OS : The fracture : pg 12

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Posted: 9 years ago

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Pending work ko goli maaro and celebrate the weekend 😎

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Posted: 9 years ago

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Originally posted by: neiralove
Because you see that cat in the back death-glaring at us? That's the pile of work on my desk left pending (and I don't mean stories! 😆) 😛

He wants you to write too! 😃

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Posted: 9 years ago

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Sukhi,

The NR part was a disappointment in the episode. But you made it better! Thank you so so much! <3 <3

Finish it soon! :D

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Originally posted by: loveleen3
Sukhi,
The NR part was a disappointment in the episode. But you made it better! Thank you so so much! <3 <3
Finish it soon! :D

Will do Loveleen!

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Posted: 9 years ago

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Originally posted by: metoyou
Pending work ko goli maaro and celebrate the weekend 😎

Ehhh, we'll see 😳

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Posted: 9 years ago

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Originally posted by: neiralove

Ehhh, we'll see😳

Ehhh, you have no choice 😳

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Posted: 9 years ago

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Originally posted by: ronitfan

He wants you to write too! 😃

OH MY GOD THAT GIF!!! 😳 CUTENESS OVERLOAD! 😃

Did I mention my love for puppies? 😳

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Posted: 9 years ago

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Originally posted by: metoyou

Ehhh, you have no choice 😳

Is that a dhamki?! 😈

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Posted: 9 years ago

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this is so beautiful and if on screen it would have been so well executed by the actors as well...i actually imagined this whole thing happening instead of the 22 minutes of chaos and a very shoddily executed episode...

.the issue was not the actors or even the characters...it was the shoddy camera work ,direction and script...when ragini fell ,the camera focused on everyone's back from long instead of everyone's faces...we could not get a clear glimpse of neil's or ranbir's reaction at all..the whole time the camera was taking long shots and even the car shot was so crowded...

then instead of making that the main scenario of the episode ,they discontinued it with pam nivedita nonsense...why is she acting like a 16 year old suddenly??

and then we were directly in the hospital and i actually liked the scene in the hospital...if you notice even with a stone face neil's eyes never left ragini ...he may not have gone berserk but something has happened which he would not let the world be privy to and most certainly not ragini...the ego still stands tall 😆

the editing and execution killed the episode that could have been high on emotions...even ranbir ragini scene was like instant ...hardly time to react...

thanks sukhs so much for this ...

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Posted: 9 years ago

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