VEESHA ff: love that never ends!(part-14&15)! done

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Tanvi

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Posted: 15 years ago

#31

Wow devrad........... this part is awesome......beautiful.......wow aayesh aka aditi in veers arms.........love u for such a wonderful update ...........plz update jaldi....... as next part seems to much mo😉re promising with lots of veesha moments......😛😛

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devrad

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Posted: 15 years ago

#32

PART-8
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starts from the last scene......... coming out of her past Ayesha makes her way towards the hall of the hotel......she is walking up the stairs with her sticks and steps on her own foot and gets imbalanced, her sticks falls from her hand and curving 4 support she is falling back.... she closes her eyes like this way she wont will get hurt and waiting 2 bump on the floor.... she thought any wound now will not hurt her more than the one she is goin through so she left her body free 2 fall remembring her last fall....... from the cliff.........

she touched the ground but she was not hurt.... she felt like she was safe......... she was relived after a long time... she kept her eyes closed thinking its a dream and she didn't wanted 2 break it...... she didnt wanted to wake...... she felt a grip around her which was so strong... she always wanted this feeling in her life.... she wanted sum1 who no matter what will stand beside her.....

aa..aye..sha.....( a whispering sound)

she slowly moved her eyes eyelids.... to see the source of the sound.... the sound which felt...... soo own....... the sound she felt she knew so well... the sound she loved... the sound she never forgot frm the time she heard it, she loved it........but today she could not remember the owner of the voice... like her memory has been erased...... she was shocked hearing her name1!

she opened her eyes and looked at the pair of eyes which was gazing her in shock.... she was not able 2 move her eyes away from him..... she could only see him lost like there was no one around them... like she was blinded by the his gaze... she was shocked and happy 2 see him.... him.... veer!!! (her mind reminded her)...

both were luking at each other shocked.....

veer was so shocked to see ayesha...... that he was going numb........ he ws not able 2 believe his eyes... he could not believe that ayesha ... whom he was searching 4 last 3 months is in front of him.... he was so shocked that he could not think of any thing.... they stood like that lost in eyes of one another for a long time... remembering their past... each n every moment they spent together..... we have the FB of veer holding ayesha in the hotel wen she fell cleaning the roof, their shimla trip, the Christmas party, their dance and the picnic before The accident... after which veer came to his sense remembering her fall....

V- Aa...aa..ayesha.. (making her stand on the floor but still holding her)... (he could not find his voice to express what he was feeling... ).....

he immidatly huged her... he huged her tight.. he didnt wanted any space b/w them... he didnt wanted to let her go again!! the touch caused a shiver in their bodies and the words came in d form of emotions rolling down their eyes as tears... ayesha head was resting on veer chest..... she could feel her heart beat which ws dead till now, has now increased... she didn't knew how to react... none of them was ready 2 break the hug... a tear came down her chiks... ayesha wanted to hug him back more tighty but she could not move her hands..... like thre was no life in her body... yes! no life... she was shocked that how can she feel so relived and secure under the arms of the person who wanted to kill her...she tried 2 push him away applying her full energy but her body didnt reacted wid her mind.... moreover his hold was so strong that she could not break apart...... veer noticed her struggle(weak movement)under him... , after d accident vir could even a little change in the air, he thought that she was having trouble in breathing as he was holding her tightly... he loosen his grip breaking the hug and took her hands in his....

V- (voice full of excitement) ayesha mai tumhe dekh kar itna kush hu ki mai bata nai sakta...... mujhe toh yakin hi nai hoa raha ki...

A- .......ki mai zinda hun!! (pained.....trying 2 see the face behind...)

V- (shocked expression) nai ayesha... mai... mai toh hamesha se janta tha ki tum zinda ho.....(a tear roll down his eyes)....... mujhe toh ye yakin nahi ho raha ki tum mujhe mil gai ho... janti ho ayesha sab mujhse kehte the ki tum ab nai aaogi... par..... par maine kabhi ummid nai chodi... aur dekh tum aaj mere ankho k samne khadi ho...

(A- haan veer tum ne toh ye hi socha tha ki tumne mujhe bhi di-jiju ki tarah apne raste se hata diya hai)

(veer holding her face) tum kaha chali gai thi ayesha...... maine tumhe kitna dhondha....(even today his touch causes a shiver in her breath).... tum thik toh ho na... tumhare jane k baad pata hai meri kya halt ho gai thi.... paglo ki tarah tumhe kaha kaha nai dhundha maine...... mai hi janta hu ki tumhare bina ye 3 mahine maine kaise bitaye hai( veer ws so excited that he want 2 tell her every thing) aur nihaal bhi bohot chup chup ho gaya hai tumhare jane k baad ki...

ayesha was thinking luking in his eyes...... he looks so real... that if she didn't knew his real face she would have easily believed him even today.... a wave of hatred crossed her mind... she thought he is a great fake n can fool any1.... but all her thought vanished hearing nihal's name...she ws jst concerned now...

A- NIHAALll....... ( a tear roll down her eyes)

V- haan ayesha....... nihal tumhe har pal yaad karta hai..... use hasna bolna bhi chod diya hai.... par ab tum agai ho na..... dekhna aab phir sab kuch phle jaysa ho jayga.... ayesha tumhe dekh kar nihal kitna kush hoga......

veer again huged her.....ayesha could not controll her tears..... veer notices that..

V- ayesha tum ro mat aur bilkul chinta mat karo.... mai tumhe kabhi ab apne se dur nai karunga........ abb sab thik ho jaye ga..... chalo hum abhi chalte hai.. hum abhi delhi chalenge... thik hai..

(veer piked the sticks w/o waiting 4 her answer and nearly carried her out with him, ayesha wanted 2 object but she could not speak..... thoughts were storming in her mind...)

V- ayesha tum yahi wait karo mai abhi gaddi nikal k ata hun... (veer was so excited that he wanted to reach home as soon as possible)

ayesha stood there looking shocked....

Edited by devrad - 15 years ago

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Tia

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Posted: 15 years ago

#33

Hey Devrad!

Tia here...

M back on the forum after 3 whole months! Jus came across ur FF n read 2 parts, shall read others n leave my comments....

hey, m glad that Aysha's gonna be only Aditi in ur FF.. So far, the storyline's been intersting...

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devrad

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Posted: 15 years ago

#34

welcome back TIA!!!

thanx 4 ur comments..........😊😊😊

and yes!! aditi is always gonna b ayesha in my FF......😉 she makes me feel the natural beauti of the cast..... she was a raw, new, fresh, sweet face.... a very commonly uncommon person i hv seen....... her smile was so pure n natural...... that it always makes me smile...😃 she always smiled with her heart..... i really love her... and i always will........ i dont knw why d creatives do such distructive things😡

apart frm dat i hope u enjoy my ff 😃..........

I'll try 2 keep it interesting 2 d best of my effort!! thank u!!!😊

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Pickachu

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Posted: 15 years ago

#35

Mindblowing part.Sorry for late comment.I m eagerly waiting for ur next part.

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Tanvi

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Posted: 15 years ago

#36

great pert devrad😛😛😛.............plz update soon.........i hope very soon aditi will realise the true love of veer..😛😛

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devrad

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Posted: 15 years ago

#37

PART-9
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veer is inn the parking and gets a call frm home.... he thinks dat he'll not tell any1 abt ayesha instead he will surprise every1 ... he picks d phone...

V-hello!!

K- hello vir! (Kamini on line).. tum ne pauhuch kar phone nai kiya?? is evrything ok..... tum thik thak pahuch gaye na??

V- Haan mom mai bilkul thik hu.... wo mai thoda busy tha isliye... u dont worry, i m fine! mom! nihaal thik hai naa....

K- haan vir... tumhare jane k baad thoda udas tha par abhi homework kar k so gya hai.... tum usse kal subha baat kar len.... use accha lagega....

V- Haan mom (thinking- mom mai use aisa suprise dunga ki uski sari udasi 1 min. mei khatm ho jaygi)..... thik hai mom i'll call u later.. abhi mujhe kuch kam hai... bye...gn...(he cuts the phone b4 she can answer)... veer rushes 2 his car and takes it to d gate where he left ayesha waiting.....

ayesha is sitting on a bench talking2 sum1... he is standing in front ofher...veer can see them clearly...... veer steps downn his car and wonders who ayesha is talking with.... he puts his hand on her sholder causing her turn around...

V- ayesha...

the lady turn aroung but she is not ayesha....... the person taking 2 her comes forward and ask "wats his problem..." veer under goes a trauma inside him and is unable 2 answer..... the men is somewat agreesive but the lady controlls him and they leave... he becomes very worried... he search ayesha all around the hotel... he asks every stanger abt her.... but no body seen her..... veer feels the emptiness commin bak 2 him which encircled his all along in the last 3 months... he is standing near d gate holding his head...... sumbody puts his hand on his sholder... veer turns around...

V- ayesha....

the gate keeper is standing in front of him....... he request him 2 stand on a side as he can get hurt standing in the middle of the gate ... veer turns 2 leave but then he asks him whether he saw ayesha there.... 1st the watchmen didn't recognise.... but wen ver tells him dat she uses sticks 4 walking, he recognises her...... he tells him that she left a few mins ago but he dont knw her where abts... veer is suprised why ayesha left without him... he asks him shelf....

why she left?? may be she had sum work..... but she could have informed me... veer cross questioned himself... reasoning her absence....

tears were running down his eyes, he didnt khew what to do next.... he lost ayesha once again... now he didnt knew wat he was goin 2 say nihaal dat he lost his massi once again.... veer blamed him self 4 leaving ayesha alone lik dat, he thinks he shdnt left her... how can he do that???

but why did she left wen i told her 2 wait... wasnt she happy 2 see me.... dont she wanted 2 cum home... aur nihaal... wo hum sab ko chod kar aise kaise ja sakti hai... veer was very very tensed...

he went 2 the reception and enquire abt her... the receptionist told that she was here for a meeting and her name is not registered.. but she was sitting here with a men... vir wanted 2 knw abt d person she ws with but she refused 2 disclose any info. as this was against the privacy of her guests .... wen veer insisted her she said that the man left just a few mins. ago... he can chk if he is in d parking...( she told him how he looks 2 recognise him) he rushed 2 d door and asked the watchmen... the watch men pointed 2 a person... veer rushed toward him but b4 he can reach him he left in his car.... veer tried 2 follow him but soon he ws out of sight!!!

veer was very angry by now wid himself.... he blamed himself 4 losing ayesha 1ce again... he again went 2 d place where he left ayesha, he thought... may be she went 4 an imp work and will cum bak... he cant believe dat she left... veer sat on the bench waiting 4 her... tears were trembling in his eyes....

we see another pair of eyes filled with tears... the camera focuses the complete face and we see ayesha ........ we see ayesha sitting on a chair luking out of the window... she is lost in her thoughts gazing the blank sky, she has tears in her eyes...

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veer left 4 d prking leaving ayesha... ayesha thinks why she is not able 2 say anything... why cant she face him... tears and running down her eyes... she thinks dat may b subhas is right i m not ready... i shd give myself sum more time... she calls the driver 2 bring her car.... and then she leaves.... she then calls subhas as informs him dat she is leaving 4 home... subhas inquires if she is alrite... she says she is fine just wanted 2 rest.... subhas senses d heaviness of her voice... he asks her 2 wait as he is also over wid d dinner... but ayesha cuts d phone w/o listning 2 him... as she was unable 2 speak further... tears were rolling down...

bak 2 reality... ayesha thinks 2 her self... ye kya ho gya tha mujhe.. mai itmi kamzor nai pad sakti... mujhe kud ko sambhalna hoga... ab jab ki mai veer ki sacchi janti hun... mujhe in bato ka khyal rakhna hai... veer jo bahar se dikhata hai wo who hai nai... she remembers his shocked expn and thinks dat he was suprise 2 see her alive and bcoz his plan 2 kill her failed!! she questns why she loved hem... maine har pal tumse pyar kiya... sab se jyada khas the tum mere liye... Rab se bhi jyada tum pe viswash kiya maine... phir kyu tumne mere viswas ko thoda... kya zarurat thik tumhe ye sab dikhawa karne ki... maine toh tumse kabhi nai kaha ke mujhe pyar karo.... jab maine tumse dur jana chaha, tum hi mere karib aye... kyo?? akir maine kya kiya tha....

ayesha remembers how veer was angry wen she took d custody of nihaal property and how he changed after dat.. she thinks dat veer ye sab prop. k liye kar raha hai... she thinks ye sab natak veer ne isliye kiya taki wo sari prop. uske naam kar de aur jab maine aisa nai kiya, toh veer ne mujhe marne ka plan bana liya..... kyonki mere marne se sidha fayda vir ko hoga... wo sari prop. ka akla malik banna chahta hai.... ho na ho jiju aur di k accident mei bhi usi ka hanth hai... aur nihaal ki fikr ka wo sirf acting kar raha hai jaise usne mere sath kiya hai... abhi agar usne nihaal k raste se hataya toh sari prop trust ko chali jaygi isliye wo abhi uska khyal rakh raha hai... par jab wo bada ho jayga toh veer use bhi apne raste se hata dega........ nai... nai... par mai aisa nai hone dungi.... mai nihaal ko usse phle hi alag kar dungi... mujhe jald hi ab nihaal k pass jana hoga...( she comes our ofher thoughts hearing the horn of subhas car)!!

subhas comin in...

S- ayesha..... ayesha.... (speeding toward her room)

A- mai yaha hu!!

he saw her sitting and went near her... he saw the tears in her eyes... he took her hand and asked "wat happned and is she crying".... ayesha was still shaken wid the happenings 2 day and wanted 2 cry out all of it... subhas has always been her good frnd and after her accident, he always ws dere 4 her... she felt her strong in his presence... she never felt herself alone in the past months... but today after meeting veer she was restless.... he collapsed in his arms and started crying... she knew dat he can understand her and she also knew that now only and only subhas can understand her... she felt protected in his arm...

S- Kya hua?? tum roh kyo rhi ho aur tum is tarah kyu chali ayi??? tumhari tabyet toh thik hai naa??? mai doc ko phone karu?? maine kaha tha abhi ghar se mat niklo par tum meri baat sunti nai ho... (HE IS VERY CONCERNED 4 HER.) mera wait kar leti!! kya hua hai haan bolo... (he took her face in his hands)

after crying 4 a while.... she felt her self light and then answered...

A- subhas mai thik hu... meri tabyet bhi thik hai...

S- toh tum roy kuo rahi ho???

A- .......aaj mai veer se mili!!

S- He droped her face frm his hands in shock and luked at her... he x-raied her frm top 2 bottom.... 2 chk if she ws hurt anywhere.... wen he saw ok he asked...
kaha?? aur kaise??

she told him evrything and how she left frm d hotel n reached home... after listning2 her...

S- ye tumne accha kiya ayesha... ki tum waha se chali ayi... pata nai wo yaha kyu aya hai... karan jo bhi ho, ab usse ye bhi pata hai k tum zinda ho... ho sakta hai wo tumhe chot pahuchane ki phir kosis kare... ab hume aur sawdhan rehna hoga... par chalo accha hi hai... aab tum apne aap ko tyar kar sakti ho...
aise bhi tumhe toh uska samna karna hi tha... kuch dino mei hum dilhi jane hi wale the... haina!!

A- haan...par??

S- ab par war kuch nai... apne aap ko sambhalo... aur ab soch soch k paresan mat ho..... chalo so jao kal hume doc. k pass bhi jana hai...

her took her 2 her bed and left d room... she lied on her bed but sleep was far away frm her... she wondered wat veer would hav been doin now... may be he is making another plan 2 kill her and then we see veer still sitting on the bench waiting 4 her 2 cum bak.... the screen splits on there faces and d episode ends...!!!
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Edited by devrad - 15 years ago