni , the level-minded has become Bold and Besharam(Shameless)?" I think hard but get no answer to this.


"Oh oh first of all stop praising Roshni , Siddharth may get jealous and burn the metro train only." I told my dirty brain to stop.


"Fine so how do I know what has happened? Ughh!! Its too tricky for my tortoise-mind to pick up!" I scratch my head moving to and fro.


"Not again.." I say seeing them start again with their metro romance.


"Siddharth pick me in your arms!" Roshni demanded stomping her foot angrily. All looked at her as if she has run away from Mental Hospital.


"Baby no.." he started protesting but it was too late , she was already hung at his back like a bagpack.


"Let's go Cadet Siddharth Khurrana!" she ordered him , he sighed at her childish antics.


The metro doors opened and they stepped out. Siddharth panicked thinking what he was going to do now.


"Siddharth what are you doing with her?" DD asked with a sweet voice. OMG ,Devil Durga what happened to her?


"Mom chill Sid was just helping me come out of this fish-market like train!" Roshni fist-pumped her mom.


"I am in a dream.This has to be one..Oh my god!" I feel my head spinning around.


"Siddharth how dare you , why are you with this girl?" I heard Raj shout out from the other side.


"What is happening? Raj , the Silent became Raj , the Violent?" I am dizzy , is this the effect of medicines?


"I close my eyes now hoping for sleep to clear off the confusion. Good night folks! We will unravel the mystery soon."


"wooh..saved he is asleep.I am so happy to take my revenge finally!" I heard the deadly voice once more and felt like dancing seeing my plan work!


"What revenge?" I get up confused but seeing his face all the confusions go away.


"You are not asleep.. What the hell? You were playing with me!" he was angry, "why are all the people the same??"


"You mean evil?? You might be the first definition of the word EVIL , right Rajveer Singh Ranawat?" I asked smirking.


"I'll destroy them..I have done this with all my might! They have messed with the wrong guy."


"How did they both swap? And DD and Raj too?" I asked unable to clear my confusions. I was hell angry at him for again making their life complicated.


"Shouldn't you know that? I mean come on? So much for being God." he was smirking.


"Rajveer don't forget you are a devil.." I started only to be cut-off by him.


"Ya and I have powers which I am using to seperate them or better kill them" he said not even fearing me.


"You know I can easily stop you from doing so.." I tried wavering him off but to no luck he knows the rules.


"No my dear almighty , Only an angel can stop a devil if he messes with people on Earth!" Rajveer had a full-proof plan.I mentally cursed myself not to take care of his intentions!!


"Then I will get an angel." I said determinedly. But who will I get?? And I am not so free..


"Are you so much in recession?" I heard that monster's voice taunting me.


"They both are important for me and the war is on Rajveer. In the war of God and Man , God will always win." I bragged a bit.


"I am not man your highness , I am a devil." he said angrily!


I said and went in my quest for searching an angel. Till then you see what is happening in the world which has kind of become the parallel universe.!


"Siddharth why are you with this girl?" Raj asked whisking his hand away from Roshni's grip.


"Oho Papa what has happened to you?" Roshni asked kissing Raj's cheeks.


Siddharth looked visibly shocked and the only one who felt the confusion I feel. Can he help me??


Oh My God!! Hell I am god why am I saying these humanly things? Siddharth will be the one to guide my angel to save them. Oh no what is that?


I saw DD smiling and before DD could lean and kiss in Raj's cheeks too Siddharth came in between.


DD kissed Siddharth Khurrana! I am dead..how can I be? Have I lost it?


"Mom why are you kissing my Siddharth?" Roshni asked cleaning Siddharth's cheeks with her hands tenderly.


Siddharth stood embarrassed and noticed Roshni's possessiveness.


"Wait I will clean up!" she said and kissed his cheeks lovingly and exclaimed jumping "Done!!"


He looked flustered , as if he had just been smacked by a bludger on his face whereas Roshni smirked seeing his shy nature!


I get a call from the angel , I'll be back. I so need to mend this mess up and only this guy can help me!!


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Red- Rajveer

Black-GOD

So as you read , it is a total fantasy story! If you guys liked the concept comment and I'll continue but if not please tell this is not good in clear words and I will complete it as a TS.

I need honest answers please , be it my friends also! I want you all to judge the story not me..

I just loved reading all the comments by the way , benches , metro , ring?? Haha!! Lovely..Waiting for your reactions on the actual narrator.
Edited by Starsfireflies - 9 years ago
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Posted: 9 years ago
#48
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i read RV and GOD pehle hi 😆😆 so unexpected! will read n unres later on 😉

unres

I loved the concept.. it is different and interesting!! Sachi mein!! Not saying coz im ur friend! Fantasy is my fav genre... and please continue this.. ok.. but i want to ask.. was that soul swapping or nature swapping? that bit confused me a bit... RV and God's interactions were good! DD kissed Siddharth and to wipe it off Roshni kissed him? 😆 Lol.. really? Excited to read how their "whatever" got swapped gets back to the original 😃
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Posted: 9 years ago
#49
well I am loving Roshni and her open romance while we have a shy Sid , did not expect Rajveer to be one of the narrator...Overall interesting story and looking forward to the rest
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Posted: 9 years ago
#50

Originally posted by: skinnypal

res

i read RV and GOD pehle hi 😆😆 so unexpected! will read n unres later on 😉

okk boss but that's like cheating😆 okk do it later!

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