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Posted: 9 years ago
#31
This is so so so good!! This is exactly how it should have been. This is exactly how Nachiket we know and the one who loves her will react.
You have perfectly described his fear, anger and concern.
This is how he should have shown his anger (out of concern).. shout but dont taunt.


Thanks so much, beautiful person, for making my day. Take all the time you want to but do continue this.
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Posted: 9 years ago
#32
Not watched the epi yet but probably wont after reading this beautiful piece of work! Sukhi di you're gorgeous!
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Posted: 9 years ago
#33
Thank u sooo much Sukhi ... After reading this I'm feeling much better... Its just Perfect... Some one plz send this to NB she shd knw what s story means...
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Posted: 9 years ago
#34
This is PERFECT
Exactly what should have happened

I actually felt his pain in your updates which somehow the episode failed to convey

And she rushing to catch Ranbir like he was a baby was beautiful

And then him carrying her, his concern

Awesome👏

Do continue Pleeese
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Posted: 9 years ago
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To everyone who read this and liked it, you guys are AWESOME!
Thank you so so so much for all your love <3


Love you all! :D
Will finish this real soon...
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Posted: 9 years ago
#36
^That was my reaction when I read the care and concern that Nachiket shows for Ragini in this story. Followed by a big sigh!

Finish it soon Sukhi Di, I'm so excited for this one! 😊
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Posted: 9 years ago
#37

Originally posted by: neiralove

^That was my reaction when I read the care and concern that Nachiket shows for Ragini in this story. Followed by a big sigh!

Finish it soon Sukhi Di, I'm so excited for this one! 😊


Yes dear..

This one will be completed on priority 😃😳

You write something tooo <3
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Posted: 9 years ago
#38

Originally posted by: ronitfan


Yes dear..

This one will be completed on priority 😃😳

You write something tooo <3


Me? 😲
Why me?! 🥱
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Posted: 9 years ago
#39

Originally posted by: neiralove


Me? 😲
Why me?! 🥱


Why not? 😃

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Posted: 9 years ago
#40
Because you see that cat in the back death-glaring at us? That's the pile of work on my desk left pending (and I don't mean stories! 😆) 😛

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