VEESHA ff: love that never ends!(part-14&15)! done

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Pickachu

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Posted: 15 years ago

#11

Gr88888888 part.Waiting for ayesha to come back.Plzzzzzzz update next part soon.

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devrad

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Posted: 15 years ago

#12

hey my user name is devrad..........😉

thanx 4 reply guyz.........😊😊😊😊😊😊😊

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devrad

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Posted: 15 years ago

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there are not much replies.... i cant say that you people are enjoying my ff or not........... i feel disappointed but i'll feel more if i leave it incomplete........ so, here is the next----

PART-4
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Veers car stopped near the shimla flat, he saw ayesha (he was very happy finding her and wanted 2 embrace her) then he saw two other people and aysha was not alone, the other 2 handed over their baby boy(a very sweet baby smiling in sleep) to her, they are going out........ they kissed both( ayesha and child) on the forehead and left in the car.......

A- Bye....... enjoy your self!!!!

veer thought how happy these 4 are like they dont need any1......... they are just perfect(he smiled on his thought)..........but how come she forget me and didn't even called me once........ how could she leave me and her nihaal.... did she really forget or sumthing else.......

A- aaaaaaaaaa......... nai.......... somebody help plz..........

V- ( i broke frm my thoughts and ran toward her without knwng d reason 4 her scream ) ayesha!!! aysha!!! kya hua........ kya hua.....

( she handed me the boy , not looking any excited finding me(like she didn't recognized me), her eyes were lost in something else.... filled with tear of helplessness, fear of losing something precious........ she turned toward the direction of the car.......... it was then that i noticed that the car was crushed by a truck and the 2 people who were smiling a moment ago were bleeding....they were dead.....i could not see their faces clear frm this distance.)

ayesha ran toward them shouting...... i called her from back but she didnt hear me..... then she turned back 2 see me(this time a known look).... her eyes like pleeding me 2 save them, the boy and then she turned face her back toward me and ran again........

everything was so fast i cant understand anything....... she was running far away frm me and then i saw a truck moving toward her....... oh no she is moving close 2 it!!! how will i save her...... i called her, she didnt hear me, i tried 2 catch her but no......... she is not here ,where is she..... my heart beat raced....... where did she go....... i shouted...................

AYESHAaaaa...........

kya hua veer............, veer......... mom called me(pulling me)

ooh it was a dream......... i woke frm my dream........

V- mom....... ayesha...... ayesha...(cant controll his breath and highly sweating)........ she needs my help...... she is not well.........

KAMINI- Veer........ veer..... hosh mei aao....(shaking him) hosh mei aao vir... tum sapna dekh rahe the......

V- par mom..... ayesha.........(still half-concious)

K- veerrr...... aysha ko kuch nai hua hai....... mare hua logo ko kuch nai hota...... tum maan kyo nai lete..........

V- mom........ (awake with full anger)................maine apse kaha hai na ayesha k bare mei kuch bura mat boliye......... wo hai aur mai usse wapass launga!!! phir aap kyoo.....

K- Aab bas bi karo veer........ mai thak gai ho .... roj roj mai tumhe ek hi baat nai samjha sakti...... agar tumhe nai samajhna........... toh thik hai!! tumhe jo karna hai karo........ tumhe pata hai, tumhari ye halat dekh mujhe.... tumhari ma ko kitni taklif hoti hai......(tears rushed in her eyes)

saying so she walked out of d room and slammed d door on my face......... this was a genral stard of my days...... this was the same dream that haunted me in d last 2 months........ from when she was missing.....

V- mom....... (i took my face in my hand and sat like that 4 a while, thinking.......)

i never thought deeply 4 d dream except about ayesha being missing..... i could only see ayesha clearly, everything else looks vague. unclear in d dream till today.......... but now i understand the whole dream....... 2 people in d car were jai bhaiya and bhabhi..... and d boy in my lap in d dream is nihaal....... our nihal, whom ayesha handed 2 me...... and yes she needs me..... my help..... she is lost.....

V- mai tumhe dhoondh longa aysha...... tumhe kuch nai hoga.....

he jumpeg frm his bed, took a quick bath, got dressed and moved downstairs......

V- ramu(servent).. driver se kaho mera saaman gadi mei rakhe aur gaddi tayar kare hume shimla jana hai....

K- kaun ja raha hai shimla??? (she asked comin out of her room)

V- Wo mom main batana bhool gaya tha....... mujhe aaj shimla jana hai..... woh day care project k silsile mei meri waha ek meeting hai..........

veer didn't knew why?..... but he didn't want 2 disclose the real reason......( abhi and nandni entered d hall..........)

A- kya hua mumiji....... aap itni pareshan kyu dikh rahi hai??(showing fake concer)

K- dekho na avi..... veer shimla ja raha hai.......... yaha itna kaam pada hai.... aurr.....

A- kya( (super shocked hearing shimla!!) ......... kyooo(loud in anger)..... (then contolling as it caused others 2 stare at him)..... a... a.... a... mera matlab hai kyo....... kuch kaam hai kya??(acting concerned)

V- (little ANNOYED . he wanted 2 leave as soon as possible. his heart and mind were at pick of excitement and though rptvly).......... haan jiju mujhe DCP ki designs k liye waha jana hai...... aapko pata hai na yeh proj. mere liye kitni ahmiyet rakhta hai.......

A- (relived hearing his motive...... smiling in relief) oo.... acha veer!!!! mummi ji (flattering) aap fikr mat kijiye....... mai hoon na..... yaha mai sab sambhal lunga( thinking- akhir baad mei sab mujhe akle hi toh sambhalna hai...... chalo practice ho jaygi)......... aapko mujh pe bharosa hai nai.....

K- wo toh hai avi........ tumhari kabiliyat pe mujh poora yakin hai........... parrr...

A- mummi ji....... DCP vir k liye bahot imp hai......... 2 mahine se vir ishpe kaam kar raha hai....... veer ko shimla jane dijiye.... (idiot)

chachu aap shimla ja rahe ho (nihal asked in excitement entering the hall with arnav)....... kya mai bhi apke saath.........(holding his hand)

V- nai nihaal....... abhi nai..... chachu ko waha bohot imp kaam hai..... aur waha apko dekhne k liye bhi koi nai hai....

nihaal became sad, looking at it veer said.....

V- nihaal plz sad mat ho.......... i promise i'll take u next time...... aur haan nihaal mai apke liye waha se ek aysi gift launga.... jisa dekh k aap kush ho jao ge...... thik hai!!(vir smiled with unknwn happiness and confidence)

N- (still not happy) ok chachu......... but come soon........ mujhe akle yaha accha nai lagega....

V- (LIFTED HIM IN HIS STRONG ARM)... mai bahot jaldi ajaunga..... aur aap tab tok good boy ki tarah sab k sath rahna......kabhi akele mat rehna......mai toh aapko call karunga hi roz........... aur jab aapko meri yaad aye...... call me....... thik hai.......

nihaal kissed veer a good bye... veer hugged him( promised in his mind that he will not leave him ever alone after dis and will bring his massi 4 sure)...... veer asked nandni 2 take care of nihaal in his absence which she whole heartedly assured him........

then veer left in his car 4 shimla....... he didn't knew but he was smiling like something good is goin 2 happen!!!!

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the previous1 (same1)

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plz frnds reply me.......... it feels good if sum1 appriciates 1's effort................😆

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shonaveer

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Posted: 15 years ago

#14

Hey,

extremely sorry yaar.. I could not leave a comment for the previous part coz, i was busy with my office..

Coming to the 3rd part, i really loved the way veer found the letter as well as the detective scene and in the fourth part, the way veer has a dream andthe way he realizes that, ayesha is in trouble is fabulous. The way you portrayed everything is cool.

And yeah.. Plastic surgery nahi yaar.. I guess yadash kho jaana is gonna happen and that is gonna be wonderful coz, veer ab ayu ke saath kaam karega aur usko patane ki koshish bhi..

Haha.. Maza aayega..

Please do continue as soon as possible.. Really waiting for the next part to come... Continue soon :)

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charminggirl123

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Posted: 15 years ago

#15

absolutely wonderful..👏👏....the dream was written beautifullly.....its a new idea....plz no surgery or memory loss 😃.....well done and plz continue soon...

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devrad

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Posted: 15 years ago

#16

thanks 4 rplng......😛

i will continue soon...!!!

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Tanvi

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Posted: 15 years ago

#17

Hi @Devrad...i am really sorry 😕😕😕😕 for writing ur user name incorrectly....... anyways coming to ur update..its wonderful😛😛😛👏👏👏....... hey dont get disheartened by less no. of responses.. actually after aditi left no. of people visiting this forum has deceased & so u get less replies.its no more active & vibrant as it used to be once🤢🤢🤢..... plz continue with ur FF... its really enjoyable.... update soon........

Tanvi

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love_lavnya

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Posted: 15 years ago

#18

its really enjoyable and wonderful .... plzzzzzzzz update soon

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Pickachu

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Posted: 15 years ago

#19

Sorry for late reply.I m not a regular forum member now but i read every sidditi ff.This one is very interesting.Plzzzzzzz update soon.

fatima

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devrad

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Posted: 15 years ago

#20

sorry 4 delay, here is the next part....

PART-5
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veer drives 2 d office and takes the design files from his office. veer has a confused state of mind, he is nervous as well as excited...... so many thoughts are rushing into his mind..... he has a feeling that something is gonna happen today....... HE OPENS HIS DRAWER AND TAKES AYESHA PHOTO.... he touches her face and has tears in his eyes..... mrs. dixit enters his kabin... veer keeps the photos in the file....

d- sir aapne bulaya???

v- woh mai shimla jaraha hu.... aap humari designer k saath ek meeting fix kara dijiye...... mai jald se jald ye design chahta hoo....

d- thik hai sir.... per aap shimla kyo ja rahe hai... ye party toh next monday ane hi wali hai..... u look tensed koi pareshani ki bat toh nai hai....

V- nai aisi koi baat nai hai.... mujhe waha kuch aur bhi kaam hai........ kuch purane issues clear karna hai...... kuch sawalo k jawab dhondhne hai(murmurring 2 himself)... TTHIK hai...... jaisa ho aap mujhe inform kar dijiyega.......... he then leaves...

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(at veers home)

kaamini and nandini

K- pata nahi ye vir ko kya ho jata hai....... kal raat aya tha toh uska chehra dekhna tha...... lag raha tha abhi fut fut kar rone lagega........ aur aaj dekha........ subha subha uth kar kehta hai mujhe shimla jaana hai....(tensed)

N- maa aap itni chinta mat kijiye......... veer ne kaha hai naa ki wo DCP ke kaam se ja raha hai....... fikr karne ki koi baat nai hai... aap yuhi tension le rahi hai.....

K- pata nai nandini par mujhe veer ki bhot chinta hoti hai......... jab se woh ladki ayesha humari zindagi mei aai ....... is parriwar ne apna sukh-chain sab kho diya hai.....

V- maa aap aysha ko kyo????...... (she is highly simpathitic 2 ayesha)

K- toh aur kya karu......... kya karu mai nandini.......... dekho ayesha ke jaane k itne din baad bhi woh veer aur nihal ke jehaan mei basi hui hai.... donno sirf kush rehne ka dikhawa karte hai...... kya mai nahi samajhti.... maa hu mai nandini..... apne baccho ka ek ek ansu.. ek ek dard samajhti hu mai....... par mai kya karu( nearly crying).........

V- maa aap itni chinta kyo kar rahi hai........ unhe thoda aur samay dijiye......dhere-2 sab kuch normal ho jayga......... nihal toh school bhi jane laga hai ....... aap dekhna dunno sambhal jayege......

K- sayad tum thik hi keh rahi ho beta... par jab se maine jai ko khyoya hai naa....... dil bohot ghabrata hai....... pata nai niyati ne hamare liye kya likha hai....... en budhi ankho ko pata nai abhi aur kya kya dekhna hai..... tum bacche ghar se nikalte ho toh lagta hai kahi koi anhoni na ho jaye......... ek daar humesa samaya rahta hai........ jaroor kisi k buri nazar lag gai hai humare pariwar ko........!!!!

V- aap kyo itne bure khyal man mei larahi hai........ hum sab apke pass hi toh hai..... aur maa veer bhi 2-3 din meii ajayga....... ab chaliye aap aram kijiye.... chaliye...

(nandini takes kamini in her room.)
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(in hotel ramada)

khtwani and avinash

K- sir aab kya hoga veer ne toh designs select kar li hai....... kahi ye proj. suru ho gaya toh humare ghaplo ka pata chal jayega..... sir ye accha mauka hai hum veer ka bhi accident kara dete hai....... sara janjhat bas ek bar mei khatam..........

A- chup......... chup karo.....jab muh kholte ho kuch bura hi bahar ata hai..... diwaro k bhi kaan hote hai......kisi ne sun liya toh humara kaam bhi ek bar mei khatam ho jayga .....

k- sir..... mai toh.....apke bhale kihi soch raha tha....

A- soch rahe thae..... plz..... jo kaam tumhara nai ho wo mat karo........ tum bas wo karo jo mai tumse karne ko kahu samjhe......

k- yes sir(sad)......

A- ek baar bas ye daulat mere hanth lag jaye...... enn sab ko mai aisa saaf karunga ki kisi ko pata bhi nai chalega.........(smiling and adjusting his glasses)
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vir is driving....... he stops near the tea shop(where he and aysha had tea b4).... he orders a tea for him and recalls the previous visit..... the chai wala brings chai 4 him but he is lostt in his thoughts......

cw- saab chai.......... saab......... saab ..........

v- haann??

cw- chai........!!

veer takes the cup and starts having it the same way aysha had last time...... he thinks...... kaha ho ayesha........ bas ek bar mil jao , tumhe kabhi apne se dur nai hone dunga......... veer have tears in his eyes...... veer gives the money and goes to his car and was about to sit when a voice called.

VEER..........!!!!

vir turns and is surprised 2 see the person, he was here 4...........AYESHAaaaa.........!!!!

tears fills his eyes but a smile rushes to his lips, his heart beats increases.... he cant belive but could only stares at the innocent face of his love , who was now smiling at him.......... both veer and ayesha are smiling and are happy 2 find each other!!!

A- sir aap.......

v- veer justt stairs at her smiling........ and moves closer to her

A- sir aap............. ye ch...... she has a shy-feared reaction and moves a step back

veer tries 2 hold her when she suddenly moves back and shouts.......... SIR........ CHANGE...???

veer is shocked 2 see the chai wala instead of ayesha and is feeling awkward 2 see the fear on his face due to his moves and staires...... he moves back realising the closeness b/w them....

CW(shocked)- saab...... saab...... mai tho bas ye change lautane aya tha, aap lena bhul gaye the........ aur aap tho......(making a face)

V- Ooo...... acha.. mujhe laga.... he moves his hand forward 2 take he change..

CW- sir( moving back with a shocked expression)....... mai aisa nai hu!!!???

V- kya???(confused)............. ( understanding his feeling)........... ok keep tthe change......

veer rushes to the car without seeing back and drives in a hurry......... and then smiles at himself wattching the chai wala confused face in the back mirror........ he takes the shawl kept in the side seat(ayeshas gift) and says.......

Ayesha aab jaldi mil jao......... kahi thumse dur reh kar mai pagal naa ho jau!!!(smiling)......

veer drives to shimla imaginig ayesha all around him.......... he remembers all the images of their previous visit
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Veer is standing outside the shimla house and a person is watching him from behind!!!

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