VEESHA ff: love that never ends!(part-14&15)! done

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Tanvi

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Posted: 15 years ago

#21

hey...ur portrayal was really very good..... i felt aayesha mil gaayi:(...plz aayesha ko la do😛😛😛

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devrad

@devrad

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Posted: 15 years ago

#22

PART-6
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veer reaches shimla and talks to the DCP who happens 2 b the father of one of his friend.... he explains him all about the accident and the letter and asks him to reopen the case... DCP advises him not to reopen it now as if the case will be reopened the culprit will become aware of it and then he can distroy the evidences and can also harm their lifes...... DCP further adds that he should make a private enquiry 1st and reopen the case when they have some evidence... in this way the criminal will stay unaware of their plans and it would be easy 4 them to catch him then..... veer is also positive to this, the DCP promises him that he will be helping him un-officially... vir takes leave from him and drives to jai-divya house......

veer's car stopped near the house.... he stepped out of the car...... he goes in to FBs when he was here to buy the house... and then how he met ayesha in this house and the misunderstanding created b/w them, he got tears in his eyes remembering how he shouted on her... he was now able to understand her pain at that time.... how hard was it 4 the little ayesha to handle herself and nihaal all alone in this big world..... he could feel her insecurity towards nihaal, that she would have felt like som1 might take away the only person left 2 her, whom she can call hers... he remembered how hard she tried to keep nihal in hiding 2 keep him safe, he remembered all the bad times when ayesha was blamed for one or other reasons... veer is pained and he promises him self that now there will be no misunderstanding b/w them as now he also knows the truth...

veer is opening the door when some one is shown watching his back from the bushes... the face of the person is not visible, veer's hands and shaking opening the lock... he has FBs of good times with jai in their bachpan... he remembers how jai used 2 love him, he was always there 4 him... just then keys fell on the ground from his hands and he turns 2 pick the keys.......

the person in the bushes sees veers face and calls some1..... he informs on phone that veer is here in shimla... we dont hear the voices on other side of phone... he then cuts the phone and goes away... veer feels som1 staring at him he goes 2 the bushes but he finds no1....

veer goes inside the house..... he touches every thing in the house and feels jai's touch in them, he see all 3(jai, divya and ayesha) playing with nihaal..... he smiles watching them happy and then he finds him alone and bcomes sad..... he cries in front of jai photo and asks for forgiveness 4 not being present when he needed him.......... he also appolosises that he could not take care of ayeha after them..... he asks jaI to help him find ayesha.... as he is very alone and could not understand where 2 find her??

after spending sometime in the house he leaves 4 the hotel he is staying at.... he goes 2 his room, takes bath and them gets ready 2 go 2 a restturant for having his dinner... veer steps down the place and is walking on the road....... here we see a car on the opposite side of the road and after a lot of focus we see ayesha sitting in the car........(doom tanna music in background with camera focus)... veer is walking straight and in ayesha car the driver comes with some stuff and starts the car 2 leave......... veer crosses the road and the car crosses the same splitting some mud on veer.....

veer turns back in anger and shouts on the driver but ayesha didnt hears him and drives away... veer notices the car no. and is fuming in anger......... ayesha is shown in the car...

we see the tv screan splittin in 2 halfs, showings veer and ayesha close-ups ......
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i know there is not much in this part but this was more a ayesha re-intro episode!!!

Edited by devrad - 15 years ago

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Pickachu

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Posted: 15 years ago

#23

Wow!!!!!!!!!!!!Very niceeeeeeeeeeee update.Waiting for ayesha's reintroduction........Sorry for late comment....

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Tanvi

@Tanvi_R

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Posted: 15 years ago

#24

A very nicely written part........waiting for ur update.....i hope here no plastic surgery..............

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Maahi Mishra

@cutemaahi

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Posted: 15 years ago

#25

really beautiful imagination, i burst out laughing after reading it, the fifth part was really good in the end.

Edited by cutemaahi - 15 years ago

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Uttia Majumdar

@veiva

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Posted: 15 years ago

#26

I only wish that the actually story was also like this............. it would have been so nice to have the original Ayesha back...........

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devrad

@devrad

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Posted: 15 years ago

#27

PART-7
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Starts from the previous scene,,, veer shouts on the driver but he didn't notices veer..... ayshas stops near the hotel veer is staying at, veer watches it moves in anger toward the car......at the same time ayesha opens her car door 2 step down...... (veer is on the other side of the road), veer was about 2 cross d road wen a person steps out frm the hotel and helps the lady(ayesha) to step down, she has a stick in her hand and she is wearing the rod steel shoe in her left leg which is broken....

veer is watching her frm back ( cant see her face) after it his anger goes in air.... and he goes away....

on d other side.... we see aysha steping down and themen who came 2 help is subhas(ayeshas frnd).......... ayesha smiles at him........(but not the 1 she usually smile, it was w/o life)

aysha has gone thinner...... she looks sick.... she is working with shubhas in his company subhas construction... he is having a meeting in the hotel today!!

S- ayesha tum kyo agai..... maine kha tha na koi jaruri kaam ho toh mujhe call kar dena......acha ab agai ho toh andar chalo..... .(he takes her in the hotel)

A- wo meri dressing karwani thi... meri nurse chutti par hai.... toh mai hospital chailigai!!

S- ohh...... toh tumhe mujhe kehna chahiye tha... mai hospital phone kar kisi ko bula deta..

A- mai bekar hi toh thi.... ghar p akle man bhi nahi lag raha tha toh maine socha yaha akar clients ki meeting attend kar lo....... i hope meri tuti tang se tumhara client bhag nai jayga...

S- Ayesha.....(making a serious face)...... then smiles........ uski fikr tum mat karo mai sambhal lunga.... par tumhe abhi itna kaam nahi karna chahiye... doc ne aram karne ko kaha hai na....

A- mai thik hun..... kal toh belt bhi leg se hat jaygi..... phir mai nih...(suddenly goes sad)

S- kya hua..... why r u sad???

A- cutting him in b/w... subhas mujhe delhi jana hai.........

S- (there was silence 4 a moment)....... ayesha abhi nai....... tum abhi puri thik nai ho........ waha ja kar agar tumhe kisi ne phir se chot pohchai toh......... nahi, phle tum puri thik ho jao phir!!!

A- Nai subhas ab aur nai, 3 mahine ho gye hai maine nihaal ko dekha nai hai.... pata nai wo kaisa hoga... wo log pata nai nihaal k sath kuch bura na kar de.... mai toh 2 mahine se komamei thi... tumhare kehne se mai apne treatment tak yaha ruk gai par ab aur nai mujhe waha jald se jald jana hai!!

S- Par ayeshaaa..... achi tarah se soch lo...... abhi tak kisi ko pata nai hai ki tum thik ho... ek bar unhe pata chaljayga toh tumhari jaan ko bhi khatra ho sakta hai...

A- mujhe apni fikr nai hai..... nihal waha akla hai aur mai use un khooniyo k bich nai chod sakti... plz subhas !!

S- THIK hai......... maine designs k print karwa liye hai... tumhare belt hatne k baad chalenge......

A- (she smile) subhas you r my best frnd..... thank u!! pata nai tum nai hote tohh..

S- ayesha dosti mei no thanks n no sorry.!!! (smiling)

ayesha remembers the time with veer when they frnds...... tears fill her eyes....then she remembers veer at the cliff with the mask and brokes out of thoughts.......

S- kya hua ........... u luk lost???

A- nai...... kuch nai!! (she wipes her tears)

S- Lo mr. mehra(client) agaye.....

they get involved in the meeting... when the meeting is over subhas takes mr. mehra 4 dinner....... ayesha waits 4 dem 2 com bak.... after sum time she takes her stick and walks 2 the lobby of hotel as the room was now crowded.... n she wanted to stay alone........ she stood there and was thinking of wat happned till now'''

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after the accident, ayesha was in a very bad condition... the truck driver took her 2 d forest office... where they did her initial treatment.... wen they asked her were abts she gave them subhas no. as she has seen vir on the cliff and thought that veer was tring 2 kill her so she didnt called d vardhans.... subhas was in delhi for his consinment (BY COINCIDENCE).... he took her with his.... she went in coma 4 2months..... and wen she gained conciousness...... her leg was paralized....... she couldnt walk.......... she wanted 2go delhi..... meet nihaal and tak him away frm dose ppl....... she told everthing 2 subhas....... he consoled her....... that they will not harm nihaal as if anything happens 2 his they lose d prop. and they will never do dis mistak... also they r now befikr that nihals custody is wid them and after u no 1 can claim his custody....... but if u go there they will surly harm you.... they can even try 2 kill her again.......... he says that if anything happens 2 her wat will nihal do....... so, she sh'd 1st recover and then prepare her to face those ppl........ ayesha agrees 2 it...... we see subhas tabking care of ayesha.... after a wk she asks subhas 2 give her sum work as she dont wanted 2 b a bojh on him..... he neglects but accepts wen she didnt agree.....

back 2 reality....
she luks at her watch........ an hour has passed she turns 2 go back 2 d room where their tables r booked...... she takes the stairs, climbs a few steps but walks on her foot and gets disbalanced........ her stick falls and she closes her eyes waiting 2 bump in the floor..... but finds her safe in sumbody's arm...... she opens her eyes 2 luk at her survivor..... SHOCK!!!

she finds veer holding her..... both luk at each other and r shocked....... the episode ends on their shocked faces!!!!!!!!!!!!

Edited by devrad - 15 years ago