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poetic

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Posted: 10 years ago

#21

Originally posted by: LaSandy
Really Really nice piece of you.😊

Thanks Sandy😊

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roneeta

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Posted: 10 years ago

#22

Rachna!!

That was so beautiful. So sad and heartbreaking and poignant.. Loved reading it. Especially their non verbal communication..

Thanks so much for brightening up my weekend!

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poetic

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Posted: 10 years ago

#23

Originally posted by: ronitfan
Rachna!!
That was so beautiful. So sad and heartbreaking and poignant.. Loved reading it. Especially their non verbal communication..

Thanks so much for brightening up my weekend!

Thanks Sukhs.I know how crazy things have been for all of us.

This was just an off spin while I was waiting for somebody else to complete their leg of work.😆

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Atharva Dev

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Posted: 10 years ago

#24

Hi Poetic😳, dear Rachna ;) :)

So I have finally read your Vignette when I was trying to sleep in my spare time😆 and believe me after reading it, I felt much better as if the way you wrote it gave me some kind of happiness and the small moments of the life can be so beautiful.

You wrote the thing which is not going to happen anytime soon in show but the way Nachiket behaved with Pam was totally understandable and I liked how he chose to move out instead of asking Pam to go out. This way, Pam had no other chance to spoil their life and he can take care of Ragini in this sad phase of their life, when she had miscarriage just some weeks ago.

Ragini was hurt equally just like Nachiket but she understood him later, was the most beautiful scene for me.

The words used by you were really catchy and pleasant to read.

Looking forward to more short stories from you! *HUGS*

-Dev.

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poetic

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Posted: 10 years ago

#25

Originally posted by: *Dev.*
Hi Poetic😳, dear Rachna ;) :)

So I have finally read your Vignette when I was trying to sleep in my spare time😆 and believe me after reading it, I felt much better as if the way you wrote it gave me some kind of happiness and the small moments of the life can be so beautiful.

You wrote the thing which is not going to happen anytime soon in show but the way Nachiket behaved with Pam was totally understandable and I liked how he chose to move out instead of asking Pam to go out. This way, Pam had no other chance to spoil their life and he can take care of Ragini in this sad phase of their life, when she had miscarriage just some weeks ago.

Ragini was hurt equally just like Nachiket but she understood him later, was the most beautiful scene for me.

The words used by you were really catchy and pleasant to read.
Looking forward to more short stories from you! *HUGS*

-Dev.

Why that 😳 at the beginning? 😆

thank you so much for making some good use of your spare time 🤣 Just joking though.

Glad you liked the story. I do realise that this will never be shown in the Show. PN are tied through their umbilical cords.

My idea of writing this was simple - there are so many things that happen in our everyday lives? How do we deal with them either alone or together?

🤗 to you for the kind words 😊

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-Spriha-

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Posted: 10 years ago

#26

Originally posted by: poetic

😳 Thanks Spriha.

Wrote this after quite some time, I guess.

In the Show, I don't want Nachiket to shove Pam out of their lives - but I do want him to take a firm stand when and where it's needed. Pam has insulted Ragini and her family long enough, for whatever reasons she has. And that Lady bears everything because of her children and her inane love for Nachiket. It irks me actually.

Yaa...hadn't been active for a while due to exams.

And true...Pam has insulted Ragini and anyone related to her long enough. High time now for her to behave a little maturely.

😃

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Atharva Dev

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Posted: 10 years ago

#27

Originally posted by: poetic

Why that 😳 at the beginning? 😆

thank you so much for making some good use of your spare time 🤣 Just joking though.

Glad you liked the story. I do realise that this will never be shown in the Show. PN are tied through their umbilical cords.

My idea of writing this was simple - there are so many things that happen in our everyday lives? How do we deal with them either alone or together?

🤗 to you for the kind words 😊

The stern emoticon 😳 is one of my most favourite and I use it for teasing, for any reason, or for fun in my posts especially with friends. So I used it for teasing you here😆. Now do't ask me everytime if I use it as the reasons can be different every time.🤣

No, seriously, I used my time to read a good content. 😃

Loved it, and yeah, but still we hope for some character development in the show and if not, I will make you write more stories so to satisfy viewers demand.😆

Your idea was very real hence liked by people here.

HUGS Back🤗...well, its nice to be kind about our thoughts so I just say them. Its you who understands me well that is why you have no problem however all are not so understanding Rachna.😃

Write more, a scene involving Suhani, Pam, Ragini, RK and Neil. And Pam should married RK in that story.😆

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poetic

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Posted: 10 years ago

#28

LOL, Pam marrying RK? That would be a dream thing but I have never even given this a thought.

Let me however think about this a bit. I am supremely tickled.

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Atharva Dev

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Posted: 10 years ago

#29

Originally posted by: poetic
LOL, Pam marrying RK? That would be a dream thing but I have never even given this a thought.
Let me however think about this a bit. I am supremely tickled.

Ram Kapoor of IKNMP should be husband of Pam in that story. Because that way she will be busy with her life. LOL

Sure, take your time.