VEESHA ff: love that never ends!(part-14&15)! done

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Posted: 15 years ago
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hello frnds.......... this is my 1st ff............ kindly bare with me..........

PART-1
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after aysha accident, veer has turned into a devdas...... however he don't drinks or goes 2 the KOTHAS ( kidding...........lolz) two months have passed, veer is still not able to accept that aysha is no more, same is the case with nihaal. They often talk of aysha wen no1 is around as rest all thinks that aysha is dead. nihaal has become a quiet kid he is no more involved in fun activities... veer has convinced him that he sh'd not stay sad as his aysha maasi will never like 2 see him this way and to stay happy, as if aysha will come 2 knw this that he acted all like a good boy, she will come back.

veer acts all strong in font of others but is boken frm inside. he has hired a detactive 4 ayshas accident cash as her body was still not found. he usually spends his time alone sitting on the cliff(accident place) thinking of her..... he feel guilt inside 4 not being able 2 save her.....

today also he was sitting on the same place and the emptiness of his heart was killing him............. he suddenly turned his head hearing ayshas voice commig fom a distance... he was all shoked........ she was calling his name.....


Veer........... veer....... help me .......... save me....veer.....

he moved toward the end of the cliff from where the sound was comin...... he moved more n more toward it............. suddenly he came back 2 his sense heaing his moble ring.......he cuts the call without any look at it............. he found that he was just 2 fall down....... there was no more sound of her voice.........everythig was still and silent...... he called aysha name again and again but there was no reply..... he was running here n dere like CRAZY seaching 4 her.........

the call rang again breaking his thaughts the mobile flashed homes no.... he piked his phone... kamini was on the other side....... she asked him 2 come home urgently as nihal is not well........ as soon as he heard nihal he was all worried............ his innocent face filled veers eyes with tears and nhe nealy came running 2 home....

V- mom....... kya hua........... nihaal kaha hai.......???

K- veer tum kaha the, nihaal ne khud k kamre mei band kar liya hai....hum mei kisi ko reply bhi nai kar raha......... ab tum hi dekho......... mera dil toh bada ghabra raha hai.........

V- holding her mom., mom aap fikr mat kijiye mai dekhta hoon......

K-ruko mai bhi ati....

V- nai mom phle mujhe nihal se akle mei baat kane dijiye..............
he moved up d stairs instructing nandni 2 tak care of mom and she followed.

(veer outside nihals room)

V- nihaal........ open the door........(no reply).....nihaal.........(knoking) beta.......... plz open d door......kya hua hai...... kisi ne apse kuch kaha hai kya........??

there ws no reply veer can hear nihal crying............. he requested him again n again......
after 10min.......

V- nihaal.....beta.......plz open d door..........apko apki massi k wasta...........

at this the door turned open and nihal ran into veers arm crying...... veer ws now more worried........ he tried 2 console him...... after sometime he stopped crying....... vee took him 2 the terrace with him...... and made him sit on the sofa with his head on his chest....

V- nihal kya hua tha.....

N- chachu, massi wapas aygi na......

v- haan nihal aysha jaroor wapas aygi........ massi bhi humse jada din dor nahi reh sakti...... par aap aisa kyu puch rahe ho??

n- maine aaj dadi aur bua ko baat karte suna..... wo keh rahi thi k massi bhagwan k pass chali gai hai........ au ab kabi nai aygi......

V- nahi nihal........... aisa bilkul bhi nai hai...... massi yahi hai humare asspas...... bas unhe kuch jaroori kam hai( veer tried to concole him).........

n- agar aisa hai toh massi hume akle chod k kyu chali gai?? wo kaam yaha se bhi toh kar sakti thi na...........

V- nihal mai apse keh raha hu na massi aygi
.... aap aur kisi ki baat mat suno...... apko apne chachu ki baat p bharoosa hai naa???

n- haan chachu.........

v- nihal, . massi apse bahot pya karti hai............ dekhna wo bahot jaldi wapas ajaygi....

n- sachi chacho.........

v- haan nihal.........

n- promise............

v- haan baba promise.
........... veer smiled on the innocence of nihal.....

V- beta..........

N-hoon..,,,,,

v- aab aap dobara aisa kabhi mat karna............ aapko pata hai naa chachu aapse bahot pyar karte hai......... aage se agar koi bhi baat hogi toh aap sidhe humse baat kaenge......... thik hai.........

n- sorry chachu......... i promise i'll never repeat this.........aurr ab mai good boy ban k rahunga taki massi jaldi se ajaye.........

veer kissed him on his foehead........ aab niche chale ......... sabi wait kar rahe honge........

veer then took him downstairs for dinner and then made him sleep.......... he was not happy lying nihal but he himself don't know wat 2 do..............

PRECAP:
veer found aysha sis letter........


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guys plz reply..........

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Posted: 15 years ago
#2
plz guys reply me............. and let me knw yours suggestions for futuer tracks..........
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Posted: 15 years ago
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it is fabulous.. continue soon...
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Posted: 15 years ago
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i ws hopping some more replies but......... ok.......... i m still waiting........😳

here goes the next (part-2) --

Next day morning, veer ws getting ready 4 d office when nihal knocked d door.....

N- good morning chachu............. i m ready 4 school.......

veer looked at him with a gental smile. veer daily takes nihal 2 school and tries 2 spend some extra time with nihal, so that he dont feel alone in ayshas absence!!

V- BETA...... apne nasta kiya......

N- yes chachu!

V- Aur lunch liya.

N- haan...... chachu......

V- good.........good boy(kissing his chiks).......!! toh ab chale?

N- parr chachu apne 2 breakfast kiya hi nai.......... massi kehti hai khali pet(empty stomach) bahar nai jana chaiye......... tabyet kharab ho jati hai!!

V- nihal......... maine juice leliya hai.......... office mei Day care proj. (DCP) k bohot kaam baki hai..........kaam k baad, mai wahi kuch kalunga........ok!!!

veer dopped nihal 2 school and he went 2 d office........ today he had 2 finalize d designs of DCP........ after ayshas acc. veer was working on only dis project and abhi was looking 2 d rest(Doing ghotalas)........

(on the site of project)-

good morning sir!! every1 geeted him

v- good morning!! mrs. dikshit........... apne designs dekhe??

d- no sir......... hum apka hi wait kar rahe the......... aiye...........(they moved 2 d engeneers.....)

after looking at the designs..........

v- ye kya hai......... aap log samajhte kyo nai hai.......... hume 5 star hotal ya hospital nai bana hai....... hume aysi jagah banani hai jaha........ jaha bacche reh sake..... where they can feel fee like home and can enjoy.......... hume buildings nai banani ( he shouted in anger)...........

after evey1 left.......

d- sir aap sant ho jaiye humare pass abhi b ek design hai....

v- koi fayda nai hai......... aap dekh rahi hai na ye log kya bana rahe hai....... mujhe eet-pathao ki imarat nai chaiye....... mujhe aise designs chahiye jisme emotions ho baccho k liye.......... hum pehle hi kitne designs reject kar chuke hai.........

d- par sir ek baar aap ye sample dekh lijiye.......... hume aaj hi simla se ayae hai..........

veer moved on hearing shimla and agreed 2 take a look.......... veer cannot avoid anything dat is related to aysha, directly or indirectly!!

v- thik hai ms. dixit aap keh rahi hai toh.......... lets take alook!!!

v- ye designs toh bahot acche hai par sirf samples hai........ aap aaj hi designerr se meri meeting fix kariye............. mujhe jald se jald ye designs chahiye........

d- but sir......... actually wo abhi shimla mei hai......... aur meri unse phone p baat hui hai........ wo keh rahe hai k designs puri kane k liye unhe next monday tak k time chahiye......

v- thik hai.... mujhe kuch imp kaam hai, so i m leaving.......... koi jarurat ho toh aap mere mobile p phone kar lena..........

veer went 2 d cliff, dere he had a meeting with detective Rao, who ws investigating aysha acc. case....

r- hello veer........... mujhe tumhe bohot jaroori baat batani hai..... tumhara shak sahi tha aysha ko kisi nei marne k kosis k thi....

veer was shocked and completly filled with anger.........

v- aap itne yakin se kaise keh sakte hai??

r- hume pata chala hai ki kisi nei aysha ko marne ki supari di thi........ aur hume mile saboot bhi ye hi ishara kar rahe hai............ halaki hamare pass abhi koi solid evidence nai hai........ mujhe thoda aur waqt chaiye............

v- thik hai....... aur aysha...... aysha k bae mei kuch pata nai chala???( veer asked with burning hopes).....

r- nahi veer abhi thak toh kuch nai......... ayse veer aab tumhe maan lena chahiye k she is no more.......... itni uchai se gir kar kisi k bachna muskil hai.......

v- BAASSSSS(veer burned with anger).......... maine apki rai nahi mangi.......... apka jitna kaam hai bas utna hi karo........

r- veer mai toh bas........ accha i m sorry.......... maine yaha ane jane walo se baat ki hai...... par abhi tak kuch pata nai chala........ mai jungle mei ane wale se contact karne ki kosis kar raha hoo..... jaise hi kuch pata lagega mai tumhe bata dunga.......... thik hai........... now relax........

then he left veer sat their on a rock feeling the lonliness of his life........... tears were falling frm his eye..... even the thought of loosing aysha kills him.......... he cried his heart loud sitting their all alone....... he remembered his pals with aysha and nihal........... after some time he drove his car to nihals school......... today he promised nihal to take him home frm school....

the drive was all silent.......... veer and nihal returned back 2 home.......

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thats it i will write aage after getting some replies........... now it depends on u all..........


Edited by devrad - 15 years ago
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Posted: 15 years ago
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Hey, dats a cool update.. Hope ayesha comes back and they get united.. No plastic surgery pls.. Hehe
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Posted: 15 years ago
#6
ya!! DEFINITELY frnds............ i m in no mood 2 destroy my ff.............
aysha here is only and only aditi...........

😛VEESHA=SIDDITI😛
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Posted: 15 years ago
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Nice to see another sidditi ff.Good going.Very nice part.Plzzzz update next soon.I only visit this forum for sidditi ffs now.

fatima

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Posted: 15 years ago
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.....👏👏👏....very good ff......hope ayesha comes back ASAP......continue soon...
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Posted: 15 years ago
#9
part-3
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cont. frm last scene........

veer was still lost in his thoughts, he knew he cant control his emotions at this movement so he directly went upstairs, but instead of going 2 his room he went to ayshas room, every thing related to her was kept there, when ever veer feels alone he comes here and talk with her photos.

veer opened the albums and were looking at them, tears were still falling from his eyes.... veer was looking at a picture of her from the party when she has broken her friendship with him... he thought 2 himself how broken he was at that time and how she accepted his friendship knowing his pain... a thick droplet fell frm his eyes....

V- aysha tum mere thodi si taklif nahi seh sakti thi, toh aaj kya ho gya hai tum mujhe is tarah taklif mei chod kar kaha chali gai ho......... wapas ajo.......... log kehte hai aab tum nai aogi, par mujhe pura yakin hai k tum zinda ho.... aur tum zaroor aogi..... jaldi ajoa aysha........ mujhe aur nihal ko tumhari bahot zaroorat hai........ mai aur ab akele sab nai sambhal sakta.... mai toot raha ho.... aab aur bardast nai hota....... plz aysha ajao, nihal k liye... mere..... apne veer k liye ajo...

suddenly lights gone, veer lighted his mobile and stood 2 search for candle and lighter..... he looked in the drawers........ he found it in one of them.... he was 2 light it when light came back.... he kept them in and was 2 close it when something caught his eyes......... there was an envelop....


V- letter......... ye toh aysha ki di ka letter hai....

first he thought he sh'd not read it but then he opened it....... he read it, after every word his emotions changes from shock, anger, confusion, pain, understanding and many more.....

V- WHAT!! iska matlab jai bhaiya ki mauth road accident nai balki ek planned murder thi...... aur nihal aur aysha ko bhi koi marna chata tha......... aur wo bi hamare ghar se koi.....hume tho wo kaha hai, ye bhi nai pata tha..... par....... aur kyo....... koi kyo... kya milega....... nahi.... nai aysa nai ho sakta........ ghar pe toh sabhi unse kitna pyar karte the....hum toh unki wapsi ka intezar kar rahe the........ jaroor koi aur baat hogi...... bhabhi ko koi galat fami hui hogi.....haan haan........ aysa hi hoga.....

veer could not belive it, he cant think that any1 can do this, par koi bhahar ka ho sakta hai, veer thought jo bhi hai, aab mujhe pata lagana hoga.... aur kahi ye accident(aysha ka) bhi kisi ki sajis hui toh..... he bhagwan plz aysha sahi salamat ho.... suddenly his phone vibrated......

V- (mr. rai??) hello

r- hello veer, maine pata lagaya hai...... forest department k ek night guard ne bataya ki ek ladki ek truck wale panni lene aya tha usi ko river side me mili thi, ........ huliya aysha jaisa tha....... par halat bahot kharab thi.... uske pas se ek no. mila tha... mobile no. toh shimla ka hai...... par thodi hi der mei koi aya aur wo hi use le kar chala gaya........ ab pata nai wo shimla gaye ya..... iske baad yaha kisi ko pata nai hai.. koi usse nai phchanta.. mai pure yakin se toh nai keh sakta... par sayad ye aysha ho sakti hai......

V- par kaun ho sakta hai.... aysha ka nihal aur hamare siwa toh koi nai hai... aur agar koi hota toh wo nihaal se contact karne ki kosis karta..... ye.. ye kaun ho sakta hai....

R- ye toh pata nai veer..... maine mobile no. try kiya tha, wo aab active nai hai........

V- rao... iska matlab koi nai chahta ki hum aysha ko contact kare......... par kyo???

R-hume kamse kam ab itna toh pata hai ki aysha ki maut nai hui thi........ par ab agar aysha zinda hai 2 shimla mei ho sakti hai... hume waha jana chahiye......... mai guard se us admi ka sketch banwa raha hoon..... par andhere k wajas se use kuch jada yaad nai hai...... aisa karo veer tum yaha pata karo aur mai shimla....

V- nahi......... mai shimla pata karunga aur aap yaha pata kijiye......... mujhe waha aur bhi bhot kuch pata karna hai( thinking of jai)........ mai kal hi nikalta ho!!!

R- thik hai veer......... mai bhi yaha dekhta ho... goodnight!!!

after cutting the phone....... accident k pehle jai bhaiya wahi rehte the..... waha ja kar hi kuch pata lagega... pata nai aysha ko kaun le gaya......... kahi wo koi khatre mei na ho.... pichli baar bhi hum pe kisi nei attak kiya tha (*shimla trip)....... kuch na kuch toh hai jo gadbar hai.... kaun ho sakta hai humara dushman...... kise fayda hoga jai bhaiya k pariwar ko mar kar...... mujhe ye case phir se open karana hi hoga...... aur aysha kaha hai , usse kaun legaya....... ye bhi wahi pata lagega.......

thinking all these he went 2 his bed and closed his eyes.......

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precap: veer stops driving watching aysha standing, both are smiling...........
Edited by devrad - 15 years ago
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Posted: 15 years ago
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@devdar....... all the three parts are fantastic......... well moving towards a climax very different from the original crap.......plz update soon😛😛😛😛

Tanvi

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