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Posted: 15 years ago
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part-10
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the episode starts wid the rising sun, then we see veer sleeping on the bench... he has been there whole night waiting 4 ayesha, a hotel staff wakes him(he is d same person vir enquired abt ayesha),

HS- sir..... sir....

V- (slowly opening his eyes and realising dat he slept on d bench) ... wo..... mujhe pata hi nai chala mujhe kab neend agai??

HS- it's ok sir,aap andar chale jaiye.....

V- ya! (starts 2 move then turns bk n asks..) suno........ koi mujhse milne aya tha kya(expecting ayesha) ..

HS- no sir!!

V- (sad) accha.... agar koi ay e toh mai room no. b13 mei hoon...

HS- ok sir....

vir goes 2 his room and freshen up.... he comes 2 d reception...

V- Keep my keys, i m goin out 4 sum work, if sumbody calls 4 me or cums 4 me, dis is my no. u can inform me(giving his visiting card)....

vir goes 2 meet d DCP , where he asks him 2 talk 2 each n every person who knw jai n his wife........ veer says dat only ayesha was living wid dem and she is not available right now... dcp says.... ok then u 1st go 2 d hospital where their bodies were kept... there bodies where kept their 4 a few days as no one was their 4 dere sanskar work, may b we gets sum clues frm dere.... veer also thinks dsame and takes leave frm dere n goes 2 d hospital....

there ayesha n subhas are in the hospital... ayesha was now very confident n determined , she very well kew wat she has 2 do next.... d docter took her in 2 remove the steel support frm her leg.....veer enters d hospital... he goes 2 d section were dead bodies r kept and takes 2 d guard... the guard denies 2 give any details secretly n asks him 2 ask frm reception.... veer tries 2 convince him... after sum time the guard takes him 2 the record room and shows him the postmotom report... after luking at it he tells him dat the postmotom was done in a hurry and was just 2 clear the formality... as there is nothing clear in it , he also tells him dat sum times reports like dis r made 2 hid a case if ther is orders frm sum big person.. he tells sum more things, which we see in silent mode.... there we see tat ayeshas leg is now fine... the doc. makes her stand... she still has sum problem in waking... the doc says thatshe will be alrite in a wk or 2 n asks her 2 walk wid stick as her legs r still weak and its good till see is totally fine... he asks he to wait ... as he will inform subhas abt her medicines n other things... veer asks the report frm d guard and gives him sum money... ayesha n subhas also takes the medicines and pays the bill... we see both of them comin 2 d corridore frm opp. side, veer n ayesha was 2 cum face 2 face wen sumbody collides wid veer.... he is d same person who was keeping an eye on veer, wen he wasat jai's house... he is surprised 2 see veer... veer says sorry n leaves.... there we see ayesha goin out of hospital gate..... getting into car, subhas goes 2 the driver seat.... veer cums out of the gate n see her, ayesha also see her... both luks at each other 4 a few sec. then the car moves..... veer says ....ayesha (slowly as he moves towards the car )... then he runs and shouts her name.... ayesha sees him in the bak mirror.... then both gets out of site frm each other..... veer throws his hand in air in anger....

v- yeh ayesha ko kya hua hai... usne mujhe dekh par wo ruki kyo nai.... kal bhi bin batay chali gai... kya usne mujhe pehchana nai.... nai.. aisa kaise ho sakta hai... wo mujhe kabhi nai bhool sakti... he takes his car and goes were her car left...

there we see ayesha... she is having tears in her eyes...

subhas asks her wat happened...

she says it luks like veer unka picha kar raha hai...

he asks "wat"....

she says yes.. he was at hospital...

subhas luks surprised n then confused... how he knws were we r.... ?//

i dont knw!!

mujhe lagta hai... usne hume by chance hospital mei dekha hoga.... warna agar wo janta toh wo humare samne hota!!

sayad tum thik keh rahe ho.... (after being silent 4 sum time...) humari flight kitne baje hai???)

aaj raat 7pm... abhi 2;30 baj rahe hai... hum abhi ghar ja kar saman pik karenge, tum thoda rest bhi kar lena aur phir nikal jaynge... thik hai... tumhe aur koi kaam toh nai hai...

nai... ab toh mera kaam suru hone ja raha hai...

wat?? tumne kuch kaha...

nai... kuch nai...

ayesha... ek baat kahu... agar tum bura na mano toh!!

haan subhas... tumhe kuch bhi kehne k liye mujhse puchne ki koi jarurat nai hai... bolo...

ayesha tumhara irada toh pakka hai par... kahi tum kuch galat toh nai karne ja rahi na...

galat ?? un logo ne mere sath jo kiya aur mere pariwar k sath jo kiye wo kya galat nai tha...

tha ayesha... par hum un jaise toh nai hai naa...

nai hai... par ab agar unhe sabak sikhane k liye mujhe kuch karna pade toh mai piche nai hatungi...(her eyes r full wid tears of anger n revenge)...

(both turns silent 4 few sec.. then ayesha says...

subhas abhi tak tumne meri bohut madad ki hai... tumne hamesha mera accha chaha hai... isliye tum mujhe in sab se dur rakhna chahte ho... par mai ab in sab k hissa hu... meri zinggi k maksad hai ye... mai nihaal ko unke bicch nai chod sakti jab ki mai janti hu k unke irade kya hai... mujhe unhe unki bhasa mei samjhana ho ga.... ab chahe tum isme mera sath do ya naa do...

ayesha...

nai subhas... mai thik keh rahi hoon.... aur tumhe bura feel karne k jarurat nai hai... mai kudh nai chahti tum in sab mai phaso... tumhari apni zindgi hai... aur mai tumhari zindgi khatre mei nai dal sakti.... tumne jo mere liye kiya hai uska ayshaan mai kabhi nai bhool sakti par ab tumhe aur kuch karne ki koi zarurat nai hai....

ayesha ye tum kya keh rahi ho... maine tumpe kabhi koi ahsaan nai kiya hai.... maine jo kiya wo koi bhi insaan karta jo meri jagah hota.... ye sab keh k tumne sabit kar diya ki tum mujhe apna nai manti....

nai subhas...... maine aisa kuch nai keh rahi hoo...

toh tumne ye kyu kaha ki " tumhari apni zindgi hai..." .... kyo kya tum meri zindgi ka hissa nai ho... (then w/o leting her reply... tum chaho ya na chaho mai humesa tumhare sath rahunga aur tumhare har faisle mei tumhara sath dunga.... samjhi....

par...

ab par war kuch nai.... iske baad tumne mujse picha chudane ki kosis ki toh mai tumhe(thinking)........... isi car mei lock kar dunga(smiling)

both smiles and ayesha thanks him...



veer cums to the road but cant decide which way 2 go.... he then thinks ayesha hospital ayi thi ho sakta hai wo yaha se treatment karwa rahi ho... mujhe yaha se pata karna hoga... he goes bak 2 d hospital and asks d enquiry.... the nurse tell him the doc under which her treatment was goin... he goes 2 d doc's cabin and takes a appointment... he meets d doc and says dat he has sum prob n is not feeling well... the doc cheks him , he taks his blood sample n he asks him 2 sit in cabin n leaves.... veer taks d opportunity n searches the files... he finds ayesha file and notes her address.... the doc cums bak n says dat he is fine n its just weakness... he gives sum vit tablets 2 him...

veer taks leave n address n leaves, the person who collided with him sees him cuming out n asks the nurse abt him ... the nurse tells him that he was not feeling well...

the person calls sum1 and informs dat veer was in d hospital... d person on other side is shouting on him n asks 2 find d reason... he says dat he was not well and he had an appointment wid d doc n there is nothing 2 worry abt... d person on otherside says 2 keep an eye on him n he keeps d phone.... we see d person as abhinash.... he has a tensed expression and thinks ye veer agar mere raste mei aya toh mai ise samay se phle hi utha dunga... mujhe ab uska dhyan rakhna hoga... he calls veer....

hello veer.........

haan jiju... apne phone kiya kuch kaam tha kya..

nai... bas wo ek proj file mei tumhari suggestions chahiye thi, toh maine socha baat kar lu.... kab arahe ho..??

jiju meri abhi designers se baat nai ho pai hai... lagta hai kuch din aur lag jayge... tab tak aap sambhal lo...

haan haan vir.. tum bilkul chinta mat karo... mai hun naa... waise tumhari tabyt toh thik hai naa..

veer was shocked.. haan jiju mai bilkul thik hoo.. kyo??

wo.. a ... a.. tumhari awaa se laga!!!

accha nai... thodi kamjhori thi... abhi medicine li hai... aap chinta mat karo aur ghar p mat kehna.. mom aur di bekar tension leti hai...

wo toh thik hai veer .... par jayda tabyet kharab ho toh mai ajau kya??(showing fake concern)

nai jij.... maine kaha na mai thik hoon.... ab main phone rakhta hoon... mujhe kuch kaam hai... u tak care......bye

haan haan .....tum apna kaam karo.... meri zarurat hopo toh kehna....ok......bye veer!!

avi cuts d phone... iska matlab hai ki ghabrane ki koi baat nai hai, i can relax... haan par ye acchi baat nai hai ki mere dushmano ki tabiyet thodi kharab ho... bhagwan apko toh unhe utha hi lena chahiye... kam se kam mera ek bhojh toh kam ho jata..(he smiles his evil smile)....

veer drives at ayeshas address and reaches there but the door is locked... ayesha hasalready left... the watchmen tells him that she left just a few mins ago... he didnt knew where they left but he said that dey were goin out of town.... veer again becomes sad... and asks god why he is playing hide n seek.... kyo ayehsa ko mkujhse mila nai deta... ab mai itni badi dunia mei use kaha dhoondho????

there we see aysha sitting in d plane n thinking.... mai arahi ho veer, tumse badla lena.... tumhare ek ek gunah ki saza dene....

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dats it!!! next epi we see aysha in nihaals school...............


plz reply!!!!


Edited by devrad - 15 years ago
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Keeping upade soon it's great yaar

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Posted: 15 years ago
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thanx 4 replg frnds😛😛😛..........

now i am super happy😃😃😃............😆
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Posted: 15 years ago
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PART-11
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next day we see ayesha waiting 4 nihal near his school........ his car comes n drops him near d gate n leaves, since veer is not here and kamini has 2 go early 2day as dere ws sum meeting in d office...... he was alone .... as he ws 2 enter d gate..... ayesha called him frm behind.... NIHAAL......

e ws schoked 2 hear ayesha voice..... he couldn't believe so he stood still........ ayesha called him again..... he turned back and as he saw ayesha he ran 2 her n hugged her n started crying....

massi aap kaha chali gyi thi mujhe chod kar...... aap itne din kaha thi.... aap mujhse milne kyo nai ayi.... apko pata hai maine apko kitna yaad kiya........ he ws crying very much........aapko pata hai apke bina mujhe kuch bhi accha nai lagta tha......... ayesha was holding him tight.... she tried 2 consol him...... nihaal aab mai agi hu na nihaal, chup ho jao........ chup ho jao nihaal....... after sumtime he stopped crying..... massi aap kaha thi itne din..... nihaal mera accident ho gya tha phir mai shimla chale gyi thi subhas k pass...... accha subh uncle, aap unse milne gyi thi...... haan nihaal...... massi aap mujhe chod kar phir kabhi toh nai jaynge na........... nai NIHAAL kabhi nai......... accha aap akle kyo chali gai, mujhe bhi le jati........ ya aapne mujhe call kyo nai kiya........ nihaal, massi ki kuch majboori thi.... aap samjhte ho na... haan massi.... 1 baat humasa yaad rakho nihaal apki massi apse bhot pyar karti hai aur wo aapko kabhi apni marji se akle nai chodegi...... i knw massi..... both hugged..........

thik hai nihaal ab chalo....... par kaha massi. mujhe toh school jana hai....... aaj nai nihaal, aaj aap massi k sath chalo.......

haan thik hai , hum bhot masti karenge, massi apne chachu k call kiya.... wo bhi apko bhot yaad karte hai, hum unhe bhi bula lete hai....

ayesha mood bcam sour hearing veer, but she changed d topic...... nihaal chalo ice-cream khana hai.......

yaha kise ice-cream khana hai?? subhas entered frm behind holding 2 ice-cream....

wooh.... subh uncle........ nihaal ran in his arm!!

kaise ho big boy.... kahi tum mujhe bhool toh nai gye..... haan.... subh uncle aap hi US chale gye the, mai toh...... mai toh majak kar raha tha........ aab mai agya hu naa... hum pehle k taraf bhot masti karenge....

ayesha " chalo aab ghar chalte hai"...... haan massi sab kitne khush honge aapko dekh kar!!... chaliye he moved toward d car....

nahi nihaal.... abhi hum subh uncle k ghar ja raha hai......... chalo.......

all 3 of them went 2 shubhs flat........ nihaal ws very happy wid subh...... both of them were playing, shouting n jumping like small kids....... ayesha ws happy 2 see them happy........ she ws smiling after a long time...

in d office kamini and nandini were talking... avinash is out 4 sum work!!

mom aap chinta mat kijiye warna apka blood pressure phir bhad jayga........ doc ne apse aram karne ko kaha tha naa..........

nandini tum meri chinta mat karo........ aaj board members ki meeting hai aur wo log mera board room mei intezar kar rahe hai......... humara shares ghir raha hai aur veer aaj bhi nai hai..... woh chahte hai k veer CEO ki position accept kar le warna hum kisi aur ko appoint kar de... us ayesha k wajah se veer hotel pe dhyan nai de raha..... par mai apna hotel kisi k haanth nai soapungi.....( she then left 4 meeting n nandini followed)

there were a lot of argument in the board room........ kamini was stubborn so the members decided resign and to do a election 4 a new CEO....... just then ayesha banged d door n entered n said dat their is no use of dat as she is d CEO n now she is bak.......... every1 was shocked......... kamini ws burning in anger..... she asked ayesha 2 talk in private........ nandni was happy 2 see her but followed kamini.....

ayeha ye sab kya hai......... how dare u called urself d CEO........ Aur tum wapas kaise agai....... tumhara toh accident hua tha na.....

oh i m sorry agar maine apki ummido p panni pher diya...... par kya karu sayad kismat k mera marna manjoor nai tha......... apako toh laga hoga chalo mar gyi humara pind chuta..... kyo??

nandni ws shocked 2 hear she tried 2 explain nai ayesha tum aisa kyo bol rhi ho..... Hum log toh tumhari yaad mei DCC bhi bana rahe the..... tumhare jane k dukh hum sab ko tha.....

Accha... par Lagta hai aaplog ko mujhe mara sabit karne ki kuch jada hi jaldi hai.. Turning toward kamini! Kya aap logo ko pata nai hai ki agar kisi ki dead body nai milti, toh law uska 7 sal intzar karti hai!

Aisi koi baat nai thi ayesha.. Police ko ek dead body mili thi.. Aur uske pass tumhare saman mile the.. Isliye hume laga ki.. nandini said

(acha toh jab meri dead body nai mili toh vir ne mere dead body bhi plant ki thi, vir prop. K liye kuch bhi kar sakta hai, pata nai aur kitne raj usne apne masum se chere k piche chupai hai...)

tum kehna kya chahti ho ayesha, kahi tum ye toh nai keh rahi ki humne tumhe marne ki kosis ki hai.. Tumhara dimag toh kharab nai hua hai, agar mujhe tumhe apne raste se hatana hota toh mujhe ye sab natak karne ki koi jarurt nai thi.. Mai jab chahti tumhe apnd ghar se nikal sakti thi, samjhi tum! Dekh rahi ho na nandni.. Humne ish ladki ko apne ghar mei jagah di aur ye aisan faramos ladki hum pe iljam laga rahi hai.. kamini was furious

Ma aap sant ho jaiye..

Pointing her finger to her..mai toh humesa hi janti thi k ye ladki humari jaydad k piche hai, dekho isne ab apne rang dikhane suru kar diye.. Aur dikhay bhi kya na akhir us chalak divya aur isme ek hi
khoon toh ha.. Phle usne humse humara beta k sahare sari jaydad chinni chahi aur ab ye bhi wahi kar rahi hai.. Mujhe toh lagta hai, iske pure khandan k yahi kam hai.. Amir logo ko phasa kar unhe lutna!

Bas kijiye kamini ji... Aur ek sabd bhi mai apne pariwar k khilaf nai sunna chahti.. Aur aise bhi, Mere pass apki bakwas sunne ka waqt nai hai... Aur aaj k baad hamare bich koi bhi baat in band kamro mei nai hogi.. Aab jo bhi baat honi hai wo mere vakil se hi hogi ya board members k bich hogi.. Aur agar aap bhol gyi hai toh mai apko yaad dila doo ki mai ish hotel k CEO hu...... aur 51% ki partner cum caretaker, isliye apni limits k khyal rakhiye.... yaha decision lena ka haq mera hai....understood (saying so she stromed out)..

Dekhd tumne ise!(angry)

ma tum abhi chalo yaha se.. Meri toh yakin nai araha ayesha aisa kyo behave kar rahi ahi!!

Yakin? Tumhe abhi bhi pata nai chal raha k is ladki k irade kya hai... Par mai ab bohut acche tarah se ise samajh gai hu.. Aur ab mujhe iska kya karna hai, ye jald hi soch na hoga! nandni tum abhi veer k phone karo aur use wapas ane k kaho........

they called him n asked 2 cum immediatly , they didnt told him d reason.........just told dat its an emergency!!!

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precap- driver informs kamini dat nihaal is missing.......

plz reply!!


Edited by devrad - 15 years ago
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Thanks for updating U gyus r rokcs yaar It's great pls keeps updating and update the next part soon I m wating
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Fabulous part.Plzzzzzz update next part soon.
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PART-12
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Veer arranged a air ticket for himself and left for delhi... he was wondering what could have been the matter dat kamini has called him immidiatly... he thought may be nihaal is not well, but then why she
asked him 2 cum directly 2 d office.... veer gave a deep thought and finally cam 2 d conclusion dat may be its an official problm...... d board b pressurising her 2 select a new CEO, since d work load is high n i m not dere.... veer thought dat he will himself sign his resignation and will convence kamini 2 select a new CEO... as why shd they suffer for his sorrows...

in ramada aisha called the board members and declaired dat she will be rejoining her post of CEO as now she is bak n dere is no need of any1 2 take her responsibilities.... kamini strongly objected dat how is dat possible as veer is now handling dis post n .......why shd he leave it, since its dere hotel n dey r more expnd... 2-3 members supported her..... but most of dem agreed with aysha... wen kamini didnt stop n said dat aisha is just acleaning staff n she doen,t deserves dis..... aisha shut kamini saying dat she is no 1 2 decide dis n if she didnt forgot its not her but jai's hotel n he gave her 2 tak care of it and till wen nihaal is a kid dis hotel will belong to her... she gave a file containing the agreement papers 2 all d members and said dat they can go though d agreement dat declaires me d CEO...... she has made some changes in d rulles n regulatins of d hotel..... dey can chk dem up!!

k- how dare u tried2 change dem....aisha tum ye nai kar sakti... yaha sirf mere rulles chalte hai...

a- kaminiji mujhe ek hi baat ko bar bar kehne ki aadat nai hai... aur agar apko samjh nai ata... toh dats not my problem............ then turning 2 d memb aaplog ko mai 1/2 hr k waqt de rahi hoon....
achi tarah se file padh lijiye aur phir apna faisla mujhe bataiye.........agar aplogo ko changes achi nai lage toh u r welcom 2 givur suggestion..........ok

aapne dekha hai ki last 3 months mei mgt ki laparwahi k karan company ko kitna loss hua hai... hamare hotel ki reputation humare guests se hai... or mgt k sidha asar unko hota hai... toh in sab ko dhyan mei rakhte huae maine changes liye hai... baki aaplog kud hi samajh dar hai...u all can well decide!!


kamini was very angry wid it... majority of the members were in favour of ayesha... they tried to convince her that she shd sign d papers as dats d correct option... but kamini got more angry... she moved out of d conference room saying she is not goin 2 sign d papers...

veer has come now he meets kamini at his office... she was very angry...

v- mom sab thik toh hai aap inti gusse mei kyo hai??

k- thik hai... ush ayesha k ane k bad kabi kuch thik hua hai , jo aaj hoga!1

v- mom aap aisha ko kyo bic mei la rhi hai...

k- mai beech mei la nai rhi... wo bich mei ayi hai... sab kuch thik chal rha tha use kya jarurat thi yaha wapas ane ki.........

v- (shocked) wat... ayesha yaha hai (went silent)... aur mai...(he went in his thoughts)

k- haan veer woh ladki hum sab ko bewakuf bana rhi thi... use kuch nai hua hai... itne dino se wo jarur planning kar rhi hogi... aur dekh aaj mauka pate hi usne apni chaal chl di... wo tumhari CEO ki position lena chahti hai par dekhna mai aisa kuch nai hone dungi.... (she told watever happened with kamini namak massala).......blah blah blah...(kamini continued non stop, but veer was lost)

v- i hv 2 see her(veer still lost...), where is she???

k- wo board room mei hai!!

veer ran 2 d conference room, he opened d gate n shouted "aisha"... evry1 luked at him with surprise... aisha was standing in d front she also turned toward him in shok...

veer just luked at her n nearly ran 2 her ...

aiysha tum mujhse mil kr achank kaha chali gyi thi... mai tumhe shimla mei dhoond raha tha... he was abt 2 hug her but she stopped him b4 he could 2 catch her...

a- mr. veer vardhan singh!! if u cant see.. yaha pe board meeting chal rhi hai aur agar apko yaad ho toh aap w/o permission meeting k bich mei enter nai kar sakte hai... koi party nai hai ki aap itna shor macha kar apne janne walo se milne chale aye hai....

v- aisha mujhe pata tha tum mere pass jarur wapas aogi...(veer was still not hearing, he was lost)

a- mr. veer yaha koi personal meeting nai ho rhi hai... aur aap hum sab k waqt barbad kar rahe... so i request ki aap apni seat p baith jaiye...

v- yeh sab toh hota rahega aisha...... par mujhe tumse baat karni hai (he was goin impatient..)

a- if u dont understand wat i m saing... u may leave d room!!

v- (he held aisha by her arm) aisha mujhe tumse baat karni hai...plz mere sath bahar calo..

a- enough is enough mr.veer., i cant tolerate it anymore..(she freed her hand in anger)... she turned 2 d board n said... i m sorry gentle mens jaisa k aap dekh sakte hai k hamare company k chairmen ko ye meeting bkr ki lag rhi hai... inke liye inke personal matters kuch jayda hi imp hai.... toh mai nai chahungi kaap apna kimti waqtkharab kare..... so, i think dis meeting is over 4 now... u all can sign d papers n send it in my office... thank u!!

she walked out, veer followed... aisha meri baat suno.. tum aise behave kyo kar rhi ho... plz suno... but aisha went in d lift w/o listning 2 him... veer got a call frm nandini...

n- veer kaha ho tum...??

v- di mai hotel mei hu... aap bhi toh....

n- nai veer mai nihal aur arnav ko lene school ayi thi... par nihaal school mei nai hai!!

v- wat... aisa kaise ho skta hai... apne school mei chk kiya??

n- haan veer... par school walo k kehna hai ki aaj toh wo school aya hi nai!

v- kya?? (veer was shocked)

n- maine driver se bhi puch-tach ki hai.... usne kaha ki nihaal ko usne gate k bahar hi chora tha... par school mei kisi ne aaj use nai dekha??

v- thik hai di mai abhi ata hu... apne mom ko bataya??

n- haan vir... mom cmplain karne gyi hai... mai arnav ko lekr hotel arhi hu, tum yaha ajao!!

v- thik hai di!!

veer was goin out... wen police cam 2 d hotel.... kamini was wid dem.. veer is shocked...
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precap- police arresting aisha

i hope u guys enjoy..... plz leave ur precious comments..... thank u.... dats all 4 today...😊


Edited by devrad - 15 years ago
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Posted: 15 years ago
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i though 2 update 1 more part....

PART-13
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police cums wid kamini.... veer is shocked 2 see police at d hotel.....
veer went 2 dem n asked wats d matter... dey said dey r here 2 see aisha... (a hotel staff called her).. she cums...

a- kya baat hai inspector??
pammi, raj n other hotel staff also gathered....

i- humare pass cmplain hai ki tum koi behrupiya ho jo aisha k naam se yaha ayi hai aur tumne inke pote nihaal singh ko kidnap kiya hai....

a- wat non-sense... mai koi behrupiya nai hu.... mai ayisha sharma ho, nihaal ki massi... aur maine use kidnap nai kiya hai... mai uski lawful gurdian ho... uski custody mere pass hai...

k- ye ladki jhooth bol rhi hai inspector... ye aisha nai hai... wo toh cliff se gir kar mar gyi thi... police ko uski dead body bhi mili hai...ye dekhiye uska death certificate......... ye toh uski koi duplicate hai jo hamari prop hathiyana chahti hai!!

(aisha-veer n all were shocked)

v- mom! aap ye kya keh rhi hai... apko pata hai na ye aisha hai... toh apne cmpln kyo ki???

k- tum chup karo veer... police yaha apna kam karne k liye hai.... aur tumne suna nai... isne kabul kiya hai k nihal iske pass hai... agar ye aisha hoti toh kya bina bataye nihaal ko chup k se lejati.... inspector aap ese arrest kijiye aur nihaal kaha hai ye puchiye isse!!

inspector 2 aisha... mam apke pass koi sabut hai k aap aisha hai...... aur accident k baad aap itne din kaha thi?? "mai apke samne kadi hu zinda aur aap keh rhe hai ki mai apne alive hone k sabut do???" aisha said in anger.......... i m sorry mam par inke pass sabut hai... apko hamare sath police station chalna hoga...

v-nai inspector mai keh raha hoon na ye aisha hai... mom ko jarur koi galat faimi ho gyi hogi... aap plz aisha ko arrest mat kijiye... (aisha felt ki ye veer ki planning hai.... phle usne meeting rok di aur ab wo aisha ko jail bhejna chata hai...)

we r sorry sir par hume puch-tach k liye inhe station le hi jana hoga... wo aisha ko hathkadi lagane aya... aisha was feeling disgusted but she let dem do it as she knew dat she has been framed... d police were taking her wen subhas came wid nihaal...

s- rukiye inspector... aap aisha ko nai leja sakte... y lijiye hospital k papers aur aisha k reports... aur ye nihaal k custody papers...

nihaal also jumped in... haan inspector uncle.... ye meri massi hai aur mai inke sath apni marji se gya tha... (aisha asked pammi 2 tak nihal in)

inspector chked d papers... ye toh thik hai par aapko magistrat se inke death certi. ko false grant karana hoga... tabi mai inko chdunga... nai toh inpe fraud k case banega.... aisha's wakil cam in - ye lijiye magistrat k papers.... (evry1 was shkd 2 see him)... d inspector chked all n said ki thik hai..... ab toh ye sabit hogya hai k aap hi aisha ji hai toh mai apko chod raha hu.... kamini ji apki probl toh solve ho gyi.. sare sabut yahi kehte hai ki ye hi aisha hai..(kamini was not happy wid all dis... her plan has failed.).... toh mai chalta hu... haam par age se cmpln karese phle thodi jach aap bhi kar liya kijiye... jab sab kuch samne hi ho toh police ko taklif dena achi baat nai hai... police k pass bhi bhot kam hote hai...

v- sorry inspector..mai inki taraf se mafi mangta hu, hum age se khayl rakhenge k humari wajah se apko koi dikat na ho... chaaliye mai apko gate tak chodta hu... he took dem out...

kamini also left in anger watching her plan faliur..... she thought 2 herself... tum aaj toh bach gyi ho par aab dekho mai tumhara kya haal karti hu... kamini wardhan singh se panga le kar tum ne thik nai kiya hai....

wen every1 left ..., subhas- acha hua aisha ki tumne mujhe pammi se phon karwa diya aur mai time par sare papers le aya...

a- haan subhas... ish bar mai koi galti nai karna chahti.... in logo ki ghtiya chale mujhe aab bhot ache se dikhiyi dete hai... isliye maine pammi koi tumhara no. diya tha taki wo tumhe yaha k bare inform kar sake...par tum magistrat se papers itni jaldi kaise le aye...

wakil- aisha subhas ne mujhe yaha ane se phle msz kiya tha.... magistrat se meri todi pehchan bhi hai toh kaam turant ho rya... par aab mai chalta hu, meri meeting hai...

both aisha n subhas thanked him, he left.... now aisha thanked subhas...

a- thanx subhas... aaj 1bar phir tumne mujhe bacha liya hai.... she huged him...

veer walked in, he was not happy 2 see her hugging him, he cam near dem... aisha mujhe tumse baat karni hai... on seeing him aisha asked subhas 2 bring nihaal as dey shd leave now... subhas went in... aisha stood in front of veer w/o saying anything...

v- aisha mai janta hu...... abhi jo hua wo galat tha aur mai uske liye mai tuymse mafi mangta hu... i m sorry.... tum toh mom ko janti ho na unhe jab gussa ata hai toh woh controll nai kar pati...

a- haan veer ab toh mai tum log ko bhot ache se phchanti hu... tumhe mere samne ye sab karne ki koi jarurat nai hai... mai..

v- iska matlab tum naraj nai ho(veer was happy), he took her by her arms, thik hai toh chalo ab ghar chalte hai....

a- veer mera hanth choro....... mai tumhare sath kahi nai jarhi hoon... aur apna ye jhootha natak band karo... mujhe pata hai tumhe meri kitni fikr hai(aisha went angry)

but dis time veer also went angry n pulled her toward him, holding her arms... aisha was very close 2 him... she could feel his breaths... she was luking strait in his eyes n so was veer... dey had a eye lok 4 a moment den aisha tried 2 free her... but veer held her more tightly bringing her more closer 2 hiim... aisha turned her face 2 d other side... not facing him.......

v- mai koi natak nai kar rha...samjhi tum..... aur kya ye tumhe nai pata hai... haan... bolo... akhir kya hua hai aisha tum itna strangly kyo behave kar rhi ho... shimla se bhi tum mujhe bina bataye chali ayi... mujhse kuch kaha bhi nai... aur yaha bhi mujhe avoid kar rhi ho.... kya hua hai aisha bolo nai.... mujhse kya galti ho gyi hai ki tumhe mujhe dekhna bhi pasand nai hai...( veer nearly pleeded her)

a- veer choro mujhe... mujhe tumse koi baat abhi nai karni...

v- kyooo..... kyo nai karni(veer was hot n angry)...

chachu.... nihaal came frm behind... veer let aisha free.......

chachu aap shimla se kab aye...

mai aaj hi aya nihaal par dadi ko kaam tha isliye direct ooffice ana pada... sorry apko inform nai kiya....

nihaal was so happy today n was in no mood 2 hv gussa so he said its ok chachu, par mujhe apka suprise bhot acha laga.... aap massi ko laye na...

nai nihaal apki massi mujhe mili toh jarur thi par mai unhe nai laya, wo toh mujhe chod kar phle apke hi pass agyi.... wo apse mujhse jayda pyar krti hai na isliye.... (veer luked at her but she ignored him..)

mai toh bhot khus hu massi wapas agyi hai ab hum tino ek sath phle ki taraf masti karenge... sorry hum charo... aab toh subh uncle bhi agye hai... thik hai na... chalo mai apka intro subh uncle se karwata hu... he took veer 2 subhas, ye subh uncle hai... mere best frnd... hum jab shimla mei rhte the toh massi, mai aur subh uncle bhot masti karte the... massi aur uncle bhi best frnd hai... subh uncle toh humare sath ghumne bhi jate the....(veer was not happy wid dis intro. ) massi aao na aap waha kyo kadi ho... nihaal asked aisha seeing her standing on 1 side...

a- nihaal aab hume ghar chalna chaihiye.... chalo subhas... she took nihaal wid her......

n- massi hum chachu k sath chalte hai na.. woh bhi tho ghar hi jayge...

a- nai nihaal abhi hum subh uncle k pass ja rhe hai... jab tak subh uncle yaha hai hum unke pass rhnge... wo akle hai naa... aur apko unke sath khlna bhi toh hai...

v- aisha tum subhas ko le kar hamare ghar hi chalo...

a- no thanx... nihaal abhi kuch din hamare sath rahega... chalo nihaal...

n- par massi chachu... wo hamare sath nai arhe....(aisha was now finding hard 2 answer nihaal)

v- (understanding it) nihaal... aap massi k sath jao.... aur meri fikr mat karo... mai apse milne wahw ajaunga... thik hai na aisha...

aisha was not happy wid dis but she didnt wanted 2 upset nihaal so she sai thik hai... n took nihaal wid her....

kamini , nandini n arnav came as dey left n asked where is nihaal ... veer told dat dey will stay sumtime at subhas place... kamini was very angry... but nandini sum how controlled her... veer was happy dat atleast she is bak n he knws where she is..... dey all went home... b4 goin 2 bed veer thought tommorow he is goin 2 talk aisha any how n tell her how much he luvs her...

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precap- veer n aisha r in d cabin, veer closes d door n aisha is shocked...



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in next part veer will be confessing his lov 2 aisha.... suggestions r welcome....😊
Edited by devrad - 15 years ago
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Posted: 15 years ago
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my frnds u all can suggest me😊.... tips 4 improving my ff😊.... drawbaks r most welcum if any😊... so dat i can improvemy writing skills😊......... thank u!!😃
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Posted: 15 years ago
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Amazing parts👏👏....unite veesha puhleez and continue soon!!

P.S...precap looks good...😳😳

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