Love In A Metro (Season 3) Part 1 pg 8 |updated|

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Love In A Metro (Season 3)


*Not in continuation to Season 1 or 2..This season is a fresh start and if it is a TS or SS I'll think based on response and ideas*


(Siddharth and Roshni are a couple)


PROMO


"Siddharth! Can I kiss you?" she asked boldly advancing at him.


"Roshni shh..No!! Behave." Siddharth pushed her back , holding her by her waist.


"Dude..wohoo! These two?? My God!! Always ever-ready" I say seeing their shameless romance.


"Oh haha what am I saying??" I laughed , "But how have these two become opposites of what they were?"


"I mean Siddharth ,the romance king has become the speed-breaker and Roshni , the level-minded has become Bold and Besharam(Shameless)?" I think hard but get no answer to this.


"Oh oh first of all stop praising Roshni , Siddharth may get jealous and burn the metro train only." I told my dirty brain to stop.


"Fine so how do I know what has happened? Ughh!! Its too tricky for my tortoise-mind to pick up!" I scratch my head moving to and fro.


"Not again.." I say seeing them start again with their metro romance.


"Siddharth pick me in your arms!" Roshni demanded stomping her foot angrily. All looked at her as if she has run away from Mental Hospital.


"Baby no.." he started protesting but it was too late , she was already hung at his back like a bagpack.


"Let's go Cadet Siddharth Khurrana!" she ordered him , he sighed at her childish antics.


The metro doors opened and they stepped out. Siddharth panicked thinking what he was going to do now.


"Siddharth how are you beta?" DD asked with a sweet voice. OMG ,Devil Durga what happened to her? Siddharth seems as confused as me.


"Mom chill Sid was just helping me come out of this fish-market like train!" Roshni fist-pumped her mom.


"I am in a dream.This has to be one..Oh my god!" I feel my head spinning around.


"Siddharth how dare you , why are you with this girl?" I heard Raj shout out from the other side.


"What is happening? Raj , the Silent became Raj , the Violent?" I am dizzy , is this the effect of medicines?


"I close my eyes now hoping for sleep to clear off the confusion. Good night folks! We will unravel the mystery soon."


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This is another of my friendship day gift. Hope you like it and guess who is the narrator people!😉 BOLD is Narrator..

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Chap 1- page 8
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Surprise Surprise!! This was your surprise na? 😳
Amazing start, i have to say you are becoming a mystery novelist nowadays!! Now who is the narrator? And what is up with this role reversal!! 😳 So many unanswered questions rolling in my mind.. and i am so excited to read this story.. i can't even express in words!

Continue soon Aayu.. loved the narrator dialogues... and wish to see Roshni boldly Romancing

BTW Congratulations on your new story! 🥳
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Originally posted by: skinnypal

Surprise Surprise!! This was your surprise na? 😳

Amazing start, i have to say you are becoming a mystery novelist nowadays!! Now who is the narrator? And what is up with this role reversal!! 😳 So many unanswered questions rolling in my mind.. and i am so excited to read this story.. i can't even express in words!

Continue soon Aayu.. loved the narrator dialogues... and wish to see Roshni boldly Romancing

BTW Congratulations on your new story! 🥳

Nah my surprise was not this..it was in my ff😆 this is an impromptu decision!
It isn't gonna be a mystery , it is no I won't say😉
Glad you liked the role-reversal..thank u!!😊
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glad u like it..😉
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Wow ashu new season😛
Sounds really very interesting👏
Who's monologue it would be??
Plus role reverse...hehe excited
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hehe thank u..
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will do very soon..😉
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Kitni seaons likhegi behna ?? 😆

unressy
Lovely start. It's confusing but I like Roshni 😆😆 She's too funny.
Raj, The Silent to Raj, the Violent 🤣
Great start Aayushi!!
May you even write more seasons of this cuz now I wan't to have a competition/race between either Jhalak or Bigg Boss with your Love In A Metro.
And I know, our awesome Aayu will win 😉

Love,
Sanny 😳
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Aayu..d second surprise..😃😳 sk...all character reversal here...I mean ?? How?? Oh god ..promo s itslef confusing....here besharam s rosh..how cute..😳😳 anyways..it was awesome nd confusing one...also...pls reveal d mystery soon..baby aayu...today ...u r in writing spree..I guess..so..continue soon...nd loved it...nd narrator dialogue was soo Funny who s d narrator... Hope this writing spree comes everyday😛😉😉

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