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goldstar678

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Posted: 10 years ago

#11

I dont know exactly what to comment.Its written very beautifully.I loved the way you showed his concern towards Ragini and ofcourse the best part is Pam and his convo.

Nice to see that atleast in OS,we can do this because i dont think it can ever happen in the show.

Just one request,please continue if you can taking the story ahead like their new life after shifting to new house minus Pam.( wow,the thought itself is so good,Neira minus Pam)

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poetic

@poetic

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Posted: 10 years ago

#12

Originally posted by: goldstar678
I dont know exactly what to comment.Its written very beautifully.I loved the way you showed his concern towards Ragini and ofcourse the best part is Pam and his convo.

Nice to see that atleast in OS,we can do this because i dont think it can ever happen in the show.

Just one request,please continue if you can taking the story ahead like their new life after shifting to new house minus Pam.( wow,the thought itself is so good,Neira minus Pam)

Thanks Pavan. 😊

Even in the Show, I want Nachiket to stand up against Pam. I don't know whether P is evil, though she definitely gives me those kind of vibes.

But yes, she is venomous and hurtful and harmful. N should stand up for R and her family. It's unwise to let this hatred nearly destroy the wedding and the happiness of those people who are his, but unfortunately are away from him.

As for the story, let me think a bit. Frankly speaking, I haven't thought about it beyond this point. But agree the thought of NeiRa, minus Pam, is so liberating. 😊👍🏼

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goldstar678

@goldstar678

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Posted: 10 years ago

#13

Even i want the same,whatever problems/complaints they have,it has to be between them.Like he told Pam in one scene that they were together once.Even im not liking that part of Neil where he allows her to utter the krap,but most of the times when Pam uttered rubbish,she was alone with her and frankly i want even Ragini to stand for herself and not tolerate Pam.

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d3c3nt

@d3c3nt

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Posted: 10 years ago

#14

just 1 word for it...

Beautiful 👏

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poetic

@poetic

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Posted: 10 years ago

#15

Originally posted by: goldstar678
Even i want the same,whatever problems/complaints they have,it has to be between them.Like he told Pam in one scene that they were together once.Even im not liking that part of Neil where he allows her to utter the krap,but most of the times when Pam uttered rubbish,she was alone with her and frankly i want even Ragini to stand for herself and not tolerate Pam.

Absolutely. She should not let Pam just get away with everything. I think mainly she tries to ignore Pam, but R is not realising the trenches that she is digging for herself by ignoring Pam.

But again, the fact that Pam did raise those kids will probably make her keep shut. Very unfortunate indeed !

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poetic

@poetic

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Posted: 10 years ago

#16

Originally posted by: d3c3nt
just 1 word for it...
Beautiful 👏

Thanks a lot Decent 😊

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Ragini Joshi

@RaginiJoshi

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Posted: 10 years ago

#17

Originally posted by: poetic

Thanks Ragini.😃Such lovely comments. Almost makes me want to write another one.😉But am not falling into the trap😉😉

Jokes apart, thank you so much for the appreciation. It provides a positive impetus to all of us over here.😊

Then write more 😆 I know you will. If possible make this vignette a short story 😃