VEESHA ff: love that never ends!(part-14&15)! done - Page 6

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Posted: 15 years ago
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Sorry for late comment but excellent ff.Waiting for ur next part.
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Posted: 15 years ago
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PART-14
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its morning.... ayesha, nihaal n subhas r sitting on d breakfast table...nihaal n subhas r playing with fork n spoon and aisha is happy watching dem smile.. d door bell rings... its early morning, subhas wonders who can come dis early is abt 2 go but aisha says she will see it... aisha luks bak once at nihaal who is again busy playing with subhas... she smiles n heads 2ward d door... she opens d door still smiling... a man is standing with a bigh phoolo k guldasta covering his face n chocolates in his hands n says mam ye apke liye... aisha luks surprised n asks kisne bheja hai.. d man lowers d buke and aishas smile fades wen she sees veer on d door but veer smiles n wishes her good morning!!

ayesha asks wat is he doing here dis early in d morning...

Ye kya aisha na ram na salam sidhe sawal jawab... he smiles broadly, but aisha seems irritated which veer observes, he says "tum bhool gyi kal tumne hi toh mujhe bulaya tha!!".... aisha luks shocked n says maine tumhe kab bulaya..he says are tumne toh kaha tha ki aaj se mai tum log k sath yaha rahunga.. woh nihaal mere bina nai reh sakta na aur mai bhi nihaal aur tumhare bina nai reh sakta....

before aisha could argue further veer entered inside the house calling for nihaal.... as nihaal heard veer he ran to him n hugged him... aisha also came in but she didnt said anything watching nihaals happiness... she thought to herself nihaal kitna masum hai kaise samjha paungi mai use veer ka sach, jab mai itne dino nahi samjh pai toh nihaal toh baccha hai aur wo sayad abhi ish baat ko samjhega bhi nai, mujhe use kuch bhi batane k liye sahi waqt ka intzar karna hoga.... aisha thoughts were stopped by nihaal...

n- massi massi........ kaha kho gye aap..( he said pulling her hand) massi chalo na hum kahi ghumne chalte hai ab toh chachu bhi agye hai!!

aisha didnt knew wat 2 say nihaal ko mana karne se uska dil tot jayga, aur itne dino k baad aab wo phir se khus hai.... she 1st luked at veer who was smiling... aisha gave him a glare but he was still smiling... she luked at subhas then who was stairing at her... he understood her situation n said...

s- nihaal... tumne veer ko hamara ghar toh ghumaya hi nai... jao phle veer ko apna kamra dikhao... uske baad hum sab sath mei breakfast bhi karenge..

n- are haan mai toh bhool hi gya... chaliye chachu mai apko subh uncle ka ghar dikhata hu... aur haan yaha garden bhi bohut bara hai... baad mei hum waha khelne chalenge... haina massi...

a- ha.. haan nihaal...

nihaal took veer inside... chaliye chachu he pulled veer inside... aisha watched them go inside

s- aisha tum chinta mat karo, hum jald hi iska ka koi na koi rasta khoj hi lenge...

a- ek bar ish veer ki sacchai sab k samne ajaye... phir mai nihaal ko in logo se dur lekar yaha se chali jaogi...

s- haan aisha hum chale jainge par abhi tume sambhal k rehna hoga... jab tak humare pass saboot nai hai tume ye jahir nai hone dena hai k tum uski sacchi janti ho... warna woh phir se tumhari jaan lene ki kosis kar sakta hai ya tumhare samne koi musibat khadi kar sakta hai... tum samjh rahi ho na!

a- haan subhas.. ab mai bhot soch samjh k hi kuch karungi...

in nihaals room...

n- chachu dekho ye mera room hai... subh uncle ne mere liye bhot sare toys rakhe hai aur video games bhi hai... apko pata hai unhe mere sare fav's pata hai... sirf mere hi nai unhe toh massi ki bhi ek ek pasand maloom hai... dekhiye unhone massi ka kamra kitna sundar banaya hai...

veer smiled at him however he felt jealous k subhas ko aisha ka itna khayal hai, but then he was also happy k subhas ne aisa ka itna khayal rakha hai, he was thankful 2 him 4 dat...

nihaal saw him lost so he asked kya baat hai chachu aap kuch bol kyo nai rhe hai... aur apne massi ko apne dil ki baat batai k nai...

v- nai nihaal... pata nai kyo parapki massi mujhse baat hi nai kar rahi..he said it more 2 himself than 2 nihaal

n- ofo chachu.... apki aur massi ki phir ladai ho gyi....aap log kitna ladte ho, itna toh mai apne frnds se bhi nai larta... he said making a face....

v- like a child.... nai nihaal maine apki massi se koi ladai nai ki... wo pata nai kyo naraz hai??

n- aisa kaise ho sakta hai.. apne jaroor kuch kiya hoga...

v- nai maine toh kuch nai kiya hai...... sacchi... godpromise!!

n- hoon.. ho sakta hai aap itne din massi se milne nai gye, isliye massi apse naraj ho...

veer thought 2 himself, ho sakta hai nihaal sahi keh raha ho aur aisa mujhse isliye naraj ho k mai usse milne nai aya, par mujhe toh patahinai tha k wo kaha hai...

n- chachu aap kaha kkho jate ho... bas sochte hi rehte ho agar massi ko apne i luv u keh diya hota toh massi aur apki frndshp ho gyi hoti naa..

v- veer pulled his cheeks smiling........n said...... accha tum toh bhot samajhdar ho... itna gyan tumhare pass aya kaha se??

n- oof oo... chachu ye toh sab ko pata hota hai.... bas aapko hi nai pata...

v- par.. they heard aisa calling 4 breakfast.... chalo nihaal nasta karne chalte hai

n- nasta aap office ja k kar lena.... aab mai jaisa kahu wo kijiye... (he said something in his ears...)thik hai!!

v-thik hai..

nihaal gave him a thumbs-up!! n ran 2 d door... aisha was comin in, nihaal hides in d curtain n signals veer dat aisha is comin... she comes in calling nihaal n nihaal runs out hiding frm her...

v- aisha mujhe tumse baat karni hai!!

A- Veer nihaal kaha hai??

v- aisha tum mujhse baat kyo nai kar rhi ho... maine kya kiya hai... kya mujhse koi galti hui hai??

a- veer nihaal kaha hai... she asked a bit louder!

v- aisha aaj tumhe mujhse baat karni hogi... tumhare accident k baad maine tumhara kitna intzar kiya hai... aur ab tum mili ho toh mujhse baat kyo nai kar rhi...

aisha turned 2 go out but veer held her hand...

v- aisha ruko!!

a- veer mera hanth choro.... she tried 2 free her hand but veer held her tight........ veer ye kya badtameji hai.... choro mera hanth....

veer freed her hand, she was 2 move but her leg went on nihaal's toy n she slipped, but b4 she could fall on ground veer caught her..... now aisha was in him arms.... their faces were very close 2 each other, aisha could feel veers breath.. her heart was beating fast having him so close........ veer was just lost in her eyes..they were so close dat they can only see each other... they kept luking in each other 4 a while.. but then aisha came to sense nshe movedher gaze n luked d other side......... veer was still lost in admiring her face.... aisha was not comfortable...... she tried 2 push veer by her hands... dis bought veer 2 him sense..... both of them were now standing staight but veeer was still holding aisha by her waist.......

a- veer mujhe jana hai...she said in shaking voice not meeting his eyes!!

v- (he removed his hands realising) ooo...... i m sorry..... aisha turned 2 go but veer again held her... aisha luked bak on him shocked...... dey hav another eye lock 4 a moment n den he left her hand...

aisha nearly ran out d room ..... she didnt knew why she felt dis way... why cant she controll herself.... veer followed her out... outside nihaal n subhas were sitting on d table waiting 4 dem... subhas luked at aisha but aisha was lost in herself... she came and sat on subhas side... veer also came n sit on nihaals side... both aisha n veer were face 2 face but aisha avoided any eye contact... on breakfast all were quiet only nihaal was speking...after breakfast nihaal asked veer if he confessed or not ... veer said no...... nihaal was angry... he said k chachu aap rehne do mai hi massi se keh deta hu k aap unse pyar karte ho apse toh hoga nai......

v- nai nihaal mai aaj office mei aisha se baat kar lunga..... tum fikr mat karo...

n- thik hai...... par ye last chance hai...

v- ok, veer also thought 2 himself k aaj mai aisha ko apne dil ki baat bata k hi rahunga... aur mai janta hu k wo bhi mujhse pyar karti hai.... maine uske ankho mei dekha hai!!

veer n aisha took nihaal 2 school... and subhas followed dem in his car... after dropping nihaal aisha went wid subhas in his car.... veer was disappointed...... veer tried 2 talk wid aisha da whole day but she didnt let him

this was now a routine... subhas used 2 drop aisha at d office... kamini was angry at aisha 4 keeping nihaal wid her but veer contolled her.. she is planning sumthing 4 aisha!!

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the end ...

Edited by devrad - 15 years ago
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Posted: 15 years ago
#53

PART-15
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a new day....... subhas dropped aisha 2 ramada!! both aisha n veer stepped in nearly d same time... veer went 2 d lift but aisha watching him goin through lift takes d staiers... veer is again disappointed but then he stops at d 1st floor n waits 4 aisha 2 cum....... aisha cums n sees veer but avoids him n keeps on goin veer follows her... aisha is disgusted n thinks k veer tum kuch bhi karlo ish bar mai tumhare jaal mei nai phasne wali......

aisha n veer enters d cabin n sits on dere respective tables... veer keeps on luking at aisha.... aisha could sense his eyes but still tries 2 avoid any eye contact... pummi cums n hands her d agreement signed by d board members... aisha takes it ... raj also cums wid d papers n goes 2 veer n asks if he will sign d papers of agreement as few board members r in his support n will do d same as him..... veerasks him 2 convey all d board members dat he has no problem wid d agreement n he is goin 2 sign it....... raj is happy... veer gives him d signed papers both raj n pammi leaves d cabin....veercums 2 aisha table n asks if she was angry bcoz his mother refused 2 sign d papers.... but aisha excused herself saying its office n she dodnt likes 2 talk personal during working hours... she went out d cabin...

d days past in similar way... veer tried many times 2 talk wid her but she never gave him time n always excused herself......a wk has passed veer was now goin impatient... he has decided dat any how today he is goin 2 talk 2 her...

its late in d evening every1 has left only a few staffs r in d hotel... aisha is still in d office completing sum files... pammi n raj asked her 2 go wid dem but she said she will go after completing dese files... she asked dem 2 leave.... she was in d cleaning department as she didnt wanted 2 stay wid veer in d same cabin...... after completing her files aisha went 2 tak a round of d hotel....finally aisha returned 2 her cabin 2 tak her bags n belongings.... she was not expecting any1 in d cabin.... she thought its late n veer must hv left... she entered n 2 her surprise veer was in d cabin..... she luked at him n he luked at her.. but aisha went directly 2 her table n started collecting her things in a hurry...

v- mai tumhara hi wait kar raha tha.... aab office hours khatm ho gye hai toh hum apni personal life discuss kar sakte hai...

a- veer tumhari personal life mei mujhe koi dilchaspi nai hai....

veer came 2 her table where aisha was putting her files... veer tried 2 held her hands but she jerked her hands causing d files on d table 2 fall... aisha sat on d ground n started collecting d files but her hands were shaking... veer also bend 2 help her... it was hard 4 aisha 2 concentrate...... sumhow she collected all d files n kept dem bak on d table n den took her bag 2 leave.... but veer again stopped her holding her hand......

a- veer mera hanth choro......

he left her hand n said aisha mujhe tumse baat karni hai.... jab se tum mili ho mai tumse baat karne ki kosis kar raha hoon... aur tum mujhe aise treat kar rhi ho jaise mai hoon hi nai...... tumhe pata hai tumhara avoid karna mujhe kitna hurt karta hai... aisha plz bolo na tum mujhe avoid kyo kar rhi ho??

main tumhe kyo avoid karungi..

toh mujhse baat kyo nai karti tum??

humare bich baat karne jaisa kuch nai nai..... ab bina matlab k mai sab se baat toh nai kerte rahungi....

bina matlab k?? kya mai tumhari zindgi mei kuch nai hoon...?? veer has tears in his eyes

nai... tum mere liye kuch nai ho.... aisha said controlling her emotions!! she den moved 2 go out but before aisha could open d door veer caught her hand n pulled her 2 him wid one hand n closed d cabin door wid another hand...... aisha was shocked 2 see veer closing d door.......

a- veer yeh kya karrahe ho.... mujhe jana hai, nihaal mera wait kar raha hoga.... she said strugling in his arms but veer didnt let her go.... n pulled her more close 2 him...

v- aaj jab tak tum mere sare sawalo ka jawab nai deti mai tumhe kahi jane nai dunga....

a- veer hanth choro mera mujhe dard ho raha hai!!

v- tumhe dard ho rha hai haan.... veer said angreely luking direct in her eyes..... aur mere dard ka kya....... mai jo tumhare age piche itne dino se ghoom raha hoon aur tum mujhe avoid kar rhi ho, use mujhe kitna dard hota hai... yeh tumne socha hai...

a- maine tumse kaha na mujhe tumse koi lena dena nai hai... phir kyo tum...

v- veer pulled her more tightly wid more anger in his eyes.... dey were very close.... aisha maitumse pyar karta hoon!! kya tumhe mere ankho mei apne liye pyar nai dikhta..

aisha was shocked 2 hear dat frm him... she thought 2 herself aur kitna natak karoge veer...

a- ye acchank tumhe mujhse pyar kaise ho gya... mere accident k phle toh tum mujhse nafrat karte the... kahi aisa toh nai hai k tumhe meri maut k khabar se pyar ho gya ho!!

v- ye kya keh rahi ho aisha.... mai tumse nafrat kaise kar sakta hun... maine toh tumse humesha pyar kiya hai...yaad hai tumhare accident k phle tum mai aur nihaal kitne khus the... hum logo mei kitna pyar tha!!

a- pyar...... humare bich kabi pyar nai tha...

v- accha toh jo waqt humne sath mei bitaya hai woh kya tha??

a- woh ek natak tha jo mai nihaal k liye kar rhi thi... aur ye baat tumne hi mujhse kahi thi...

v- woh toh phle ki baat thi... us waqt mujhe galat faimi ho gyi thi... situations hi aise the.... par phir toh hari dosti ho gyi thi...

a- maine tumse phle hi kaha tha k humare bich koi rishta nai ho sakta....

v- kyo??

a- tumhare har sawal ka jawab mere pass hai par mai sahi waqt ane par hi jawab dungi...... tum mujhe majboor nai kar sakte... she tried 2 free herself!

veer was now losing his controll... he pushed aisha 2 d wall kepping his hands on d either side of d wall bloking her ways of exit....... his face was very close 2 her nhis breaths were very fast due 2 anger... aisha luked away frm him... veer saw tears comin out of hereyes.... he bandged his hand on wall in anger... aisha got scared n started crying...

v- aisha mai tumse pyar karta hun.... plz mera wiswas karo... aur mai janta hu k tum bhi mujhse bhot pyar karti ho... par pata nai kyo maan nai rhi ho.....

a- tumhe jo samjhna hai samjho mujhe koi fark nai parta par mai janti hoon k mai tumse pyar nai karti...

v- nai karti pyar mujhse..... haan.... he held aisha by her shoulders n pulled her 2 him...... bolo....... bolo na ......... pyar karti ho naan!! veer eyes were on aisha..... n aisha could not handle it anymore she broke n said "KARTI HOON MAI PYAR... BHOT PYAR KARTI HOON" aisha was still cring....... veer was very happy 2 hear aishas confession he hugged her tightly... not letting her go........ aisha was snobing on his chest..... veer felt like all his painswent in air... he was feeling so relaxed jaise kisi ne uske dil se koi bhari pathar hata diya ho..........

episode ends on veer hugging aisha!!

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precap- subhas is worried 4 aisha..... its late in d night n she has not returned yet!!

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Posted: 15 years ago
#54
excelent work keep it up plz next part soon give us
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Posted: 15 years ago
#55

Thanks for updating, marvelous job👏👏

Please update next part soon I am waiting 😊😊



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